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青桐鳴大聯(lián)考河南2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期11月28日聯(lián)考試卷
第一節(jié)寫作
假如你在英國留學(xué)，你加入了你們學(xué)校的辯論隊，本期辯題是“Will Ebooks Replace Printed Books”，請你以正方立場寫一份開場陳詞。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你們辯隊的論點；2. 你們辯隊的論據(jù)。1. 寫作詞數(shù)為80左右；2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的對應(yīng)位置作答；。
Distinguished guests and referees, dear debaters,
Good morning! On behalf of the pros team, I’d like to state our standpoint:
Thank you very much!
第二節(jié)(滿分 25 分)
閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
The verbal conflict with my next-door neighbour, Pat, let me shocked. We had stayed a normal relationship as neighbours since the day we moved in, but his accusation that summer morning was too much, especially when my family had tried our best not to bother him.
I didn’t remember when he stopped being friendly. I could not understand it. He avoided every conversation with us and even walked away when I approached! On that particular morning, I had been gardening out when I saw Pat throw a large dogy waste from his garden onto ours! I was so upset, and I walked right over and faced up to him. “ Why would you do that ”
Folding his arms defensively, he claimed that our dog was the culprit(犯人). “I saw him do it.” Pat said. This so-called neighbour was lying to my face! I tried to remain calm. “ There is no way our dog did that.” Pat didn’t back down. “ Keepour dog of my yard,” he told me. My upset turned to anger and I let loose. “ Pat, you are a real piece of work!” I stormed in my front door and called my husband, Kevin, at work. I told him that Pat should accuse our dog of making trouble in his yard. Our dog was a Chihuahua, too little to brave himself out of our house. His advice: stay away from Pat. So I did. Pat returned the favour. If I saw him while we were both out walking, he’d cross to the opposite side of the street. When I drove past his house, he’d turn his back to my car.
One morning, I glanced out upstairs and found Pat was already carefully tending his beautiful grapes. I had a mixed feeling. On one hand, I couldn’t believe a man with so much care for a plant should be such an impolite person; on the other hand, I still couldn’t understand why Pat treated us in such a manner.
注意:
(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “Bad dog! How dare you come again to destroy my yard!”
Paragraph 2: I heard the door knowc and found it was Pat, with a handful of grapes.
原文分析：紅色定從/定語；藍色賓從；下劃線標(biāo)黃單詞為需掌握積累單詞；從句類會用斜體標(biāo)注；需積累部分黑體加粗下劃線；(定語從句1)(狀從)
第二節(jié)(滿分 25 分)
閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
The verbal conflict with my next-door neighbour, Pat, let me shocked. We had stayed a normal relationship as neighbours since the day we moved in(狀從), but his accusation that summer morning was too much, especially when my family had tried our best not to bother him(狀從).
I didn’t remember when he stopped being friendly(賓從). I could not understand it. He avoided every conversation with us and even walked away when I approached!(狀從) On that particular morning, I had been gardening out when I saw Pat throw a large dogy waste from his garden onto ours!(狀從) I was so upset, and I walked right over and faced up to him. “ Why would you do that ”
Folding his arms defensively(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作), he claimed that our dog was the culprit(犯人). “I saw him do it.” Pat said. This so-called neighbour was lying to my face! I tried to remain calm. “ There is no way our dog did that.” Pat didn’t back down. “ Keep our dog of my yard,(賓從)” he told me. My upset turned to anger and I let loose. “ Pat, you are a real piece of work!” I stormed in my front door and called my husband, Kevin, at work. I told him that Pat should accuse our dog of making trouble in his yard(賓從). Our dog was a Chihuahua, too little to brave himself out of our house. His advice: stay away from Pat. So I did. Pat returned the favour. If I saw him while we were both out walking(狀從), he’d cross to the opposite side of the street. When I drove past his house(狀從), he’d turn his back to my car.
One morning, I glanced out upstairs and found Pat was already carefully tending his beautiful grapes(賓從). I had a mixed feeling. On one hand, I couldn’t believe a man with so much care for a plant should be such an impolite person(賓從); on the other hand, I still couldn’t understand why Pat treated us in such a manner(賓從).
注意:
(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “Bad dog! How dare you come again to destroy my yard!”
Paragraph 2: I heard the door knowc and found it was Pat, with a handful of grapes.
一、讀后續(xù)寫類型及分析
1. 文章類型：
本篇文章屬于人際矛盾與和解類，故事以主人公與鄰居Pat的矛盾為核心，逐步推進到和解的轉(zhuǎn)折。這類續(xù)寫需要從矛盾的升級到轉(zhuǎn)機的描寫，再到最終的情感升華，體現(xiàn)人性的善意與理解。
2. 構(gòu)思思路：
布局：
開篇（矛盾深化）： 展現(xiàn)矛盾進一步升級的場景，情緒描寫重點刻畫主人公的復(fù)雜心理和對矛盾的無奈。
中間（轉(zhuǎn)機出現(xiàn)）： 通過某件事件引發(fā)矛盾的轉(zhuǎn)折點，比如主人公誤解解除或某一行為打破僵局。
結(jié)尾（和解）： 展現(xiàn)和解場景，呼應(yīng)主題，表達善意和包容。
框架提煉與實施：
從矛盾深化場景切入，具體描述情節(jié)沖突。
運用心理、環(huán)境、動作描寫，引導(dǎo)矛盾的緩解。
合理設(shè)計對話推動情節(jié)發(fā)展，最終通過和解升華主題。
注意事項：
注意承接原文情節(jié)和情緒基調(diào)，銜接語言風(fēng)格一致性。
巧妙設(shè)計細節(jié)和情節(jié)，使轉(zhuǎn)折自然，避免生硬。
二、故事山模式分析
1. 故事山分析：
導(dǎo)入： 與鄰居矛盾加深（“Bad dog!”場景引發(fā)矛盾升級）。
發(fā)展： 主人公復(fù)雜心理與對鄰居行為的不解。
高潮： 門敲聲與Pat帶來葡萄出現(xiàn)，引發(fā)意料之外的轉(zhuǎn)機。
結(jié)尾： 兩人冰釋前嫌，表達善意。
2. 銜接點：
情緒描寫：
"I was so upset, and I walked right over and faced up to him."
"I had a mixed feeling."
動作描寫：
"Pat returned the favour. If I saw him while we were both out walking, he’d cross to the opposite side of the street."
"Pat was already carefully tending his beautiful grapes."
關(guān)鍵轉(zhuǎn)折點：
"I heard the door knock and found it was Pat, with a handful of grapes."
三、推薦描寫例句
1. 動作描寫：
He slammed the door shut, his movements quick and sharp.
She hesitated for a moment before extending her hand in a truce.
The dog barked, jumping at the fence as if trying to defend its territory.
2. 心理描寫：
Her heart raced as she replayed his words in her mind, trying to make sense of them.
A mix of guilt and frustration washed over him, leaving him restless.
She couldn’t shake off the lingering feeling of unease.
3. 環(huán)境描寫：
The morning air was crisp, carrying the faint scent of blooming flowers.
Shadows danced on the wall as the sun dipped lower in the sky.
A soft breeze rustled the grape leaves, whispering secrets of the garden.
四、語法現(xiàn)象及搭配現(xiàn)象
1. 高中語法現(xiàn)象：
被動語態(tài)： "Pat was already carefully tending his beautiful grapes."
賓語從句： "I told him that Pat should accuse our dog of making trouble in his yard."
狀語從句： "When I drove past his house, he’d turn his back to my car."
2. 地道搭配：
常見短語：face up to stay away from tend to
詞匯積累：
accuse (v.) 指責(zé)
近義詞：blame
反義詞：defend
例句：He accused me of lying, which I strongly denied.
五、范文設(shè)計的思路分析
范文1： 突出轉(zhuǎn)折描寫
亮點詞匯短語：
"An idea struck me as I noticed his hesitation."
"A wave of relief washed over me."
亮點語法：
定語從句："The grapes, which had been his pride, were now shared with us."
范文2： 突出情緒變化
亮點詞匯短語：
"My anger faded as I saw the sincerity in his eyes."
"Her apology was heartfelt, her tone unwavering."
亮點語法：
倒裝："Never had I felt so grateful for a simple gesture."
范文3： 突出對話推動
亮點詞匯短語：
"‘Let’s start over,’ he said, breaking the silence."
"With a nod, I extended my hand, and he shook it firmly."
亮點語法：
分詞結(jié)構(gòu)："Hoping for the best, I decided to knock on his door."
Possible Answer 1
Paragraph 1:
“Bad dog! How dare you come again to destroy my yard!” Pat’s angry voice startled me as I rushed downstairs to the garden(狀從). To my surprise, our little Chihuahua was nowhere in sight. Instead, a stray dog was happily digging in Pat’s yard. I called out to Pat, pointing at the stray(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). “That’s not my dog!” I exclaimed. Pat froze, his face flushed with embarrassment.(獨立主格) Realizing his mistake(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作或原因狀語), he muttered a quiet apology before quickly shooing the stray away. The tension between us felt unbearable, but I chose to remain silent, watching him retreat into his house(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).
Paragraph 2:
I heard the door knock and found it was Pat, with a handful of grapes. “These are for you,” he said hesitantly. “I’m sorry for what I said earlier(賓從). I shouldn’t have blamed you without proof(虛擬語氣).” His words caught me off guard. I smiled and accepted the grapes, saying, “Let’s forget about it. We’re neighbors, after all.” From that day on, our relationship gradually improved. Pat started waving at me during his walks, and I found myself looking forward to seeing him tending his garden.
Possible Answer 2
Paragraph 1:
“Bad dog! How dare you come again to destroy my yard!” Pat’s voice rang out angrily as I looked out of the window(狀從). Curious(adj.作狀語), I stepped outside and saw a stray dog leaping over the fence into our garden. Pat turned toward me, his face red with frustration(獨立主格). “This must be your dog again!” he shouted. “Pat, look at him carefully,” I said firmly. “Our Chihuahua couldn’t possibly jump that high.” His gaze followed the dog, realization dawning on his face(獨立主格). He frowned but said nothing, retreating into his house(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作).
Paragraph 2:
I heard the door knock and found it was Pat, with a handful of grapes. Pat stood there awkwardly, holding a small basket of freshly picked grapes(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作). “I owe you an apology,” he said, his voice softer than I’d ever heard it(獨立主格). “I’ve been unfair to you.” I smiled, taking the basket(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作). “Let’s move on,” I replied. From that moment, things changed. Pat began greeting me with a nod and even offered gardening tips. I learned that kindness and understanding could bridge the deepest divides.
Possible Answer 3
Paragraph 1:
“Bad dog! How dare you come again to destroy my yard!” Pat’s shout cut through the quiet morning air as I stepped out to see what was going on(狀從+賓從). I caught sight of a large stray dog dashing through his garden, trampling the grapevines(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). My heart sank as I realized this misunderstanding would only worsen our already tense relationship(狀從). Taking a deep breath(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作), I approached him. “Pat, that’s not my dog,” I said, gesturing toward the stray(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). He looked at the dog, then at me, his expression shifting from anger to confusion(獨立主格). Without a word, he turned back to his garden.
Paragraph 2:
I heard the door knock and found it was Pat, with a handful of grapes. Opening the door,(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) I saw Pat holding a cluster of grapes. “I misjudged you,” he said simply, handing me the fruit(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) . I could see the sincerity in his eyes, and my annoyance melted away. “Thank you,” I said warmly. From then on, we started exchanging small greetings, and our once cold relationship began to thaw. Pat’s garden flourished as did our newfound friendship, proving that even bitter misunderstandings could bear sweet fruit.(非謂語動詞+賓從)
亮點分析
1. 情緒描寫：
范文1: "His face flushed with embarrassment."
范文2: "His gaze followed the dog, realization dawning on his face."
范文3: "My heart sank as I realized this misunderstanding would only worsen our already tense relationship."
2. 動作描寫：
范文1: "Watching him retreat into his house."
范文2: "Pat stood there awkwardly, holding a small basket of freshly picked grapes."
范文3: "Taking a deep breath, I approached him."
3. 環(huán)境烘托：
范文1: "The tension between us felt unbearable."
范文3: "Pat’s shout cut through the quiet morning air."
續(xù)寫與原文銜接分析
可銜接續(xù)寫的地方
動作描寫: Pat 投擲垃圾、主人公與 Pat 面對面爭執(zhí)的場景。
心理變化: 主人公的憤怒、不解以及對 Pat 性格的矛盾情感。
情感層次: 從矛盾升級到緩和的過程。
原文關(guān)鍵句子與續(xù)寫銜接示例
分析角度 內(nèi)容分析 原文反映句
人物刻畫 主人公：有正義感但容易被情緒控制；Pat：表面冷漠但心底善良。 “Pat didn’t back down.”
“I stormed in my front door and called my husband.”
情感層次 怒氣→不解→復(fù)雜情緒→意外轉(zhuǎn)折→釋懷與和解。 “I was so upset, and I walked right over and faced up to him.”
“I had a mixed feeling.”
關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點 爭執(zhí)時雙方情緒激烈；觀察 Pat 照料葡萄時的復(fù)雜感受；Pat 送葡萄上門時的意外轉(zhuǎn)折。 “My upset turned to anger and I let loose.”
“I glanced out upstairs and found Pat was already carefully tending his beautiful grapes.”
語言特色 使用對話和細節(jié)動作增強場景的緊張感；心理描寫推動情節(jié)發(fā)展；暗示性結(jié)尾表現(xiàn)主題和轉(zhuǎn)折。 “Keep your dog off my yard.”
“Pat, you are a real piece of work!”
關(guān)鍵詞分析 accuse, culprit, upset, anger, mixed feeling, care for plants, tend grapes, handful of grapes。 同上。
心理描寫 主人公從憤怒到復(fù)雜情緒再到釋懷。 “I couldn’t believe a man with so much care for a plant should be such an impolite person.”
動作描寫 Pat 投擲垃圾、指責(zé)，主人公爭執(zhí)、觀察對方細節(jié)。 “I saw Pat throw a large doggy waste from his garden onto ours!”
環(huán)境描寫 葡萄園象征 Pat 的細膩與善意，表現(xiàn)沖突與和解的外部環(huán)境。 “Pat was already carefully tending his beautiful grapes.”
隱含主題 人與人之間的矛盾常源于誤解，交流是化解矛盾的關(guān)鍵。 整篇文章隱含主旨：從矛盾到和解。
情感專責(zé) 以“復(fù)雜情感”為中心，逐步過渡到釋懷與和解。 “I had a mixed feeling.”
空間轉(zhuǎn)換 從院子到室內(nèi)再到葡萄園，空間變化體現(xiàn)情節(jié)推進。 “I stormed in my front door…”
“I glanced out upstairs and found Pat…”
時間過渡 從沖突發(fā)生到后來 Pat 送葡萄，時間跨度表現(xiàn)情感的自然過渡。 “On that particular morning…”
“One morning, I glanced out…”
一、情緒描寫語料
以下是范文中以及適合續(xù)寫中的情緒描寫語料：
情緒 亮點詞匯/短語 高級替換/同義表達 示例句
生氣 upset, furious outraged, enraged "I was furious, my hands clenching into fists as I tried to keep calm."
尷尬 embarrassed, awkward ill at ease, self-conscious "He looked self-conscious, avoiding eye contact as he handed me the grapes."
感動 touched, moved heartfelt, emotional "Her kind words left me deeply touched, a smile tugging at the corners of my lips."
二、動作描寫語料
以下為續(xù)寫中可能使用的動作描寫，能豐富場景并推動情節(jié)發(fā)展：
動作類型 亮點表達 升級/同義表達 示例句
矛盾動作 shouted angrily, stormed off lashed out, stomped away "Pat lashed out, his voice trembling with frustration."
和解動作 extended his hand, nodded softly offered a handshake, bowed slightly "With a slight bow, he offered the grapes, signaling a truce."
猶豫動作 paused, hesitated lingered, faltered "She lingered at the door, unsure whether to knock or walk away."
三、環(huán)境描寫語料
為增強場景感，環(huán)境描寫至關(guān)重要。以下為適合場景的環(huán)境語料：
場景 亮點詞匯/短語 升級/替換詞 示例句
清晨的安靜 calm morning, crisp air tranquil dawn, fresh breeze "The tranquil dawn was interrupted by Pat's loud voice echoing through the garden."
花園的景色 flourishing vines, blooming flowers thriving plants, lush greenery "The lush greenery in Pat’s garden reflected his dedication despite his temper."
緊張的氛圍 tense silence, charged moment strained quiet, electric pause "A charged moment passed between us, heavy with unspoken words."
四、高頻單詞替換匯總
基礎(chǔ)單詞 高級替換詞 適用場景 示例句
angry irritated, enraged 情緒沖突 "He looked irritated, his frown deepening with each passing second."
good remarkable, excellent 表達轉(zhuǎn)折后關(guān)系改善 "The grapes were remarkable, their sweetness symbolizing a new beginning."
bad unpleasant, unbearable 矛盾描寫 "The unpleasant accusations left a bitter taste in my mouth."
五、亮點語法分析與語料積累
語法現(xiàn)象 范文中的語句 解釋 拓展例句
定語從句 "The grapes, which had been his pride, were now shared with us." 用于細化描述某一事物的特征，使表達更豐富。 "The apology, which I had never expected, left me speechless."
狀語從句 "When I drove past his house, he’d turn his back to my car." 增加背景信息或描述具體情境，是敘事性文章常用句式。 "Whenever I saw him, I couldn’t help but wonder what had gone wrong."
分詞結(jié)構(gòu) "Hoping for the best, I decided to knock on his door." 表示同時發(fā)生或補充說明的動作，精煉表達情節(jié)。 "Smiling politely, she handed me the grapes as a gesture of goodwill."
六、常見短語積累與升級
基礎(chǔ)短語 升級短語 示例句
face a problem confront a challenge "I decided to confront the challenge of repairing our strained relationship head-on."
say sorry extend an apology "Pat extended an apology, his voice full of sincerity."
calm down regain composure "Taking a deep breath, I tried to regain my composure before replying."

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