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When we arrived in Tournus, Gabriel and I parked our bikes near the wharf and walked to the town square, starving after a 33-kilometer ride. We made it within one and a half hours, which is really something! We planned to get lunch and then bike back to Macon, a city on the Saone River where I was staying with Gabriel’s family for the summer.
It was market day, bustling with locals buying groceries and tourists hunting for souvenirs. We bought a long, thin loaf of bread called a baguette and some Brie, a soft cheese I’m obsessed with. It tastes awesome with the crispy crust of the baguette. While eating, I noticed a girl in a USA Basketball T-shirt smiling at us.
Basketball is popular in France too. You can even watch NBA games on TV. The girl stopped to buy cookies with someone that I guessed was her mom because they looked so much alike. We later saw her and her mom by the river, enjoying pastries(糕點) on a bench near a riverboat named Voyageur, which had docked earlier. Then they boarded the boat. As it was preparing to leave, I spotted a colorful shopping bag on the bench. The girl had left it! Gabriel and I called out to her in French and English, waving the bag. When the girl noticed us, she was surprised but disappointed as the boat began to leave. Gabriel suggested throwing it to her, but I feared it would fall into the river. We had to find another way !
Running alongside the boat, Gabriel learned from a sailor that the next stop was Macon-our destination as well. It would take the boat just under two hours at a speed of 12 knots. Gabriel searched on the phone about the speed. “That’s 22 kilometers-or 14 miles-per hour,” he said. “Do you think we can keep up ” I asked. With a laugh, he replied, “We’re about to find out!”
注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off.
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The girl’s eyes lit up with astonishment while her mom clapped in delight.
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一、文章大意
作者和 Gabriel 騎自行車抵達(dá) Tournus 后，在集市買了食物享用時，注意到一個穿美國籃球 T 恤的女孩。女孩和她媽媽買了糕點在河邊一艘名為 Voyageur 的船附近的長椅上吃，之后上船離開時落下了一個購物袋。作者和 Gabriel 呼喊女孩但船已啟動，得知船下一站是他們要回的 Macon，且船速約每小時 14 英里，他們決定騎車追趕，試圖歸還購物袋，故事在此處留下懸念，等待續(xù)寫。
二、故事山分析
開端：作者和 Gabriel 騎行 33 公里后到達(dá) Tournus，饑腸轆轆，在集市買食物時發(fā)現(xiàn)了女孩和她媽媽。
發(fā)展：女孩上船離開后落下購物袋，作者和 Gabriel 決定歸還，得知船的下一站及船速后，決定騎車追趕。
高潮：兩人在途中奮力騎行追趕船，體力消耗巨大但仍堅持不懈，為故事營造緊張氛圍。
結(jié)局：續(xù)寫部分應(yīng)呈現(xiàn)兩人是否成功歸還購物袋以及各方的反應(yīng)，升華故事主題。
三、伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
伏筆：We planned to get lunch and then bike back to Macon.
回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，兩人正是朝著 Macon 的方向追趕船，與原計劃的行程相呼應(yīng)，同時也為他們追趕船提供了合理性，因為本來就要回 Macon，所以才有動力去追。
伏筆：It was market day, bustling with locals buying groceries and tourists hunting for souvenirs.
回應(yīng)：集市的熱鬧場景為女孩的出現(xiàn)做了鋪墊，使她的出現(xiàn)不顯得突兀。而在續(xù)寫中，可通過回憶集市上人們的善意和互助氛圍，來強(qiáng)化兩人歸還購物袋的決心，因為在這樣一個充滿生活氣息和善意的環(huán)境中，他們更愿意去做一件好事。
伏筆：The girl stopped to buy cookies with someone that I guessed was her mom because they looked so much alike.
回應(yīng)：對女孩和她媽媽關(guān)系的描述，為后面女孩媽媽對兩人歸還購物袋的反應(yīng)做了鋪墊。續(xù)寫中女孩媽媽的感激和熱情，正是基于她們之間親密的母女關(guān)系，體現(xiàn)出這份善意對整個家庭的影響。
伏筆：Gabriel and I called out to her in French and English, waving the bag.
回應(yīng)：這表明作者和 Gabriel 一開始就有歸還購物袋的意圖，在續(xù)寫中，這種善良的初衷貫穿始終，無論遇到多少困難，他們都沒有放棄，突出了他們的堅持和善良的品質(zhì)。
伏筆：Gabriel searched on the phone about the speed. “That’s 22 kilometers-or 14 miles-per hour,” he said.
回應(yīng)：提前交代船速，為后面兩人騎車追趕船的艱難程度做了鋪墊。續(xù)寫中可以描述他們在追趕過程中，不斷根據(jù)船速調(diào)整自己的騎行節(jié)奏和策略，更加凸顯他們克服困難的過程和決心。
四、續(xù)寫要點（兩段）
第一段：
要點 1：詳細(xì)描述兩人追趕船的艱難過程，包括沿途的風(fēng)景、身體的疲憊（如腿部酸痛、氣喘吁吁）以及心理的變化（從一開始的決心滿滿到中途的些許動搖但仍堅持）。
要點 2：可以穿插一些兩人之間的對話或互相鼓勵的話語，體現(xiàn)他們的友誼和共同面對困難的精神。
第二段：
要點 1：描繪船到達(dá) Macon 時女孩和她媽媽的期待心情，以及看到作者和 Gabriel 出現(xiàn)時的驚喜反應(yīng)，如女孩的眼神、媽媽的動作等。
要點 2：描述歸還購物袋后的場景，包括女孩和媽媽的感激之情，以及作者和 Gabriel 的內(nèi)心感受，最后以一個溫馨的畫面或細(xì)節(jié)結(jié)束故事，如大家一起歡笑、合影等，升華主題。
五、情感線
文章起始，作者和 Gabriel 懷著輕松愉悅的心情抵達(dá) Tournus，享受美食時對女孩友好地關(guān)注。發(fā)現(xiàn)女孩落下購物袋后，他們產(chǎn)生了強(qiáng)烈的責(zé)任感和善良的意愿去歸還。在追趕船的過程中，盡管疲憊不堪，但堅定的信念支撐著他們，情感逐漸升華至堅韌與執(zhí)著。最終成功歸還購物袋，收獲了女孩和媽媽的感激，內(nèi)心充滿了成就感和溫暖，整個情感線從日常的友好過渡到面對困難時的堅定，再到完成善舉后的滿足。
六、故事線
作者和 Gabriel 騎行 33 公里到達(dá) Tournus，在集市買食物后發(fā)現(xiàn)女孩和她媽媽。
女孩上船離開時落下購物袋，作者和 Gabriel 決定追趕船歸還。
兩人得知船下一站是 Macon 及船速后，踏上追趕之旅。
追趕途中，兩人克服種種困難，堅持不懈地騎行。
船到達(dá) Macon，女孩和媽媽期待購物袋的歸還，作者和 Gabriel 及時趕到。
兩人歸還購物袋，女孩和媽媽表達(dá)感激，大家以溫馨的方式結(jié)束這次經(jīng)歷。
七、主旨升華句
This journey of chasing the boat not only tested our physical strength but also proved that a small act of kindness can be the driving force that pushes us beyond our limits.
In the pursuit of returning the forgotten bag, we discovered that the power of determination and friendship can overcome any obstacle and bring warmth to strangers' lives.
The adventure of chasing the boat was a testament to the fact that when kindness takes root in our hearts, no distance or difficulty can stop us from doing the right thing.
What began as a simple attempt to return a lost item turned into a remarkable journey that taught us the value of perseverance and the beauty of helping others, making this a day we would cherish forever.
This unexpected chase showed us that in a world full of uncertainties, our choices to act with kindness and determination can create ripples of positive change and connect us in the most unexpected ways.
八、寫作示范
示范一
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off. The sun was high in the sky, casting a golden glow on the river. We pedaled furiously, the wind whipping through our hair. The path was narrow and uneven, but we didn't dare slow down. Our legs ached with every turn of the pedals, but the thought of the girl's disappointed face kept us going. Gabriel shouted words of encouragement, and I nodded, too out of breath to reply. We passed by old fishermen casting their lines and children playing by the water. As the boat disappeared around a bend, we pushed ourselves even harder, determined not to let it out of our sight.
The girl's eyes lit up with astonishment while her mom clapped in delight. When we finally reached the dock in Macon, just as the boat was pulling in, the girl and her mom were waiting. The girl rushed forward, a huge smile on her face. "Thank you so much!" she exclaimed. Her mom hugged us both, tears in her eyes. We handed her the bag, feeling a sense of relief and joy. The mom insisted on buying us ice cream, and as we sat by the river, licking our cones, we knew that this was a day we would never forget. It wasn't just about the bag; it was about the journey and the kindness that had brought us all together.
示范二
I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off. The road ahead seemed long and daunting, but our hearts were set on returning the bag. We cycled past fields of sunflowers, their bright faces turning with the sun. Our muscles burned, and sweat dripped into our eyes, but we kept going. Gabriel kept checking the map on his phone to make sure we were on the right track. As we neared Macon, we could see the boat in the distance. We summoned our last bit of energy and sped up. The town came into view, and we knew we were close.
The girl's eyes lit up with astonishment while her mom clapped in delight. When the boat docked, the girl and her mom were standing at the railing, looking expectantly. As we handed them the bag, the girl's mom thanked us over and over. She told us how much the items in the bag meant to them. We grinned at each other, proud of what we had accomplished. This adventure had not only tested our endurance but also strengthened our belief in the power of kindness. We parted ways with warm smiles and newfound friends, knowing that this small act of kindness had made a big difference in someone's day.

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