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山西中考書面表達講義
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*There are 百分數1 +of the students believing that +觀點1 while those considering +主題 as something to 觀點2 take up(are/reach)+百分數2.The percentage of the students who think that +觀點3 is 百分數3. And only 百分數4 of them choose/enjoy others.
*xx% of the students like..., and students who prefer to ... take up xx%.
*xx percent of the students believe ..., while xx percent consider ..., and the rest students think...
*xx% of the students choose to ..., and xx% of the students like/enjoy...
*The percentage of the students who think/consider/believe... is xx%, and there are xx% of the students who...
例子：1. 86%的學生相信他們可以用善良的眼睛看待世界，53%的學生認為自己是積極的。
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36% of the students choose to get close to nature in their free time. Only 5% like to stay at home reading.
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80% of the students thinks it’s important to learn to do housework.
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選出觀點+經歷+總結感悟
闡述觀點：
There is no doubt that... “毫無疑問……”
There is no denying that... “不可否認……”=It goes without saying that...
As far as I am concerned.../as far as I can see/know “就我而言”
In my view/opinion/point,... /From my point of view,... “在我看來...”
例子：1. 不可否認，我們在生活中做出合理的選擇是很重要的。(reasonable 合理的)
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毫無疑問，孩子們可以通過旅行開闊視野。
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就我而言，當我們的父母和老師指責或批評我們時，保持冷靜和理智是非常重要的。
______________________________________________ to stay calm and reasonable when our parents and teachers blame(責備) or criticize(批評) us.
我認為，對我們來說在空閑時間親近大自然是有意義的。
I think it is meaningful for us to get close to nature in our free time.
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敘述經歷：
敘述經歷開篇：
When it comes to (=talking about)+主題（e.g. solving problems, courage, work group, teamwork, my favorite sports, helping others,doing sports...）, an unforgettable experience comes into my mind.（=enters my mind/steps into my mind）
I still remember the day when I ...: 我仍然記得那一天我……
Never can I forget when I was.../entered .... 我不會忘記當我……
What impressed me most was that when I .... 是讓我印象深刻的是當我……
例子：1. 我還記得我在上英語課的那一天。
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我無法忘記我們國家的歷史。
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經歷結尾;
To my joy/surprise/excitement,...“令我高興的/驚訝的興奮的是……”
In this way, I succeeded in doing sth. 用這種方法，成功做成某事。
After tow-month study with my teammate,I made progress in my English. /my English was improved a lot.
A strong sense/feeling of satisfaction /achievement/happiness/warmth...rose from the bottom of my heart.
一種強烈的滿足感/成就感/幸福感油然而生。
Believe it or not, since then I have felt healthier and happier. 信不信由你，自從那以后，我變得跟健康和開心。
Finally, I was surprised to find that I mastered the secret to learn English and my English was improved/increased greatly. 最后，我驚奇地發現我掌握了學習英語的秘決，并且我的英語提高了很多。
In addition/Besides, I recovered my confidence in learning English.此外，我還恢復了在學習英語上的自信。
Words failed to express my excitement when the math problem was perfectly worked out.
當這個數學問題被完美地解決時，沒有什么語言可以表達我的興奮。
例子：1. 令我開心的是，我得到了一個令人滿意的結果。
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用這種方法，我成功跟上了老師的步伐并且更加高效地學習。
___________________________keeping pace with the teachers and learnt more efficiently(高效地)》
在他們的幫助下，我沒有任何抱怨，完成了我應該做的。
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那一刻看著我的作品，一種強烈的成就感油然而生。
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漸漸地，我變得跟家精力充沛，而且保持健康。
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興奮，混雜著開心涌上心頭。
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悲傷，夾雜著緊張席卷了我。
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結果是，我得到了來自同學的表揚。
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總結感悟、啟示：
萬能模板：From the experience, I finally realize(d)/understand(understood)/ the important role/part played by +主題（e.g communication ability,courage,helping others, solving problems bravely/wisely,tradition culture, reasonable choices,doing sports,facing difficulties actively, not complaining...）,which can not only +總結1（好處1），but also can +總結2.
Only through this experience did I realize... 通過這次經歷，我才意識到……
What I have learned from this experience is ... 我從這段經歷中學習到的是……
Not only did I..., but also I got a deeper understanding of ... 我不但……，而且對……有了更深的理解。
The experience made me deeply understand the saying “諺語”.
例子：1. 從這次經歷中，我不僅學會了洗衣服，而且我也明白了獨立的重要性。
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這次經歷使我對“一分耕耘，一分收獲”有了更深的理解。
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通過這次經歷，我才意識到是我的努力讓我獲得了別人的尊重。(用到強調句)
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我從這段經歷中學習到的是只要我們勇敢地，積極地面對挑戰，我們就可以成功地把他們轉換成機遇。
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從這次經歷中，它不但使我對歷史有更深的理解，而且在我內心中種下了文化自信的種子。
From the experience, not only does it make me ______________ understand the history, but also ________________________ of cultural confidence in my heart.
其他表達：
表達觀點好處：
It is meaningful/important/helpful/necessary for us/students to do sth.
做某事對我們來說，是有意義的/重要的/有幫助的/必要的。
=It is of mean/great help/great importance for us /students to do sth.
It is beneficial(受益的) to sth.(e.g.my growth/study/health/ability./our lifelong development.. ) 對……有益處。
It is good for us/me. = It can benefit me/us a lot. 對我/我們也有好處。
Doing sth.（主題）is one of the best ways to do sth(好處).
E.g. . Doing volunteer work is one of the best ways to develop my abilities to communicate and cooperate. 做志愿者是培養我溝通和合作能力的最好方法之一。
5. It is a good idea/way to do sth. 做某事是不錯的想法。
6. Doing sth. can brings us quite a lot of benefits. 做什么事情給我帶來了很多好處。
7. Nothing is more important than to do sth. 沒有什么比做……更重要的。
E.g. Nothing is more important than to protect our environment.
8. ... have a good/great/better/bad/terrible influence on... 對……有很大的好的影響/壞的影響。
9. ... make/makes a big difference in ...
一些高分表達：
心中充滿了……
I felt that every corner of my heart was full of (filled with) nervousness/happiness/sadness/stress.
我感到我的心中的每一個角落充滿了緊張/幸福/悲傷/壓力。
心頭涌上……
I felt a strong sense/feeling of pride/happiness/achievement/satisfaction rose from the bottom of my heart.
so... that...句式
I was so excited at the news that I jumped in excitement. 聽到這則新聞，我興奮得跳起來。
I was so moved by his words that I burst into tears. 我被他的話感動的流出眼淚了。
I was so nervous/excited that I couldn’t say any words. 我緊張/興奮得說不出話來。
My English was so poor that I couldn’t follow my teacher in class.
I was so poor at English/swimming that I was afraid of speaking English in public/jumping into the pool.
He was so thankful to me that he wanted to give me a gift/present.
逗號加形容詞表示狀態
1.I just stood there, hopeless and helpless. 我就站在那里，無助又失望。
2.I just looked at her, excited and happy. 我就看著她，興奮又高興。
Only 開頭的部分倒裝句結構
Only when we are healthy ca we study well and enjoy life.
Only in this way will we have a brighter future/live a happier life.
Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.
Only by getting over difficulties can we become better men.
Only after I joined the basketball club did I know more about team spirit.
6.find/discover/think/consider it +adj./n +to do sth. 發現做某事是……
1. If we can develop/take up more interests, we will find it easy to keep away from online games.
如果我們能培養更多的興趣，我們會發現遠離網絡游戲很容易。
I found it difficult/easy to master the secret to learning English. 我發現掌握英語學習秘訣是很難的/容易的。
I found it useful to take part in after-school activities. 我發現參加課后活動是有用的。
I think it a good idea to go over the lessons and finish our homework on time.
我認為按時復習課程和完成家庭作業是個好主意。
7. It is/was... that .... （強調句）
1. It is sunlight that makes us feel good.
2. It is the teachers’ instruction that has made us who we are today. 正是老師的教導成就了今天的我們。
3. It was because I followed her advice/suggestions that I became more energetic.
4. It was from then on that I started to stick to practicing guitar.
8.When 引導的時間狀語從句的省略。
When I was walking in the quiet street, I came across a lovely cat and its owner named Ben.
=When walking in the quiet street ,....
When I was walking home, I saw a old man lying down the street, hopeless and helpless.
=When walking home, ....
We all had a strong sense of satisfaction and achievement when working in a group and cooperating with each other.
9.現在分詞做狀語相當于狀語從句
When I hurried to school, I fell off my bike and hurt my leg.
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Not stopping to listen to them, I shouted at the children and explained how angry I was at what they had done. 現在分詞作伴隨狀語，賓語從句中嵌套賓語從句。
Seeing Li Ming falling asleep, our teacher woke him up and reminded him to listen to her carefully.
Looking back on the old days of my junior high school, I can see plenty of wonderful moments shared with my teachers and classmates.
10.過去分詞作狀語
Compared with any other student in his class, Tony is better at communicating.
托尼比班里其他同學更善于溝通。
Because he was encouraged by his mother, he gradually became happier and happier.
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翻譯：在爸爸溫暖話語的鼓勵下，我下定決心要堅持夢想。
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Written in a hurry, the article was not so good. 因為寫得匆忙，這篇文章不是很好。
11.……的主要理由是…… The main reason why ... is/was (that).../That is the reason why...
I choose to make friends with Joe because we both like playing basketball.
______________________________________________ is that we both like playing basketball.
The reason why he was late for school was that he helped a man in need on his way to school.
12.Not only 放句首，要倒裝。 not only ...., but also...
網絡不但正在給中國人民帶來更多的便利，而且也幫助世界成為一個更好的居住地。
The internet is not only bringing more convenience to Chinese people, but it is also helping to make the world a better place to live in.
=___________________________________________________,but it is also helping to make the world a better place to live in.
Friendship means not only caring and understanding ,but also supporting and encouraging each other.
=________________________caring and understand, but also supporting and encouraging each other.
13.據說…… It is said that...
一般認為…… It is thought that..
大家都知道……/眾所周知…… It is known that
據報道…… It is reported that ...
人們期望…… It is expected that ...
人們相信/一般認為…… It is believed that...
E.g . It is believed that reading increase our knowledge and broadens our mind.
14.俗話說得好…… As an old saying goes(runs,says),...=An old saying goes,...=It’s an old saying（that）...
E.g. As an old saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy”. 城實為上策。
15. Life is difficult. We should face it with courage and a smile.
_____________________________________________________________(用no matter how 引導的讓步狀語從句改寫)
If you can read more, you will read faster.
_________________________________________________(用the +比較級……，the +比較級……)
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As teenagers, we should play an active role in improving the environment.(把should 替換)
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_______________________ to play an active role in improving the environment.(It’ one’s duty to...)
I hope to run in the most beautiful park in my city.
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Mom taught me to be polite and helpful.
_____________________________________________________________(teach sb. a lesson that...)
Mother play an important role in the growth of children.
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最好不要逃避我們的問題。我們總是應該想辦法解決它們。(It is best (not) to do sth.)
_____________________________________. We should always try to solve them.
如果你擔心考試，最好通過鍛煉來放松自己。
If you are worried about exam, __________________________________________
多虧了老師的幫助，我進步了很多。
_______________________, I have made much progress.
=_______________________, I have made much progress.

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