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假如你是李華, 你將于近期前往悉尼大學(xué)( the University of Sydney)進(jìn)行為期一年的學(xué)習(xí), 計劃在當(dāng)?shù)刈夥俊Ｕ堄糜⑽慕o筆友 Martin寫一封郵件, 向他咨詢相關(guān)情況。郵件內(nèi)容包括:
1.寫明事由;
2. 詢問情況;
3. 期待見面。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。
Dear Martin,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
寫作提綱：
第一段：
點明寫信目的：告知 Martin 自己即將前往悉尼大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)一年且要租房，引出下文咨詢內(nèi)容。
常用表達(dá)：“I'm writing to inform you that...” “I'm going to...” “Recently, I have got the opportunity to...”
第二段：
詳細(xì)詢問租房相關(guān)信息：
地段推薦：詢問學(xué)校周邊安全、便利的居住區(qū)域，如 “Could you recommend some safe and convenient neighborhoods near the university ”
租金范圍：了解不同房型的大致租金，如 “What's the average rent for a one-bedroom apartment or a shared flat ”
租房渠道：咨詢可靠的租房中介或網(wǎng)站，像 “Are there any reliable rental agencies or websites that you know ”
邏輯連接詞：Firstly, Secondly, Moreover 等，使詢問條理清晰。
第三段：
表達(dá)感謝：“Thank you for your time and consideration.” “I really appreciate your help.”
期待見面：“I'm looking forward to seeing you.” “Can't wait to meet up with you in Sydney.”
語言積累：
I'm extremely excited to share with you that I'll be studying at the University of Sydney for the upcoming year.
（我非常興奮地告訴你，接下來這一年我將在悉尼大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。）
As I'm going to rent an accommodation there, I'm reaching out to you for some suggestions.
（由于我要在那兒租房子，所以來找你尋求一些建議。）
It would be great if you could recommend a few areas that are within walking distance to the campus.
（要是你能推薦幾個離校園步行可達(dá)的區(qū)域就太好了。）
I wonder what the typical rent is for a studio apartment in that area.
（我想知道那個地區(qū)單身公寓的典型租金是多少。）
Do you have any experience with local rental platforms Any reliable ones you can suggest
（你有沒有用過當(dāng)?shù)氐淖夥科脚_？有沒有可靠的能推薦一下？）
Your insights into the local rental market would be invaluable to me.
（你對當(dāng)?shù)刈夥渴袌龅囊娊鈱ξ襾碚f無比珍貴。）
Another thing I'm concerned about is the facilities provided in the rental apartments.
（我關(guān)心的另一件事是出租公寓里提供的設(shè)施。）
I'm really grateful for any information you can offer me.
（你能提供的任何信息我都會非常感激。）
Looking forward to catching up with you and sharing my study life in Sydney.
（期待和你相聚，分享我在悉尼的學(xué)習(xí)生活。）
Thank you in advance for taking the time to help me out.
（提前感謝你抽出時間幫我。）
寫作示范：
第一篇：
Dear Martin,
Greetings! I'm overjoyed to tell you that I've got the chance to study at the University of Sydney for one year. And now, I'm faced with the task of finding a suitable place to live.
I was wondering if you could give me a hand. Firstly, regarding the location, I prefer somewhere close to the university, preferably with easy access to public transportation. Could you name a few such areas Secondly, about the rent, I'm on a bit of a tight budget. So, what's the approximate cost for a small apartment or a room in a shared house Additionally, I'm clueless about the local rental process. Are there any particular rental companies or online platforms that you think are trustworthy
Thank you so much for your help. I'm counting down the days until I arrive in Sydney and we can meet up.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
第二篇：
Dear Martin,
How's it going I hope you're doing well. I'm writing because I'm about to embark on a one-year academic journey at the University of Sydney and need to sort out my living arrangements.
I know you're familiar with Sydney, so I'm turning to you for advice. Firstly, I'm looking for a quiet and safe neighborhood near the university. Do you know of any Secondly, in terms of rent, I want to get an idea of how much I should expect to pay monthly for a furnished one-bedroom apartment. Also, when it comes to signing a lease, are there any common pitfalls or things I should pay special attention to
Your help means the world to me. I'm really looking forward to seeing you and exploring Sydney together.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三篇：
Dear Martin,
Long time no see! I've got some exciting news. I'm going to study at the University of Sydney for the next twelve months and I'm currently in the process of hunting for an apartment.
I thought you'd be the perfect person to consult. To start with, could you recommend some areas that are student-friendly, with amenities like supermarkets and cafes nearby Secondly, I'm curious about the rent fluctuation throughout the year. Is there a particular season when it's cheaper to rent Moreover, do you have any tips on negotiating with landlords
I truly appreciate your assistance. Can't wait to reunite with you in Sydney.
Best regards,
Yours,
Li Hua
應(yīng)用文寫作參考答案：
Dear Martin,
Exhilarated to tell you that I'm going to the University of Sydney for further study, I'm reaching out for a brief inquiry with regard to apartment rental.
Since I will be living in Sydney for the whole year, all things considered, homestay is not a proper choice. I don't mind sharing an apartment if it is conveniently located and has a cozy bedroom. So what is the approximate cost of the whole apartment and a shared one respectively Additionally, I wonder if you could recommend any areas where the rent is affordable and meanwhile enjoy easy access to public transport. Apart from location and living environment, are there any other important considerations while I am looking for ideal accommodation
Your prompt reply is much appreciated. Looking forward to meeting you in Sydney.
Yours,
Li Hua

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