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In my community, there’s a much-loved street cleaner named Paul Spiery. Since 2017, the 63-year-old has been dutifully cleaning our streets. As he sweeps, he always sings along with the melodious tunes of Elvis Presley (貓王) . Paul’s beautiful voice floats in the air, adding a unique charm to our community.
Paul has developed deep and genuine friendships with many of us locals. I’m his best friend as we both love Elvis’ songs. Whenever we express our gratitude to him, he always smiles brightly and says he’s just doing his job. His presence has not only kept our roads clean but also lifted out spirits.
We, the neighbours, were deeply touched by Paul’s hard work and positive attitude. So we decided to come together to give him a special gift. We managed to raise over 3,000 to send him on a holiday to Portugal a place he had always dreamed of revisiting since he had only been abroad once, and that was to Portugal.
However, our kind plan encountered a big problem. Paul’s employer, a waste management company, stated that employees couldn’t receive any gifts in the form of money other than their regular salary according to strict corporate rules. At this news, Paul said, “Well, rules are rules. It’s okay. I’m grateful for what everyone has tried to do for me.” He continued to sweep the floor, humming a song of Elvis Presley as usual.
We were all disappointed that Paul couldn’t enjoy this well-deserved holiday as a reward for all his hard work for our community and determined to find a proper way to recognize Paul.
I posted Paul’s story on social media, “Giving him this incredible gift would be a heartfelt way to show our appreciation for everything he does. Let’s come together to make this dream happen for someone who truly deserves it.” The post went viral and caught the attention of a package holiday company, OnTheBeach.
The manager of OnTheBeach got in touch with me, and put forward a proper way to recognize Paul.
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OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition.
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To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win.
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文章大意：
在社區(qū)備受愛(ài)戴的 63 歲街道清潔工保羅，清掃時(shí)愛(ài)哼唱貓王歌曲，與居民情誼深厚。居民感恩其付出，眾籌 3000 多英鎊想送他去葡萄牙度假，卻因公司規(guī)定員工不能收受金錢(qián)形式禮物受阻。保羅坦然接受，居民未放棄，“我” 將故事發(fā)網(wǎng)上后引發(fā)關(guān)注，度假公司 OnTheBeach 介入，提出特別方式幫助實(shí)現(xiàn)大家心愿。
故事山分析：
開(kāi)端：保羅多年如一日清掃街道并哼唱歌曲，與居民交好，展現(xiàn)溫馨日常場(chǎng)景，引出人物與背景。
發(fā)展：居民感恩策劃送度假禮物，體現(xiàn)社區(qū)溫情，推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展。
高潮：公司規(guī)則打破原計(jì)劃，制造沖突與懸念。
低谷：保羅雖失落仍堅(jiān)守崗位，凸顯其豁達(dá)，情緒短暫下沉。
回升：網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖引度假公司關(guān)注，帶來(lái)轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折上揚(yáng)。
伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)：
伏筆：保羅愛(ài)唱貓王歌曲，“As he sweeps, he always sings along with the melodious tunes of Elvis Presley.”，為后續(xù)唱歌比賽做鋪墊。
回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫(xiě)中度假公司舉辦以貓王歌曲為主題的比賽，保羅憑此優(yōu)勢(shì)參賽有望獲獎(jiǎng)。
伏筆：保羅僅去過(guò)一次國(guó)外即葡萄牙，“a place he had always dreamed of revisiting since he had only been abroad once, and that was to Portugal.”，明確其向往之地。
回應(yīng)：比賽獎(jiǎng)品設(shè)定為葡萄牙度假套餐，精準(zhǔn)契合保羅心愿。
伏筆：公司嚴(yán)格規(guī)定員工不能收受金錢(qián)禮物，“Paul’s employer, a waste management company, stated that employees couldn’t receive any gifts in the form of money other than their regular salary according to strict corporate rules.”，制造情節(jié)阻礙。
回應(yīng)：度假公司另辟蹊徑，以比賽獲勝形式讓保羅合規(guī)獲獎(jiǎng)，化解矛盾。
伏筆：“我” 與保羅因共同喜愛(ài)貓王歌曲成為好友，“I’m his best friend as we both love Elvis’ songs.”，暗示 “我” 助力的合理性。
回應(yīng)：“我” 在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展，利用社交力量幫保羅，源于友誼且順理成章。
伏筆：保羅平日積極樂(lè)觀(guān)，面對(duì)禮物受阻坦然處之，“He continued to sweep the floor, humming a song of Elvis Presley as usual.”，刻畫(huà)性格特點(diǎn)。
回應(yīng)：后續(xù)即使參賽有壓力，他也保持狀態(tài)，最終收獲美好，性格促使其迎來(lái)人生小高峰。
續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：
第一段：
詳細(xì)描述唱歌比賽的籌備過(guò)程，包括場(chǎng)地布置、宣傳推廣等，展現(xiàn)社區(qū)對(duì)此次活動(dòng)的重視。
例如：The community center was quickly transformed into a makeshift concert hall. Colorful banners with Elvis’ portraits hung everywhere, and a professional sound system was installed. Volunteers spread the word through flyers and social media, attracting contestants from all corners of the neighborhood.
突出比賽當(dāng)日的熱烈氛圍，保羅的精彩表現(xiàn)及競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手的實(shí)力，增強(qiáng)故事緊張感與可讀性。
像：On the big day, the place was packed. Contestants one after another took the stage, belting out classic Elvis numbers. Paul, in his neatly pressed uniform, stepped up last. His voice, rich and resonant, sent shivers down the spines of the audience. But the others were no slouches either, making it a nail-biting competition.
第二段：
講述保羅得知公司同意后的反應(yīng)，包括內(nèi)心的激動(dòng)、對(duì)眾人的感謝表達(dá)等細(xì)節(jié)，將情感推向高潮。
比如：When Paul got the green light from the waste management company, he broke down in tears of joy. He immediately called each and every neighbor who had supported him, his voice choked with gratitude. At the send-off party before his trip, he gave a heartfelt speech, vowing to come back and continue serving the community even better.
描繪保羅度假歸來(lái)后的變化，如工作態(tài)度更加積極，社區(qū)凝聚力更強(qiáng)，升華故事主題。
示例：After his wonderful vacation in Portugal, Paul returned with a sun-kissed glow and renewed spirit. He swept the streets with a beaming smile, his singing louder and more energetic than ever. The community, too, felt a new sense of unity, bound by the shared experience of making someone’s dream come true.
情感線(xiàn)：
起初，居民對(duì)保羅心懷感恩與喜愛(ài)，積極籌備禮物，滿(mǎn)是期待；遇公司規(guī)則阻礙時(shí)，大家沮喪失望；保羅雖失落卻樂(lè)觀(guān)堅(jiān)守，令人心疼又敬佩；網(wǎng)上求助引發(fā)關(guān)注后重燃希望；比賽過(guò)程緊張，眾人情緒隨選手表現(xiàn)起伏；最終保羅獲獎(jiǎng)、公司同意，喜悅與欣慰充斥，度假歸來(lái)更讓社區(qū)情感升溫，從個(gè)人感恩升華為集體凝聚力，溫暖貫穿始終。
故事線(xiàn)：
保羅多年清掃街道，哼唱貓王歌曲，與居民結(jié)下情誼。
居民感恩，眾籌資金想送保羅去葡萄牙度假。
公司規(guī)定致禮物計(jì)劃泡湯，保羅坦然接受。
“我” 網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖求助，引發(fā)度假公司關(guān)注。
度假公司辦唱歌比賽，保羅參賽。
保羅獲獎(jiǎng)，公司同意，度假歸來(lái)更添社區(qū)溫情。
主旨升華句：
True kindness knows no bounds; it can break through the toughest of rules and make the impossible possible, just as the neighbors did for Paul. （真正的善良沒(méi)有界限，它能沖破最嚴(yán)苛的規(guī)則，讓不可能成為可能，就像鄰居們?yōu)楸Ａ_所做的那樣。）
In the face of obstacles, the power of a community united by love and gratitude can create miracles, turning disappointment into delight for someone worthy. （面對(duì)阻礙，一個(gè)因愛(ài)與感恩而團(tuán)結(jié)的社區(qū)力量能創(chuàng)造奇跡，將失望轉(zhuǎn)化為值得之人的喜悅。）
Sometimes, the simplest acts of appreciation, like a song or a holiday, can light up a person’s life and ripple through a whole community, spreading warmth and hope. （有時(shí)，像一首歌或一次度假這樣最簡(jiǎn)單的感恩之舉，能點(diǎn)亮一個(gè)人的生活，并在整個(gè)社區(qū)泛起漣漪，傳播溫暖與希望。）
A dream deferred doesn’t mean a dream denied; with perseverance and the support of others, it can take flight again, as Paul’s journey to Portugal proved. （夢(mèng)想被推遲并不意味著夢(mèng)想被否定；有了毅力和他人的支持，它可以再次起航，正如保羅的葡萄牙之旅所證明的那樣。）
The story of Paul and his community shows that no matter how humble one’s job, when filled with passion and kindness, it can inspire a whole neighborhood to come together and rewrite someone’s story. （保羅和他社區(qū)的故事表明，無(wú)論一個(gè)人的工作多么平凡，只要充滿(mǎn)熱情和善良，它就能激勵(lì)整個(gè)社區(qū)團(tuán)結(jié)起來(lái)，改寫(xiě)某人的故事。）
寫(xiě)作示范兩篇：
第一篇：
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. The rules were simple: sing an Elvis Presley song and win a dream holiday to Portugal. Word spread quickly, and soon the community was abuzz with excitement. The local park was chosen as the venue, and volunteers worked tirelessly to set up the stage, complete with bright lights and a state-of-the-art sound system. On the day of the competition, contestants of all ages gathered, each hoping to give Paul a chance at his dream. Paul, looking a bit nervous but determined, took the stage. His voice, which had so often charmed the neighborhood, now soared through the park, captivating everyone. The other singers were strong, but Paul’s passion was palpable.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. When the judges declared him the winner, the crowd went wild. Paul stood there, tears streaming down his face, unable to believe his luck. He thanked everyone, his voice cracking with emotion. Before leaving for Portugal, he visited each neighbor, expressing his gratitude. While on vacation, he sent postcards and pictures, sharing his joy. When he returned, he was a changed man. His work had new meaning, and he sang louder than ever, knowing that his community had his back. The community, too, was closer than ever, bound by the love and kindness shown to Paul.
第二篇：
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. It was an open invitation to all who loved Elvis and wanted to help Paul. The local school auditorium was decked out with Elvis memorabilia, from posters to life-size cutouts. Flyers were distributed, and social media was flooded with posts about the event. Contestants signed up in droves, eager to be part of this heartwarming endeavor. On the day of the event, the atmosphere was electric. Paul, dressed in his best, stepped onto the stage. His rendition of an Elvis classic was flawless, his voice echoing through the hall. The competition was fierce, but Paul’s connection to the music and his community set him apart.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. Paul was overjoyed. He hugged his neighbors, his eyes filled with tears of gratitude. At the airport, before boarding, he promised to bring back memories and souvenirs. While in Portugal, he explored every corner, his face beaming in the photos he sent back. Upon his return, he resumed his duties with a renewed sense of purpose. The community witnessed his transformation and felt a sense of pride. This act of kindness had not only given Paul a holiday but had strengthened the bonds of the community, proving that a little love can go a long way.
讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)參考范文（滿(mǎn)分25分）
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. This event, which was designed for people who love Elvis Presley’s music, offered a grand prize of a dream vacation to Portugal. Anyone who could sing Elvis’s songs was welcome to join. Paul, who had a passion for Elvis and often sang while working, was encouraged by his friends to enter the contest. To everyone’s delight, Paul performed wonderfully and won the hearts of the judges. As a result, he became the winner of the competition, earning the trip that he had longed for.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. The company thought it was a prize for his talent rather than a direct gift of money. After learning about his victory, Paul felt overjoyed and grateful. The news spread quickly, and many neighbors came to congratulate him. Paul, who was always modest, thanked everyone for their support. With this unexpected opportunity, Paul finally got to revisit Portugal, the place he had dreamed of seeing again. His achievement not only brought him personal joy but also made the whole community proud.

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