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Unit 2 Natural disasters
Integrated skills (Ⅱ)（教學設計）
I. Learning objectives
By the end of the lesson, students will be able to:
1. brainstorm and discuss the plot development reasonably;
2. continue a story about Mary’s family caught in a flood.
II. Key competence focus
1. Discuss and predict possible plot development.
2. Master the basic techniques of continuation writing.
III. Predicted area of difficulty
1. Keep the two parts of the story coherent and consistent.
2. Give proper and detailed descriptions in the continued story.
IV. Teaching procedures
Step 1 Reading for plot
T asks Ss to review the basic elements of the story.
Characters: Mary and her parents
Setting: On a rainy day, in their house
Plot: The city Mary and her parents lived in was flooded. They were trapped at home, not sure what to do.
T asks Ss to complete the plot line.
Mary and her parents were trapped at home by a storm. → Mary wanted to leave but her parents thought it was dangerous. → Mary and her parents had no idea what to do. →
【設計意圖：學生通過概述故事第一部分的大意，復習故事的三大基本要素：背景（setting）, 人物（characters）和 情節（plot），然后通過plot line過渡到故事情節的發展?！?br/>Step 2 Discussing for clues
T asks Ss to think about the following questions:
What if Mary and her parents try to leave their house What if they decide to stay at home
What safety tips from part A can be used to help Mary and her parents protect themselves
Will any new characters appear Who are they and what will they do
2. T breaks the above questions into more sub-questions and gets Ss to have a discussion.
(1) Sub-questions for the first question
Which choice may bring them more danger and why
What may be the possible decision and who will make it
(2) Sub-questions for the second question
If they decide to leave the house, what do they need
If they decide to stay indoors, what do they need
Do they have them
(3) Sub-questions for the third question
If new characters appear, who are they What will they do What will Mary and her parents do
If no new characters appear, what will Mary and her parents do
3. Before discussion, T presents them a tip on how to ask for clarification.
Some useful sentence patterns:
I’m sorry, could you say that again
What do you mean by that
Could you please explain this word
4. T shows Ss a sample for their reference.
【設計意圖：進入情節預測環節之后，讓學生以二人小組的形式進行討論，依據故事第一部分的信息進行合乎邏輯的推斷，并指導學生如何在口語交流的過程中讓對方進行闡明和解釋?！?br/>Step 3 Writing for language
1. T guides Ss to find out about the dialogues in the story.
(1) Dialogues in the story
“Mum, Dad,” said Mary suddenly, “I think we should leave here right away!”
“No,” said Dad suddenly. “It’s too late! The radio says the city has already been flooded.”
“We can drive our car through the floodwater! Let’s just leave! I’m really scared!” cried Mary.
“We can’t do that, honey,” explained Mum, “otherwise the moving water could wash the car away.”
“Don’t open the door!” shouted Mum and Dad at the same time. “The water may flood in!”
“Mary, don’t worry. Everything’s going to be OK,” she said softly, trying her best to comfort Mary. Her voice was calm, but Mary could tell she was worried too.
(2) More specific words to replace say
cry, explain, shout, scream, yell, roar, whisper, add, continue, remark, repeat, complain, warn, reply, apologize, comfort, beg, refuse, answer, cheer …
T guides Ss to find out about the scene descriptions in the story.
Descriptions of scenes in the story
It had been raining non-stop for three days.
The wind roared and the rain beat on the roof and windows.
The sudden silence in the house seemed to make the wind and rain more frightening outside.
(2) The functions of scene descriptions
Specify the setting
Create tension
Move the plot forward
T guides Ss to find out about the actions in the story.
Actions in the story
Mary was looking through the windows at the endless rain outside.
Mary walked to the door. She was curious to see how much water there was outside.
Dad was listening to a weather report on the radio, while Mum was putting their important documents and disaster supplies into a bag.
Dad moved the dinner table against the door, in case the floodwater forced the door open.
Mum waved to Mary to sit on the sofa.
Without saying a single word, Dad walked to the sofa, sat down and hugged his wife and daughter.
(2) Tips on describing actions
Use specific verbs.
Use verb chains to show a series of actions.
4. T asks Ss to continue the story by using the ideas from the discussion. Meanwhile, T reminds them to make proper use of dialogues, scenes and actions.
5. T asks Ss to polish their writing from the following aspects: punctuation, spelling, grammar, choice of words, style (formal/informal) and structure.
【設計意圖：聚焦故事第一部分中的對話、場景描寫和動作描寫，拓展對話描寫中“說”的多樣表達，并分析場景描寫的作用，對動作描寫提出建議，為學生的續寫提供支架?！?br/>Step 4 Presentation
T invites several Ss to show their writing to the whole class.
T evaluates their writing in terms of structure, language and handwriting.
T asks Ss to give some suggestions to improve the writing.
T asks Ss to revise their writing according to the comments.
【設計意圖：通過展示與評價，讓學生對續寫有初步的了解，并發現自己的問題所在?！?br/>Step 5 Appreciation
T shows Ss a sample and appreciates it with them.
T asks Ss to find out the dialogues, descriptions of scenes and actions.
T asks Ss to figure out the transitional words or sentences to ensure the second half matches the first half in terms of characters, plot and style.
【設計意圖：分析范例，進一步感知讀后續寫的語言特點和結構。】
Step 6 Summary
T summarizes 3 tips for continuation writing.
Tip 1: Read for the basic information and draw a plot line to get a clear picture.
Tip 2: Get clues from the given information to create a reasonable plot.
Tip 3: Follow the original language style and keep the style consistent.
【設計意圖：根據本節課的三個環節，總結提煉關于讀后續寫的三點建議，讓學生對續寫的總體思路有個初步的了解?！?br/>V. Homework
Polish your continuation writing.

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