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2025年1月普通高等學校招生全國統一考試適應性測試英語試題（八省聯考）
第二節（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary （紀錄片） about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men-all wearing insignia（徽章） that indicated they were in some sort of club- standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. (狀從)
注意：（1） 續寫詞數應為150個左右；（2） 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
第二節（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel(狀從). A nearby theater was showing a documentary （紀錄片） about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country(定從). I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned【v.辭去任命，拋棄，順從于】 myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room(狀從) I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place(定從) was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on(定從), but when I turned the corner(狀從), I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers(地點狀語謂語句首，完全倒裝句).
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men-all wearing insignia（徽章） that indicated they were in some sort of club- standing before me(定從). Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding【v.搗碎，鵬鵬敲打】. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening(賓從). Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers(賓從). I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater(賓從). Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：（1） 續寫詞數應為150個左右；（2） 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
1. 分類與續寫分析
文章類型：懸念解開型（懸念起于主角對機車黨成員的恐懼，通過情節發展揭示他們的善意）
構思分析：
布局：
第一段：承接原文情節，展現主人公進入劇院后的反應，以及與機車黨互動的初步描寫。
第二段：解開懸念，展示機車黨成員的真實身份及情節高潮，結尾呼應主題。
提煉框架：
主角進入劇院后的觀察與情緒反應。
主角與機車黨互動，反轉機車黨的形象。
主題升華：傳遞愛與善意。
實施要點：
動作描寫與心理描寫相結合，增強代入感。
精準承接原文，通過細節填充邏輯。
通過對機車黨的細節刻畫實現反轉效果。
注意事項：
承接原文語言風格，保持連貫性。
巧妙融入環境描寫、時間過渡詞匯。
避免生硬的情節推動，確保自然流暢。
故事山模式分析
Introduction (開篇：設置場景)
原文內容: 主人公決定冒險前往劇院，盡管對陌生的夜晚環境感到不安。
銜接點: 描述主人公進入劇院前的心理矛盾和對機車黨的第一印象。
Build-up (逐步展開：沖突醞釀)
原文內容: 進入劇院后，發現機車黨占據了現場。主人公的緊張情緒進一步加劇。
銜接點: 渲染劇院內的氛圍和主人公的心理反應，增加懸念。
Climax (高潮：情感沖突)
原文內容: 主人公發現機車黨實際上是動物救援組織。
銜接點: 通過主人公視角刻畫發現真相的震驚和情感轉變，形成對比。
Falling Action (解決：真相揭曉)
原文內容: 主人公被機車黨的善良所打動，與其互動。
銜接點: 描述機車黨成員的細節和他們對動物救援的真摯態度。
Resolution (結尾：升華主題)
原文內容: 主人公回到酒店，心懷感動，獲得啟發。
銜接點: 總結故事主題，強調人性溫暖與表面印象的反差。
分析角度 內容 原文反映句
人物刻畫 主人公從緊張到欽佩，機車黨從“恐怖”到“善良”的反轉。 “Was I at the right theater ” → “Their leader... told me, ‘Our hearts are soft for these animals.’”
情感層次 從恐懼、不安到驚訝、感動再到欽佩。 “My heart was pounding.” → “I felt my earlier fear dissolve into admiration.”
關鍵情節點 主人公進入劇院發現真相，情感和認知發生轉變。 “I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.”
語言特色 使用心理和環境描寫突出氛圍變化，通過反差強化情感。 “Warning bells began to sound in my head.” → “Their tough exteriors melted away.”
關鍵詞分析 bikers, pounding, deserted, rescue, admiration 詳見關鍵詞表格分析部分。
心理描寫 緊張不安→放松感動 “My heart skipped a beat.” → “I felt my earlier fear dissolve into a deep sense of admiration.”
動作描寫 停下、猶豫、靠近、交談 “I hesitated by the entrance.” → “I couldn’t resist approaching one of them.”
環境描寫 描寫空曠街道和熱鬧劇院的對比，烘托氛圍。 “The streets were nearly deserted.” → “The room was buzzing with their chatter and laughter.”
隱含主題 善良往往隱藏在出乎意料的地方，人性溫暖常被外表掩蓋。 主人公對機車黨的態度轉變和主題升華句（Resolution部分）。
情感轉折 從防備到接受，再到欽佩與敬仰。 “Warning bells began to sound.” → “That night, I walked back... inspired by the kindness.”
空間轉換 街道 → 劇院入口 → 劇院內部 “I managed to find the street the theater was on.” → “I cautiously moved to an empty seat.”
時間過渡 夜晚到活動結束 “It was already getting dark.” → “By the time the credits rolled...”
銜接點分析：
原文心理描寫：
“Warning bells began to sound in my head.”
“My heart was pounding.”
原文動作描寫：
“I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater.”
“I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.”
原文關鍵轉折點：
主角面對機車黨的出現，猶豫是否進入劇院。
3. 動作、心理、環境描寫推薦語料
動作描寫：
She hesitated briefly at the door, clutching her purse tightly.
He glanced around nervously, avoiding eye contact with the crowd.
The woman’s steps quickened as she approached the entrance.
心理描寫：
Her thoughts raced as she tried to suppress her rising panic.
Doubts crept into her mind, leaving her torn between staying and fleeing.
Relief flooded her heart when she realized the truth.
環境描寫：
The dimly lit street seemed to stretch endlessly into the shadows.
A faint breeze carried the distant hum of city life, amplifying her unease.
The theater’s warm glow contrasted sharply with the chilly night air.
高級替換詞匯分類總結：
情感：fear → trepidation, anxiety → unease
環境：dark → dim, shadowy → murky
動作：walk → stride, hurry → dash
4. 高中語法與搭配分析
語法現象：
非謂語動詞：
“Feeling an urge to go to this fundraising event...”
示例：Driven by curiosity, she decided to stay.
過去完成時：
“Had I misread the date of the event ”
示例：She wondered if she had overreacted.
常見搭配：
表達緊張：warning bells + began to sound
心理活動：feel restless and bored
生詞短語：
Insignia: n. 徽章
Synonyms: badge, emblem
Example: The soldiers wore their insignia proudly.
Urge: n. 強烈的欲望
Synonyms: impulse, desire
Example: He felt an urge to speak up.
5. Possible Answers
Possible Answer 下水作文：
Paragraph 1:
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. The sight made my heart skip a beat. The room was buzzing with their chatter, laughter, and the occasional clinking of heavy boots against the floor(名詞并列). They seemed entirely at ease, occupying the space(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) as though it was their second home(狀從). I hesitated by the entrance, my mind racing with doubts(獨立主格). Just as I considered slipping out unnoticed(狀從+unnoticed做主語補語或狀語), I caught sight of something unexpected: flyers and posters scattered on the tables(非謂語動詞做后置定語), all featuring images of adorable dogs.(獨立主格) Intrigued despite my nervousness(非謂語動詞短語做原因狀語), I cautiously moved to an empty seat at the back, trying to blend into the shadows(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).
Clink v.使 <金屬、玻璃等> 叮鈴[叮當]作響; be at ease 自在舒適
Slip out 溜出去； scatter vi.散落；adorable adj.可愛的； blend v.混入；混合；
Paragraph 2:
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group(賓從). The documentary opened with touching footage of abandoned dogs(with 復合短語做后置定語) being cared for and adopted(非謂語動詞做后置定語), and to my astonishment, many of the bikers in the audience appeared on screen as the rescuers. Their tough exteriors melted away as the film highlighted their compassion and dedication(狀從). Some of them even teared up as the stories unfolded(狀從), and I felt my earlier fear dissolve into a deep sense of admiration. By the time the credits rolled(定從), I couldn’t resist approaching one of them to express my appreciation(非謂語動詞做目的狀語). Their leader, a burly【adj. <人>魁梧的,強壯的; 粗野的;】 man with a kind smile(后置定語), told me, “We may look tough, but our hearts are soft for these animals.” That night, I walked back to my hotel, not only feeling safe but inspired by the kindness(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) I had witnessed(定從).
結構分析
第一段
承接原文，具體描寫主人公進入劇院的動作、心理、以及對機車黨的細節觀察，加入懸念。
使用 對比描寫 突出主角的緊張與機車黨輕松自在的狀態，為反轉埋下伏筆。
第二段
懸念揭開：機車黨是動物救援組織。
主題升華：善意與外表形成的反差令人印象深刻。
互動細節：通過與機車黨的對話，傳遞情感共鳴，增強感染力。
語言亮點與加分點解析
亮點詞匯與短語
動作描寫：
“slipping out unnoticed” → 動作細節體現緊張心態。
“occupied the space as though it was their second home” → 通過細節表現機車黨的自在狀態。
心理描寫：
“made my heart skip a beat” → 精準刻畫情緒波動。
“my mind racing with doubts” → 生動表達主人公的內心掙扎。
環境描寫：
“buzzing with their chatter, laughter, and the occasional clinking of heavy boots” → 聲音和動作的細節烘托劇院氛圍。
語言升級：
nervous → anxious, uneasy
tough → rugged, intimidating
inspired → moved, uplifted
高級句型與語法
分詞結構：
“Intrigued despite my nervousness, I cautiously moved to an empty seat...”
作用：精煉地展現心理與動作。
強調句型：
“It was their compassion and dedication that truly moved me.”
作用：突出機車黨令人感動的特點。
虛擬語氣：
“Had I left earlier, I would have missed an unforgettable experience.”
作用：總結經驗，升華主題。
續寫語料積累
短語替換與表達優化
“feel scared” → experience a wave of trepidation
“seemed intimidating” → came across as formidable
“show kindness” → demonstrate compassion
句型積累
表示猶豫和緊張：
She hesitated at the door, torn between staying and leaving.
表達驚訝和敬佩：
To my amazement, they turned out to be the most dedicated animal rescuers I had ever met.
升華主題：
That night, I learned that appearances could be deceiving and that kindness often hides in the most unexpected places.
優秀短語與詞匯分解
單詞 詞性 詞義 近義詞 聯想詞 例句
skip a beat v. 心跳停頓（因緊張或驚訝） flutter, tremble pulse, heart My heart skipped a beat at the sight of the crowd.
blend into v. 融入 merge, integrate fit in, disappear She tried to blend into the background.
astonishment n. 驚訝 amazement, wonder surprise, admiration To my astonishment, they were animal lovers.
teared up v. 流淚 cried, welled up sobbed, choked He teared up at the emotional scene.
Possible Answer 1：
Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. Their loud laughter and rough voices filled the room, making me feel even more out of place(非謂語動詞組做伴隨動作). As I cautiously made my way to a seat(狀從), I noticed they were holding posters of dogs and handing out leaflets(賓從). My curiosity was piqued【v.使人生氣，產生好奇心】.
Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary revealed their dedication to saving abandoned dogs, showcasing heartwarming stories of transformation(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). My fear turned into admiration as I saw their passion(狀從). By the end of the evening, I couldn’t help but smile, knowing that appearances can be deceiving(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作+賓從).
Possible Answer 2：
Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. Their presence dominated the small space, their leather jackets and tattoos adding to the intimidating atmosphere(獨立主格). But as I observed more closely(狀從), I noticed a gentleness in their interactions—a stark contrast to their tough exteriors.
Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. Their tireless efforts to provide care and shelter for dogs(非謂語動詞短語做后置定語) touched me deeply. After the screening, I even found the courage to thank them. It was a night I would never forget(定從).
Possible Answer 3：
Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. Their cheerful chatter and animated gestures filled the room. As I slid into【v.溜進去】 a seat at the back(狀從), I overheard snippets【n.片段零碎的東西】of conversation about dog rescues and adoption events.
Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary showcased their remarkable work, and I felt a deep sense of respect. By the time the credits rolled, my fear had completely vanished, replaced by awe at their kindness and dedication(非謂語動詞做原因狀語).
6. 優秀短語與詞匯分解
單詞 詞性 詞義 近義詞 聯想詞 例句
urge n./v. 強烈的欲望；驅使 impulse, desire drive, longing She felt an urge to leave the room.
insignia n. 徽章，標志 badge, emblem symbol, token The soldier wore his insignia proudly.
deserted adj. 荒涼的，無人的 abandoned, empty barren, quiet The streets were deserted at night.
admiration n. 欽佩，贊美 respect, esteem appreciation His courage earned her admiration.
亮點語法與詞匯例句
虛擬語氣：
“Had I misread the date of the event ”
示例：Had it not been for the bikers, I might have left.
動作短語：
clutch tightly → grasp firmly
glance nervously → look anxiously
升級替換短語：
“Feel scared” → experience a wave of trepidation
“Walk into” → step cautiously into

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