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廣東省高二考試讀后續寫
第二節 (滿分25分)
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
It was time for the annual Potato-Salad Contest in Russet Park. Ater trying for the third time, Alexis shook her head sadly. There was no way she would win the Golden Potato again because Grandpa wasn't here this year.
Memories of how Grandpa taught her to make potato rose in her mind. She signed and missed Grandpa so much.
Alexis cut the potatoes and mixed the boiled potatoes, some sauces and a little salt and peppers in a bowl. But it didn't taste right. Alexis tried a bite of the salad mixture, wondering what was missing. Seeing her frown, Mom suggested, " What about something spicy Your Grandpa loved spicy things."
" You're right! Maybe he put a jalapeno pepper in it," Alexis said, cutting up a bright green jalapeno and adding it to the bowl.
It was closer, but it still didn't taste right. Alexis was drooping her head, disappointed " should we look in a cookbook "
"Grandpa was never one to follow a recipe," Dad entered the kitchen and said.
It was true. People loved Grandpa's potato salad because it was one of a kind. Alexis remembered posing with Grandpa for a photo while they were making the salad.
Photo! That geve her an idea. Alexis hurried to the bookcase and found an old photo album. She immediately flipped it open, expecting to find clues in the photos there. Lots of photos showed Grandpa and Grandma cooking together. Dad laughed, " He and Grandma loved to tease each other but he always called her Honey."
" Do you think he put honey in the potato salad " Mum asked.
" It is worth a try." said Alexis. She stirred some honey into the bowl.
But it still wasn't quite right. Alexis' heart sank, on the verge of giving up, Dad kept flipping the album. At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together.
注意：
1. 續寫詞數應為150個左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: It cooked like Grandpa was crying in the photo.
Paragraph 2: With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it.
第二節 (滿分25分)
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
It was time for the annual Potato-Salad Contest in Russet Park(背景信息). Ater trying for the third time, Alexis shook her head sadly(情感線). There was no way she would win the Golden Potato again(定從或同位從) because Grandpa wasn't here this year(狀從).
Memories of how Grandpa taught her to make potato(賓從) rose in her mind. She sighed and missed Grandpa so much.
Alexis cut the potatoes and mixed the boiled potatoes, some sauces and a little salt and peppers in a bowl. But it didn't taste right. Alexis tried a bite of the salad mixture, wondering(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) what was missing(賓從). Seeing her frown(非謂語動詞做mom的伴隨動作), Mom suggested, " What about something spicy Your Grandpa loved spicy things."
" You're right! Maybe he put a jalapeno pepper in it," Alexis said, cutting up a bright green jalapeno and adding it to the bowl(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作).
It was closer, but it still didn't taste right. Alexis was drooping her head, disappointed(adj做補語或狀語，情緒) " should we look in a cookbook "
"Grandpa was never one to follow a recipe," Dad entered the kitchen and said.
It was true. People loved Grandpa's potato salad because it was one of a kind(狀從). Alexis remembered posing with Grandpa for a photo while they were making the salad(狀從).
Photo! That geve her an idea. Alexis hurried to (情緒)the bookcase and found an old photo album. She immediately flipped it open, expecting to find clues in the photos there(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作，心理). Lots of photos showed Grandpa and Grandma cooking together. Dad laughed, " He and Grandma loved to tease each other but he always called her Honey."
" Do you think he put honey in the potato salad " Mum asked.
" It is worth a try." said Alexis. She stirred some honey into the bowl.
But it still wasn't quite right. Alexis' heart sank(情緒), on the verge of giving up(介詞短語做補語), Dad kept flipping the album. At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together.
注意：
1. 續寫詞數應為150個左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: It cooked like Grandpa was crying in the photo.
Paragraph 2: With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it.
1. 高考讀后續寫分類與分析
分析角度 內容 原文反映句
故事類型 家庭情感與傳統的懷念故事 Grandpa wasn't here this year.
Memories of how Grandpa taught her to make potato rose in her mind.
構思思路 以情感為主線，通過物品（照片）引發靈感，解決問題，體現家人間的傳承與懷念。 Photo! That gave her an idea.
布局方式 按“情感失落—尋找線索—問題解決”的模式布局：
1. 表達對爺爺的懷念；
2. 在制作過程中逐步探尋缺少的食材；
3. 以情感溫暖的方式解決問題，并賦予意義。 Alexis shook her head sadly.
Seeing her frown, Mom suggested...
Alexis' heart sank, on the verge of giving up.
提煉框架 1. 開篇：通過情感失落引入；
2. 中間：行動與回憶交織，展示尋找食材的過程；
3. 結尾：利用象征物解決問題，喚起溫暖情感。 Dad kept flipping the album. At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together.
實施策略 - 結合故事線索，注重細節描寫；
- 通過對動作、心理、環境的刻畫提升情感張力；
- 在結尾凸顯家庭溫情與傳承主題。 Dad laughed, "He and Grandma loved to tease each other but he always called her Honey."
承接原文注意事項 - 延續原文懷念的情感基調；
- 保持線索的邏輯性（如從照片中找到啟發）；
- 設計合理的解決方式（與“蜂蜜”和“洋蔥”的線索呼應）。 Grandpa was never one to follow a recipe.
Photo! That gave her an idea.
At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together.
續寫設計建議 - 使用象征性食材（如洋蔥）引發情感升華；
- 增加互動場景，突出家人間的合作與支持；
- 通過細節展示爺爺的影響力（如記憶中的笑容、語言等）。 "Do you think he put honey in the potato salad " Mum asked.
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it.
2. 故事山模式 (Story Mountain) 思維導圖
主要部分：
開端 (Exposition): Alexis想念爺爺，嘗試制作爺爺的土豆沙拉。
沖突 (Conflict): 無論怎樣嘗試，沙拉的味道都不對。
高潮 (Climax): 在照片中發現爺爺的秘密。
解決 (Resolution): 添加洋蔥后，沙拉味道接近完美，家庭的溫暖情感得到升華。
結尾 (Ending): Alexis獲得信心，感受到爺爺的陪伴與指導仍在身邊。
3. 推薦續寫語料
描寫類別 英文例句 高級替換詞
動作描寫 - Alexis stirred the honey into the mixture, her hands trembling with hope.
- Dad flipped through the album eagerly, a smile lighting up his face.
- She gently wiped the dust off the old photograph, her eyes scanning for clues. stirred → whisked
flipped → browsed
心理描寫 - Alexis’ heart sank as disappointment overwhelmed her.
- She held her breath, hoping this time it would work.
- A wave of nostalgia swept over her as she gazed at the photograph. overwhelmed → engulfed
hoping → yearning
環境描寫 - The aroma of freshly boiled potatoes filled the air, mingling with the tang of spices.
- The kitchen was alive with the sound of chopping and stirring.
- A beam of sunlight illuminated the dusty album, casting a golden glow. aroma → scent
beam → ray
4. 語法與詞匯分析
語法現象 例子 搭配與語料
非謂語動詞 Seeing her frown, Mom suggested... Seeing (伴隨狀況)；suggested + 動名詞。
情態動詞 "Do you think he put honey in the potato salad " 情態動詞 (Do you think...) 表達推測或不確定性。
復合句 "At the end of the album was the picture of Grandpa and Alexis making the salad together." at the end of + 地點；... was the picture (倒裝句型)。
可積累語料 - "It is worth a try."
- "Grandpa was never one to follow a recipe." worth a try (值得一試)；one to follow (某人習慣于某事)。
Possible Answers
Possible Answer 下水作文呢:
Paragraph 1:
It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo. Alexis stared at the image for a long moment, her mind whirling with possibilities(獨立主格). She noticed the bowl of chopped onions faintly visible in the background(adj做后置定語). Her heart skipped a beat. “Onions!” she exclaimed. Without wasting time, she pulled an onion from the pantry, her hands steady(獨立主格) despite her growing excitement. As she peeled and chopped the onion(狀從), the sharp scent filled the kitchen, bringing tears to her eyes(非謂語動詞做結果狀語). It was as though Grandpa was guiding her once again(表從). Carefully, she added the onions to the salad and stirred gently. The familiar aroma began to emerge, but Alexis still held her breath, wondering if she had captured the true essence of Grandpa’s recipe(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作+賓從).
Paragraph 2:
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it. As the flavors spread across their tongues(狀從), a collective smile lit up their faces. “This is it!” Dad said with conviction(n.堅定，篤信), his voice tinged(vt.給某事物帶上某種氣味，顏色) with emotion. Mom nodded, her eyes shimmering(vi.閃微光) with unshed tears. “It tastes just like Grandpa’s,” she whispered. For a moment, the kitchen was filled with a comforting silence, broken only by the sound of spoons(非謂語動詞做后置定語) clinking against the bowl(非謂語動詞做后置定語). Alexis felt a wave of warmth and pride wash over her. She realized that recreating Grandpa’s salad was about more than the ingredients(賓從)—it was about the love, memories, and legacy(賓從) he had left behind(賓從). Determined to honor him(非謂語動詞做主語補語或目的狀語), she carried the bowl to the contest, her heart full of gratitude and confidence(獨立主格). She knew Grandpa’s spirit would always be with her(賓從), cheering her on(非謂語動詞做后置定語).
范文結構分析
整體布局：
開篇抓住靈感：通過照片中的“洋蔥”引出關鍵點，細節描寫體現人物心情轉折。
動作和情感推動：用具體動作（切洋蔥、攪拌沙拉）表現主人公的努力，同時融入情感（思念與期待）。
高潮與結尾升華：一家人品嘗成功后的滿足感，升華主題，體現情感價值和人物成長。
亮點語言點
語言點 類型 高級替換表達 例句
whirling with possibilities 情感描寫 buzzing with possibilities Her mind was buzzing with possibilities as she stared at the old photo.
sharp scent filled the kitchen 環境描寫 pungent aroma filled the air The pungent aroma filled the air, bringing back vivid memories of Grandpa’s cooking sessions.
shimmering with unshed tears 情感描寫 eyes glistened with emotion Mom’s eyes glistened with emotion as she tasted the familiar flavors of Grandpa’s potato salad.
legacy he had left behind 抽象主題 the heritage he had passed on Recreating the dish was a way of honoring the heritage Grandpa had passed on to their family.
carried the bowl to the contest 動作描寫 brought the dish with determination She brought the dish with determination, ready to share Grandpa’s love with the world.
語法與結構亮點
語法點 例句 升級替換或解釋
強調句型 It was as though Grandpa was guiding her once again. 強調感受，增添情感力度：It felt as if Grandpa himself was watching over her every move.
非謂語動詞 Determined to honor him, she carried the bowl to the contest. 使用非謂語動詞表達因果邏輯：Inspired by the moment, she proudly carried the dish to the competition.
復雜句型（定語從句） For a moment, the kitchen was filled with silence, broken only by the sound of spoons. 描述靜謐氛圍，增加情境細節感。
現在分詞短語 Bringing tears to her eyes, the onions reminded her of Grandpa’s jokes. 強調過程并連接情感。
高分積累語料
情感描寫：
Her heart skipped a beat as she realized what was missing.
A wave of pride and warmth washed over her as she saw her family’s reactions.
Tears welled up in her eyes, but this time, they were tears of joy.
動作描寫：
She peeled and chopped the onion with careful precision, the sharp scent making her eyes water.
She stirred the salad gently, her hands steady despite her excitement.
Alexis carried the dish confidently, her footsteps light with determination.
環境描寫：
The kitchen filled with the familiar aroma of the salad, evoking cherished memories.
Sunlight streamed through the window, casting a warm glow over the family’s moment of triumph.
The scent of spices and onions hung in the air, mingling with the laughter of her family.
高級替換詞匯：
普通表達 高級替換 例句
happy overjoyed Alexis was overjoyed to see her family’s smiles of approval.
smell aroma The aroma of the dish brought back fond memories of Grandpa’s cooking.
legacy heritage The salad wasn’t just a recipe; it was a part of the heritage Grandpa had left behind.
Possible Answer 1:
Paragraph 1:
It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo. Inspired(非謂語動詞做原因狀語), Alexis suddenly remembered Grandpa often joked that onions added "tears of joy" to his dishes(賓從). She quickly diced(vt.切成四方塊，n.篩子) an onion and added it to the salad, hoping(動作串) it was the missing ingredient(賓從).
Paragraph 2:
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it. Instantly, the familiar taste of Grandpa's unique recipe brought smiles to their faces. Alexis felt a wave of relief and joy. "It’s perfect," Mom said, her voice trembling with emotion(獨立主格). They decided to call it ‘Grandpa’s Golden Potato’ in honor of him.
亮點搭配與短語 替換選項與例句
onions added "tears of joy" - 升級: onions brought "a touch of magic"
- 例句: The addition of onions brought "a touch of magic" to the dish.
familiar taste - 替換: comforting flavor
- 例句: The comforting flavor instantly brought back fond memories of Grandpa.
wave of relief - 替換: surge of calmness
- 例句: Alexis felt a surge of calmness wash over her as the family approved of the recipe.
6. 核心詞匯
單詞 詞性 詞義 近義詞 聯想詞 例句
inspiration n. 靈感 motivation, idea creativity She drew inspiration from the old photographs.
hesitation n. 猶豫 doubt, uncertainty pause With hesitation, the family tasted the dish, unsure of what to expect.
legacy n. 遺產，傳承 heritage, inheritance tradition Grandpa's recipe was more than just food; it was a legacy of love and creativity.
Possible Answer 2:
Paragraph 1:
It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo. Alexis leaned closer, noticing a small bowl of finely chopped onions on the counter in the background(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). She gasped, realizing the missing ingredient(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). Quickly, she grabbed an onion, chopped it carefully, and added it to the mixture(動作串). Stirring the salad(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作), she felt a flicker of hope ignite in her heart.
Paragraph 2:
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it. A moment of silence passed, and then their faces lit up with delight. “This is it!” Mom exclaimed. Tears welled up in Alexis’ eyes as she felt Grandpa’s spirit in the room(狀從). “It’s perfect,” Dad said softly. Alexis smiled, proud of recreating Grandpa’s special recipe and determined to honor him at the contest(adj短語做補語).
亮點分析
亮點搭配與短語 替換選項與例句
finely chopped onions - 替換: minced onions
- 例句: She carefully added the minced onions to the dish, ensuring the flavor was balanced.
flicker of hope - 替換: glimmer of optimism
- 例句: A glimmer of optimism returned as Alexis stirred the salad with newfound determination.
felt Grandpa’s spirit - 替換: sensed Grandpa’s presence
- 例句: As the familiar flavor emerged, Alexis sensed Grandpa’s presence guiding her hands.
Possible Answer 3:
Paragraph 1:
It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo. Alexis stared at the picture, her mind racing. Suddenly, she remembered Grandpa once joked that onions added a "secret touch" to his cooking.(賓從) Could that be it Without wasting a second, Alexis peeled and chopped an onion, her hands trembling slightly (獨立主格)as she worked(狀從).
Paragraph 2:
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad with onions in it. The familiar taste burst forth, flooding their senses with memories of Grandpa(非謂語動詞做后置定語). "This is exactly how he made it(賓從)!" Dad exclaimed. Alexis couldn’t help but smile, feeling a sense of accomplishment and warmth(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). She knew Grandpa would be proud of her(賓從), and together, they prepared to honor his legacy at the contest.
亮點分析
亮點搭配與短語 替換選項與例句
secret touch - 替換: hidden charm
- 例句: Adding the onions brought a hidden charm that transformed the entire dish.
trembling slightly - 替換: shaking subtly
- 例句: Her hands shook subtly as she carefully chopped the onion, determined to replicate Grandpa’s recipe.
burst forth - 替換: exploded with flavor
- 例句: The dish exploded with flavor, evoking fond memories of Grandpa’s joyful cooking sessions.
高分點總結
語言亮點
非謂語動詞：
Without wasting a second, Alexis peeled and chopped an onion.
升級表達: Not wasting another moment, Alexis got straight to chopping.
強調句型：
This is exactly how he made it!
升級表達: It was this exact flavor that made Grandpa’s recipe unforgettable.
情態動詞：
Could that be it
升級表達: Might this be the missing piece of the puzzle
積累語料
類別 短語/單詞 升級替換 例句
情感描寫 tears welled up eyes glistened with tears Tears welled up in her eyes as she tasted the dish that brought Grandpa’s memory to life.
動作描寫 grabbed an onion seized an onion Without hesitation, she seized an onion and began chopping it with determination.
環境描寫 flooded their senses enveloped their senses The familiar aroma of the dish enveloped their senses, taking them back to cherished times.
一、挖空填空（根據上下文補全句子）
Alexis stared at the photo, her mind _______ (回憶起可能的線索).
The sharp _______ (氣味) of onions filled the kitchen, bringing tears to her eyes, as though Grandpa was _______ (陪伴).
With hesitation, the family _______ (品嘗) the potato salad, hoping to recreate _______ (獨特的味道).
The kitchen was filled with a comforting _______ (沉默), broken only by the sound of _______ (勺子碰撞).
Determined to honor Grandpa’s legacy, Alexis _______ (帶著信心端著沙拉).
二、翻譯練習（一句多譯）
原句：It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo.
要求：將句子翻譯成至少三種不同的表達方式：
照片里的樣子，就像爺爺在哭泣。
看起來，照片中的爺爺正在流淚。
在照片里，仿佛能看到爺爺在哭。
三、句式改寫與升級
改寫句子：
Grandpa’s potato salad was one of a kind, loved by everyone.
改為強調句：
Alexis felt a wave of pride and warmth wash over her as she saw her family’s reactions.
改為非謂語句式：
The familiar aroma began to emerge as Alexis added onions to the salad.
改為更高級的表達：
.
四、情境寫作填空
根據提示補全句子，注意使用合適的高級詞匯和語法結構
看到家人滿意的微笑，Alexis感到_________ (情感：驕傲和感激).
.
廚房里彌漫著熟悉的香味，讓她想起了_________ (情感：回憶).
答案.
她的手很穩，盡管她_________ (情緒：激動).
答案.
五、擴寫與改寫（語法與表達升級）
句子擴寫：
原句：Alexis added onions to the salad.
擴寫要求：加入心理描寫、環境描寫及情緒轉折。
答案
句式升級：
原句：She carried the bowl confidently to the contest.
升級要求：使用高級詞匯和從句表達信心與情感。
答.
六、情景仿寫與造句
仿寫練習：
“It tastes just like Grandpa’s,” she whispered.
仿寫要求：描述家庭成員的情感，使用間接引語或動作描寫。
造句練習：根據關鍵詞造句，仿照文中語言風格：
關鍵詞：on the verge of giving up
關鍵詞：one of a kind
一、挖空填空（參考答案）
Alexis stared at the photo, her mind flooded with possible clues.
The sharp scent of onions filled the kitchen, bringing tears to her eyes, as though Grandpa was right there with her.
With hesitation, the family tasted the potato salad, hoping to recreate its unique flavor.
The kitchen was filled with a comforting silence, broken only by the sound of spoons clinking against bowls.
Determined to honor Grandpa’s legacy, Alexis confidently carried the salad to the contest.
二、翻譯練習（一句多譯參考答案）
原句：It looked like Grandpa was crying in the photo.
照片里的樣子，就像爺爺在哭泣。
看起來，照片中的爺爺正在流淚。
照片中仿佛有爺爺在流淚的影子。
三、句式改寫與升級（參考答案）
強調句改寫：
原句：Grandpa’s potato salad was one of a kind, loved by everyone.
改寫：It was Grandpa’s potato salad that was one of a kind and loved by everyone.
非謂語句式改寫：
原句：Alexis felt a wave of pride and warmth wash over her as she saw her family’s reactions.
改寫：Seeing her family’s reactions, Alexis felt a wave of pride and warmth wash over her.
高級表達改寫：
原句：The familiar aroma began to emerge as Alexis added onions to the salad.
改寫：As Alexis added onions to the salad, the familiar aroma wafted through the air, evoking cherished memories.
四、情境寫作填空（參考答案）
看到家人滿意的微笑，Alexis感到驕傲和感激。
答案：Alexis felt a surge of pride and gratitude seeing the satisfied smiles on her family’s faces.
廚房里彌漫著熟悉的香味，讓她想起了回憶。
答案：The kitchen was filled with the familiar aroma, bringing back fond memories of her childhood with Grandpa.
她的手很穩，盡管她激動。
答案：Her hands remained steady, even though she was brimming with excitement.
五、擴寫與改寫（參考答案）
句子擴寫：
原句：Alexis added onions to the salad.
擴寫：With trembling hands, Alexis chopped the onions and added them to the salad. The sharp scent filled the air, making her eyes water, but she couldn’t help smiling as the familiar aroma began to emerge. It was as though Grandpa’s presence was filling the kitchen once again.
句式升級：
原句：She carried the bowl confidently to the contest.
升級：With her heart brimming with confidence and gratitude, she carried the bowl to the contest, determined to honor Grandpa’s legacy and share his love with the world.
六、情景仿寫與造句（參考答案）
仿寫練習：
原句：“It tastes just like Grandpa’s,” she whispered.
仿寫：“It brings back so many memories,” Dad said, his voice choked with emotion, as he placed his hand gently on Alexis’s shoulder.
造句練習：
關鍵詞：on the verge of giving up
Just when she was on the verge of giving up, an idea sparked in her mind, reigniting her determination.
關鍵詞：one of a kind
Her artwork was one of a kind, leaving everyone in awe of her creativity and talent.

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