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One windy day in March, Kitty Miller was on her way to school when she glanced into a store window and saw a great pile of lovely red apples. “Oh!” she exclaimed (驚叫). “How lovely! If only Mamma could have one!” Immediately, the store e owner recognized the familiar girl and asked her to pick one. Kitty just shook her head and ran away shyly.
Kitty’s mother was extremely poor. She had been a dressmaker ever since Kitty’s father died, and had to work hard to earn a living for herself and Kitty. Unfortunately, she had recently become very sick and had to lie in bed all day long. When Kitty was away at school, the house was incredibly cold and cheerless. She missed her little angel-that is what she called Kitty. Kitty took great care of her mother. She cooked her food, mostly soup. They could not afford fresh fruit. Kitty would even sing to her mother at night.
When Kitty reached the school that day, her thoughts were full of her sick mother and the lovely red apples. She was usually an excellent student, but that day she made so many mistakes that the teacher looked at her in surprise. The little girl could only sit at her desk, with her book before her, and dream of those red apples.
When the class was dismissed, Kitty started homeward slowly. She had walked only a short distance when she saw a man in front of her drop his wallet. Running quickly forward, she picked it up. The wallet felt quite heavy in Kitty’s little hand.
“There must be a good deal of money in it,” thought Kitty. “How I wish I could keep it, so that I would then be able to purchase a red apple for Mamma, and so many other things she needs.”
注意：續寫詞數應為150左右。
第一段：Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man.
第二段：The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand.
文章大意
這篇文章講述了Kitty Miller在三月的一個多風的日子里，看到商店櫥窗里堆滿的紅蘋果時，想起了生病的母親。Kitty的母親是一位貧窮的裁縫，自從Kitty的父親去世后，她一直努力工作以維持生計。不幸的是，她最近生病了，不得不整天躺在床上。Kitty在學校時，因為想著生病的母親和紅蘋果而心不在焉，犯了很多錯誤。放學后，Kitty在路上撿到了一個錢包，盡管她很想用里面的錢為母親買蘋果和其他必需品，但她知道這樣做不對，于是追上失主歸還了錢包。失主為了獎勵她的誠實，給了她一美元。Kitty拿著錢去商店，店主看到她后，免費給了她一個紅蘋果。Kitty把蘋果帶回家，母親非常高興，母女倆在寒冷的家中感受到了一絲溫暖和幸福.這個故事展示了Kitty的善良、誠實和對母親的關愛，以及善良行為帶來的積極影響.
故事山分析
引入：Kitty看到商店櫥窗里的紅蘋果，想起了生病的母親.
上升：Kitty在學校心不在焉，放學后撿到了一個錢包，想要用里面的錢為母親買蘋果.
高潮：Kitty決定歸還錢包，失主為了獎勵她的誠實，給了她一美元.
下降：Kitty拿著錢去商店，店主免費給了她一個紅蘋果.
結局：Kitty把蘋果帶回家，母親非常高興，母女倆感受到了溫暖和幸福.
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
伏筆：Kitty看到商店櫥窗里的紅蘋果，想起了生病的母親.
回應：在續寫中，Kitty用失主給的一美元去商店買蘋果，最終店主免費給了她一個紅蘋果，實現了她為母親買蘋果的愿望.
伏筆：Kitty的母親生病了，家里非常冷清.
回應：在續寫中，Kitty把蘋果帶回家，母親非常高興，母女倆在寒冷的家中感受到了一絲溫暖和幸福.
伏筆：Kitty在學校心不在焉，犯了很多錯誤.
回應：在續寫中，Kitty放學后撿到了錢包，面對金錢的誘惑，她選擇了誠實，體現了她的善良和對母親的關愛.
伏筆：Kitty撿到了一個錢包，里面有很多錢.
回應：在續寫中，Kitty歸還了錢包，失主為了獎勵她的誠實，給了她一美元，這筆錢幫助她實現了為母親買蘋果的愿望.
伏筆：Kitty的母親是一位貧窮的裁縫，家里經濟困難.
回應：在續寫中，Kitty用失主給的一美元去商店買蘋果，體現了她對母親的關愛和對家庭的責任感.
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：Kitty歸還錢包，失主為了獎勵她的誠實，給了她一美元.
第二段：Kitty拿著錢去商店，店主免費給了她一個紅蘋果，她把蘋果帶回家，母親非常高興.
情感線
Kitty對母親的關愛貫穿整個故事，她看到紅蘋果時，首先想到的是生病的母親，希望能為她買一個。在學校心不在焉，也是因為擔心母親。撿到錢包后，盡管她很想用里面的錢為母親買蘋果和其他必需品，但她選擇了誠實，歸還了錢包。失主給的一美元和店主免費給的紅蘋果，讓她實現了為母親買蘋果的愿望，母女倆在寒冷的家中感受到了一絲溫暖和幸福，這種情感的傳遞和回報，展現了善良和愛的力量.
故事線
Kitty看到商店櫥窗里的紅蘋果，想起了生病的母親.
Kitty在學校心不在焉，放學后撿到了一個錢包.
Kitty歸還錢包，失主為了獎勵她的誠實，給了她一美元.
Kitty拿著錢去商店，店主免費給了她一個紅蘋果.
Kitty把蘋果帶回家，母親非常高興.
母女倆在寒冷的家中感受到了一絲溫暖和幸福.
主旨升華句
Kindness and honesty can bring unexpected joy and warmth to our lives.
Caring for others, especially our loved ones, is a powerful source of happiness.
Small acts of goodness can have a significant impact on those around us.
The love and compassion we show to others often come back to us in unexpected ways.
In difficult times, the support and care from family and others can make a world of difference.
兩篇寫作示范
寫作示范一
Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man. She caught up with him and said, "Sir, you dropped your wallet." The man turned around, surprised, and looked at Kitty. He was touched by her honesty and said, "Thank you, little girl. You're very kind. Here, take this dollar as a reward for your honesty." Kitty smiled and thanked him, feeling proud of herself for doing the right thing. She continued on her way home, thinking about how she could use the dollar to buy something for her mother.
The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand. He greeted her warmly and asked, "What can I do for you today, Kitty " She replied, "I have a dollar, and I'd like to buy a red apple for my mother." The store owner smiled and said, "Of course, you can have one for free. I'm glad to see you're such a caring and honest girl." He handed her a beautiful red apple, and Kitty thanked him gratefully. As she walked home, she felt happy and excited to surprise her mother with the apple. When she arrived, she presented the apple to her mother, who was overjoyed and hugged Kitty tightly. The simple act of kindness had brought a moment of happiness and warmth to their cold and cheerless home.
寫作示范二
Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man. She caught up with him and said, "Sir, you dropped your wallet." The man turned around, surprised, and looked at Kitty. He was impressed by her honesty and said, "Thank you, little girl. You're very kind. Here, take this dollar as a reward for your honesty." Kitty smiled and thanked him, feeling proud of herself for doing the right thing. She continued on her way home, thinking about how she could use the dollar to buy something for her mother.
The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand. He greeted her warmly and asked, "What can I do for you today, Kitty " She replied, "I have a dollar, and I'd like to buy a red apple for my mother." The store owner smiled and said, "Of course, you can have one for free. I'm glad to see you're such a caring and honest girl." He handed her a beautiful red apple, and Kitty thanked him gratefully. As she walked home, she felt happy and excited to surprise her mother with the apple. When she arrived, she presented the apple to her mother, who was overjoyed and hugged Kitty tightly. The simple act of kindness had brought a moment of happiness and warmth to their cold and cheerless home.
【參考范文】
Kitty knew this would not be right, so she hurried after the man. Touching him on the arm, she said, “Please, sir. You dropped your wallet.” “Thank you, dear,” said the gentleman, taking the wallet. Then, noticing how poorly dressed she was, he said, “Why didn’t you keep the wallet, my child ” “That would be stealing,” replied Kitty. “But,” she continued honestly, “before I thought I must give it back to you, I did wish I could keep it, for then I could buy Mamma a red apple.” Hearing this, the man handed her a dollar and said, “You are a good girl. Take the dollar so that you can buy your mother a red apple.” Then, the man said goodbye to Kitty and left. With the dollar, Kitty happily ran to the store.
The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in, one dollar in hand. He quickly picked out the biggest, roundest, and reddest apple and gave it to Kitty. Taking the apple, Kitty was very happy and handed the dollar to the owner. But the owner didn’t take it, saying, “You keep it and the apple is free.” Kitty was so pleased and thanked the kind store owner. Then, she went back home. Her mother was surprised to see the apple and the dollar. Kitty told her mother the whole story. Her mother kissed her and said, “You see, dear, it always pays to be honest and truthful.”

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