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The couple, Ella and Ken, lived in a fancy countryside house every summer together with their boys Jim and Dick, aged 7 and 11.
The two kids got on well with each other, unlike some other brothers who would often fight over small things. They shared everything happening in their school and exchanged their favourite toys and books. Except for one thing, cleaning! One sunny morning, Ella called out to her children, “Jim and Dick, it’s time to clean your room!” The kids sighed deeply. Cleaning their room was always the last thing they wanted to do.
Unhappy, Jim and Dick dragged their feet into their messy room. Toys were thrown randomly here and there on the floor, clothes were piled up on chairs, and books were haphazardly (隨意的) piled on the shelves. It was a total mess!
Mom came in, “Oh, God! How come We need to work together to clean it up.” Jim and Dick exchanged looks, clearly not delighted with the task at hand. There were a few arguments between them, especially when it came to cleaning their room.
Mom, realizing their unwillingness, said to the kids, “A clean room not only looks nice but also helps us arrange our life in an orderly way. It’s important to take care of our belongings and keep our surroundings clean.” The boys didn’t respond, seemingly thinking about something.
Their father happened to hear the conversation and decided to give them a hand. He came up with a good idea. He said, “I know that cleaning can be dull, but what if we change it into a fun contest The winner, who can find the most interesting item hidden in this messy room, will decide what we have for dessert tonight!”
Their faces lighting up with excitement, they accepted their father’s suggestion.
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2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
第一段：Curious about what they would find, they took immediate action individually.
第二段：The room became less messy gradually.
文章大意
這篇文章講述了Ella和Ken夫婦每年夏天都會(huì)帶著他們的兩個(gè)兒子Jim和Dick去鄉(xiāng)下的豪華別墅度假。Jim和Dick兄弟倆相處得很好，他們分享在學(xué)校發(fā)生的事情，也交換他們最喜歡的玩具和書籍。然而，他們不喜歡打掃房間。一天早上，Ella叫他們打掃房間，兄弟倆不情愿地進(jìn)入房間，發(fā)現(xiàn)房間里一片混亂。媽媽告訴他們，保持房間整潔不僅能讓房間看起來更漂亮，還能幫助他們有條不紊地安排生活。爸爸聽到他們的對話后，想出了一個(gè)主意，把打掃房間變成一個(gè)有趣的比賽，誰能在房間里找到最有趣的物品，誰就能決定當(dāng)晚的甜點(diǎn)。兄弟倆興奮地接受了這個(gè)建議，開始各自尋找有趣的物品。Jim在一堆書下面找到了一輛舊玩具車，Dick發(fā)現(xiàn)了一本裝滿畫的舊速寫本。隨著他們的搜索，房間逐漸變得整潔有序。最終，兄弟倆不僅找到了一些有趣的物品，還學(xué)會(huì)了團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的價(jià)值和完成工作的滿足感。他們的父親為他們的努力感到驕傲，并承諾給他們美味的甜點(diǎn)，強(qiáng)化了即使是家務(wù)活也可以變成有趣和有回報(bào)的經(jīng)歷這一理念.
故事山分析
引入：Ella和Ken夫婦帶著兩個(gè)兒子Jim和Dick去鄉(xiāng)下的豪華別墅度假.
上升：Ella叫Jim和Dick打掃房間，兄弟倆不情愿地進(jìn)入房間，發(fā)現(xiàn)房間里一片混亂.
高潮：爸爸想出了一個(gè)把打掃房間變成有趣比賽的主意，兄弟倆興奮地接受了這個(gè)建議.
下降：兄弟倆開始各自尋找有趣的物品，房間逐漸變得整潔有序.
結(jié)局：兄弟倆不僅找到了一些有趣的物品，還學(xué)會(huì)了團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的價(jià)值和完成工作的滿足感，他們的父親為他們的努力感到驕傲，并承諾給他們美味的甜點(diǎn).
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
伏筆：兄弟倆不喜歡打掃房間.
回應(yīng)：爸爸想出了一個(gè)把打掃房間變成有趣比賽的主意，激發(fā)了兄弟倆的興趣和積極性.
伏筆：房間里一片混亂.
回應(yīng)：兄弟倆在尋找有趣的物品的過程中，逐漸把房間打掃得整潔有序.
伏筆：媽媽告訴兄弟倆保持房間整潔的重要性.
回應(yīng)：兄弟倆在打掃房間的過程中，體會(huì)到了整潔的房間帶來的好處，學(xué)會(huì)了有條不紊地安排生活.
伏筆：兄弟倆相處得很好，喜歡分享.
回應(yīng)：在打掃房間的過程中，兄弟倆互相幫助，分享找到的有趣物品，進(jìn)一步加深了他們的友誼.
伏筆：爸爸想出了一個(gè)把打掃房間變成有趣比賽的主意.
回應(yīng)：兄弟倆興奮地接受了這個(gè)建議，通過比賽的形式，把枯燥的家務(wù)活變得有趣和有動(dòng)力，最終完成了打掃任務(wù).
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：兄弟倆開始各自尋找有趣的物品，逐漸把房間打掃得整潔有序.
第段：兄弟倆不僅找到了一些有趣的物品，還學(xué)會(huì)了團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的價(jià)值和完成工作的滿足感，他們的父親為他們的努力感到驕傲，并承諾給他們美味的甜點(diǎn).
情感線
兄弟倆對打掃房間最初是不情愿的，覺得這是一件枯燥乏味的事情。然而，在爸爸把打掃房間變成一個(gè)有趣的比賽后，他們的情感發(fā)生了轉(zhuǎn)變。他們的好奇心被激發(fā)，開始興奮地尋找有趣的物品。在尋找的過程中，兄弟倆互相幫助，分享找到的物品，增進(jìn)了他們的友誼。當(dāng)房間變得整潔有序時(shí)，他們體會(huì)到了完成工作的滿足感和成就感，也感受到了團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的力量。父親為他們的努力感到驕傲，并承諾給他們美味的甜點(diǎn)，進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)化了他們的積極情感，讓他們認(rèn)識(shí)到即使是家務(wù)活也可以變成有趣和有回報(bào)的經(jīng)歷.
故事線
Ella和Ken夫婦帶著兩個(gè)兒子Jim和Dick去鄉(xiāng)下的豪華別墅度假.
Ella叫Jim和Dick打掃房間，兄弟倆不情愿地進(jìn)入房間，發(fā)現(xiàn)房間里一片混亂.
爸爸想出了一個(gè)把打掃房間變成有趣比賽的主意，兄弟倆興奮地接受了這個(gè)建議.
兄弟倆開始各自尋找有趣的物品，逐漸把房間打掃得整潔有序.
兄弟倆不僅找到了一些有趣的物品，還學(xué)會(huì)了團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的價(jià)值和完成工作的滿足感.
父親為他們的努力感到驕傲，并承諾給他們美味的甜點(diǎn)，強(qiáng)化了即使是家務(wù)活也可以變成有趣和有回報(bào)的經(jīng)歷這一理念.
主旨升華句
Turning chores into fun activities can make them more enjoyable and rewarding.
Teamwork and cooperation can turn a daunting task into an exciting adventure.
The satisfaction of a job well done can be a powerful motivator for future tasks.
Even the most mundane tasks can become meaningful when approached with a positive attitude.
Encouraging creativity and curiosity can transform everyday activities into memorable experiences.
兩篇寫作示范
寫作示范一
Curious about what they would find, they took immediate action individually. Jim started rummaging through the piles of clothes, while Dick began searching among the scattered toys. Their eyes were wide with anticipation, and they moved with renewed energy. Jim discovered an old toy car hidden under a pile of books, and Dick found a forgotten sketchbook filled with drawings. Each discovery brought a smile to their faces, and they eagerly showed their finds to each other, sparking friendly competition and laughter.
The room became less messy gradually. As they continued their search, the toys were neatly placed back in their boxes, clothes were folded and put away, and books were arranged on the shelves. The once chaotic room was slowly transformed into a tidy and organized space. The brothers' enthusiasm for the contest made the cleaning process enjoyable and efficient. By the time they finished, not only had they found several interesting items, but they had also learned the value of teamwork and the satisfaction of a job well done. Their father was proud of their efforts and promised a delicious dessert, reinforcing the idea that even chores could be turned into fun and rewarding experiences.
寫作示范二
Curious about what they would find, they took immediate action individually. Jim dove into the pile of clothes, while Dick explored the scattered toys. Their faces lit up with excitement as they searched, each hoping to discover the most interesting item. Jim found a hidden treasure in the form of an old photograph album, and Dick unearthed a collection of colorful marbles. They shared their findings with each other, their enthusiasm growing with each new discovery.
The room became less messy gradually. As they continued their quest, the toys were put back in their rightful places, clothes were neatly folded, and books were arranged on the shelves. The room transformed from a chaotic mess into a tidy and organized space. The brothers' excitement and teamwork made the cleaning process enjoyable, and they learned the importance of taking care of their belongings. Their father was impressed by their efforts and promised a special dessert, reminding them that even the most mundane tasks can be turned into fun and rewarding experiences with a little creativity and enthusiasm.
One possible version:
Curious about what they would find, they took immediate action individually. To their surprise, Jim discovered his favorite toy car that he had been searching for weeks while Dick found a missing colorful pencil buried under a pile of papers. The boys couldn’t contain their excitement as they continued their search. As they explored the room, they came across forgotten treasures, like a model plane, candies and comic books. Each discovery brought laughter and pleasure, making the cleaning more enjoyable than they had ever expected.
The room became less messy gradually. Ken saw his boys working together, helping each other find hidden items, and laughing throughout the exploration. After what seemed like hours of searching and cleaning, the boys finally declared their search complete. The room was now tidy, and their treasures were proudly displayed. Mom entered the room, amazed at the changes. Considering their excellent performance, Mom let the boys choose their favorite dessert for the night together. Happily tasting their treats, they enjoyed the victory that came from working together and turning a boring task into a memorable exploration.

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