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讀后續寫：人與自然 救助并照顧走失的小松鼠
讀后續寫
閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It's amazing to watch as they discover their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait-and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother--we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order.
More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean(斷奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt". Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter(吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn't long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild. His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
注意:
1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150個左右。
2.續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。
Paragraph 1:
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. "________
Paragraph 2:
One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard. "______
主旨大意
文章圍繞一家人救助并照顧走失小松鼠的經歷展開，體現了人與動物間的溫暖情誼以及對生命的關愛。
伏筆
例如 “Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area.” 為后文自行照顧小松鼠做鋪墊。
故事情節
發現小松鼠 - 嘗試找專家 - 自行照顧 - 小松鼠成長 - 放歸野外 - 續寫部分的后續情況。
情緒變化
擔心謹慎 - 認真負責 - 欣慰 - 牽掛不舍。
主題句
1. Love and care for animals can bridge the gap between humans and the animal kingdom.
對動物的關愛能夠彌合人類與動物世界之間的鴻溝。
2. Taking responsibility for a helpless creature enriches our lives with warmth and meaning.
為一個無助的生靈擔起責任，讓我們的生活充滿溫暖與意義。
3. When we extend a helping hand to wildlife, we create beautiful bonds of friendship.
當我們向野生動物伸出援手時，我們就創造了美好的友誼紐帶。
4. Nurturing a lost animal shows the power of kindness in the cycle of life.養育一只走失的動物展現了生命輪回中善良的力量。
5. Our acts of compassion towards animals can bring harmony to nature.
我們對動物的同情之舉能夠為大自然帶來和諧。
范文一
Paragraph 1:
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. He seemed a bit hesitant at first, standing still on a branch and looking at them nervously. But the friendly chattering of the gray squirrels soon put him at ease. They welcomed him into their group, showing him where to find the best nuts and how to build a more comfortable nest. Squirt quickly adapted and started playing with them. Watching from a distance, Kaytlin felt a sense of relief and happiness, knowing that Squirt had found his own kind and would no longer is alone in the wild.
New words:
"hesitant" : adj. 猶豫的；遲疑的
"at ease" : 舒適；自在；不拘束
"adapt" : v. 適應；改編
Paragraph 2:
One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard. Kaytlin was worried sick, pacing back and forth in the room, fearing that something bad had happened to him. However, the next morning, when the sun peeked through the clouds, Squirt showed up at the edge of our yard, looking energetic as ever. He had just found a cozy shelter during the rain and came back to say hello. Kaytlin ran to him and gave him a gentle hug, realizing that even though Squirt now belonged to the wild, their bond would always remain.
New words:
"worried sick" : 非常擔心；極度憂慮
"pace" : v. 踱步；緩慢而行
"peek" : v. 窺視；偷看
"cozy" : adj. 舒適的；愜意的
范文二
Paragraph1
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. He watched them from afar for a while, his body tensed as if unsure whether to approach. But then, one of the little gray squirrels came over to him with a friendly gesture, wagging its bushy tail. Squirt plucked up his courage and slowly moved towards them. They began sharing food with him and teaching him how to jump from branch to branch more nimbly. Squirt was having a great time with them, and it was clear that he was gradually becoming part of this new family.
New words:
"afar" : adv. 在遠處；從遠處
"tense" : adj. 緊張的；繃緊的
"pluck up" : 鼓起（勇氣等）
"nimbly" : adv. 敏捷地；靈活地
Paragraph 2:
One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard. The wind was howling, and the rain was lashing against the windows. Kaytlin couldn't fall asleep, her mind filled with thoughts of Squirt out there in the storm. When dawn broke, the rain finally stopped. Kaytlin rushed outside to look for Squirt. To her delight, she found him on a nearby tree, drying his fur in the sunlight. Squirt chirped happily when he saw her, as if telling her that he was okay after the rough night. Kaytlin smiled, knowing that Squirt was growing up and could handle the challenges of the wild now.New words:
"howl" : v. （風等）呼嘯；怒吼
"lash" : v. 猛烈拍打；沖擊
"dawn" : n. 黎明；拂曉
"rough" : adj. 艱難的；惡劣的

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