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I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary （紀(jì)錄片） about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men-all wearing insignia（徽章） that indicated they were in some sort of club- standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
（1） 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
（2） 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
第一段：I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
第二段：When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
文章大意
這篇文章講述了作者在費(fèi)城參加一個(gè)會(huì)議時(shí)，看到一則關(guān)于救助被遺棄狗狗的紀(jì)錄片的廣告。盡管對(duì)動(dòng)物充滿愛(ài)心，但由于擔(dān)心夜晚獨(dú)自走在街上，作者最初決定留在酒店房間。然而，回到房間后，作者感到不安和無(wú)聊，最終決定去參加這個(gè)籌款活動(dòng)。在前往劇院的路上，作者遇到了一群看起來(lái)很兇猛的摩托車手，這讓她感到緊張和害怕。進(jìn)入劇院后，作者發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有更多的摩托車手，但隨著紀(jì)錄片的播放，她意識(shí)到這些摩托車手其實(shí)是一個(gè)動(dòng)物救援小組，他們對(duì)救助動(dòng)物充滿熱情和奉獻(xiàn)精神。這個(gè)故事展示了在陌生環(huán)境中克服恐懼的重要性，以及外表可能具有欺騙性，真正的善良和愛(ài)心可能隱藏在意想不到的地方.
故事山分析
引入：作者在費(fèi)城參加會(huì)議時(shí)，看到一則關(guān)于救助被遺棄狗狗的紀(jì)錄片的廣告.
上升：作者擔(dān)心夜晚獨(dú)自走在街上，最初決定留在酒店房間，但后來(lái)決定去參加活動(dòng).
高潮：作者在劇院外看到一群看起來(lái)很兇猛的摩托車手，感到緊張和害怕.
下降：作者進(jìn)入劇院后發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有更多的摩托車手，但隨著紀(jì)錄片的播放，她意識(shí)到他們是動(dòng)物救援小組.
結(jié)局：作者對(duì)摩托車手們產(chǎn)生了新的尊重和欣賞，認(rèn)識(shí)到外表可能具有欺騙性，真正的善良和愛(ài)心可能隱藏在意想不到的地方.
五處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
伏筆：作者對(duì)動(dòng)物充滿愛(ài)心.
回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者最終決定去參加救助被遺棄狗狗的紀(jì)錄片活動(dòng)，體現(xiàn)了她對(duì)動(dòng)物的熱愛(ài).
伏筆：作者擔(dān)心夜晚獨(dú)自走在街上.
回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者在劇院外看到一群摩托車手時(shí)，感到緊張和害怕，體現(xiàn)了她對(duì)獨(dú)自走在街上的擔(dān)憂.
伏筆：作者對(duì)摩托車手的初步印象是兇猛和可怕.
回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者進(jìn)入劇院后發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有更多的摩托車手，但隨著紀(jì)錄片的播放，她意識(shí)到他們是動(dòng)物救援小組，改變了對(duì)他們的看法.
伏筆：劇院外的摩托車手們穿著徽章，表明他們屬于某個(gè)俱樂(lè)部.
回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者意識(shí)到這些摩托車手是一個(gè)動(dòng)物救援小組，他們的徽章代表了他們對(duì)動(dòng)物救助的承諾和奉獻(xiàn).
伏筆：作者對(duì)摩托車手的初步恐懼和想要逃離的沖動(dòng).
回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，作者最終決定進(jìn)入劇院，并在了解到摩托車手們的真實(shí)身份后，對(duì)他們的善良和愛(ài)心產(chǎn)生了敬意.
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：作者進(jìn)入劇院后發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有更多的摩托車手，感到驚訝和困惑.
第二段：隨著紀(jì)錄片的播放，作者意識(shí)到摩托車手們是一個(gè)動(dòng)物救援小組，對(duì)他們的善良和愛(ài)心產(chǎn)生了敬意.
情感線
作者最初對(duì)參加活動(dòng)感到猶豫和擔(dān)憂，擔(dān)心夜晚獨(dú)自走在街上。然而，對(duì)動(dòng)物的熱愛(ài)驅(qū)使她克服恐懼，決定去參加活動(dòng)。在劇院外看到摩托車手時(shí)，她感到緊張和害怕，但進(jìn)入劇院后，隨著紀(jì)錄片的播放，她逐漸意識(shí)到這些摩托車手其實(shí)是一個(gè)動(dòng)物救援小組，他們對(duì)救助動(dòng)物充滿熱情和奉獻(xiàn)精神。作者的情感從恐懼和疑惑轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)榫匆夂托蕾p，她認(rèn)識(shí)到外表可能具有欺騙性，真正的善良和愛(ài)心可能隱藏在意想不到的地方.
故事線
作者在費(fèi)城參加會(huì)議時(shí)，看到一則關(guān)于救助被遺棄狗狗的紀(jì)錄片的廣告.
作者擔(dān)心夜晚獨(dú)自走在街上，最初決定留在酒店房間.
作者回到酒店房間后感到不安和無(wú)聊，決定去參加活動(dòng).
作者在劇院外看到一群看起來(lái)很兇猛的摩托車手，感到緊張和害怕.
作者進(jìn)入劇院后發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有更多的摩托車手，但隨著紀(jì)錄片的播放，她意識(shí)到他們是動(dòng)物救援小組.
作者對(duì)摩托車手們產(chǎn)生了新的尊重和欣賞，認(rèn)識(shí)到外表可能具有欺騙性，真正的善良和愛(ài)心可能隱藏在意想不到的地方.
主旨升華句
True kindness often hides behind unexpected appearances.
Overcoming fear can lead to discovering unexpected sources of inspiration and support.
The love for animals can bring people from diverse backgrounds together for a common cause.
Judging by appearances alone can be misleading, as true character is revealed through actions.
Every individual has the potential to make a positive impact, regardless of their outward appearance.
兩篇寫作示范
寫作示范一
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were scattered throughout the audience, some sitting in groups while others were alone. I felt a mix of relief and confusion. The atmosphere inside was surprisingly warm and welcoming, despite the intimidating appearance of the bikers. I chose a seat in the back, hoping to blend in and avoid drawing attention. As I settled in, I noticed that many of the bikers were engaged in friendly conversations with each other, and some were even holding dogs in their laps. This piqued my curiosity, and I began to wonder what their connection to the event was.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary showcased their efforts to save abandoned dogs and provide them with safe homes. It turned out that they were there to support the local animal shelters and raise awareness about the importance of animal rescue. Throughout the film, I watched as the bikers shared their stories of rescuing dogs and the strong bond they had formed with these animals. Their passion and dedication were evident, and I felt a sense of admiration for them. By the end of the event, my initial fear had transformed into a newfound respect and appreciation for these bikers who were using their love for animals to make a positive impact in their community.
寫作示范二
I hurried into the theater, surprised to see even more bikers inside. They were interspersed among the audience, and I couldn't help but feel a bit apprehensive. However, the atmosphere was surprisingly friendly, and I noticed that many of them were interacting with dogs. I took a seat near the back, curious about their presence at the event. As the lights dimmed, I prepared myself for the documentary, still unsure of the bikers' role in it.
When the film began, I was pleasantly surprised to learn that the bikers were part of an animal rescue group. The documentary highlighted their dedication to saving abandoned dogs and finding them loving homes. They had come to the event to show their support for the local shelters and to raise awareness about the plight of homeless animals. As I watched, I saw the bikers' genuine love for the dogs and their commitment to making a difference. By the end of the evening, my initial fears had dissolved, replaced by a deep respect for these bikers who were using their passion to help animals in need.
參考答案
續(xù)寫第一段：
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt a bit panicked. But I noticed that they were all very orderly. Some were chatting quietly about the dogs they had rescued. I took a deep breath and found an empty seat as far away from them as possible. I was still a bit nervous but tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.
續(xù)寫第二段：
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They were here for the same reason as me - to support the local animal shelters. I felt so ashamed of my initial fear. As the film played, I saw their efforts in saving the abandoned dogs. They were so passionate and kind. After the film, I went up to them and apologized for my misjudgment. They just laughed and said it was okay. We even exchanged contact information to keep in touch about future animal - saving activities.

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