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I was a broke university student. I should have been going to university on a scholarship because I came from a low-income family, but a last-minute 100-a-year pay rise for my mum pushed my family over the threshold (門檻) for what defined “l(fā)ow-income” and I was suddenly no longer qualified for 15,000 a year in scholarship money. This news came after I’d been accepted by the university and signed the lease (租約) for my accommodation.
Despite my family not being labelled low-income anymore, I still wouldn’t receive any financial support from my family as all the income went toward taking care of my disabled brother and paying their own bills. It would be tight, but because I had savings from my part-time job, I decided to go to university anyway. After paying my rent, I had 10.20 a week for everything else including food, toiletries, and school supplies.
As I was in a new city, I really wanted to make friends, which was difficult when most of the social activities were expensive. Therefore, I jumped at the chance to do a relatively cheap coffee shop trip with my roommates who were pleasant to me.
I had 20 with me to get a cheap cup of coffee and my food shopping for a few weeks. So I headed for the coffee shop. While paying, I pulled out the note and a handful of change and realized I could pay without breaking the note, so I put it back in my pocket. It wasn’t until I arrived at the supermarket that I realized the note was gone. What should I do I was desperate it was the equivalent (相等物) of two weeks of money. My roommates helped me look for the note. However, it was in vain. Finally, I went to school empty-handed.
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(1) 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右；
(2) 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
P1: As a final attempt, I messaged the coffee shop’s Facebook page asking if they’d seen it.
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P2: I said, “Oh, ...This isn’t mine; my note was an old worn one.”
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一、文章大意
本文講述了一位來自低收入家庭的大學(xué)生，因母親收入的微小變化失去了高額獎學(xué)金資格，家庭無力給予經(jīng)濟(jì)支持，他只能靠兼職積蓄上學(xué)。每周除去房租后僅有 10.20 英鎊用于所有開銷，生活拮據(jù)。在渴望交友、參與社交活動時(shí)，他選擇相對便宜的咖啡店之行，卻不慎丟失了相當(dāng)于兩周生活費(fèi)的 20 英鎊，室友幫忙尋找無果，他陷入絕望，無奈之下向咖啡店的臉書頁面求助，開啟后續(xù)故事。故事展現(xiàn)了貧困大學(xué)生在困境中努力求學(xué)、社交，以及面對意外挫折時(shí)的無奈與掙扎。
二、伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)
伏筆：因母親微小的收入漲幅失去獎學(xué)金資格。回應(yīng)：致使主角經(jīng)濟(jì)陷入極度困境，只能靠微薄積蓄上學(xué)，為后文丟失錢后極度絕望的情緒做鋪墊，突出錢對他的重要性。
伏筆：家庭收入用于照顧殘疾兄弟和支付賬單，無法給予主角經(jīng)濟(jì)支持。回應(yīng)：進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)主角孤立無援的處境，讓他在丟錢后更加無助，也促使他在得到幫助后對善意格外感恩。
伏筆：每周除去房租僅有 10.20 英鎊用于所有開銷。回應(yīng)：說明 20 英鎊對主角而言是巨額財(cái)富，丟失后陷入絕望合情合理，而失而復(fù)得時(shí)則倍感珍貴，影響后續(xù)行為與心態(tài)。
伏筆：選擇相對便宜的咖啡店之行，且付款時(shí)小心翼翼。回應(yīng)：展現(xiàn)主角的節(jié)儉，暗示他深知每分錢的重要，丟錢后瘋狂尋找、焦急求助的行為就更順理成章。
伏筆：到達(dá)超市才發(fā)現(xiàn)錢丟了。回應(yīng)：引發(fā)后續(xù)向咖啡店求助的情節(jié)，同時(shí)增加緊張感，因?yàn)槌惺怯缅X之地，此時(shí)丟錢讓主角措手不及，陷入困境。
三、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)
第一段：
情感線：從焦急、絕望轉(zhuǎn)為驚喜、感激。主角焦急等待咖啡店回復(fù)，收到肯定答復(fù)后驚喜萬分，對咖啡店工作人員及拾金不昧的顧客充滿感激。
故事線：發(fā)出消息后，主角時(shí)刻關(guān)注手機(jī)，心情忐忑，不久后收到回復(fù)，得知錢被找到，急忙奔赴咖啡店，與店員交流拿回錢，并分享自己的艱難處境。
第二段：
情感線：從驚訝到感動，再到?jīng)Q心傳遞善意，內(nèi)心觸動很大。
故事線：看到店員遞來的錢并非自己那張舊鈔時(shí)，主角先是一愣，聽了解釋后深受感動，決定用行動回饋社會，后續(xù)用自己的方式幫助他人，參與社區(qū)活動，讓善意延續(xù)。
四、主旨升華句
In the darkest of times, a glimmer of kindness can light up the whole sky. 在最黑暗的時(shí)刻，一絲善意能照亮整片天空。
Kindness is a boomerang; it always comes back to you when you least expect it. 善良是回旋鏢，在你最不經(jīng)意的時(shí)候總會回到你身邊。
Sometimes, the smallest act of kindness can make the biggest difference in someone’s life. 有時(shí)候，最微小的善舉也能給別人的生活帶來最大的改變。
No matter how tough life gets, there is always room for kindness to grow. 無論生活多么艱難，總有善意生長的空間。
A single act of kindness can create a ripple effect, spreading warmth and hope far and wide. 一個(gè)善舉能產(chǎn)生漣漪效應(yīng)，將溫暖與希望廣泛傳播。
五、寫作示范
第一篇
P1: As a final attempt, I messaged the coffee shop’s Facebook page asking if they’d seen it. My heart pounded as I waited for a response, constantly refreshing the page. Minutes felt like hours. Suddenly, a notification popped up. The coffee shop replied that a staff member had indeed found a 20 note. Overjoyed, I sprinted to the coffee shop. The moment I walked in, the barista recognized me and handed me the money with a big smile. I was so grateful that I could hardly speak. I told them about my struggle to survive on a tight budget and how this money meant the world to me.
P2: I said, “Oh,...This isn’t mine; my note was an old worn one.” The barista laughed softly and said, “The person who found it must have wanted you to have a nicer one.” I was deeply touched. Tears welled up in my eyes. From that day on, I vowed to do something kind whenever I could. I started volunteering at a local community center, helping other students like me who were facing difficulties. I knew that kindness was contagious, and I wanted to be part of spreading it.
第二篇
P1: As a final attempt, I messaged the coffee shop’s Facebook page asking if they’d seen it. I paced back and forth, my phone clutched tightly in my hand. Every second seemed eternal. Then, my phone buzzed. The coffee shop informed me that a kind-hearted lady had turned in a 20 note. Elated, I rushed over. When I got there, the cashier handed me the money and said the lady had left a note saying she hoped it would help someone in need. I was speechless with gratitude. I shared with them how I was trying to make friends while barely scraping by financially.
P2: I said, “Oh,...This isn’t mine; my note was an old worn one.” The cashier grinned and said, “She probably thought you deserved a new start.” I was stunned and then filled with warmth. This experience changed me. I joined a campus charity club and dedicated my free time to fundraising for students with financial hardships. I realized that even in my own hardship, I could be a source of hope for others. Because kindness has the power to transform lives, and I wanted to be that power.
【答案】
As a final attempt, I messaged the coffee shop’s Facebook page asking if they’d seen it. Least expecting a reply from them, I logged off with enormous disheartenment and continuous self-blame. How I wished I was careful enough so that the note would not slip out without my notice. However, five minutes, an alert from Facebook broke off my negative thoughts. “Yes, we indeed found a 20-dollar note. Please come ASAP!” The above words from the coffee shop instantly fueled me with energy. Without hesitation, I rushed back with a rapturous heart. Hardly had I entered the shop when a sweet-looking barista handed me a shiny 20-dollar note and asked tentatively, “Sir, is it yours ”
I said, “Oh, ... This isn’t mine; my note was an old worn one.” Beaming a most radiant smile, the barista explained gently that this note was from my most kind-hearted roommates, who, after witnessing my despair and devastation, would like to extend a helping hand. Hearing this, I felt a surge of warmth swelled up in my heart and my eyes were instantly moistened with grateful tears. Yes, life might be hard for me in a new city. But with the unreserved generosity and unwavering support from my roommate, I knew I could pull through any difficulty and rise to any challenge. Indeed, life is not a bed of roses, but love from my roommates make the world go around. Plus, I am bound to pay forward their kindness by helping more needy people like me.

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