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I was in Philadelphiafor a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (紀錄片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers—very big, tough-looking bikers.
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men—all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club—standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
（1）續寫詞數應為150個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Para. 1 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
Para. 2 When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
情節回顧
我來到Philadelphia開會，在賓館看到了一個有關保護流浪狗的公益電影的廣告。作為動物愛好者，我也想為公益貢獻一份力量。但是，人生地不熟，又是晚上出行，我感到十分焦慮和不安。尤其是當我到達電影院之后，發現電影院門口聚集了佩戴著統一徽章的騎行者，這種不安的情緒更甚。
思路點撥
故事以第一人稱視角敘事，視角受限，只能描寫我的所思所想和所作所為。第一個段首句表明我成功進入了影院，但是這里有更多的騎行者。根據上文的分析，本段應該繼續描寫我緊張的心理，以及我進入影廳之前發生的事情。第二個段首句點明了騎行者的身份。由于我驚恐和不安的心理來源是對騎行者的身份和目的起疑，現在身份明確了，我緊張的情緒自然就消散了。
主題
不要以貌取人
主題意義：通過講述 “我” 在費城參加會議期間的一段經歷，傳達出不要以貌取人的道理。“我” 因看到動物救援紀錄片的廣告想去觀影支持，途中卻被一群外表強悍、看起來令人生畏的摩托車手嚇到，內心經歷了猶豫、恐懼等情緒波動。然而最后發現這些摩托車手竟是動物救援團體，讓“我” 明白不能僅憑外在表象去評判他人。同時，也展現了人們對動物保護事業的關注，無論是“我” 想去支持動物救援紀錄片所代表的籌款活動，還是摩托車手們實際投身于動物救援行動，都突顯了動物保護這一重要主題在生活中的呈現，呼吁大家關愛動物、積極參與相關公益行動。
下水文1：
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were wearing the same insignia. I thought they must belong to the same organization as the bikers in front of the theater. I took a seat in the far corner of the theater, butterflies in my stomach. My mouth went dry as I felt the fear arising within me. I regretted coming out alone at risk to myself. If only I had come with my co-workers. Soon, the bikers outside also came in. I looked around, finding apart from me, everyone else was male. (85 words)When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. At this moment, I calmed down. Like me, they were all animal lovers. I was fairly interested in the film, which centered around several local animal shelters helping to save abandoned dogs. When the film ended, everyone queued up to donate money to the local animal shelters. I pulled 5 ＄100 bills out of my wallet and donated them. After learning about the animal rescue group, I signed up for the rescue group, and became the only female member of the group. (82 words) [167 words]
下水文2
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. Once I stood in the queue to buy a ticket, I could feel they all staring at me and the unwelcome thought that I might be in danger surged instantly. Overwhelmed with fears and worries, I inched my way and lowered my head, avoiding making eye contact with anyone. Suddenly I knocked into the person in front of me. The insignia, featuring an animal head surrounded by olive leaves, directly came into view. But I didn’t spare a second thought because my heart was in my mouth and I was too scared to make an apology!
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The same insignia appeared in the opening scenes. As the film unfolded, displaying all the painstaking effort people have made, I felt their faces softened. Relaxed and relieved, I allowed myself to sit comfortably and have two hours of enjoyment. Everyone was moved into tears as the anxious abandoned dogs began to rebuild relationships with humans. Indeed, there is good and evil in the world, but kindness is always a ray of hope, melting away the tension and uneasiness in life. It was their kindness that encouraged me to walk back to my hotel with a sense of relaxation and satisfaction.
詞匯&詞組積累：
conference n. 會議
fundraising n. 募捐
restless adj. 焦躁不安的
brave vt. 勇敢地面對 熟詞生義
deserted adj. 空寂無人的
enthusiast n.愛好者
pound vi. （心臟）劇烈地跳動 熟詞生義
an urge to do sth 一股做某事的沖動
resign oneself to (doing) sth 使自己順從于（做）某事；使自己安于（無法改變的不愉快狀況）
set off 出發
in shock 震驚地
rush back 匆忙返回
寫作句型積累：
1. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. （定語從句；并列句）
例句：
The café where she met her friends every weekend was near the riverbank, and the wooden tables that were placed outside had a great view of the flowing water.
她每個周末與朋友見面的咖啡館在河岸附近，擺在外面的木桌能讓人很好地觀賞流淌的河水。
2. In front of the theater were a group of bikers—very big, tough-looking bikers.（倒裝句）
例句：
Here came the parade, with colorful floats and dancing performers, and the streets that had been quiet a moment ago suddenly became alive with excitement and cheers.
游行隊伍過來了，有五顏六色的花車和跳舞的表演者，片刻前還很安靜的街道突然因興奮和歡呼聲而熱鬧起來。

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