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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。
Last year, during the summer break, my friends and I decided to go for a walk in the forest. The forest had paths, and we decided that we would hike along the paths and meet at a central point to have a drink later. The whole team had several groups and we had planned on meeting with the rest of the team after three hours. I had a lighter,a partially charged phone, and a bottle of water. We continued on our way towards the deeper part of the forest until we were far from any recognizable trail. After two hours, we were in the deepest part of the forest, and we could not trace our other friends.
All of a sudden,a bear came rushing along our path, and we all run in different directions. After running for about five minutes,I stood alone in a bush. I had no clue about my surroundings as I had never been.there before.I shouted at my friends’ names loudly, but all was in vain:there was no reply, and the whole place was silent. I was confused and felt like crying as I realized I was alone with nothing to protect myself.With a lot of fear,I tried to trace the part where I had come from, but all was useless:l was lost.
As I walked along the path trying to locate my friends, I realized that I was tired, and nothing was looking familiar. I was out of food, water, and barely had any battery in my phone. I decided to walk through the bushes as the trees had grown so close together. I squeezed myself between the little trees. After some thirty minutes, it started raining heavily. Though I had heavy clothing, I was rained on until I was soaked up.I started freezing and praying to the God for protection and direction out of the forest.
注意;1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好;
With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues.
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While sitting down and warming myself around the fire,I heard some distant noise.
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文章大意：去年暑假，“我”和朋友們?nèi)ド滞讲剑媱澣r后在中心點會合。深入森林兩小時后，大家走散，“我”還遭遇了一頭熊，驚慌逃竄后迷失方向。此時“我”又累又餓，手機沒電，食物和水也耗盡，接著又遭遇大雨，全身濕透，寒冷無比，只能祈禱上帝指引出路。
伏筆以及回應(yīng)
伏筆 1：“我”有一個打火機，為后文點火發(fā)信號埋下伏筆。
伏筆 2：森林有路徑，暗示“我”試圖循徑找朋友，卻無果迷路。
伏筆 3：“我”大聲呼喊朋友名字，沒有回應(yīng)，突出“我”的孤立無援。
伏筆 4：“我”手機電量不足，解釋后續(xù)無法依靠手機求救。
伏筆 5：攜帶的水喝完，食物也沒了，加劇“我”的困境。
續(xù)寫要點：
情感線：從極度恐懼、絕望，到燃起希望，最后欣喜若狂。
故事線：第一段寫“我”利用打火機點燃樹枝發(fā)信號，等待救援。第二段寫聽到遠(yuǎn)處聲響，發(fā)現(xiàn)是救援人員和朋友，最終脫險。
主旨升華句：
In the face of difficulties, hope is like a beam of light that can lead us out of the darkness.（在困境面前，希望就像一束光，能引領(lǐng)我們走出黑暗。）
When we are on the verge of giving up, perseverance gives us the strength to move forward.（當(dāng)我們?yōu)l臨放棄時，毅力給予我們前行的力量。）
Sometimes, the most difficult moments are also the times when we grow the most.（有時候，最艱難的時刻也是我們成長最多的時刻。）
It is in the struggle that we truly understand the value of life and friendship.（正是在掙扎中，我們才真正理解生命和友誼的價值。）
Never lose hope, because you never know when a miracle might happen.（永遠(yuǎn)不要失去希望，因為你永遠(yuǎn)不知道奇跡何時會降臨。）
寫作示范1：
With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. Remembering the lighter I had, I quickly gathered some dry branches and leaves. With trembling hands, I managed to strike the lighter and ignited the pile. The bright flames leaped up, lighting up the surrounding area. I hoped that the fire would catch my friends’ attention and that they would come to find me. Standing by the fire, I felt a glimmer of hope in the midst of my despair.
While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, I heard some distant noise. My heart leaped with excitement. Could it be my friends I stood up and shouted as loudly as I could. The noise grew louder and louder, and soon I saw the faint figures of people approaching. To my great relief, it was the rescue team and my friends! They had been searching for me all this time. Tears of joy streamed down my face as I rushed towards them. I knew that I had survived this terrifying ordeal, and it was a moment I would never forget.
寫作示范二：
With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. I rummaged through my pockets and clutched the lighter tightly, as if it were my only lifeline. Scanning the area, I spotted a small clearing where the trees were less dense. Hastily, I collected every dry twig and leaf I could find. My hands were shaking uncontrollably, but I forced myself to focus. After several attempts, the lighter sparked, and a small fire began to crackle. The warm glow against the encroaching darkness gave me a shred of comfort. I sat as close as I dared, praying that the smoke and light would guide my friends to me.
While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, I heard some distant noise. Instantly, I froze, my ears straining to identify the sound. Was it the wind playing tricks on me, or could it really be someone coming My heart pounded in my chest like a drum. I stood up slowly, not daring to make a sound. Then, faintly but unmistakably, I heard voices calling my name. It was like music to my ears. I yelled back with all my might, my voice hoarse but filled with joy. Moments later, the silhouettes of my friends and the rescue team emerged from the bushes. Relief washed over me in waves as I ran towards them, tears blurring my vision. This harrowing experience had taught me the true meaning of never giving up hope.
寫作示范三：
With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. Panic threatened to overwhelm me, but I took a deep breath and remembered the lighter. I stumbled around, searching for anything that would burn easily. Finally, I came across a pile of dead leaves and broken branches near a large tree. Carefully, I arranged them into a makeshift pyre. With sweaty palms, I flicked the lighter, and after a nerve-wracking second, a flame burst forth. The fire grew steadily, casting an orange glow that seemed to pierce through the thick forest. I huddled close, watching the flames dance, and hoped against hope that my signal would be seen.
While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, I heard some distant noise. My body tensed, and I held my breath. Could this be the end of my nightmare I listened intently, and the noise grew louder and more distinct. Voices, shouting my name! Without hesitation, I sprang to my feet and screamed back. I could see the bobbing flashlights now, like stars in the forest. As the figures drew nearer, I recognized my friends and the kind faces of the rescue team. A sob of relief escaped my lips as I was enveloped in hugs. This experience had not only tested my survival skills but also reaffirmed the power of friendship and hope in the darkest of times.
參考答案
With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. After many vain trials, it occurred to me that I had a lighter with me. I was wild with joy and decided to build a signal fire by collecting leaves and lighting them up for my friends to see the fire. Although it had been rained on, I was finally successful to light it. Everything in silence, only the howling of the winds and the cracking of twigs kept me company. I couldn’t help wondering what would have gone wrong because I had never had such kind of experience. While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, I heard some distant noise. As the sounds got closer, I realized that those were my friends. I jumped with a lot of joy as tears filled my eyes because I knew I was safe. They shouted my name, and I replied very loudly knowing in my mind that I was saved. It showed me the importance of the use of the markings and of course the quality-calmness while adventuring in the forest. I also thought to myself that my being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.

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