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讀后續寫：硬漢騎手的溫柔心 講義
讀后續寫
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary （紀錄片） about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men-all wearing insignia（徽章） that indicated they were in some sort of club- standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
（1） 續寫詞數應為150個左右；
（2） 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
原文解讀與續寫思路
原文講述了一位熱愛動物的女士獨自去參加救助動物紀錄片的故事。在前往活動的路上，她遇到了一群外形“兇悍”的騎士，這讓她感到恐懼和不安。然而，這次經歷最終讓她感受到人與動物之間的美好聯系，并對騎士們有了全新的認識。這個故事的情感轉折點在于從“恐懼”到“釋然”，再到“感動”。續寫時需要抓住以下要點：
人物心理：恐懼、猶豫到釋然。
情節轉折：騎士身份反轉，從讓人害怕到展現他們善良的一面。
情感升華：通過騎士的行動傳遞人性善良和動物保護的主題。
主旨點題：升華人與動物和諧共處的重要性。
第一段：內心沖突與轉折
續寫開頭：
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
情感描寫（固定句1）
描寫主人公看到騎士時的恐懼與緊張。
示例：A wave of panic surged through me as I noticed the room was filled with bikers.
細節描寫（非固定句）
展現騎士們的外貌與主人公的觀察。
示例：The leather jackets, heavy boots, and intimidating stares made my heart race even faster.
動作鏈推進（固定句3）
通過主人公的動作，推動情節向下一步發展。
示例：Clutching my ticket tightly, I quickly found a seat at the back, trying to remain unnoticed.
沖突鋪墊（固定句4）
預示情節轉折，暗示騎士們并非主人公想象的那樣。
示例：But as I settled in, I noticed a biker carefully adjusting a projector and another gently patting a small dog by his side.
情感推進（非固定句）
主人公從恐懼到疑惑，為轉折做鋪墊。
示例：Their unexpected actions planted a seed of doubt in my mind—maybe I had misjudged them.
第二段：情感升華與主題點明
續寫開頭：
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
情節轉折（固定句5）
揭示騎士的真實身份，帶來情感的轉折點。
示例：No sooner had the film started than I realized the bikers were passionate animal rescuers, dedicated to saving abandoned dogs.
環境描寫（非固定句）
描寫放映廳溫暖的氛圍，為情感升華鋪墊。
示例：The room was filled with the soft hum of the projector, and the bikers watched the film with quiet reverence.
動作與情感結合（非固定句）
通過騎士們的行為展現他們的善良和對動物的熱愛。
示例：During the screening, one biker cradled a tiny puppy, his rough hands gentle as he fed it from a small bottle.
結局升華（固定句9）
主人公感悟人與動物的和諧，情感得到升華。
示例：
By the end of the evening, I felt a wave of gratitude and warmth, realizing that true kindness often comes in unexpected forms.
主題點睛（固定句10）
點明故事主旨，傳遞動物保護和善良的意義。
示例：
This experience taught me that compassion transcends appearances and that everyone can play a role in making the world better for animals.
續寫范文
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. A wave of panic surged through me as I noticed the room was filled with bikers. The leather jackets, heavy boots, and intimidating stares made my heart race even faster. Clutching my ticket tightly, I quickly found a seat at the back, trying to remain unnoticed. But as I settled in, I noticed a biker carefully adjusting a projector and another gently patting a small dog by his side. Their unexpected actions planted a seed of doubt in my mind—maybe I had misjudged them.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. No sooner had the film started than I realized the bikers were passionate animal rescuers, dedicated to saving abandoned dogs. The room was filled with the soft hum of the projector, and the bikers watched the film with quiet reverence. During the screening, one biker cradled a tiny puppy, his rough hands gentle as he fed it from a small bottle. By the end of the evening, I felt a wave of gratitude and warmth, realizing that true kindness often comes in unexpected forms. This experience taught me that compassion transcends appearances and that everyone can play a role in making the world better for animals.

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