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閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
In a house far from the city lived John and his mother. John’s only hobby was wandering in the nearby picturesque forest. In its center was a shiny clear lake with schools of fish dancing in it. Lovely animals such as deer or rabbits were playing around and cute birds were singing in trees. Fascinated by the beauty and liveliness of nature, he desired to become a great artist and present all the breath-taking scenes to the world.
John studied in the local primary school. Life was not easy for John and his mom after his father died. Knowing what hard work his mother did to make ends meet, John really didn’t want his mother to worry. His mother knew the significance of education in life but she was against his dream of becoming an artist. “The profession of artist can’t aid a person in meeting his daily expenses,” she would say. But as each day passed, John’s dream became more passionate.
Due to the living circumstances, even buying some new colors would be a luxury. John only used the worn drawing file and limited colors for his daily practice. Though lacking fine painting materials, he never gave up drawing. He spent a significant amount of time staying in the forest, secretly perfecting his craft. With continuous hard work and a distinct gift for art, he drew beautifully.
One day John read about a competition being held in the town, whose deadline was only two days away. He got the perfect opportunity to fulfill his desire but he was in a dilemma (兩難境地) as for the competition he needed special paints and some brushes. He didn’t have the courage to ask his mother for money as he knew her prejudice against art.
That evening his mom returned from work and handed him a few paper notes, saying, “This is for your lunch at school next month.” The money was enough for his desired materials! John’s face lit up.
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Early the next morning, John secretly left home with the money.
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A week later, a phone call came to John’s home.
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一、文章大意
約翰和母親居住在遠離城市的房子里，他熱愛附近森林的美景，夢想成為藝術家，向世界展現自然之美。父親離世后，家境貧寒，母親雖重視教育卻反對他的藝術夢，認為藝術家難維持生計。約翰只能用破舊畫具堅持練習。得知鎮上有繪畫比賽，兩天后截止，他渴望參賽卻因需特殊顏料和畫筆陷入兩難，母親給他下月午餐錢，數額剛好夠買材料，這讓他看到希望。
二、故事山分析
伏筆一：開篇描述約翰熱愛森林、渴望成為藝術家，為他堅持畫畫、想參加比賽鋪墊，回應：后續即便條件艱苦仍不放棄練習，抓住比賽機會，一心追逐藝術夢想。
伏筆二：提及父親去世，家境艱難，解釋母親反對他學藝術的原因，回應：正因生活不易，母親才希望他選更實用職業，也讓約翰不敢開口要錢參賽。
伏筆三：寫約翰用破舊畫具練習，突出他對繪畫的執著，回應：即便畫具不佳，也沒阻擋他進步，反而更凸顯其努力，為比賽成功埋下伏筆。
伏筆四：母親知曉教育重要卻反對藝術夢，形成矛盾沖突，回應：促使約翰只能暗自努力，也為后文母親態度轉變做準備。
伏筆五：母親給約翰下月午餐錢，數額夠買參賽材料，引發懸念，回應：讓約翰有機會參賽，同時也考驗他是否會辜負母親信任。
三、續寫要點
第一段：寫約翰去商店買材料，精心挑選，滿心期待準備比賽。回家后，瞞著母親利用課余時間認真創作，描繪森林美景，過程中遇到困難也努力克服，展現他為夢想拼搏。
第二段：電話告知約翰獲獎，母親得知后又驚又喜，看到他的作品，理解了他對藝術的熱愛，態度轉變，支持他繼續追求夢想，約翰激動落淚，感悟堅持夢想終有回報。
四、情感線
起初，約翰對藝術充滿熱愛、懷揣夢想，面對母親反對和家境貧寒，有些無奈、壓抑；拿到錢時，欣喜若狂，重燃希望；準備比賽時，專注、堅定；獲獎后，激動萬分，多年努力得到認可；母親從反對到理解支持，情感變化推動故事發展，圍繞夢想與親情展開。
五、故事線
約翰生活在郊外，熱愛森林，夢想成藝術家。
父親去世，家境困窘，母親反對藝術夢。
約翰用舊畫具堅持練習。
得知繪畫比賽，為參賽材料犯難。
母親給夠買材料的錢，約翰參賽。
約翰獲獎，母親轉變態度支持他。
六、主旨升華句
Dreams are like stars in the sky. Even when the night is dark and the journey is tough, they guide us to move forward.（夢想就像天空中的星星。即使夜晚漆黑，旅途艱難，它們也指引我們前行。）
Passion and perseverance can break through all barriers, turning the seemingly impossible into reality.（熱情和毅力可以沖破一切障礙，將看似不可能變為現實。）
In the face of family misunderstandings and hardships, holding on to one's dream is the bravest choice.（面對家庭的誤解和困難，堅守夢想是最勇敢的選擇。）
Sometimes, a small act of trust from a loved one can be the spark that ignites a great achievement.（有時候，來自親人的一個小小的信任之舉可以成為點燃偉大成就的火花。）
True art not only lies in the beauty of the painting but also in the story of the pursuit behind it.（真正的藝術不僅在于畫作的美麗，還在于背后追求的故事。）
七、寫作示范
第一篇
續寫第一段：Early the next morning, John secretly left home with the money. He rushed to the art store in town, his heart pounding with excitement. He carefully selected the special paints and brushes he needed, imagining the wonderful works he would create. Back home, he hid the materials under his bed and started working on his entry whenever his mother was out. He sketched the forest, the lake, and the animals, pouring all his love and longing into the drawing. When he encountered difficulties, like getting the colors just right, he didn't give up. He experimented over and over again until he was satisfied.
續寫第二段：A week later, a phone call came to John’s home. It was the organizer of the competition, informing John that he had won the first prize! John could hardly believe his ears. His mother, who overheard the call, was astonished. When John showed her his painting, her eyes filled with tears. She finally understood the depth of his passion. “I'm sorry I doubted you, son. You should follow your dream.” John hugged his mother tightly, tears of joy streaming down his face. He knew that all his hard work had paid off and that his mother's support would now be with him every step of the way.
第二篇
續寫第一段：Early the next morning, John secretly left home with the money. As he walked to the store, he clutched the money tightly, his mind filled with visions of the perfect painting. At the store, he took his time, comparing different brands of paints and brushes, determined to make the best choice. Once home, he set up a makeshift studio in his small room and got to work. He painted late into the night, capturing the essence of the forest, the glimmer of the lake, and the grace of the animals. Despite the tiredness, his eyes shone with enthusiasm.
續寫第二段：A week later, a phone call came to John’s home. It was the principal of his school, congratulating John on his outstanding achievement in the competition. John's mother was at a loss for words. She saw the painting that had won John such acclaim and was deeply moved. “I never realized how much this meant to you,” she said softly. From that day on, she became John's biggest supporter. John was overjoyed. He realized that with his mother's love and his own dedication, he could reach for the stars in the art world.
【答案】 Early the next morning, John secretly left home with the money. Hastily, he bought paper and pens for painting, and then dashed to the completion. After signing up for it, he was given the task. It was his time. He was deeply absorbed in his work, forgetting everything around him. After finishing his task, he went home, with birds singing for him. Every day, he looked forward to the result happily and anxiously, though he felt hungry. It seemed that the time stopped.
A week later, a phone call came to John’s home. Hearing what the man said, his mother felt puzzled, not knowing how his son had done it, because she knew it needed money. As soon as John arrived home, his mother told him the news, and waited for his explanation. Knowing the truth, her eyes welled up with tears. Hugging her son tightly, she apologized to him. But he was happy, not only because he had got the perfect opportunity to fulfill his desire, but also he was awarded a lot of money because of his work.

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