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專題練(三十一)　應(yīng)用文寫作＋讀后續(xù)寫
(分值：40分)
Ⅰ.應(yīng)用文寫作(建議信)(滿分15分)
(2024·江蘇南通徐州一模)
假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Mike來信說他暑假將去上海旅游，但不知道參觀哪些景點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．表示歡迎；
2．為他做出旅游規(guī)劃建議。
注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；
2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Mike，
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.讀后續(xù)寫(個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類)(滿分25分)
(2024·廣東茂名二模)
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
I used to be a lonely girl sitting at the back of the classroom.Having failed the college entrance exams and changed schools twice，I seldom smiled.Every day I would sit at the desk，staring into textbooks and exercises，motionless and heavy-hearted.However，my classmates were in a different picture.They were playing，laughing and chatting delightedly.Besides，I hated it when they were always answering the teachers’ questions，loudly and confidently.Obviously，I had no friends in this fiercely competitive class.
Life is harder for senior students.Hardly does a day go by without exercises or tests.Every time when the scores came out，mine wouldn’t be the first or second but last.I was especially tired of the endless exercises and exams，which I seemingly would never do well in.I was under a lot of pressure，feeling like a fish being fried in a pan.
Hanging over me was a dark cloud.The only dim light came from Mr Smith.Every time I stepped into the classroom，he welcomed me with a warm smile；every time my gaze began to wander over the classroom or stare out of the window，his caring eyes would draw me back to his class.Besides，he was the only teacher who invited me to the office，talking about my studies and scores.I remembered when I came out of his office，I felt refreshed，believing that I could work harder.
I was feeling everything was changing for the better.I prepared hard for the final exam of the first semester，desiring to prove that I was not the last one.So before Mr Smith told us the test result，I was expecting something good in store for me.
But I was still the last one in the class.A burst of sadness and shame consuming me，I was heartbroken.
注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Right at that moment，Mr Smith invited me to his office.
Finally，the college admission letter came.
答案精析
Ⅰ.參考范文
Dear Mike，
I hope this email finds you well.I am thrilled to hear that you’ll visit Shanghai this summer holiday!
Located in the east of China，Shanghai is a charming city known for its beautiful landscapes and warm hospitality.There are many places of interest that are worth visiting，such as Huangpu River，the Oriental Pearl Tower and so on.Besides，I highly recommend that you try some local snacks.Given the hot weather of Shanghai in summer，taking some measures to protect yourself from the sun is highly advisable.
If there’s anything specific you’d like to know，please feel free to contact me.I’ll be more than happy to help.
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.參考范文
Right at that moment，Mr Smith invited me to his office.Hesitantly，I walked into the office，lowering my head and avoiding his eye contact.Mr Smith greeted me with a warm smile as usual.As he began talking，not about my grades or mistakes，but about my potential and perseverance，it became apparent that this talk was totally a different one.He didn’t blame me for being the last.Instead，he praised my resilience and determination.He encouraged me to embrace my struggles as stepping stones，not stumbling blocks，reminding me that success was never a straight path.In his eyes，I could see his belief in me，and I knew I should never quit.
Finally，the college admission letter came.I held it in my shaking hands，doubting whether I was in a world of fantasy.But as I opened the envelope and read the first few lines，I couldn’t believe my eyes.Despite all the odds，I got admitted! I stared at the letter in disbelief，then relief，and finally joy.It felt like the dawn after a seemingly endless night，a reward for the perseverance I didn’t know I had until Mr Smith showed me.The tears welling up in my eyes were no longer out of despair，but out of gratitude and self-accomplishment.Mr Smith might never know how much his encouragement might mean to me in my toughest time.(共13張PPT)
專題五　寫作
專題練(三十一)
應(yīng)用文寫作＋讀后續(xù)寫
內(nèi)容索引
做真題　悟技法
練模擬　提能力
Ⅰ.應(yīng)用文寫作(建議信)
(2024·江蘇南通徐州一模)
假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Mike來信說他暑假將去上海旅游，但不知道參觀哪些景點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1.表示歡迎；
2.為他做出旅游規(guī)劃建議。
注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
做真題 悟技法
Dear Mike，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Mike，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope this email finds you well.I am thrilled to hear that you’ll visit Shanghai this summer holiday!
Located in the east of China，Shanghai is a charming city known for its beautiful landscapes and warm hospitality.There are many places of interest that are worth visiting，such as Huangpu River，the Oriental Pearl Tower and so on.Besides，I highly recommend that you try some local snacks.Given the hot weather of Shanghai in summer，taking some measures to protect yourself from the sun is highly advisable.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
If there’s anything specific you’d like to know，please feel free to contact me.I’ll be more than happy to help.
Ⅱ.讀后續(xù)寫(個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類)
(2024·廣東茂名二模)
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
I used to be a lonely girl sitting at the back of the classroom.Having failed the college entrance exams and changed schools twice，I seldom smiled.Every day I would sit at the desk，staring into textbooks and exercises，motionless and heavy-hearted.However，my classmates were in a different picture.They were playing，laughing and chatting delightedly.Besides，I hated it when they were always answering the teachers’ questions，loudly and confidently.
Obviously，I had no friends in this fiercely competitive class.
Life is harder for senior students.Hardly does a day go by without exercises or tests.Every time when the scores came out，mine wouldn’t be the first or second but last.I was especially tired of the endless exercises and exams，which I seemingly would never do well in.I was under a lot of pressure，feeling like a fish being fried in a pan.
Hanging over me was a dark cloud.The only dim light came from Mr Smith.Every time I stepped into the classroom，he welcomed me with a warm smile；every time my gaze began to wander over the classroom or stare out of the window，his caring eyes would draw me back to his class.Besides，he was the only teacher who invited me to the office，talking about my studies and scores.I remembered when I came out of his office，I felt refreshed，believing that I could work harder.
I was feeling everything was changing for the better.I prepared hard for the final exam of the first semester，desiring to prove that I was not the last one.So before Mr Smith told us the test result，I was expecting something good in store for me.
But I was still the last one in the class.A burst of sadness and shame consuming me，I was heartbroken.
注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Right at that moment，Mr Smith invited me to his office._________
______________________________________________________________
Finally，the college admission letter came. _____________________
______________________________________________________________
【參考范文】
Right at that moment，Mr Smith invited me to his office.Hesitantly，I walked into the office，lowering my head and avoiding his eye contact.Mr Smith greeted me with a warm smile as usual.As he began talking，not about my grades or mistakes，but about my potential and perseverance，it became apparent that this talk was totally a different one.He didn’t blame me for being the last.Instead，he praised my resilience and determination.He encouraged me to embrace my struggles as stepping stones，not stumbling blocks，reminding me that success was never a straight path.In his eyes，I could see his belief in me，and I knew I should never quit.
Finally，the college admission letter came.I held it in my shaking hands，doubting whether I was in a world of fantasy.But as I opened the envelope and read the first few lines，I couldn’t believe my eyes.Despite all the odds，I got admitted! I stared at the letter in disbelief，then relief，and finally joy.It felt like the dawn after a seemingly endless night，a reward for the perseverance I didn’t know I had until Mr Smith showed me.The tears welling up in my eyes were no longer out of despair，but out of gratitude and self-accomplishment.Mr Smith might never know how much his encouragement might mean to me in my toughest time.

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