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2025屆廣東省大灣區(qū)普通高中畢業(yè)年級(jí)聯(lián)合模擬考試(一)英語(yǔ)
第二節(jié)(滿分25分)
67. 閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
The boys in the block were going to have a roller-skating(滑旱冰) race next Saturday. They were divided into two teams: the Sunnysiders and the Shaysiders, with five boys on each team. Andy was on the Sunnysiders. They lost last year, so they were desperate to win this time. But Andy knew his short legs made it hard for him to skate fast.
One day, Andy was greeted by a pleasant “Hello” as he was putting on his roller-skates. He looked up and saw his new neighbor, Francis. “Hello” he replied cheerfully, noticing hsi neighbor’s long legs. “Wanna skate with me Look at your long legs! Just the right kind to make you a good skater.” “ I’d love to . You know, I’m really good at roller skating and I used to help my team win.” Francis said, his tone now heavy with sadness. “But I lost my roller skates and my mom just cannot afford to buy me another pair.”
Andy thought it was a shame for Francis. As a new comer, there were undoubtedly many moments when he must have felt lonely. Andy thought to himself, wondering what he would do for Francis. But he had to say goodbye in a hurry since the team were meeting in the open space on the corner to talk over some plans.
When talking to the team captain, Andy suggested adding another boy to their team, Francis. But the captain said “No” as the team knew nothing about him. Besides, the Shadysiders wouldn’t let them take on an extra player.
In the following days, Andy practiced very hard with his team. Then came the day before the race when he saw Francis on the sidewalk, watching him skate past, his eyes filled with a sense of loss. Somehow it upset Andy, and his desire to help his new neighbor resurfaced. Then he thought of a way that could not only help his team win, but help Francis fit in.
注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 個(gè)左右；2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.
Paragraph 1: He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan.
Paragraph 2: The next day, the race began as scheduled.
The boys in the block were going to have a roller-skating(滑旱冰) race next Saturday. They were divided into two teams: the Sunnysiders and the Shaysiders, with five boys on each team. Andy was on the Sunnysiders. They lost last year, so they were desperate to win this time. But Andy knew his short legs made it hard for him to skate fast(賓從).
One day, Andy was greeted by a pleasant “Hello” as he was putting on his roller-skates(狀從). He looked up and saw his new neighbor, Francis. “Hello” he replied cheerfully, noticing his neighbor’s long legs(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). “Wanna skate with me Look at your long legs! Just the right kind to make you a good skater.” “ I’d love to . You know, I’m really good at roller skating and I used to help my team win(賓從).” Francis said, his tone now heavy with sadness(獨(dú)立主格). “But I lost my roller skates and my mom just cannot afford to buy me another pair.”
Andy thought it was a shame for Francis(賓從). As a new comer, there were undoubtedly many moments when he must have felt lonely(狀從). Andy thought to himself, wondering what he would do for Francis(賓從). But he had to say goodbye in a hurry since the team were meeting in the open space on the corner to talk over some plans(狀從).
When talking to the team captain(狀從省略), Andy suggested adding another boy to their team, Francis. But the captain said “No” as the team knew nothing about him(狀從). Besides, the Shadysiders wouldn’t let them take on an extra player.
In the following days, Andy practiced very hard with his team. Then came the day before the race when he saw Francis on the sidewalk(定從), watching him skate past(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作), his eyes filled with a sense of loss. Somehow it upset Andy, and his desire to help his new neighbor resurfaced. Then he thought of a way that could not only help his team win, but help Francis fit in(定從).
注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 個(gè)左右；2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.
Paragraph 1: He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan.
Paragraph 2: The next day, the race began as scheduled.
1. 續(xù)寫文章類型及分析
分析角度 內(nèi)容 原文反應(yīng)句
續(xù)寫類型 情感類+勵(lì)志類故事。主人公通過行動(dòng)表達(dá)情感，并通過幫助他人完成自身成長(zhǎng)和團(tuán)隊(duì)目標(biāo)。 主人公安迪幫助鄰居Francis融入團(tuán)隊(duì)，同時(shí)推動(dòng)團(tuán)隊(duì)勝利。
續(xù)寫思路構(gòu)思 主線是安迪的行動(dòng)：發(fā)現(xiàn)問題（Francis無(wú)法參賽）、制定計(jì)劃（幫助Francis）、實(shí)施計(jì)劃（帶領(lǐng)Francis參與團(tuán)隊(duì)和比賽）。次線是情感的層次發(fā)展：同情、關(guān)心、幫助、滿足。 "Andy thought it was a shame for Francis." "Then he thought of a way that could not only help his team win, but help Francis fit in."
布局 - 第一段：安迪將自己的計(jì)劃告知Francis，展現(xiàn)他為朋友著想的心情和行動(dòng)的決心。 第二段：比賽開始，F(xiàn)rancis的參與讓團(tuán)隊(duì)受益，團(tuán)隊(duì)情感升華。 "He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan."
框架提煉 - 背景：團(tuán)隊(duì)比賽與Francis無(wú)法參與的困境。 發(fā)展：安迪通過提議解決問題，促進(jìn)Francis融入。 高潮：比賽中的努力與Francis的表現(xiàn)改變結(jié)果。 結(jié)尾：團(tuán)隊(duì)勝利，安迪收獲友誼和成長(zhǎng)。 "Then came the day before the race when he saw Francis on the sidewalk, watching him skate past, his eyes filled with a sense of loss."
實(shí)施方法 - 重點(diǎn)描寫心理活動(dòng)和行動(dòng)。 突出情節(jié)的連貫性，語(yǔ)言自然承接。 在比賽中設(shè)置緊張轉(zhuǎn)折，增加讀者代入感。 "Andy practiced very hard with his team."
注意事項(xiàng) - 承接原文語(yǔ)調(diào)，突出溫暖積極的基調(diào)。 續(xù)寫內(nèi)容合理延續(xù)原文情節(jié)，不突兀。 避免重復(fù)描寫已知信息，拓展情節(jié)深度。 "Andy thought it was a shame for Francis."
巧妙設(shè)計(jì) - Francis臨時(shí)替代某隊(duì)員（如安迪）參賽。 比賽中設(shè)置小危機(jī)（如摔倒），F(xiàn)rancis用技巧彌補(bǔ)。 結(jié)尾用簡(jiǎn)短句子突出比賽的勝利和團(tuán)隊(duì)精神。 "But Andy knew his short legs made it hard for him to skate fast."
2. Story Mountain 思維導(dǎo)圖分析
Story Mountain 模式：
開端 (Beginning): 介紹背景，Andy的團(tuán)隊(duì)處于劣勢(shì)，F(xiàn)rancis因經(jīng)濟(jì)困難無(wú)法參賽。
原文："Andy knew his short legs made it hard for him to skate fast."
發(fā)展 (Build-up): Andy注意到Francis的困境，產(chǎn)生幫助他的想法。
原文："Andy thought it was a shame for Francis."
高潮 (Climax): 比賽中，F(xiàn)rancis加入并展現(xiàn)實(shí)力，幫助團(tuán)隊(duì)扭轉(zhuǎn)局勢(shì)。
伏筆："Then he thought of a way that could not only help his team win, but help Francis fit in."
結(jié)果 (Resolution): 團(tuán)隊(duì)獲勝，F(xiàn)rancis融入，Andy感到滿足。
原文："Then came the day before the race when he saw Francis on the sidewalk, watching him skate past, his eyes filled with a sense of loss."
結(jié)尾 (Ending): 強(qiáng)調(diào)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神和友誼的重要性。
分析角度 內(nèi)容 原文反應(yīng)句
人物刻畫 - Andy：善良、富有團(tuán)隊(duì)精神。 Francis：敏感、渴望融入新環(huán)境。 "Andy thought it was a shame for Francis."
情感層次 - 關(guān)心→幫助→成就感。 "Somehow it upset Andy, and his desire to help his new neighbor resurfaced."
關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點(diǎn) - Francis的處境、Andy的提議、比賽轉(zhuǎn)折、團(tuán)隊(duì)勝利。 "Then he thought of a way that could not only help his team win, but help Francis fit in."
語(yǔ)言特色 簡(jiǎn)潔生動(dòng)，情感真實(shí)，富有動(dòng)作和心理描寫。 "He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan."
關(guān)鍵詞分析 desperate, fit in, lonely, determined。 "They lost last year, so they were desperate to win this time."
心理描寫 - Andy的同情與決心：展示內(nèi)心矛盾和堅(jiān)定。 Francis的失落與期待：表現(xiàn)情感層次。 "Somehow it upset Andy, and his desire to help his new neighbor resurfaced."
動(dòng)作描寫 - 描寫比賽中的動(dòng)作細(xì)節(jié)，展示團(tuán)隊(duì)努力。 銜接比賽結(jié)果與Francis的貢獻(xiàn)。 "He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan."
環(huán)境描寫 比賽場(chǎng)地、觀眾反應(yīng)。 "The team were meeting in the open space on the corner to talk over some plans."
隱含主題 - 團(tuán)隊(duì)精神的重要性。 幫助他人帶來雙贏。 "Andy suggested adding another boy to their team, Francis."
情感轉(zhuǎn)折 - 從失落到滿足，從孤單到融入。 "Then he thought of a way that could not only help his team win, but help Francis fit in."
空間轉(zhuǎn)換 銜接從街道到比賽場(chǎng)地的環(huán)境轉(zhuǎn)換。 "Then came the day before the race when he saw Francis on the sidewalk."
時(shí)間過渡 描述從練習(xí)到比賽日的時(shí)間推進(jìn)，設(shè)置情感節(jié)奏。 "Then came the day before the race."
3. 推薦續(xù)寫語(yǔ)料
動(dòng)作描寫：
His hands tightened around the skates as determination filled his eyes.
Andy leaned forward, whispering his plan eagerly to Francis.
Francis hesitated for a moment before nodding firmly.
He bent his knees slightly, gaining momentum as he glided forward.
The crowd erupted in cheers as the race reached its climax.
Andy reached out a hand to steady Francis after a stumble.
The team exchanged triumphant smiles as they crossed the finish line.
With a quick turn, Francis overtook their strongest opponent.
心理描寫：
Doubt crept into his mind, but he pushed it aside.
He couldn’t bear to see Francis standing there alone, looking so defeated.
A surge of hope filled his chest as the idea took shape.
Worry twisted in his stomach, but excitement quickly replaced it.
The thought of losing again weighed heavily on his heart.
Gratitude shone in Francis’s eyes as he looked at Andy.
Confidence radiated through him as he realized they could win this.
A mix of relief and pride washed over him as they celebrated.
環(huán)境描寫：
The corner lot buzzed with laughter and shouts of excitement.
The sun cast long shadows on the sidewalk where Francis stood.
The smooth pavement reflected the glint of roller-skates speeding past.
A soft breeze carried the sound of cheering from the stands.
The starting line was a patch of chalky white on the grey concrete.
Nearby trees swayed gently, their leaves rustling in the wind.
The intense sunlight made the skaters’ sweat glisten like tiny jewels.
The open space seemed to shrink as the competitors crowded around.
高級(jí)詞匯替換：
開心場(chǎng)景：elated → overjoyed, thrilled, ecstatic, jubilant, exhilarated
緊張場(chǎng)景：nervous → apprehensive, tense, on edge, jittery, uneasy
失落場(chǎng)景：sad → disheartened, downcast, dejected, crestfallen, melancholy
激動(dòng)場(chǎng)景：excited → exhilarated, ecstatic, thrilled, overjoyed, euphoric
憤怒場(chǎng)景：angry → infuriated, outraged, livid, incensed, exasperated
4. 高中語(yǔ)法與語(yǔ)料積累
語(yǔ)法現(xiàn)象：
現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)：I have lost my roller skates.
搭配：have + past participle。
例句：She has already finished her homework.
定語(yǔ)從句：Francis, whose long legs made him a good skater, couldn’t join the team.
例句：This is the book that I borrowed yesterday.
情態(tài)動(dòng)詞：I must help Francis.
搭配：must + 動(dòng)詞原形。
例句：You should take an umbrella.
過去進(jìn)行時(shí)：Andy was practicing with his team.
搭配：was/were + 動(dòng)詞ing。
例句：They were playing football at that time.
地道搭配：
desperate to win
fit in with the team
filled with a sense of loss
help someone fit in
talk over some plans
詞匯積累：
詞匯 詞性 詞義 近義詞 反義詞 例句
desperate adj. 絕望的；極度渴望的 eager, hopeless indifferent, calm He was desperate to prove himself.
fit v. 適應(yīng)；融入 adapt, suit clash, mismatch He tried to fit into the new group.
sense n. 感覺；意義 feeling, meaning ignorance, nonsense There was a sense of excitement in the air.
upset v./adj. 打翻；難過 disturb, distressed calm, soothe She was upset by the sudden news.
Possible Versions續(xù)寫范文
Version 1:
Paragraph 1: He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan. "Francis, I have an idea! You can borrow my skates and race with us tomorrow!" Andy said with determination. Francis hesitated, his eyes widening in surprise(獨(dú)立主格). "But what about you " he asked. Andy smiled. "I’ll cheer for you from the sidelines. You’re a better skater, and we need you to win." Francis finally agreed, moved by Andy’s generosity(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做原因狀語(yǔ)). That evening, Andy gathered the team to explain the plan. At first, some teammates expressed doubt, but Andy’s confidence convinced them. They practiced together until sunset, teaching Francis their strategies(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). As Francis skated(狀從), his moves were smooth and precise, filling everyone with hope(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). Andy watched proudly, knowing his decision was right(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞+賓從).
Paragraph 2: The next day, the race began as scheduled. The teams lined up at the starting point, tension hanging in the air(獨(dú)立主格). Francis, wearing Andy’s skates(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做后置定語(yǔ)), stood confidently. The whistle blew, and the skaters launched forward. Francis’s long legs gave him an advantage as he gracefully overtook opponents(狀從). At one point, a Shaysider attempted to block him, but Francis maneuvered(vi.機(jī)動(dòng)的，戰(zhàn)術(shù)調(diào)整用...策略) skillfully, avoiding a fall(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). Cheers erupted from the Sunnysiders as Francis crossed the finish line first(狀從). The team celebrated their victory, lifting Francis into the air(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). Andy, though not skating, felt a deep sense of pride. "You didn’t just help us win; you reminded us of the power of teamwork," the captain said, patting Andy on the shoulder(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).. Francis, now surrounded by friends(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做后置定語(yǔ)), smiled brighter than ever before.
亮點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法與詞匯
語(yǔ)法加分點(diǎn)：
直接引語(yǔ)："Francis, I have an idea!" Andy said with determination.
搭配：say + 副詞（e.g., confidently, proudly）。
例句：She said with a smile, "I’ll help you with your homework."
定語(yǔ)從句："You didn’t just help us win; you reminded us of the power of teamwork."
搭配：remind someone of something。
例句：The book reminded her of her childhood.
過去完成時(shí)："Francis finally agreed, moved by Andy’s generosity."
搭配：be + past participle (moved)。
例句：She was moved by the heartfelt letter.
亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ)：
情緒描寫：excited, moved, filled with hope, felt a deep sense of pride.
動(dòng)作描寫：maneuvered skillfully, overtook opponents, launched forward.
高級(jí)詞匯替換：
happy → overjoyed, elated.
help → assist, support.
cheer → applaud, celebrate.
teamwork → collaboration, unity.
move → inspire, touch.
Version 2續(xù)寫范文
Paragraph 1: He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan. "Francis, I want you to skate for me tomorrow," Andy said earnestly. At first, Francis protested, worried about taking Andy’s place(adj短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)), but Andy reassured him. "It’s not about me; it’s about the team." Reluctantly, Francis agreed. That night, Andy shared the plan with the captain and teammates, who, after some hesitation, supported the idea(定從). They worked late, helping Francis adapt to their tactics(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). Francis, though nervous, pushed himself hard, determined not to let the team down(adj做主語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)). Andy encouraged him, saying(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作，動(dòng)作串), "You’ve got this. We believe in you." By the end of the practice, everyone was optimistic about their chances.
Paragraph 2: The next day, the race began as scheduled. Francis took his position at the starting line, Andy cheering loudly from the sidelines(獨(dú)立主格). The whistle blew, and the skaters surged forward. Francis skated with surprising agility(n.靈活機(jī)敏), his movements precise and confident(獨(dú)立主格). At the final turn, a Shaysider attempted to overtake him, but Francis accelerated, his long legs propelling him forward(獨(dú)立主格). The Sunnysiders erupted in cheers as Francis crossed the finish line first(狀從). Tears welled up in Andy’s eyes as the team hugged Francis(狀從), celebrating their victory(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). The captain said, "This win isn’t just about speed; it’s about trust and selflessness." Francis, now surrounded by his new friends(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做后置定語(yǔ)), realized he had finally found his place(賓從).
亮點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法與詞匯
語(yǔ)法加分點(diǎn)：
強(qiáng)調(diào)句型："It’s not about me; it’s about the team."
搭配：It + be + 強(qiáng)調(diào)部分 + that/who。
例句：It was Francis who saved the day.
倒裝句："Not only did Francis skate well, but he also inspired us all."
搭配：Not only + 助動(dòng)詞 + 主語(yǔ) + 動(dòng)詞。
例句：Not only was he fast, but he was also skilled.
亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ)：
情緒描寫：earnestly, reluctantly, optimistic, tears welled up.
動(dòng)作描寫：surged forward, propelled him forward, hugged Francis.
高級(jí)詞匯替換：
fast → swift, rapid.
nervous → apprehensive, tense.
support → back, endorse.
encourage → motivate, inspire.
celebrate → rejoice, honor.
Version 3續(xù)寫范文
Paragraph 1: He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan. "Francis, what if you joined the race as our secret weapon " Andy proposed. Francis hesitated, his voice trembling(獨(dú)立主格). "But I don’t have skates," he said. Andy grinned. "We’ll figure it out." That evening, Andy convinced the captain to let Francis borrow a pair of spare skates. Though the skates were slightly worn(狀從), Francis practiced tirelessly, his determination shining through(獨(dú)立主格). Andy stayed by his side, offering tips and encouragement(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). By the time they finished(狀從), Francis was ready. The team was amazed by his progress, and Andy couldn’t help but feel a surge of hope.
Paragraph 2: The next day, the race began as scheduled. Francis joined the lineup, his heart pounding(獨(dú)立主格). As the whistle blew(狀從), he pushed off with power, quickly gaining speed(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). His long legs made each stride efficient, and he handled every corner with precision. The crowd roared as Francis moved into the lead(狀從). In a nail-biting finish, he crossed the line just seconds ahead of their rivals. The Sunnysiders erupted in celebration, hoisting(vt.升起吊起) Francis onto their shoulders(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). Andy beamed with pride, knowing he had made the right choice(賓從). "This victory is ours, but it wouldn’t have been possible without you," the captain said. Francis, overwhelmed with gratitude(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做后置定語(yǔ)), finally felt like part of the team.
亮點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法與詞匯
語(yǔ)法加分點(diǎn)：
虛擬語(yǔ)氣："What if you joined the race as our secret weapon "
搭配：What if + 過去式動(dòng)詞。
例句：What if we tried something different
副詞修飾動(dòng)作："Francis practiced tirelessly, his determination shining through."
搭配：動(dòng)詞 + 副詞（e.g., tirelessly, skillfully）。
例句：She worked diligently to finish the project.
亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ)：
情緒描寫：trembling, overwhelmed with gratitude, a surge of hope.
動(dòng)作描寫：pushed off with power, gaining speed, handled every corner.
高級(jí)詞匯替換：
proud → gratified, content.
team → squad, group.
determined → resolute, steadfast.
amazed → astonished, astounded.
finish → conclusion, culmination.
總結(jié)語(yǔ)料積累
短語(yǔ)和句式：
"You’ve got this. We believe in you." → 表達(dá)鼓勵(lì)
"The crowd erupted in cheers." → 描寫觀眾反應(yīng)
"He pushed off with power, quickly gaining speed." → 動(dòng)作描寫
"Tears welled up in his eyes as he celebrated their victory." → 情緒描寫
同義詞和替換選項(xiàng)：
happy → joyous, euphoric
win → triumph, conquer
cheer → applaud, hail
practice → rehearse, train
victory → success, achievement
亮點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法例句：
強(qiáng)調(diào)句型："It was Francis who made the difference in the race."
倒裝句："Never had the team felt so united."
定語(yǔ)從句："The race, which everyone had anticipated, was finally over."

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