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2025年1月普通高等學校招生全國統一考試 英語（浙江2025首考）
第二節（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (嘆息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回響) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
注意：
（1）續寫詞數應為150左右；（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
第二節（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door(定從). His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy(非謂語動詞做目的狀語). He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things(狀從). Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (嘆息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there(主從). Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police(動作串).
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted(賓從) before the police arrived(狀從), Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作), he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy(狀從) he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out(動作串). Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing(賓從). “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing(系動詞，主動表被動).
注意：
（1）續寫詞數應為150左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
1. 續寫分析與構思框架表
分析角度 內容 原文反應句
類型 敘事類（Narrative Writing）：涉及動作描寫、心理沖突、情感轉折及解決問題。 Kevin decided to do something.
構思思路 1. 分析事件發展線索，明確沖突與解決方案。
2. 承接原文心理、情節，設計合理過渡。
3. 加強人物情感和動機的描寫，讓故事更生動。 Kevin wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
框架布局 第一段：Kevin與Green夫婦的對話，核實事件真相，突出情感轉折。
第二段：Kevin與Green先生共同處理手表問題，解決事件并升華主題。 Kevin went to talk to them.
原文承接事項 1. 銜接人物邏輯和心理變化，注意與原文的情感基調一致。
2. 事件發展合理連貫，避免硬轉折。
3. 語言風格需保持與原文一致，注意詞匯和句式銜接。 Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
整體注意事項 1. 注意人物行為動機合理性，避免突兀。
2. 適當加入心理描寫，增加情節張力。
3. 突出情感轉折與主題升華。 Kevin thought to himself, "What if he has told the truth "
續寫設計技巧 1. 巧用細節描寫（心理、動作、環境），增強畫面感。
2. 利用反問句和感嘆句，深化人物情感。
3. 設計意料之外但情理之中的情節，讓故事更具吸引力。 “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out.
2. Story Mountain 思維導圖分析
起點（Introduction）: Kevin無聊但注意到異?；顒?。
發展（Rising Action）: Kevin目擊可疑男人闖入，并主動報警。
高潮（Climax）: Kevin confronts the man, leading to police involvement.
下降（Falling Action）: Kevin開始懷疑是否誤會了男人的動機。
結局（Resolution）: Kevin通過與Green夫婦的對話解開誤會，并完成對事件的處理。
3. 續寫與原文銜接點分析表
分析角度 內容 原文反應句
情感層次 Kevin從興奮、緊張到懷疑，情緒層層遞進。 Kevin sighed (嘆息) and hoped something exciting would happen.
關鍵情節點 1. Kevin目擊男子闖入。
2. Kevin決定采取行動。
3. Kevin質疑男子動機，最終與Green夫婦核實。 Thinking that the man might get away… Kevin decided to do something.
心理描寫 描寫Kevin面對危險的勇氣、行動后的疑惑，以及最終的釋然。 Kevin wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
動作描寫 Kevin報警、拿樹枝對峙男子、向警察匯報情況等細節動作。 Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window.
環境描寫 描寫Mrs. Hill的窗外景象，以及Green家屋內細節，烘托緊張氣氛。 Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street.
情感轉折 1. Kevin對事件的興奮到緊張。
2. Kevin對事件的判斷從自信到懷疑。 Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
隱含主題 勇敢與正義感，以及對事情真相的探索。 “What if he has told the truth ”
伏筆 男子試圖撬開地板尋找父親的手表。 “My father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
沖突點 Kevin與男子的對峙，以及Kevin內心對真相的質疑。 The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief.
解決方案 Kevin與Green夫婦對話核實事件，攜手表到警局處理問題。 Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
4. 推薦情景語料
動作描寫
He clenched his fists, his knuckles turning white.
She tiptoed across the room, her breath held.
He darted forward, grabbing the object with both hands.
She froze in place, unable to move a muscle.
He turned his head sharply, his eyes scanning the room.
She leaned against the wall, her hands trembling.
He reached out, his fingers brushing against the cold surface.
She stood rooted to the spot, her heart pounding in her chest.
心理描寫
A thousand thoughts raced through his mind.
She couldn’t shake off the nagging feeling of unease.
He felt a surge of determination welling up inside him.
Doubts crept into her mind like unwelcome guests.
His heart sank at the thought of what might happen.
She was torn between fear and curiosity.
Relief washed over him like a tidal wave.
A flicker of hope ignited in her chest.
環境描寫
The room was dimly lit, with shadows dancing on the walls.
A cold wind whistled through the cracks in the window.
The street outside was eerily silent, except for the rustle of leaves.
The faint smell of dust and old wood filled the air.
The moonlight cast a silver glow over the deserted house.
The distant sound of a train echoed in the night.
Raindrops pattered against the windowpane, creating a soothing rhythm.
The morning sun bathed the room in a warm, golden light.
高級替換詞分類
場景 常用詞 高級替換詞
情感 Happy Elated, Jubilant
Sad Melancholy, Sorrowful
行動 Run Sprint, Dash
Look Glance, Gaze
環境 Dark Gloomy, Dim
5. 語法與搭配分析
單詞短語 詞意 詞性 近義詞 反義詞 例句
Grab 抓住 動詞 Seize, Snatch Release He grabbed the branch tightly as he jumped through the window.
Freeze 僵住 動詞 Stop, Halt Move, Continue She froze in fear when she heard the footsteps.
Convincing 令人信服的 形容詞 Persuasive, Plausible Unconvincing His explanation sounded convincing, but Kevin still had doubts.
Pursue 追逐 動詞 Chase, Follow Abandon, Ignore The police pursued the man until he was caught.
Relief 寬慰 名詞 Comfort, Reassurance Anxiety, Distress A sense of relief washed over Kevin when he saw the police arrive.
Possible Versions
Version 1:
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained everything that had happened(定從), from noticing the man breaking into their house to his decision to confront him. Mr. Green listened attentively, his brows furrowing in concern(獨立主格). "That’s unusual," he said, "but we haven’t lived here long, so we know little about the previous owner." Mrs. Green chimed in(vi.插嘴，加入談話), mentioning an old box(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) left behind in the attic(非謂語動詞做后置定語). Kevin's curiosity piqued(獨立主格), together they ventured into the attic to search. Dust filled the air as they carefully opened the box(狀從), revealing an old photograph of a family, a few letters(非謂語動詞做結果狀語), and, astonishingly, a gold watch. Kevin felt a strange mixture of relief and guilt, wondering(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) whether he had misunderstood the man’s intentions(賓從).
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The officer on duty(介詞短語做后置) confirmed the man’s story, explaining he had lost contact with his parents years ago and had been searching for the watch as a reminder(賓從). Kevin apologized for his earlier actions, and the officer reassured him that calling the police was the right decision(賓從). Mr. Green, moved by the story(非謂語動詞做原因狀語), decided to return the watch to the man, offering him tea and a chance to share his memories(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). The man’s gratitude was evident, and Kevin learned a valuable lesson about empathy and understanding. As they walked home(狀從), Kevin felt a sense of pride—despite the misunderstanding, he had acted with courage and responsibility, proving that doing the right thing could lead to meaningful connections(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作+賓從).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. With nervous hesitation, he recounted the events of the day, highlighting the man’s strange behavior and his own uncertainty(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). Mr. Green exchanged a knowing glance with his wife. “It seems like he might have been telling the truth(賓從),” he said, pulling out a faded deed document(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). It turned out the house had once belonged to an older couple(賓從), now deceased(adj做補語). Intrigued(adj做狀語), Kevin suggested they check the area(賓從) where the man had tried to lift the floorboard(定從). They carefully removed the board and discovered a small metal box hidden underneath(非謂語動詞做后置定語). Inside was a rusted watch along with a note(倒裝句) explaining its sentimental value to the previous owners(非謂語動詞做后置定語). Kevin’s heart sank, but Mr. Green reassured him that he had acted bravely(賓從).
Paragraph 2:Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The man, who had been released after questioning(定從), was waiting there, hopeful(adj.做狀語或補語). When he saw the watch(狀從), his eyes filled with tears. “This belonged to my father,” he whispered, clutching it tightly(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). Kevin apologized for the misunderstanding, and the man nodded with a faint smile, expressing his gratitude(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). On their way home, Mr. Green placed a hand on Kevin’s shoulder, commending his quick thinking and sense of justice(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). The experience taught Kevin that courage wasn’t just about taking risks; it was about standing up for what was right(賓從), even when faced with doubt(狀從省略). Though the day had been chaotic(狀從), it ended on a note of mutual understanding and newfound respect.
亮點語法及分析
1. 定語從句
Kevin explained everything that had happened, from noticing the man breaking into their house to his decision to confront him.
搭配: "Explain everything that…"
近義替換: Describe what had happened.
例句: He shared the details that he had observed during the incident.
2. 狀語從句
Kevin felt a wave of mixed emotions—relief that he had uncovered the truth and guilt for doubting the man’s intentions.
搭配: "Relief that…"
近義替換: Satisfaction knowing…
3. 被動語態
The watch they had found was taken to the police station.
搭配: "Was taken to…"
例句: The documents were delivered to the authorities on time.
亮點詞匯與短語
情緒描寫
Mixed emotions: relief, guilt, anxiety, hope
Heart sank, eyes widened, tears filled his eyes
動作描寫
Carefully removed the board
Clutched it tightly
Placed a hand on his shoulder
升級詞匯替換表
普通詞 升級詞 聯想詞 例句
Think Contemplate Reflect, Consider He contemplated the man’s explanation carefully before deciding.
Say Remark State, Declare “It seems he was telling the truth,” Mr. Green remarked.
Brave Courageous Fearless, Bold Kevin’s courageous actions proved his sense of justice.

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