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假定你是李華，上星期你校組織了一次義賣(mài)活動(dòng)（charity sale）。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Alex寫(xiě)一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括:
1.你參加義賣(mài)的過(guò)程；
2.你的感想。
注意:
1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
一、寫(xiě)作提綱
開(kāi)頭：表明寫(xiě)信目的，引出義賣(mài)活動(dòng)。
表達(dá)問(wèn)候，如 “Dear Alex, How are you doing lately ”
直接說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信是為了分享學(xué)校的義賣(mài)活動(dòng)，“I'm writing to share with you an unforgettable charity sale held in our school last week.”
主體：詳細(xì)描述參加義賣(mài)的過(guò)程以及分享感想。
參加義賣(mài)的過(guò)程：
準(zhǔn)備階段：提及自己為義賣(mài)準(zhǔn)備的物品，“I carefully selected some of my gently - used books and handmade handicrafts to contribute to the sale.” 還可以說(shuō)說(shuō)和同學(xué)一起布置攤位的情況，“My classmates and I spent hours arranging our booth to make it appealing to buyers.”
活動(dòng)進(jìn)行時(shí)：描述現(xiàn)場(chǎng)熱鬧的氛圍，“The event was bustling with activity. There was a constant stream of students and teachers visiting our booth.” 講講自己如何推銷(xiāo)物品，“I enthusiastically introduced the features and stories behind each item to potential buyers.”
感想：
關(guān)于幫助他人的感悟，“It was truly heart - warming to realize that every sale we made could bring a ray of hope to those in need.”
對(duì)團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的體會(huì)，“This experience also taught me the power of teamwork. Working together with my classmates, we were able to achieve more than we could have individually.”
結(jié)尾：詢(xún)問(wèn)對(duì)方類(lèi)似經(jīng)歷，表達(dá)期待回復(fù)。
詢(xún)問(wèn)對(duì)方是否有參加過(guò)類(lèi)似活動(dòng)，“Have you ever taken part in a charity sale or any similar events in your school ”
期待對(duì)方回信分享，“I'm looking forward to hearing from you and learning about your experiences. Best regards, Li Hua”
二、語(yǔ)言積累
Last week, our school organized a meaningful charity sale, aiming to raise funds for those less fortunate. 上周，我們學(xué)校組織了一場(chǎng)意義非凡的義賣(mài)活動(dòng)，旨在為那些不幸的人籌集資金。
In preparation for the sale, I rummaged through my belongings and picked out some items that I thought others might find useful. 在為義賣(mài)做準(zhǔn)備時(shí)，我翻遍了我的物品，挑選出一些我認(rèn)為別人可能會(huì)覺(jué)得有用的東西。
Our booth was decorated with colorful posters and carefully arranged items, attracting a large number of passers - by. 我們的攤位用彩色海報(bào)裝飾，物品擺放得井井有條，吸引了大量路人。
I took on the role of a salesperson, trying my best to persuade customers to purchase our items. 我承擔(dān)起銷(xiāo)售人員的角色，盡力說(shuō)服顧客購(gòu)買(mǎi)我們的物品。
The atmosphere at the charity sale was electric, filled with laughter, bargaining, and the spirit of giving. 義賣(mài)現(xiàn)場(chǎng)的氣氛熱烈非凡，充滿(mǎn)了笑聲、討價(jià)還價(jià)聲和奉獻(xiàn)精神。
It was a joy to see the money in our donation box growing steadily, knowing that it would make a real difference to someone's life. 看到捐款箱里的錢(qián)穩(wěn)步增加，想到這會(huì)給某人的生活帶來(lái)真正的改變，我感到無(wú)比喜悅。
Through this charity sale, I not only learned the value of giving but also the importance of communication and teamwork. 通過(guò)這次義賣(mài)活動(dòng)，我不僅學(xué)到了奉獻(xiàn)的價(jià)值，還明白了溝通和團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的重要性。
The sense of accomplishment I felt after the event was overwhelming, as I knew I had contributed to a worthy cause. 活動(dòng)結(jié)束后，我感受到的成就感難以言表，因?yàn)槲抑牢覟橐豁?xiàng)有意義的事業(yè)做出了貢獻(xiàn)。
I hope more such events will be held in the future to spread love and kindness throughout our community. 我希望未來(lái)能舉辦更多這樣的活動(dòng)，在我們的社區(qū)傳播愛(ài)與善意。
I sincerely hope you can share your similar experiences with me in your next email. 我真誠(chéng)地希望你能在下次郵件中與我分享你類(lèi)似的經(jīng)歷。
三、寫(xiě)作示范
示范一
Dear Alex,
How are you I'm writing to share with you an amazing charity sale at our school last week.
Before the sale, I sorted out some old books and toys that I no longer needed. On the day of the event, the schoolyard was transformed into a lively market. My classmates and I greeted customers with big smiles and introduced our items warmly. We sold most of our goods quickly.
This charity sale was really rewarding. It made me realize how small efforts can bring great changes. It also deepened the bond among classmates. Have you ever joined a charity sale I'm eager to hear from you.
Best regards,
Li Hua
示范二
Dear Alex,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm excited to tell you about a charity sale held in our school last week.
In preparation, I handmade several keychains and cards. At the sale, our booth was crowded with people. I actively promoted our products, sharing the stories behind them. We managed to raise a considerable amount of money.
This experience was eye - opening. It taught me the significance of helping others and the strength of unity. I'm looking forward to similar events in the future. What about you Do you have any similar experiences
Best wishes,
Li Hua
示范三
Dear Alex,
How have you been I'm writing to talk about an unforgettable charity sale in our school last week.
I decided to sell some of my artworks. When the sale started, the place was full of energy. I explained the inspiration of each piece to customers. Many were interested and made purchases.
I felt a strong sense of fulfillment. It was not just about selling things but making a positive impact. I'm curious about whether you've participated in such activities. Please share your stories with me.
Best regards,
Li Hua
參考范文：
Dear Alex,
I hope you're doing well I wanted to share an amazing experience from last week—our school's charity sale
I joined a team that sold homemade crafts and books.I was responsible for arranging the items and talking to people about the cause we were supporting.It was a bit stressful at first,but as more people came by,I started really enjoying seeing their interest.The whole school got involved,and it was inspiring to see everyone contributing in their own way.
By the end of the event,I felt both tired and proud.Knowing that our efforts would help others made the experience so rewarding,and I realized how much we can achieve when we work together!Hope to hear from you soon.Take care!
Best regards,
LiHua

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