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人教版必修1B Unit 4 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)作業(yè)設(shè)計(jì)
I. 課文素材庫(kù)
微技能 語(yǔ)料 出處
場(chǎng)景/環(huán)境描寫(xiě) For several days, the water in the village wells rose and fell, rose and fell. There were deep cracks that appeared in the walls. Chickens and even pigs were too nervous to eat, and dogs refused to go inside buildings. Mice ran out of the fields looking for places to hide, and fish jumped out of the water. Bright lights were seen in the sky outside the city and loud noises were heard. A huge crack, eight kilometres long and 30 metres wide, cut across houses, roads, and waterways. In less than one minute, a large city lay in ruins. Everywhere survivors looked, there was nothing but ruins. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the city’s people, a new Tangshan was built upon the earth ruins. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 2 2. Page 50 Para 1 Line 3 3. Page 50 Para 1 Line 4 4. Page 50 Para 1 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 6. Page 50 Para 2 Line 4 7. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 8. Page 50 Para 3 Line 1 9. Page 50 Para 5 Line 2
心理描寫(xiě) But the city’s one million people were asleep as ususl that night. People were in shock. People began to wonder how long the disaster would last. But hope was not lost. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 7 2. Page 50 Para 3 Line 7 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 9 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1
修辭手法 It seemed as if the world were coming to an end!(夸張) 2.Hard hills of rock became rivers of dirt.(暗喻) 3.Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves, but no wind could blow them away.（明喻） 4.Slowly, the city began to breathe again.(擬人) 5.Tangshan started to revive itself and get back up on its feet.(擬人) 1. Page 50 Para 2 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 2 Line 5 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 5 Line 1
動(dòng)作描寫(xiě) Soon after the quakes, the army sent 150,000 soldiers to Tangshan to dig out those who were trapped and to bury the dead. More than 10,000 doctors and nurses came to provide medical care. Workers built shelters for survivors whose homes had been destroyed. Hundreds of thousands of people were helped. Water and food were brought into the city by train, truck, and plane. 1. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 4 Line 2 3. Page 50 Para 4 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 4 5. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5
II. 語(yǔ)言訓(xùn)練場(chǎng)
漢譯英
1. 瀏覽報(bào)紙，我被照片震驚：在亞洲，颶風(fēng)摧毀了一座城鎮(zhèn)。(be shocked by)
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2. 而且，歐洲東部的大雨引發(fā)了滑坡，歐洲南部的酷熱造成了 森林大火。 (has caused)
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3. 心情沉重地走出車(chē)站，我突然感受到清風(fēng)拂面。(with a heavy heart)
___________________________________________________________________________________________4. 2015年4月25日尼泊爾發(fā)生8.1級(jí)地震，是歷史上最糟糕的地震之一。(magnitude, hit)
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5. 一聽(tīng)到消息，中國(guó)迅速開(kāi)展組織緊急救助。(emergency aid)
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6. 1881年，臺(tái)風(fēng)襲擊了越南城市海防，這場(chǎng)風(fēng)暴造成了30萬(wàn)人死亡。(strike, Haiphong, cost the lives of)
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7. 1972年2月3日，一場(chǎng)罕見(jiàn)的暴風(fēng)雪襲擊伊朗，造成一周極度低溫。(cause a week of )
___________________________________________________________________________________________8. 這場(chǎng)暴風(fēng)雪帶來(lái)積雪深達(dá)7.9米，造成約4,000人喪生。（result in the deaths of ）
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III. 美文體驗(yàn)館
“Dad,” whispered Tariq, “Are you awake ” Dad opened his eyes. “What’s the matter, son ” Tariq couldn’t sleep and he felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. All day long he felt like something was about to happen. Dad whispered back to his son: “You could be right. Go back to bed, good boy.”
Tariq shook his head. “I’m going downstairs where it’s cooler. Why don’t you come with me ” dad refused, saying that he would stay there. Tariq went down the landing. He and his father were alone in the house. His mother and sister had gone to visit relatives. He went into the kitchen and lay on the floor. He felt cooler and fell asleep at last.
Suddenly he awoke with a shock. In the distance he could hear a roar, like thunder. It seemed to be coming closer and closer. The storm must have arrived, just as they expected. But this was no ordinary storm. Within seconds the whole house began to shake. The vase fell off the shelves with a crash. Tariq could feel the floor moving beneath him. What on earth was happening He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. It didn’t work. He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. Next moment a pile of bricks came down around him. A terrible choking smell filled the air.
At last the dust cleared. Tariq was amazed to find that he was still alive. The framework of the doorway must have saved him. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ”
No answer.
注意:
續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右;
請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。
But he heard a sniffed dog (搜救犬) barking. ______________________________________________________
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“Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”. ________________________________________________
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主題語(yǔ)境 人與自然
文章出處 Teen’s Space英語(yǔ)街：英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)1（原創(chuàng)試題06）
詞數(shù) 正文英文詞數(shù)271，續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段首句7個(gè)單詞，續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段首句9 個(gè)單詞。
What 故事脈絡(luò) (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1-2)
Build-up (Para3)
Climax (Para.4-5)
Resolution (續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段) But he heard a sniffer dog barking.
Ending (續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段) “Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”
Why 故事主題
How 寫(xiě)作手法
人物分析 Tariq Dad
1. He couldn’t sleep and felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. 2. He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. He reached the back door... 3. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ” Dad refused, saying that he would stay upstairs. No answer.
場(chǎng)景
語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格
伏筆/照應(yīng) Maybe there’s a storm coming .All day long he felt like something was about to happen.
【素材積累】
Para. 1
1. whisper v.低語(yǔ)；耳語(yǔ)
whisper to sb.
Para. 2
1. shake one’s head 搖頭
2. go downstairs 下樓
3. Tariq went down the landing. (平臺(tái))
4. go to visit relatives 走親戚
5. fall asleep 熟睡
Para. 3
awake with a shock 驚醒
roar 咆哮
The storm must have arrived, just as they expected.(must have done情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的完成式表示對(duì)過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情的肯定推測(cè)，表示：“一定怎么了”；just as引導(dǎo)方式狀語(yǔ)從句，表示“正如”)
fall off 落下來(lái)
He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. (句式：完全倒裝)
A terrible smell filled the air. (無(wú)靈主語(yǔ))
Para. 4
be amazed to find that...
The framework of the doorway must have saved him.
call out 大聲叫喊
IV 技能鍛造營(yíng)
Apostrophe (頓呼), 即：發(fā)出呼語(yǔ)。
定義一：指在演說(shuō)、抒情文章中或詩(shī)歌中突然用第二人稱(chēng)對(duì)不在場(chǎng)的人或?qū)M人的事物發(fā)出呼語(yǔ)的一種修辭方式。
定義二：對(duì)一個(gè)人（通常是不在場(chǎng)的人）或一個(gè)人格化的物發(fā)出的稱(chēng)呼，通常借助感嘆詞“哦，啊”等表現(xiàn)，屬于獨(dú)立成分。
例如：
“Ugh, Weibo, why won’t you load my messages ” “啊，微博，你為什么不加載我的消息？”
“Hold on, my son’s driving me crazy---Robert, come back here, stop running with a knife.”
(與人通話(huà)中) 別掛線(xiàn)，我的兒子讓我抓狂---羅伯特，快給我過(guò)來(lái)，不要拿著刀到處跑。”
答案解析
I. 課文素材庫(kù)
微技能 語(yǔ)料 出處
場(chǎng)景/環(huán)境描寫(xiě) For several days, the water in the village wells rose and fell, rose and fell. There were deep cracks that appeared in the walls. Chickens and even pigs were too nervous to eat, and dogs refused to go inside buildings. Mice ran out of the fields looking for places to hide, and fish jumped out of the water. Bright lights were seen in the sky outside the city and loud noises were heard. A huge crack, eight kilometres long and 30 metres wide, cut across houses, roads, and waterways. In less than one minute, a large city lay in ruins. Everywhere survivors looked, there was nothing but ruins. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the city’s people, a new Tangshan was built upon the earth ruins. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 2 2. Page 50 Para 1 Line 3 3. Page 50 Para 1 Line 4 4. Page 50 Para 1 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 6. Page 50 Para 2 Line 4 7. Page 50 Para 1 Line 6 8. Page 50 Para 3 Line 1 9. Page 50 Para 5 Line 2
心理描寫(xiě) But the city’s one million people were asleep as ususl that night. People were in shock. People began to wonder how long the disaster would last. But hope was not lost. 1. Page 50 Para 1 Line 7 2. Page 50 Para 3 Line 7 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 9 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1
修辭手法 It seemed as if the world were coming to an end!(夸張) 2.Hard hills of rock became rivers of dirt.(暗喻) 3.Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves, but no wind could blow them away.（明喻） 4.Slowly, the city began to breathe again.(擬人) 5.Tangshan started to revive itself and get back up on its feet.(擬人) 1. Page 50 Para 2 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 2 Line 5 3. Page 50 Para 3 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5 5. Page 50 Para 5 Line 1
動(dòng)作描寫(xiě) Soon after the quakes, the army sent 150,000 soldiers to Tangshan to dig out those who were trapped and to bury the dead. More than 10,000 doctors and nurses came to provide medical care. Workers built shelters for survivors whose homes had been destroyed. Hundreds of thousands of people were helped. Water and food were brought into the city by train, truck, and plane. 1. Page 50 Para 4 Line 1 2. Page 50 Para 4 Line 2 3. Page 50 Para 4 Line 3 4. Page 50 Para 4 Line 4 5. Page 50 Para 4 Line 5
II. 語(yǔ)言訓(xùn)練場(chǎng)
漢譯英
1. 瀏覽報(bào)紙，我被照片震驚：在亞洲，颶風(fēng)摧毀了一座城鎮(zhèn)。(be shocked by)
Looking through my newspaper, I’m shocked by photos showing that a hurricane in Asia has destroyed a town.
2. 而且，歐洲東部的大雨引發(fā)了滑坡，歐洲南部的酷熱造成了 森林大火。 (has caused)
What’s more, heavy rain in Eastern Europe has caused landslides, and the heat across Southern Europe has caused forest fires.
3. 心情沉重地走出車(chē)站，我突然感受到清風(fēng)拂面。(with a heavy heart)
Stepping out of the station with a heavy heart, I suddenly feel a fresh wind on my face.
4. 2015年4月25日尼泊爾發(fā)生8.1級(jí)地震，是歷史上最糟糕的地震之一。(magnitude, hit)
The 8.1-magnitude earthquake that hit Nepal on 25 April 2015, was one of the worst earthquakes in history.
5. 一聽(tīng)到消息，中國(guó)迅速開(kāi)展組織緊急救助。(emergency aid)
On hearing the news, China was quick to start organizing emergency aid.
6. 1881年，臺(tái)風(fēng)襲擊了越南城市海防，這場(chǎng)風(fēng)暴造成了30萬(wàn)人死亡。(strike, Haiphong, cost the lives of)
In 1881, a typhoon struck the small Vietnamese city of Haiphong, costing the lives of up to 300,000 citizens.
7. 1972年2月3日，一場(chǎng)罕見(jiàn)的暴風(fēng)雪襲擊伊朗，造成一周極度低溫。(cause a week of )
On Feb.3, 1972, a rare blizzard hit Iran, causing a week of extremely low temperatures.
8. 這場(chǎng)暴風(fēng)雪帶來(lái)積雪深達(dá)7.9米，造成約4,000人喪生。（result in the deaths of ）
The snow storm brought as much as 7.9 metres of snow, resulting in the deaths of about 4,000 people.
III. 美文體驗(yàn)館
“Dad,” whispered Tariq, “Are you awake ” Dad opened his eyes. “What’s the matter, son ” Tariq couldn’t sleep and he felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. All day long he felt like something was about to happen. Dad whispered back to his son: “You could be right. Go back to bed, good boy.”
Tariq shook his head. “I’m going downstairs where it’s cooler. Why don’t you come with me ” dad refused, saying that he would stay there. Tariq went down the landing. He and his father were alone in the house. His mother and sister had gone to visit relatives. He went into the kitchen and lay on the floor. He felt cooler and fell asleep at last.
Suddenly he awoke with a shock. In the distance he could hear a roar, like thunder. It seemed to be coming closer and closer. The storm must have arrived, just as they expected. But this was no ordinary storm. Within seconds the whole house began to shake. The vase fell off the shelves with a crash. Tariq could feel the floor moving beneath him. What on earth was happening He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. It didn’t work. He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. Next moment a pile of bricks came down around him. A terrible choking smell filled the air.
At last the dust cleared. Tariq was amazed to find that he was still alive. The framework of the doorway must have saved him. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ”
No answer.
注意:
續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右;
請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。
But he heard a sniffed dog (搜救犬) barking. ______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”. ________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________
主題語(yǔ)境 人與自然
文章出處 Teen’s Space英語(yǔ)街：英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)1（原創(chuàng)試題06）
詞數(shù) 正文英文詞數(shù)271，續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段首句7個(gè)單詞，續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段首句9 個(gè)單詞。
What 故事脈絡(luò) (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1-2) One night, Tariq, together with Dad indoors, felt hot and realised something strange might happen.
Build-up (Para3) A terrible storm came and Tariq reacted, but he was trapped.
Climax (Para.4-5) Trapped, Tariq kept alive, but he couldn’t contact Dad.
Resolution (續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段) But he heard a sniffer dog barking.
Ending (續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段) “Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ”
Why 故事主題 自然災(zāi)害 (面對(duì)突如其來(lái)的地震，自救和被搜救)
How 寫(xiě)作手法 第三人稱(chēng)、記敘、描寫(xiě)
人物分析 Tariq Dad
1. He couldn’t sleep and felt that it was too hot. Maybe there’s a storm coming. 2. He jumped to his feet and tried to turn on the light. He reached the back door... 3. He called out, “Dad Dad, are you all right ” Tariq超前意識(shí)到有暴風(fēng)雨的發(fā)生。 Tariq反應(yīng)快，機(jī)智。 Tariq強(qiáng)烈的責(zé)任感，危機(jī)尚未解除，放心不下父親的安危。 Dad refused, saying that he would stay upstairs. No answer. Dad沒(méi)有聽(tīng)從Tariq的建議，沒(méi)有察覺(jué)到異常。 面對(duì)Tariq的呼叫，沒(méi)能回應(yīng)，生死未卜
場(chǎng)景 晚上，家中，遭遇地震
語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格 平實(shí)質(zhì)樸
伏筆/照應(yīng) Maybe there’s a storm coming .All day long he felt like something was about to happen. The storm must have arrived, just as they expected.
【素材積累】
Para. 1
1. whisper v.低語(yǔ)；耳語(yǔ)
whisper to sb.
Para. 2
1. shake one’s head 搖頭
2. go downstairs 下樓
3. Tariq went down the landing. (平臺(tái))
4. go to visit relatives 走親戚
5. fall asleep 熟睡
Para. 3
awake with a shock 驚醒
roar 咆哮
The storm must have arrived, just as they expected.(must have done情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的完成式表示對(duì)過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情的肯定推測(cè)，表示：“一定怎么了”；just as引導(dǎo)方式狀語(yǔ)從句，表示“正如”)
fall off 落下來(lái)
He reached the back door, but just then came a loud cracking noise. (句式：完全倒裝)
A terrible smell filled the air. (無(wú)靈主語(yǔ))
Para. 4
be amazed to find that...
The framework of the doorway must have saved him.
call out 大聲叫喊
【參考范文】
續(xù)寫(xiě)思路：
Para. 1：本文講述了Tariq和父親在悶熱的夜晚睡覺(jué)的時(shí)候，遭遇了地震，被搜救犬營(yíng)救的故事。續(xù)文第一段提示語(yǔ)告知“他聽(tīng)到了搜救犬的叫聲”，此段可寫(xiě)他被搜救犬營(yíng)救的過(guò)程。
Para. 2：根據(jù)續(xù)文第二段提示語(yǔ)可知， 作者的父親還沒(méi)有被找到，那么第二段就可寫(xiě)搜救父親的過(guò)程和父子團(tuán)聚的場(chǎng)景。
But he heard a sniffer dog barking. He struggled to know what was going on outside, but he couldn’t move. Maybe someone was approaching here. “Are they my family Or my relatives ” without any more thought, Tariq determined to call for help. “Help! Help! I’m here! Help!” Then came a burst of footsteps and noise, nearer and nearer. The dog barked more fiercely, and somebody called out: “Here! Someone is alive!” Later, someone began to dig the ruins, which buried Tariq entirely. Gradually, a large thread of torch light came to Tariq’s eyes/
“Thanks for saving me, but where is my dad ” Nobody replied. “Where did your dad stay when the earthquake came ” One man asked Tariq. Tariq tried to point to the right spot where his dad was sleeping. And immediately the dog was ordered to search for anyone alive. A few minutes later, surprising shouts passed along, “Dad is here! Here!” “Hold on! Don’t fall asleep!” They cried. When his dad was carried to him, Tariq could hardly recognize him, for his dad was covered with mud all over the body. But Tariq ran to hug his dad firmly for a long time.
IV 技能鍛造營(yíng)
Apostrophe (頓呼), 即：發(fā)出呼語(yǔ)。
定義一：指在演說(shuō)、抒情文章中或詩(shī)歌中突然用第二人稱(chēng)對(duì)不在場(chǎng)的人或?qū)M人的事物發(fā)出呼語(yǔ)的一種修辭方式。
定義二：對(duì)一個(gè)人（通常是不在場(chǎng)的人）或一個(gè)人格化的物發(fā)出的稱(chēng)呼，通常借助感嘆詞“哦，啊”等表現(xiàn)，屬于獨(dú)立成分。
例如：
“Ugh, Weibo, why won’t you load my messages ” “啊，微博，你為什么不加載我的消息？”
“Hold on, my son’s driving me crazy---Robert, come back here, stop running with a knife.”
(與人通話(huà)中) 別掛線(xiàn)，我的兒子讓我抓狂---羅伯特，快給我過(guò)來(lái)，不要拿著刀到處跑。”

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