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天一大聯(lián)考2024-2025學(xué)年（上）高一年級期末考試
第二節(jié)（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
After six months of searching, I hadn’t found a car for my sixteen-year-old son Marcus, who just wanted a black car. Everything I’d seen required repairs, was a different color, or went above our $7,000 budget.
My drive to work was almost an hour each day and I often stayed late. Marcus’s dad, Robert, suffered from a serious illness and hardly drove. Marcus needed to attend daily football practice, weekly team meetings and dinners, as well as other after-school activities, forcing him to take rides with friends.
One evening, Marcus arrived home in a teammate’s new black car. When the teammate DaVaris rolled down the window to say hello, that new-car smell got into the air. I bent inside to look at the brown, soft leather seats.
“Very nice,” I said.
His face brightened with pride. “Thanks. Marcus said you were looking for a car.”
“ I’m sure we’ll find something soon,” I spoke with confidence I didn’t feel. It wouldn’t be a new car, for sure. I turned to Marcus. An eager look crossed his face as Davaris waved and backed out of the driveway. That look hurt my heart.
The next day, I ran into the mother of one of Marcus’s classmates- a doctor. The family had also been trying to find a car for their son. “ One of my patients wants to sell his car, but my son doesn’t like it,” She told me. I asked what type of car, and it turned out to be at the top of my wish list. “ Can you arrange for me to see it ”
The next day, Robert and I went to the home of the elderly man who was selling the car. It was shiny black, with hardly a scratch. It only covered 12,000 miles although it was six years old! Having experienced so many failures before, I was almost afraid to test-drive it. But the engine made a normal sound and the speeding was smooth. This car had been well maintained(保養(yǎng)). There remained one question, a big one- the price.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Back at the owner’s house, we climbed our of the car.
Paragraph 2: It was the exact amount(金額) we’d saved!
第二節(jié)（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
After six months of searching, I hadn’t found a car for my sixteen-year-old son Marcus, who just wanted a black car(定從). Everything I’d seen(定從) required repairs(非謂語動詞做后置定語), was a different color, or went above our $7,000 budget.
My drive to work was almost an hour each day and I often stayed late. Marcus’s dad, Robert, suffered from a serious illness and hardly drove. Marcus needed to attend daily football practice, weekly team meetings and dinners, as well as other after-school activities, forcing him to take rides with friends(非謂語動詞做結(jié)果狀語).
One evening, Marcus arrived home in a teammate’s new black car. When the teammate DaVaris rolled down the window to say hello, that new-car smell got into the air. I bent inside to look at the brown, soft leather seats.
“Very nice,” I said.
His face brightened with pride. “Thanks. Marcus said you were looking for a car(賓從).”
“ I’m sure we’ll find something soon(賓從),” I spoke with confidence I didn’t feel(定從). It wouldn’t be a new car, for sure. I turned to Marcus. An eager look crossed his face as Davaris waved and backed out of the driveway(狀從). That look hurt my heart.
The next day, I ran into the mother of one of Marcus’s classmates- a doctor. The family had also been trying to find a car for their son. “ One of my patients wants to sell his car, but my son doesn’t like it,” She told me. I asked what type of car(賓從), and it turned out to be at the top of my wish list. “ Can you arrange for me to see it ”
The next day, Robert and I went to the home of the elderly man who was selling the car(定從). It was shiny black, with hardly a scratch. It only covered 12,000 miles although it was six years old(狀從)! Having experienced so many failures before, I was almost afraid to test-drive it. But the engine made a normal sound and the speeding was smooth. This car had been well maintained(保養(yǎng)). There remained one question, a big one- the price.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Back at the owner’s house, we climbed our of the car.
Paragraph 2: It was the exact amount(金額) we’d saved!
1. 續(xù)寫分析（表格）
分析角度 內(nèi)容 原文反應(yīng)句
類型 家庭情感類讀后續(xù)寫 “Marcus needed to attend daily football practice...”
思路構(gòu)思 構(gòu)思重點(diǎn)為展現(xiàn)母親對兒子的愛與努力，圍繞母親尋找汽車的過程，著重情感轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)與人物心理活動。布局包括矛盾沖突（預(yù)算有限與兒子需求的矛盾）、情感轉(zhuǎn)折（意外獲得黑車的機(jī)會）、解決沖突（最終買到滿意的汽車）。 “Marcus arrived home in a teammate’s new black car. That look hurt my heart.”
框架提煉 - 開頭：描述母親對兒子的擔(dān)憂和努力；
- 中間：圍繞與醫(yī)生母親的對話展開情節(jié)；
- 結(jié)尾：以解決沖突并讓兒子感到滿足為高潮。 “I’m sure we’ll find something soon,” I spoke with confidence I didn’t feel.
實(shí)施 使用“故事山”模式：
- 起點(diǎn)：找車失敗，陷入困境；
- 上升：得知有一輛車可買；
- 高潮：見到車后發(fā)現(xiàn)完美符合需求；
- 下降：價(jià)格談判；
- 解決：買車成功并滿足情感需求。 “Having experienced so many failures before, I was almost afraid to test-drive it.”
承接事項(xiàng) - 人物心情銜接：母親的憂慮到滿足；
- 語言銜接：保留對Marcus期待的細(xì)節(jié)描寫；
- 情節(jié)銜接：黑車線索與預(yù)算線索融合。 “An eager look crossed his face as Davaris waved and backed out of the driveway.”
設(shè)計(jì)內(nèi)容 巧妙設(shè)計(jì)車主背景（如老人對汽車的感情），加入更多心理和環(huán)境描寫，如“握著方向盤時(shí)的猶豫”，增強(qiáng)代入感。 “It was shiny black, with hardly a scratch. It only covered 12,000 miles although it was six years old!”
2. Story Mountain 思維導(dǎo)圖分析
Story Mountain
起點(diǎn)：家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)有限，買車需求迫切。
原文句子：“I hadn’t found a car for my sixteen-year-old son Marcus.”
上升：遇到醫(yī)生母親，得知有機(jī)會買到車。
原文句子：“One of my patients wants to sell his car.”
高潮：見到黑車，符合所有期待。
原文句子：“It was shiny black, with hardly a scratch.”
下降：價(jià)格懸念。
原文句子：“There remained one question, a big one—the price.”
解決：最終價(jià)格正好符合預(yù)算。
原文句子：“It was the exact amount we’d saved!”
3. 英文例句與高級替換詞
情境描寫例句
動作描寫
She clenched her fists, her heart pounding with anticipation.
He ran his fingers across the shiny black surface of the car.
She hesitated before opening the car door, her fingers trembling slightly.
He nodded eagerly, unable to hide his excitement.
She let out a long sigh, relief washing over her.
He adjusted his posture, sitting straighter with a determined look.
Her eyes darted around the room, searching for a sign of approval.
He pressed his foot on the gas pedal gently, feeling the smooth acceleration.
心理描寫
A mixture of doubt and hope swirled in her mind.
He couldn’t shake off the nervous feeling in his chest.
Her mind raced through possibilities, trying to make a decision.
A wave of excitement crashed over him, leaving him breathless.
She battled her inner fears, determined to make the right choice.
His heart sank at the thought of yet another failure.
Relief flooded her as she realized everything had worked out.
The weight of uncertainty lifted, leaving her feeling lighter.
環(huán)境描寫
The sun glinted off the car’s polished surface, casting long shadows on the driveway.
The faint smell of leather lingered in the air, adding to the luxury of the car’s interior.
A cool breeze rustled the leaves, creating a calm and peaceful atmosphere.
The small, neat garage was filled with the faint scent of motor oil.
The quiet hum of the engine filled the space, a soothing rhythm.
The evening light bathed the driveway in warm hues of orange and pink.
The old man’s house stood in a serene neighborhood, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The faint sound of birds chirping broke the stillness of the moment.
高級替換詞
場景 常用單詞 高級替換
描述情緒 happy overjoyed, elated
sad heartbroken, despondent
nervous jittery, apprehensive
描述動作 walk stride, saunter
look gaze, glance
環(huán)境描述 beautiful picturesque, breathtaking
quiet serene, tranquil
4. 高中語法現(xiàn)象與語料積累
語法現(xiàn)象 例句 分析
過去完成時(shí) “Having experienced so many failures before, I was almost afraid to test-drive it.” 表達(dá)動作完成的先后順序，用于突出母親之前的挫折經(jīng)歷。
定語從句 “It was shiny black, with hardly a scratch, which made me fall in love with it.” “which” 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，補(bǔ)充說明汽車外觀的吸引力。
現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語 “An eager look crossing his face, Marcus waved at his friend.” 描寫Marcus神態(tài)與動作，同時(shí)表現(xiàn)人物心理。
名詞性從句 “What touched me most was Marcus’s eager expression.” “What” 引導(dǎo)主語從句，表達(dá)觸動母親的具體情感。
虛擬語氣 “If it hadn’t been for the doctor, we wouldn’t have found the car.” 表達(dá)假設(shè)情況，突出醫(yī)生母親的重要作用。
生詞短語積累
budget (n.) 預(yù)算
Synonyms: allowance, allocation
Antonyms: overspend
Example: She set a strict budget for her son’s car.
scratch (n.) 劃痕
Synonyms: mark, blemish
Antonyms: perfection
Example: The car was shiny black, with hardly a scratch.
Possible Answers
Version 1:
Paragraph 1: Back at the owner’s house, we climbed out of the car. Having thoroughly inspected the vehicle(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作), I exchanged a nervous glance with Robert. The elderly man smiled warmly, gesturing us into his living room(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). “I’ve kept it well-maintained for years,” he said, a trace of nostalgia in his voice(獨(dú)立主格). After a brief pause, he named the price: $7,000. My heart skipped a beat—it was exactly our budget. For a moment, disbelief rendered me speechless. Marcus’s longing face flashed in my mind, and I felt a sense of relief wash over me. “We’ll take it,” I said firmly. The elderly man’s eyes lit up as he handed me the keys(狀從). Driving home later(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作), I imagined Marcus’s reaction. The thought of his joy made every struggle worth it.
Paragraph 2: It was the exact amount we’d saved(定從)! The next morning, Marcus’s excitement knew no bounds when he saw the shiny black car(狀從) parked(非謂語動詞做后置定語) in our driveway. His eyes widened, and he looked at me in sheer amazement. “Is this...for me ” he stammered. “Every bit of it(習(xí)語),” I replied with a smile. He ran his fingers across the polished surface, his grin growing wider(獨(dú)立主格). Marcus eagerly climbed inside, adjusting the rearview mirror(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作) as if it were his throne(狀從). The sunlit morning reflected off the car’s spotless windows(環(huán)境描寫), symbolizing a fresh start(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作). As I watched him drive off to football practice(狀從), his enthusiasm was contagious. For the first time in months, I felt a profound sense of fulfillment, knowing that love and persistence had won the day(賓從).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Back at the owner’s house, we climbed out of the car. The old man poured us tea, his voice kind(獨(dú)立主格) as he shared stories about the car's past(狀從). “This car brought me great joy,” he said, his hands trembling slightly(獨(dú)立主格). When he revealed the price, my breath caught(獨(dú)立主格)—$7,000, precisely what we had saved(同位從). It felt like fate. Robert, usually reserved(adj做補(bǔ)語), whispered, “We must take it.” Signing the paperwork(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作), I felt a wave of gratitude for this unexpected gift. On the drive back, the smooth hum of the engine and the sight of the setting sun painted the perfect scene(環(huán)境描寫). I couldn’t wait to reveal the surprise to Marcus, imagining his wide smile and disbelief(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作) when he finally saw the car of his dreams(狀從).
Paragraph 2: It was the exact amount we’d saved! I called Marcus to the driveway that evening. He stepped out hesitantly, and when his eyes landed on the black car(狀從), they lit up like fireworks. “It’s yours,” I said softly. He froze for a moment, then sprinted toward me, wrapping me in a tight hug(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作). “Thank you, Mom!” His voice cracked with emotion. Watching him inspect the interior with awe, I noticed the burden of our past struggles lift. That night, Marcus washed the car under the moonlight, humming happily(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作). Though the journey to this moment had been tough(狀從), it was worth every sleepless night. The memory of his joy was a reminder of the power of perseverance and love.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Back at the owner’s house, we climbed out of the car. The elderly man, leaning slightly on his cane(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作), motioned us to his porch. “This car has been my pride,” he said, his tone tinged with nostalgia(獨(dú)立主格). “But I’d rather see a young boy enjoy it now.” The price—$7,000—was a miracle. As relief coursed through me(狀從), I eagerly handed over the money. “It’ll be in good hands,” I promised. Driving home(非謂語動詞短做時(shí)間狀語), I couldn’t stop smiling. The engine purred like a dream, and every turn of the wheel filled me with anticipation for Marcus’s reaction(細(xì)節(jié)描寫心理環(huán)境). This car wasn’t just a gift; it was proof of our hard work, a promise fulfilled.
Paragraph 2: It was the exact amount we’d saved! The next morning, Marcus stumbled outside, rubbing his sleepy eyes(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作). When he saw the black car(狀從), he froze, mouth agape(獨(dú)立主格). “No way...” he whispered, then broke into a run, touching the car(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作) as if to confirm it was real(狀從+賓從). His joy was contagious, and I laughed as he bounced around like a little kid(人物描寫). “It’s perfect, Mom!” he exclaimed, opening the door and sliding into the driver’s seat.(非謂語動詞短做伴隨動作) He glanced at me through the window, his gratitude unspoken but clear in his expression(獨(dú)立主格). As he drove off to practice(狀從), I stood there, the morning breeze carrying a sense of quiet triumph(狀從). This moment would be etched in my heart forever.
亮點(diǎn)語法和詞匯分析
高級語法現(xiàn)象
過去完成時(shí)：
Example: "Having thoroughly inspected the vehicle, I exchanged a nervous glance with Robert."
Usage: 表示在過去某一動作之前已經(jīng)完成的動作，提升時(shí)間邏輯表達(dá)。
Related phrases: "Having experienced," "Having decided."
非限制性定語從句：
Example: "The sunlit morning reflected off the car’s spotless windows, symbolizing a fresh start."
Usage: 補(bǔ)充說明畫面細(xì)節(jié)，增加生動性。
Synonyms: "which indicated," "that revealed."
分詞短語作狀語：
Example: "Driving home later, I imagined Marcus’s reaction."
Usage: 表示時(shí)間、原因或伴隨狀態(tài)，減少句子冗長。
Related phrases: "Smiling softly," "Feeling relieved."
亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語
情緒描寫
lit up with joy: 表示愉快
heart skipped a beat: 表示緊張或期待
eyes widened in amazement: 表示震驚
felt a wave of gratitude: 表示感激
動作描寫
ran his fingers across: 表示動作細(xì)節(jié)
froze for a moment: 表示震驚
wrapped me in a tight hug: 表示情感流露
bounced around like a little kid: 生動展現(xiàn)動作
升級詞匯選項(xiàng)
普通詞 高級替換 聯(lián)想詞 例句
happy elated, overjoyed delighted, ecstatic "She was overjoyed at the unexpected gift."
surprised astonished shocked, stunned "He was astonished by the car’s condition."
sad despondent heartbroken, forlorn "She felt despondent after repeated failures."
car vehicle automobile, ride "The vehicle gleamed under the sunlight."
官方：
Back at the owner’s house, we climbed out of the car. “ How much are you asking ” I steeled myself for the man’s answer. He studied his car(這個(gè)詞真好) as if unwilling to part with it(狀從壓縮). He explained he was already ninety-three and that his family wanted him to quit driving for the sake of safety(賓從). He placed a hand on the car to steady himself. His stare met mine. “This car is worth more than what I’m asking(賓從). But I’ll let you have it for $7,000.”
It was the exact amount we’d saved! A block formed in my throat(情緒描寫) as I extended my hand(狀從). “Deal.” I went to the bank and withdrew the money to pay him. Robert drove our car home. Less than an hour before Marcus returned home, I hid the car in the garage. When he arrived(狀從), I opened the garage door. Sunlight reflected from the black car(環(huán)境描寫). Just as I brought the camera to my eye(狀從), Marcus turned to me with a wide smile and a double thumbs-up. Click! I caught that moment of joy.
Dear Tom,
How have you been lately I’m preparing for an English speech competition with the topic of “Nothing is out of reach for the youth”. It will be held in our school hall next month.
I’ve been working hard on it. I’ve collected a lot of inspiring stories about young people achieving great things. However, I’m facing some difficulties. I have trouble expressing my ideas precisely in English and making my speech vivid and attractive. Also, I get really nervous when thinking about speaking in front of a large audience.
I know you are excellent at public speaking. Could you share some tips on how to improve my language expression and overcome my anxiety I would be extremely grateful for your help.
yours, Lihua.

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