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記敘文——人與社會——以足球會友（B2U3）
I spent my childhood in a small town. At that time I was crazy about football as much as all the other boys. I spent every spare moment kicking a ball around.
Our town's football team wasn't anything special. We lacked proper training facilities, and no one really knew who we were. But none of that mattered to me. My teammates and I were determined. Every day after school, we gathered to practice, driven by the dream of one day competing in a major tournament(聯賽). But so far, we hadn't even played a single match against another team.
One day, after practice, I was walking home when something unusual caught my eye. Something red was swinging on the branches of an old maple tree. Curious, I walked closer and saw it was a bright red balloon.
The balloon still had a long string attached, and at the end of the string, there was a plastic bag. To my surprise, the bag wasn't empty. Inside, I found a small piece of paper folded neatly into a square. I unfolded it and discovered a letter. It read:
Dear Friend,
If you have found this letter, it means my balloon finally popped. I used the balloon to see how far my letter would travel. I launched it from Orange County on May 1. I'm a super football lover. If you would like to be my pen-pal, please write back to me. Enclosed is my address.
Sincerely,
Joe
I couldn't believe it. Orange County was about twenty miles away, so the balloon had traveled quite a distance. More excitingly, Joe loved football as well!
注意：
(1)續寫詞數應為120個左右；
(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
I hurried home to write back to Joe. _______________________________________________
The day when the two teams would meet finally arrived. ______________________________
文章大意 “我”童年在小鎮生活，熱愛足球，所在球隊雖條件簡陋，但懷揣參加大賽的夢想堅持訓練。一天訓練后，“我”在路邊楓樹上發現一個氣球，氣球上系著裝有信的塑料袋，寫信人喬來自二十英里外的橘郡，也是足球愛好者，希望與撿到信的人成為筆友。這一發現讓“我”驚喜不已，因為找到了志同道合的朋友。
故事山分析
開端：“我” 在小鎮熱愛足球，球隊條件差但堅持訓練，渴望參賽。
發展：“我” 發現氣球中的信，得知喬是遠方熱愛足球的人，兩人開始通信。
高潮：喬所在球隊與 “我” 所在球隊約定比賽，比賽當天緊張又期待。
結局：兩隊比賽，賽出風采，通過足球增進了彼此的友誼，實現以球會友。
伏筆及在續寫中的回應
伏筆：“I spent every spare moment kicking a ball around.” 表明 “我” 對足球的熱愛程度。
回應：續寫中，“我” 與喬因足球結緣，“我” 也積極為與喬所在球隊的比賽做準備，這份熱愛貫穿始終。
伏筆：“Our town's football team wasn't anything special. We lacked proper training facilities” 體現球隊條件差。
回應：盡管條件差，但 “我” 和隊友并未放棄，在與喬所在球隊比賽時，依然全力以赴，展現出克服困難的決心。
伏筆：“My teammates and I were determined. Every day after school, we gathered to practice” 說明 “我” 和隊友的堅持。
回應：為了與喬所在球隊的比賽，大家更加努力訓練，延續了這份堅持。
伏筆：“More excitingly, Joe loved football as well!” 突出兩人共同的興趣。
回應：這成為兩人通信和后續約定比賽的基礎，在比賽中更是增進了彼此的友誼。
伏筆：“I used the balloon to see how far my letter would travel. I launched it from Orange County on May 1.” 說明喬通過氣球傳遞信件的行為。
回應：這一獨特的方式開啟了兩人的聯系，在后續的交流中，喬和 “我” 都對這次奇妙的相遇倍感珍惜。
續寫要點
第一段續寫：我急忙回到家就給喬寫信。——本段續寫的關鍵在于1.表達對于陌生且有相同愛好的“筆友”的激動心情；2.彼此交換信息并提出約球的想法（對接二段）——參考詞匯有：crazy about football；teammates；dream of one day；play a single game；match；Joe
第二段續寫：兩支球隊相見之日終于來了。——本段續寫的關鍵在于體現真正的比賽精神——友誼第一——參考詞匯有：red balloon；teammate；Joe
情感線
發現信件時，“我” 感到驚喜與興奮，因為找到了有共同愛好的朋友。在通信過程中，友誼逐漸加深，對彼此的期待也越來越高。得知要比賽時，興奮中夾雜著緊張，期待在賽場上展現實力。比賽結束后，無論勝負，都因這場以球會友的經歷感到滿足，友誼得到進一步升華，從最初的筆友情誼發展為志同道合的球友之情。
故事線
“我” 在小鎮熱愛足球，球隊條件差但堅持訓練。
“我” 發現氣球中的信，結識喬，兩人開始通信。
隨著交流加深，喬和 “我” 約定讓各自球隊進行比賽。
“我” 和隊友為比賽努力訓練，積極準備。
比賽當天，雙方球隊全力以赴，賽出風采。
比賽結束，兩隊通過足球增進了友誼，實現以球會友。
主旨升華句
Football is not just a sport; it's a bridge that connects hearts and builds lasting friendships across distances.
Through the shared passion for football, we can break down barriers and form bonds that transcend geographical boundaries.
The beauty of football lies not only in the goals scored but also in the friendships forged on the field.
In the world of football, a simple balloon - borne letter can spark a journey of friendship and mutual understanding.
Our love for football unites us, turning strangers into allies and creating memories that will last a lifetime.
寫作示范
示范一
I hurried home to write back to Joe. With excitement coursing through my veins, I poured my heart onto the paper. I told him all about our small - town football team, how we trained with enthusiasm despite the lack of proper facilities, and our burning desire to play in big tournaments. I also expressed my eagerness to share more football stories with him. Days later, I received his reply, and our correspondence became a regular thing. As time passed, we decided to arrange a friendly match between our two teams.
The day when the two teams would meet finally arrived. The field was filled with an electric atmosphere. Both teams were fired up. We ran, passed, and shot with all our might. The game was intense, with neither side willing to yield. Despite our limited skills compared to theirs, we didn't back down. After the match, regardless of the result, we all gathered, sharing laughter and stories. Our love for football had brought us together, and a beautiful friendship was blossoming.
示范二
I hurried home to write back to Joe. I described in detail our daily training sessions, the challenges we faced, and the funny moments during practice. I couldn't wait to send it, imagining his reaction. When his reply came, we started chatting about our football idols and favorite plays. Eventually, we planned a match.
The day when the two teams would meet finally arrived. The stands were filled with cheering spectators. Our team took to the field with determination. Joe's team was strong, but we held our own. The players on both sides displayed amazing teamwork. Every pass, every tackle was filled with passion. At the end of the game, we shook hands, congratulating each other. Through this match, our friendship grew deeper, and we knew that football had given us something truly special.
參考答案
I hurried home to write back to Joe. In the letter, I found it hard to control my exciting feeling, for the reason that I couldn’t believe about twenty miles away from us, there did exist a boy, like me and my teammates, crazy about football. I also told Joe about our situation, especially our dream of one day playing a single game. So I suggested a match to Joe. And excitingly, I received another letter very soon, telling me “no problem.”（4句）
The day when the two teams would meet finally arrived. At first, my teammates, including me, had butterflies in our stomachs. But the moment we both sides stepped on the field/pitch, it was only excitement to perform our skills and cooperation that really mattered, with nervousness disappearing immediately. After 90-minute fierce competition, we drew with Joe’s team. We didn’t care about the result, but were indulged in this unbelievable experience, because no one but Joe and me knew that all owed to the red balloon.（4句）
錦言妙語積累：
1.it形式賓語：found it hard to control my exciting feeling
2.it與強調句：it was only excitement to perform our skills and cooperation that really mattered
3.謂語的強調：there did exist
4.同位語從句：for the reason that
5.非謂語做定語：I received another letter very soon, telling me “no problem.”；excitement to perform our skills and cooperation
6.緊張：had butterflies in our stomachs
7.沉浸于：were indulged in

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