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山東省煙臺市2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期期末學(xué)業(yè)水平考試英語試題
第二節(jié)（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her. It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments with her high school classmates. Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel. She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes, Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave. “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye, she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital, could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say, “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small. It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family. Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth.
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day when her father went for his camera because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony.
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief, having tried turning it on several times and failed. “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.

Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera(狀從省略) that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her(定從). It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments(目的狀語) with her high school classmates. Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel(介詞短語做時間狀語). She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes(獨立主格), Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave(adj做主語補語). “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye, she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital(adj修飾不定代詞放其后), could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say(動作串), “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small(adj做后置定語). It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family. Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this(非謂語動詞做原因狀語), Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth.
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day(倒裝) when her father went for his camera(定從) because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony(定從).
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief, having tried turning it on several times and failed(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.

Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
1. 按高考英語讀后續(xù)寫要求，對該文章進行分類
分類 類型分析
類型 情感類（家庭責任與親情）
續(xù)寫思路構(gòu)思 本篇文章續(xù)寫重點在于情感的逐步解開和父女關(guān)系的修復(fù)。續(xù)寫中要注重情感的轉(zhuǎn)折和人物心理的變化，展示Jade逐漸面對責任、勇敢認錯的過程，以及父親的理解和寬容。
布局與框架提煉 續(xù)寫的結(jié)構(gòu)可以分為兩個部分：第一部分是Jade鼓起勇氣與父親對話；第二部分是父親的寬容和溫情展示。
實施 首先描述Jade內(nèi)心的掙扎，接著讓她鼓起勇氣去和父親談?wù)撌д`，再展示父親的寬容。
承接原文的事項 1. 保持Jade對父親的愧疚感； 2. 繼續(xù)強調(diào)相機的情感價值； 3. 注意過渡情感變化，從悔惱到坦誠；
整體注意事項 1. 語言要簡潔且富有感情； 2. 保持人物心理狀態(tài)的一致性； 3. 通過動作和心理描寫體現(xiàn)情感的變化。
巧妙設(shè)計續(xù)寫內(nèi)容 在續(xù)寫中要通過Jade的內(nèi)心獨白、父親的反應(yīng)來推動情感的發(fā)展，并用對話推動故事的走向。
2. 故事山模式分析
階段 內(nèi)容分析 原文反應(yīng)句
開端 Jade不小心摔壞了父親最愛的相機。 "Unbelievable," Jade screamed while examining her camera.
上升 Jade不敢面對父親，決定將相機放回父親的抽屜里，避免父親發(fā)現(xiàn)。 "Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer."
高潮 Jade擔心父親會責怪她。 "Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again."
下降 Jade準備坦誠告訴父親，但仍感到內(nèi)心矛盾。 "Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer."
結(jié)局 父親發(fā)現(xiàn)相機故障后，母親安慰他，Jade開始下定決心要面對問題。 "Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one."
3. 續(xù)寫時可以與原文銜接的內(nèi)容分析
分析角度 內(nèi)容 原文反應(yīng)句
人物刻畫 Jade為家庭成員感到愧疚，父親則沉浸在對相機的珍視中。 "It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family."
情感層次 Jade的內(nèi)心充滿自責，而父親則無法理解相機的損壞。 "What’s wrong with my camera "
關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點 Jade決定面對自己的錯誤并主動與父親交流。 "Jade gathered up her courage."
語言特色 使用簡單卻富有感情的對話，展現(xiàn)父女之間的情感沖突與和解。 "Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one."
心理描寫 Jade的心理由自責到勇敢告知真相，再到獲得父親的理解。 "Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes, Jade gathered her belongings..."
動作描寫 Jade的內(nèi)心活動通過她的動作傳達，如放回相機、收拾東西等。 "She held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel."
環(huán)境描寫 描述環(huán)境通過影響人物情感變化，如海灘、家庭場景的描述。 "She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments..."
隱含主題 面對錯誤的責任，勇敢承擔并獲得親人的寬容。 "It’s beyond repair."
4. 續(xù)寫所需的動作、心理、環(huán)境描寫推薦英文例句
場景 動作描寫 心理描寫 環(huán)境描寫
緊張時刻 Jade nervously paced around the room. Jade felt her heart racing with guilt. The room was dimly lit, casting long shadows across the floor.
安慰對話 Father gently put a hand on Jade’s shoulder. Jade tried to calm herself, taking deep breaths. The soft glow of the kitchen light filled the space with warmth.
反思時刻 Jade stared at the broken camera for a long time. She felt a lump rise in her throat as memories of her father’s love for the camera flooded her mind. The quiet hum of the air conditioner filled the silence between them.
解開心結(jié) Jade slowly walked up to her father with the camera in her hand. Jade’s chest tightened with fear as she prepared to confess. The sunlight streamed through the window, illuminating their faces.
5. 文章中的語法現(xiàn)象分析
語法現(xiàn)象 例句 搭配/近義詞
時態(tài) "Jade gathered up her courage." Simple past tense showing a completed action.
情態(tài)動詞 "Maybe it’s too old to work." "Could" for possibility, "Should" for advice.
條件句 "If you want to fix it, you need to try harder." "If" clauses to show cause and effect.
感嘆句 "Unbelievable!" "How incredible!"
6. 高考核心詞匯分析
單詞 詞性 詞義 近義詞 聯(lián)想詞 例句
resigned 形容詞 順從的，聽天由命的 patient, tolerant acceptance, forbearance Jade gave her a resigned look when she realized the camera was broken.
treasure 名詞 寶藏，珍品 gem, valuable item precious, keepsake The camera was a treasure that Jade’s father cherished for years.
guilt 名詞 內(nèi)疚，愧疚 remorse, shame blame, regret Jade’s guilt made it hard for her to face her father.
comfort 動詞 安慰，撫慰 console, soothe reassurance, solace Her mother comforted her, telling her everything would be okay.
treasure 動詞 珍愛，珍藏 value, cherish protect, hold dear Jade's father treasured the camera for its memories.
Possible Answers
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. She had been avoiding the truth for days, but now it was time to come clean. With a deep breath(介詞短語做狀語), she walked to the living room where her father was sitting(定從), staring at the broken camera(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). "Dad," she began, her voice shaking slightly(獨立主格), "I need to tell you something about the camera." Her father looked up at her, a mixture of confusion and concern on his face(名詞短語做補語). Jade’s heart raced, but she forced herself to continue. "I accidentally dropped it in the water during the barbecue, and I couldn’t fix it." She braced herself for his anger, but to her surprise, her father’s expression softened. He reached out and placed a hand on her shoulder. "Thank you for telling me," he said, his voice calm(獨立主格).
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. Her father had left a note: “For capturing all our moments, just like the old camera.” Jade’s eyes filled with tears as she realized(狀從) that her father wasn’t angry at her(賓從). He understood that accidents happened, and he was willing to move on. As she picked up the phone(狀從), her father entered the room and smiled. "I know you’ll make up for it by capturing even more memories with this one." Jade felt a weight lift off her shoulders(補語), knowing her mistake had been forgiven(賓從) and that her father trusted her once more(賓從 that不可省).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. Her hands trembled as she reached for the camera(狀從), the truth bubbling inside her(獨立主格). She knew she couldn’t avoid it forever(賓從). "Dad," she said, her voice barely above a whisper(獨立主格), "I’m really sorry, but I ruined your camera." Her father looked at her, a trace of confusion in his eyes. Jade’s throat tightened as she continued(狀從), "I took it to the beach and accidentally dropped it in the water. I tried to fix it, but it’s beyond repair(原文銜接)." Silence filled the room, and for a moment, Jade feared her father would be furious(賓從). But to her relief, he simply sighed and gave her a gentle smile. "I guess these things happen(賓從)," he said softly. "Thank you for telling me."
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. A note accompanied it: “For the moments that matter, no matter what.” Jade picked up the phone, feeling(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) a wave of gratitude wash over her(賓從). Her father’s forgiveness meant more to her than any camera could(比較狀從). She knew she had made a mistake(賓從), but his willingness to move forward was a lesson in itself. As she glanced at the phone, her father appeared in the doorway. "Let’s start capturing some new memories together," he said, a twinkle in his eye(獨立主格). Jade smiled, feeling a renewed sense of connection with her family(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. She had been holding on to the guilt for days, but now it was time to face it. "Dad," she began, "there’s something I need to tell you(定從) about the camera." Her father looked up from his chair, his expression filled with curiosity(獨立主格). Jade hesitated for a moment before continuing, "I’m really sorry, but I accidentally dropped it in the water. I didn’t mean to ruin it, but it’s broken now." Her father’s face showed no anger, only a quiet sadness. "I know how much that camera meant to you(賓從)," Jade added, her voice full of regret(賓從). To her surprise, her father smiled faintly and said, "It’s okay, Jade. Accidents happen."
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. Attached to it was a simple note: "For new memories." Jade felt a sense of relief wash over her(賓從). She had been afraid of her father’s anger, but his understanding had put her at ease. As she held the phone in her hands(狀從), she realized that the camera was a symbol of her family’s cherished memories, but it was the people in her life that truly mattered(定從). Her father came into the room and smiled. "Let’s create new moments together," he said warmly. Jade nodded, knowing that forgiveness had allowed them to move forward(賓從).
語法加分點分析
虛擬語氣（Subjunctive Mood）
搭配：I wish, If only, It's time
同義替換：I hope, I regret
例句：
If only I had been more careful, the camera wouldn’t have been ruined.
I wish I could have prevented this from happening.
倒裝句（Inversion）
搭配：Never before, Not only... but also
同義替換：Rarely, Seldom
例句：
Never before had Jade felt so guilty about an accident.
Not only did her father forgive her, but he also showed her compassion.
情態(tài)動詞（Modal Verbs）
搭配：could have, might have, must have
同義替換：should have, would have
例句：
Jade could have been more careful with the camera.
Her father must have understood it was an accident.
情緒與動作描寫亮點詞匯
情緒描寫：
Tears of sadness (悲傷的眼淚), relief (寬慰), guilt (內(nèi)疚)
升級替換：
Sadness → grief → sorrow
Relief → comfort → ease
動作描寫：
Gathered her courage (鼓起勇氣), placed a hand on her shoulder (搭上肩膀), picked up the phone (拿起手機)
升級替換：
Gathered her courage → summoned her bravery → mustered her resolve
Pick up → take → grasp
語料積累與升級替換選項
短語升級：
To face the truth → confront the reality → come to terms with
Move forward → progress → advance
常見詞匯替換：
Forgiveness → absolution → pardon
Accident → mishap → incident
情緒描寫亮點詞匯：
Guilt: "Her voice quivered with guilt."
Surprise: "To Jade's surprise, he smiled."
Disappointment: "She could already imagine his disappointment."
動作描寫亮點詞匯：
Gathered up her courage: "She took a deep breath, steeling herself for the difficult conversation."
Steeling herself: "Every step felt like a mountain."
Placed: "She slowly walked to her father's study and placed the broken camera on his desk."
情緒描寫亮點詞匯：
Guilt: "Her voice barely above a whisper."
Relief: "I wasn’t upset with you, Jade."
Regret: "I’m so sorry."
動作描寫亮點詞匯：
Walked slowly: "She walked slowly towards her father."
Paused: "She paused at the door."
Took a deep breath: "Jade took a deep breath."
情緒描寫亮點詞匯：
Guilt: "The weight of her actions was overwhelming."
Relief: "I’m not mad."
Regret: "I ruined your camera."
動作描寫亮點詞匯：
Hesitated: "Jade hesitated, then placed the camera in front of him."
Looked at her: "He reached out and patted her hand."
高中語法加分點分析
語法點 例句 搭配/近義詞替換
虛擬語氣 "I knew something was wrong with it." "I had a feeling something was wrong."
過去完成時 "I had dropped your camera into the ocean." "I had ruined your camera."
定語從句 "The camera, which was a gift from my mother, had been ruined." "The camera, a present from my mother, was destroyed."
情態(tài)動詞 "I knew I shouldn’t have taken the camera." "I realized I should not have taken the camera."
非謂語動詞 "Not wanting to disappoint her father, Jade confessed her mistake." "Afraid of disappointing her father, Jade admitted her mistake."
升級替換詞匯、短語和語料
短語 替換選項 例句
Gathered up her courage Steeled herself, Mustered her courage "She steeled herself for the difficult conversation."
Ruined Destroyed, Damaged, Wrecked "I damaged your camera, Dad."
Regret Remorse, Guilt, Repentance "I feel deep remorse for my actions."
Comforted Reassured, Soothed, Consolled "Her father reassured her that everything would be fine."
Sighed deeply Exhaled heavily, Let out a long breath "He exhaled heavily, showing his relief."
高考核心詞匯分析
單詞 詞性 詞義 近義詞 聯(lián)想詞 例句
Courage 名詞 勇氣 Bravery, Valor Fearlessness, Boldness Jade gathered up her courage before confessing to her father.
Regret 名詞 遺憾，后悔 Remorse, Sorrow Guilt, Repentance Jade regretted taking her father's camera without permission.
Ruined 動詞 破壞，毀壞 Destroyed, Damaged Wrecked, Spoiled She ruined the camera by dropping it in the water.
Comfort 動詞 安慰，撫慰 Soothe, Reassure Console, Calm Her mother comforted her when she confessed her mistake.
Guilt 名詞 內(nèi)疚，愧疚 Remorse, Shame Blame, Regret Jade felt guilty for ruining her father’s camera.

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