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記敘文——人與自我（成長與決定X2U1）
“Our garage is a disaster!” Mom declared. "We need to bag up everything we're not using. If it's in good condition, we can donate it to people who can really use it." As usual, our family would donate stuff to our community center every year.
“This year, you're old enough to decide for yourselves now! You two can have the whole afternoon to go through what's here," said Mom. "Please donate only the things that kids in our community really use or truly need. Happy sorting!"
But happy was not the word I'd choose to describe our sorting. After Mom left, we both just stood there, staring at the boxes of old stuff for a long time.
Then my eyes fixed on a set of colorful Lego blocks. "No way. I don't want to say goodbye to my blocks! Why don't we give away your skipping rope ” Tex yelled loudly.
I shook my head firmly.
And that's how it went for the next hour. Each decision felt so complicated that it was much easier to put nearly everything back to its position.
“Look!” Tex pointed. “A cool old toy car with only one wheel. Hard to fix. It's the best choice for us to donate the broken ones like this.”
How clever he was! After all, neither of us was willing to part with our beloved possessions forever. We'd rather have them lie abandoned or unnoticed in our garage. We took immediate action and put all the broken toys, and board games with missing pieces in the donation pile. Now, sorting stuff out in this way did make us much happier. At this moment, Mom came back to see how it was going.
注意：
(1)詞數應為120個左右；
(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
“Why do you put so much useless stuff in the donation pile ” Mom pulled a long face. _______
Mom was right and I put my favourite skipping rope into the donation pile first. _________________________________
文章大意 媽媽宣布整理車庫，將不用但狀況良好的物品捐給社區有需要的人，讓“我”和Tex自行決定。整理過程中，兩人都不舍心愛之物，耗時許久仍難抉擇。最后，他們想出把損壞物品放入捐贈堆的辦法。此時，媽媽回來查看整理情況。
故事山分析
開端：媽媽提出整理車庫并捐贈物品的要求，“我” 和 Tex 開始整理。
發展：整理過程中，兩人對各自心愛之物難以割舍，整理進展緩慢。
高潮：媽媽發現捐贈堆里都是無用物品，對兩人提出質疑，促使他們重新思考。
結局：兩人認識到錯誤，挑選出合適物品進行捐贈，收獲給予的快樂。
伏筆及在續寫中的回應
伏筆：“This year, you're old enough to decide for yourselves now!” 表明孩子有自主思考和決定的能力。
回應：續寫中，孩子在媽媽的引導下，自主決定捐贈合適物品，體現成長。
伏筆：“Each decision felt so complicated that it was much easier to put nearly everything back to its position.” 說明孩子對物品的留戀與整理的困難。
回應：與續寫中孩子果斷挑選物品形成對比，突出思想轉變。
伏筆：“We'd rather have them lie abandoned or unnoticed in our garage.” 體現孩子對心愛物品的不舍。
回應：續寫中，孩子克服不舍，將物品捐贈，實現自我突破。
伏筆：“Please donate only the things that kids in our community really use or truly need.” 為媽媽對捐贈物品的要求埋下伏筆。
回應：續寫中，媽媽以此為依據，批評孩子捐贈無用物品的行為。
伏筆：“Happy sorting!” 與實際整理過程中孩子的不開心形成反差。
回應：續寫中，孩子最終理解捐贈意義，體會到給予的快樂，實現 “開心” 的轉變。
續寫要點
第一段續寫：媽媽拉長臉說：“你們為什么在捐贈箱中放入很多沒用的物品”——本段續寫的關鍵在于通過媽媽的引導讓兩個孩子明白分享才是真正的快樂，同時考慮到二段的首句為Mom was right，又為本段的結尾提供了一次很有深度的設計機會。——參考詞匯有：mom；Tex；in good condition；stuff
第二段續寫：媽媽是對的，并且我把我最愛的跳繩放入了捐贈堆中。——本段續寫的關鍵在于我和Tex在媽媽的正確引導下不但把我們最喜歡的玩具捐出來，而且還明白了助人為樂的真諦。——參考詞匯有：Tex；colorful Lego blacks；bag up；staring at boxes；kids in our community
情感線
起初，孩子對心愛物品充滿留戀，整理時糾結不舍，不想捐贈。媽媽質疑后，孩子開始反思，認識到錯誤。最后，孩子克服情感障礙，完成捐贈，收獲給予帶來的快樂與滿足，實現從自私到無私的情感轉變。
故事線
媽媽要求整理車庫并捐贈物品。
“我” 和 Tex 面對心愛物品難以抉擇，整理進展緩慢。
兩人決定將損壞物品放入捐贈堆。
媽媽回來查看，對捐贈物品提出質疑。
孩子反思后，挑選合適物品進行捐贈。
孩子看到受捐孩子的喜悅，收獲給予的快樂。
主旨升華句
Giving is not just about parting with possessions; it's about sharing love and bringing joy to others.
True happiness lies not in hoarding, but in the act of selfless giving.
Through the process of donation, we learn the value of empathy and the power of helping those in need.
By letting go of our attachments, we open the door to a greater sense of fulfillment and connection with others.
Donating is not only a way to declutter our space, but also a chance to enrich the lives of others and our own souls.
寫作示范
示范一
“Why do you put so much useless stuff in the donation pile ” Mom pulled a long face. “Kids in our community need things that can actually bring them joy and help them. Broken toys won't do that. Think about how excited you'd be if you received something you could really use.” Her words hit home, and I felt a pang of guilt. I realized we had been so focused on keeping our own things that we ignored the purpose of donation.
Mom was right and I put my favourite skipping rope into the donation pile first. Tex, after a moment of hesitation, added his Lego blocks. We then went through the boxes again, carefully choosing books, games, and toys that were in good condition. When we dropped off the donations at the community center and saw the bright smiles on the kids' faces, we knew we had made the right choice. It was a valuable lesson in the joy of giving.
示范二
“Why do you put so much useless stuff in the donation pile ” Mom pulled a long face. She picked up the broken toy car and said, “This won't help anyone. The point of donating is to make a positive impact on others' lives. We should give things that can bring hope and happiness.” Her serious tone made us realize our mistake. We had been thinking only of ourselves.
Mom was right and I put my favourite skipping rope into the donation pile first. Tex followed suit, putting his cherished comic books. We spent the next hour sorting through the items, selecting those that were still in good condition. As we handed over the donations, we felt a sense of pride and fulfillment. We learned that giving is not a loss, but a gain, as it fills our hearts with warmth and happiness.
參考答案
“Why do you put so much useless stuff in the donation pile ” Mom pulled a long face. Hearing these words, Tex and I didn’t know how to respond, lowering our heads and trying to avoid direct visual contact with her. After a few seconds of silence, Mom got close to us and made us exchange the situation, then asking us “If the donated stuff sent to you was not in good condition, how would you feel ” At that moment, we both nodded.（3句65）
Mom was right and I put my favourite skipping rope into the donation pile first. Seeing my action, Tex also put his colorful Lego blacks into the pile. Then we continued searching and bagging up things we didn’t need anymore. Shortly afterwards, staring at several boxes full of our past good memories, I could picture how much pleasure they would bring to the kids in our community. From then on, I changed from a selfish teenager to a responsible citizen. （4句65）

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