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假定你是李華，最近你參加了主題為“體驗職業，發現自己，啟迪未來”職業體驗日活動，請你給英國朋友
Chris 寫一封郵件分享你的這次經歷。
內容包括：1．活動情況（包括具體體驗的職業）；2．活動感悟。
注意：
1．寫作詞數應為 80 左右；
2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you my career experience day. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作提綱
第一段：開篇點明寫信目的，向 Chris 分享職業體驗日活動，簡要介紹活動主題，引發對方興趣。
第二段：詳細描述活動情況，包括體驗的具體職業，如醫生、教師等，講述在該職業體驗中的具體工作內容、感受，如當醫生時參與簡單診療流程，感受到責任重大。
第三段：闡述活動感悟，強調對自己的認知、未來規劃產生的影響，如發現自己對某領域的興趣，明確未來努力方向，表達對 Chris 分享類似經歷的期待。
語言積累
I'm writing to give you an account of my amazing career experience day themed “Experience Careers, Discover Yourself, Illuminate the Future”.
我寫信是為了向你講述我精彩的職業體驗日活動，主題是 “體驗職業，發現自己，啟迪未來”。
During the event, I had the opportunity to experience the role of a teacher.
在活動期間，我有機會體驗教師這個職業。
I stood in front of the “class” and taught a short lesson, trying to engage the “students” with vivid explanations.
我站在 “班級” 前面，上了一小節課，努力用生動的講解吸引 “學生”。
It was quite a challenge, but also an incredibly rewarding experience.
這是一個相當大的挑戰，但也是一次非常有意義的經歷。
As a doctor for a day, I assisted in basic medical examinations and felt the heavy responsibility on my shoulders.
作為一天的醫生，我協助進行基本的醫療檢查，感受到了肩上沉甸甸的責任。
This experience has broadened my horizons and deepened my understanding of different professions.
這次經歷拓寬了我的視野，加深了我對不同職業的理解。
I've come to realize my passion for [specific field], which will definitely influence my future career choices.
我開始意識到自己對 [特定領域] 的熱愛，這肯定會影響我未來的職業選擇。
It has been a great opportunity to explore my potential and plan for the future.
這是一個探索自己潛力和規劃未來的絕佳機會。
I'm looking forward to hearing about your similar experiences, if any.
我期待著聽到你是否有類似的經歷。
I sincerely hope you can also participate in such an event someday.
我真誠地希望有一天你也能參加這樣的活動。
寫作示范
示范一
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to give you an account of my amazing career experience day themed “Experience Careers, Discover Yourself, Illuminate the Future”.
During the event, I chose to experience being a journalist. I accompanied a real journalist to an interview. I learned how to prepare questions in advance and how to communicate effectively with interviewees. Taking notes and writing a rough draft on the spot was quite challenging.
This experience was eye - opening. It made me realize that being a journalist requires not only excellent communication skills but also quick thinking. I'm now more aware of my strengths and weaknesses. I'm eager to hear about any similar experiences you might have had.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范二
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you my career experience day. The event was really interesting and meaningful.
I had the chance to be a librarian for a day. I was in charge of sorting books, helping students find the materials they needed, and organizing new arrivals. It was fascinating to see the vast world of knowledge stored in the library.
This experience has taught me the importance of organization and patience. Also, I discovered my love for being surrounded by books. It has definitely given me a new perspective on future career paths. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范三
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to tell you about my remarkable career experience day. The theme was truly inspiring.
I took on the role of a chef. I followed the head chef's instructions, cutting vegetables, preparing ingredients, and even cooking a simple dish. The heat in the kitchen was intense, but the sense of accomplishment when seeing the finished dish was indescribable.
This experience has made me appreciate the hard work that goes into every meal. More importantly, I found my passion for cooking. It has influenced my future plans significantly. I hope you'll share your career - related stories with me.
Yours,
Li Hua
參考答案
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you my career experience day. A few days ago, I had my career experience day.
Determined to be a doctor, I chose to experience how a doctor works. Sitting beside the doctor, I noticed how patients behaved in front of a doctor. Some patients felt extremely worried. Some hadn’t taken their health seriously
and delayed seeing doctors, thus making things worse. The doctor listened carefully and patiently, explaining everything expertly to relieve the patients’ worries.
The career experience day saw the hardships and also the significance as a doctor. The doctor’s good example will mentally, physically, and spiritually prepare me for my dream career. At the same time, the patients’ worries reaffirm my belief that health is more important than wealth.
Yours,
Li Hua

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