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人教版選擇性必修3Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle 讀后續(xù)寫作業(yè)
I 課文素材庫
微技能 語料 出處
動(dòng)作描寫 1. It took the surgeon three hours to finish my mother’s lung surgery. 2. Before exercising, always do a few warm-ups to begin with. 3. But then I always feel too tired to continue! 4. Don’t keep the phone in the room so you won’t pick it up before bed. 5. Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood, or just took a long walk. Page 17 Exercise 1 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 4 Line 4
心理描寫 To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline and repeatedly take many small steps. Student 2 feels depressed about being a little overweight. I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind. Best of all, in my opinion, is how I feel about myself. As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices, I started to analyse my choices, especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life. However, I realized that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace it with something else. So I thought about what to try. Rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies, and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. 1. Page 15 Para 5 Line 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 5 Page 20 Text 2 Para 1 Line 1 Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 3
健康生活方式描寫 To prevent harmful habits like these from dominating a teenager’s life is essential. Life is composed of many elements,such as family, friends, study, work,entertainment, and so on. If one elements dominates your life and the others are ignored, you will lose balance and not feel good. It is necessary to be in control of what you eat. I really need to decide on a way to exercise more. 1. Page 14 Para 1 Line 5 2. Page 16 Exercise 3 3. Page 16 Exercise 3 4.Page 17 Exercise 3 5.Page 17 Exercise 3
不良生活方式描寫 The reward makes us much more likely to continue the cycle, and the bad habit of relying on unhealthy snacks is formed. Student 1 has trouble sleeping because of using the phone before going to sleep. I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! Page 15 Para 1 Line 2 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 2 Para 2 Line 3
改變和反思描寫 In many ways, our lifestyle is the sum of choices we have made. To facilitate a positive change in our bad habits, we must first examine our bad habit cycles and then try to adapt them. Many of us try to change bad habits quickly, and if we are not successful straight away, we often become pessimistic and give up. Slowly facilitate changes in your lifestyle by using a step-by-step process. You don’t have to change every thing at once. Make small changes each day and your lifestyle will become healthier. To change bad habits is never easy. To make choices about myself is within my own power. It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games as I’m mad for them. It has enhanced the quality of my life, improving my health and increasing my happiness. 1. Page 14 Para 2 Line 2 2. Page 15 Para 2 Line 1 3. Page 15 Para 3 Line 1 4.Page 16 Exercise 3 5.Page 16 Exercise 3 6.Page 16 Exercise 3 7.Page 17 Exercise 1 8.Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 7 9.Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 1 10.Page 20 Text 2 Para 4 Line 2
II 語言訓(xùn)練場
漢譯英
1. 接下來的幾個(gè)月里，充滿了物理治療、預(yù)約醫(yī)生和對(duì)母親的不斷照顧。（be filled with）
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2. 我成為了她的主要照顧者，幫助她處理生活中的方方面面。(v-ing 做狀語)
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3. 有時(shí)候，這讓我感到精疲力竭和不知所措，但我知道我必須要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地支撐著她。（并列復(fù)合句）
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4. 在此期間，我還必須學(xué)會(huì)如何平衡我的新責(zé)任與學(xué)業(yè)和社交生活。 （特殊疑問詞+動(dòng)詞不定時(shí)）
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5. 照顧我的母親成為了我的首要任務(wù)。（priority）
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6. 這種增加的溝通和共同決策加深了我們對(duì)彼此需求和關(guān)切的理解。(deepen)
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7. 看到母親經(jīng)歷康復(fù)的困難使我更加耐心和理解她的掙扎。(v.ing作主語)
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8. 同樣，我的母親欣賞我的努力，并對(duì)我的關(guān)心和支持表示極大的感激。(Likewise)
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9. 這次經(jīng)歷讓我們更加親密，加強(qiáng)了我們作為家庭成員的聯(lián)系的重要性。(reinforce)
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Physical assistance:
Help your mother with everyday tasks that she may find difficult due to her injuries. This can include preparing meals, assisting with bathing and dressing, and helping with mobility exercises or physical therapy.提供身體上的幫助：幫助母親完成因傷勢(shì)而困難的日常任務(wù)。這可能包括準(zhǔn)備飯菜、協(xié)助洗澡和穿衣，并幫助進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)或物理治療。
Emotional support:
Offer a listening ear and be there to provide emotional comfort during this difficult time. Encourage her to express her feelings and frustrations, and validate her emotions. Remind her that her recovery is a journey and that progress takes time.提供情感支持：傾聽她的傾訴，并在這段困難時(shí)期提供情感上的安慰。鼓勵(lì)她表達(dá)自己的感受和挫折，并驗(yàn)證她的情緒。提醒她康復(fù)是一個(gè)過程，需要時(shí)間來取得進(jìn)展。
Attend medical appointments and communicate with healthcare professionals:
Accompany your mother to doctor’s appointments, therapy sessions, or any other medical visits. Take notes during appointments, ask questions, and stay informed about her treatment plan. Be an advocate for her by communicating her needs and concerns to healthcare professionals.陪同就醫(yī)并與醫(yī)療專業(yè)人員溝通：陪同母親去看醫(yī)生、治療或其他醫(yī)療事務(wù)。在就醫(yī)過程中做筆記、提問，并了解她的治療計(jì)劃。通過向醫(yī)療專業(yè)人員傳達(dá)她的需求和關(guān)切。
Create a safe and comfortable environment:
Make necessary adjustments in your home to ensure it is accessible and safe for your mother’s recovery. This may involve rearranging furniture, installing grab bars or handrails, or removing tripping hazards.創(chuàng)造一個(gè)安全舒適的環(huán)境：根據(jù)需要在家中進(jìn)行必要的調(diào)整，以確保母親的康復(fù)環(huán)境無障礙且安全。這可能包括重新布置家具、安裝扶手或扶手，或者清除絆倒隱患。
Encourage a healthy lifestyle:
Promote a nutritious diet and encourage your mother to engage in light exercise or physical activities as recommended by her healthcare provider. Help her maintain a balanced routine that includes rest, relaxation, and proper sleep.鼓勵(lì)健康的生活方式：推廣營養(yǎng)均衡的飲食，鼓勵(lì)母親按照醫(yī)療專業(yè)人員的建議進(jìn)行輕度運(yùn)動(dòng)或體育活動(dòng)。幫助她保持一個(gè)平衡的生活方式，包括休息、放松和良好的睡眠。
Seek additional support if needed:
Reach out to support groups or counseling services that specialize in helping individuals recover from traumatic experiences or accidents. They can provide valuable guidance and emotional support for both you and your mother.如有需要，尋求額外的支持：尋找專門幫助個(gè)人從創(chuàng)傷經(jīng)歷或事故中康復(fù)的支持團(tuán)體或咨詢服務(wù)。他們可以為您和母親提供有價(jià)值的指導(dǎo)和情感支持。
III 美文體驗(yàn)館
It was a chilly Friday night, and I had just returned from climbing one of the red rocks of Sedona. My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that my mother had been in a terrible car crash and had been taken to the intensive care unit (重癥監(jiān)護(hù)病房) of a nearby hospital.
When I got to the hospital, my father led me down a wide hallway with machines all around. A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling to my already turning stomach. As I turned into my mother's ward, the cadaverous (形容枯槁的) condition of her body shocked me. Her face had swollen, her eyes had huge dark bruise, and she had tubes down her throat and in her arms. Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother.
From that night on, my life completely changed. Up to that point, I'd had the luxury of just being a kid, having to deal with only the exaggerated melodramas of teenage life. As my mother struggled first to stay alive and then to relearn to walk, my sense of priorities changed sharply. My mother needed me. The trials and trouble of my daily life at school, which had seemed so important before, now appeared insignificant. My mother and I had faced death together, and life took on a new meaning for both of us.
After a week of treatment in intensive care, my mother's condition improved enough to be moved to a regular hospital ward. She was finally out of danger but，because her legs had been crushed, there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. I was just grateful that she was alive. Two months later, a sort of hospital suite was set up in our family room, and she was allowed to come home.
Paragraph 1: My mother's return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: My mother's reliance on me changed our relationship too. ________________________________________
主題語境 人與自我
文章出處 蘇州市2024高三上學(xué)期英語期初調(diào)研考試
詞數(shù) 正文英文詞數(shù) 364，續(xù)寫第一段首句 18 個(gè)單詞，續(xù)寫第二段首句 9 個(gè)單詞。
What 故事脈絡(luò) (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para. 1)
Build-up (Para.2-5)
Climax (續(xù)寫第一段) ...but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me.
Resolution & Ending (續(xù)寫第二段) Our relationship changed for the better.
Why 故事主題
How 寫作手法
人物分析 “我 ” My doctor
A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face.
The cadaverous condition of my mother’s body shocked me.
My sense of priorities changed sharply.
場景
語言風(fēng)格 □ 平實(shí)質(zhì)樸 □ 含蓄雋永 □ 幽默風(fēng)趣
伏筆/照應(yīng) Para 1: a sort of hospital suite set up in our family room這里的 hospital suite 說明作者家里的擺設(shè)發(fā)生了什么變化？
Para 2:續(xù)寫第二段的首句 changed our relationship說明了作者和母親的關(guān)系會(huì)怎么樣？
謀篇布局 續(xù)寫段落 Q1:How did the hospital suite function in my family room Q2: What were my responsibilities How was I accustomed to them
Q3: How do I feel about my mother’s reliance？What kind of change did it bring Q4: What was my reaction and feeling
【素材積累】
Para 1
My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that... （as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）
return from 從某地返回
Para 2
Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.（v.ing 作狀語）
urge v. 催促；竭力主張 n.強(qiáng)烈的欲望；沖動(dòng)
Para 3
That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother. （ when引導(dǎo)表語從句； it 作形式主語，that引導(dǎo)主語從句）
turn away from 被迫離開；停止參與某事
Para 4
From that night on 從那晚開始
Up to that point 到那個(gè)時(shí)候?yàn)橹?br/>Para 5
...there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. （whether引導(dǎo)同位語從句）
out of danger 脫離危險(xiǎn)
IV 技能鍛造營
Metaphor(暗喻）
1. 定義
暗喻（metaphor）：也稱隱喻，是依據(jù)比喻和被比喻兩種不同事物的相似或相關(guān)關(guān)系而構(gòu)成的修辭格。無需借助比喻詞，直接將甲事物當(dāng)作乙事物來描寫。例如：
★However, there is no “magic pill” or “delete” button that will help you.
然而，能幫助你的“魔力丸”或刪除鍵并不存在。
2. 作用
這里的magic pill和delete button均是暗喻用法，意指“快速改變壞習(xí)慣的良策”。此處的暗喻運(yùn)用巧妙，讓“quick and effective way”的直白意義頓時(shí)形象生動(dòng)起來，給文字平添一份感染力。
3. 用法
★L(fēng)ife is a ship on the ocean meeting both sunny days and stormy days.
生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既會(huì)遇到晴天，也會(huì)遇到暴風(fēng)雨天。
★L(fēng)aughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.
笑是驅(qū)走人們臉上寒意的太陽。
★She is going through a roller coaster of emotions.
她正經(jīng)歷著情感的過山車。
★At once, the Eastern and Western Chang’an Roads became roaring oceans.
霎時(shí)間，東西長安街成了喧騰的大海。
由以上各例可知，暗喻沒有引導(dǎo)詞，這是明喻和暗喻在形式上的最大區(qū)別。換句話說，有為明喻，沒有為暗喻。如：He has a heart of stone. He has a heart like stone.很顯然，前句是暗喻，后句是明喻。暗喻時(shí)，比喻物和被比喻物之間的相似點(diǎn)較為含蓄，猛一看它們毫無關(guān)系，實(shí)際卻有著某種內(nèi)在聯(lián)系。
4. 實(shí)踐
英譯漢
(1) a bed of roses
(2) clean hands
(3) curtain-lecture
(4) mushroom fame/ millionaire
(5) He is a regular oyster.
答案解析
I 課文素材庫
微技能 語料 出處
動(dòng) 作 描 寫 1.It took the surgeon three hours to finish my mother’s lung surgery. 2.Before exercising， always do a few warm-ups to begin with. 3.But then I always feel too tired to continue! 4.Don’t keep the phone in the room so you won’t pick it up before bed. 5. Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood, or just took a long walk. Page 17 Exercise 1 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 17 Exercise 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 4 Line 4
心理 描寫 To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline and repeatedly take many small steps. Student 2 feels depressed about being a little overweight. I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind. Best of all, in my opinion, is how I feel about myself. As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices, I started to analyse my choices, especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life. However, I realized that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace it with something else. So I thought about what to try. Rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies, and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. 1. Page 15 Para 5 Line 3 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 2 Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 5 Page 20 Text 2 Para 1 Line 1 Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 3
健康生 活方式 描寫 To prevent harmful habits like these from dominating a teenager’s life is essential. Life is composed of many elements,such as family, friends, study, work,entertainment, and so on. If one elements dominates your life and the others are ignored, you will lose balance and not feel good. It is necessary to be in control of what you eat. I really need to decide on a way to exercise more. 1. Page 14 Para 1 Line 5 2. Page 16 Exercise 3 3. Page 16 Exercise 3 4.Page 17 Exercise 3 5.Page 17 Exercise 3
不良生 活方式 描寫 The reward makes us much more likely to continue the cycle, and the bad habit of relying on unhealthy snacks is formed. Student 1 has trouble sleeping because of using the phone before going to sleep. I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! Page 15 Para 1 Line 2 Page 18 Exercise 2 Page 20 Text 2 Para 2 Line 3
改變和 反思描 寫 In many ways, our lifestyle is the sum of choices we have made. To facilitate a positive change in our bad habits, we must first examine our bad habit cycles and then try to adapt them. Many of us try to change bad habits quickly, and if we are not successful straight away, we often become pessimistic and give up. Slowly facilitate changes in your lifestyle by using a step-by-step process. You don’t have to change every thing at once. Make small changes each day and your lifestyle will become healthier. To change bad habits is never easy. To make choices about myself is within my own power. It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games as I’m mad for them. It has enhanced the quality of my life, improving my health and increasing my happiness. 1. Page 14 Para 2 Line 2 2. Page 15 Para 2 Line 1 3. Page 15 Para 3 Line 1 4.Page 16 Exercise 3 5.Page 16 Exercise 3 6.Page 16 Exercise 3 7.Page 17 Exercise 1 8.Page 20 Text 1 Para 5 Line 7 9.Page 20 Text 2 Para 3 Line 1 10.Page 20 Text 2 Para 4 Line 2
II 語言訓(xùn)練場
漢譯英
1. 接下來的幾個(gè)月里，充滿了物理治療、預(yù)約醫(yī)生和對(duì)母親的不斷照顧。（be filled with）
The next few months were filled with physical therapy sessions, doctor appointments, and constant care for my mother.
2. 我成為了她的主要照顧者，幫助她處理生活中的方方面面。(v-ing 做狀語)
I took on the role of her primary caregiver, helping her with every aspect of daily life.
3. 有時(shí)候，這讓我感到精疲力竭和不知所措，但我知道我必須要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地支撐著她。（并列復(fù)合句）
It was exhausting and overwhelming at times, but I knew that I had to be strong for her.
4. 在此期間，我還必須學(xué)會(huì)如何平衡我的新責(zé)任與學(xué)業(yè)和社交生活。 （特殊疑問詞+動(dòng)詞不定時(shí)）
During this time, I also had to learn how to balance my new responsibilities with my schoolwork and social life.
5. 照顧我的母親成為了我的首要任務(wù)。（priority）
Taking care of my mother became my top priority.
6.這種增加的溝通和共同決策加深了我們對(duì)彼此需求和關(guān)切的理解。(deepen)
This increased communication and shared decision-making deepened our understanding of each other’s needs and concerns.
7.看到母親經(jīng)歷康復(fù)的困難使我更加耐心和理解她的掙扎。(v.ing作主語)
Seeing my mother go through the difficulties of recovery made me more patient and understanding of her struggles.
8.同樣，我的母親欣賞我的努力，并對(duì)我的關(guān)心和支持表示極大的感激。(Likewise)
Likewise, my mother appreciated my efforts and showed immense gratitude for my care and support.
9.這次經(jīng)歷讓我們更加親密，加強(qiáng)了我們作為家庭成員的聯(lián)系的重要性。(reinforce)
The experience brought us closer together and reinforced the importance of our bond as family members.
Physical assistance:
Help your mother with everyday tasks that she may find difficult due to her injuries. This can include preparing meals, assisting with bathing and dressing, and helping with mobility exercises or physical therapy.提供身體上的幫助：幫助母親完成因傷勢(shì)而困難的日常任務(wù)。這可能包括準(zhǔn)備飯菜、協(xié)助洗澡和穿衣，并幫助進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)或物理治療。
Emotional support:
Offer a listening ear and be there to provide emotional comfort during this difficult time. Encourage her to express her feelings and frustrations, and validate her emotions. Remind her that her recovery is a journey and that progress takes time.提供情感支持：傾聽她的傾訴，并在這段困難時(shí)期提供情感上的安慰。鼓勵(lì)她表達(dá)自己的感受和挫折，并驗(yàn)證她的情緒。提醒她康復(fù)是一個(gè)過程，需要時(shí)間來取得進(jìn)展。
Attend medical appointments and communicate with healthcare professionals:
Accompany your mother to doctor’s appointments, therapy sessions, or any other medical visits. Take notes during appointments, ask questions, and stay informed about her treatment plan. Be an advocate for her by communicating her needs and concerns to healthcare professionals.陪同就醫(yī)并與醫(yī)療專業(yè)人員溝通：陪同母親去看醫(yī)生、治療或其他醫(yī)療事務(wù)。在就醫(yī)過程中做筆記、提問，并了解她的治療計(jì)劃。通過向醫(yī)療專業(yè)人員傳達(dá)她的需求和關(guān)切。
Create a safe and comfortable environment:
Make necessary adjustments in your home to ensure it is accessible and safe for your mother’s recovery. This may involve rearranging furniture, installing grab bars or handrails, or removing tripping hazards.創(chuàng)造一個(gè)安全舒適的環(huán)境：根據(jù)需要在家中進(jìn)行必要的調(diào)整，以確保母親的康復(fù)環(huán)境無障礙且安全。這可能包括重新布置家具、安裝扶手或扶手，或者清除絆倒隱患。
Encourage a healthy lifestyle:
Promote a nutritious diet and encourage your mother to engage in light exercise or physical activities as recommended by her healthcare provider. Help her maintain a balanced routine that includes rest, relaxation, and proper sleep.鼓勵(lì)健康的生活方式：推廣營養(yǎng)均衡的飲食，鼓勵(lì)母親按照醫(yī)療專業(yè)人員的建議進(jìn)行輕度運(yùn)動(dòng)或體育活動(dòng)。幫助她保持一個(gè)平衡的生活方式，包括休息、放松和良好的睡眠。
Seek additional support if needed:
Reach out to support groups or counseling services that specialize in helping individuals recover from traumatic experiences or accidents. They can provide valuable guidance and emotional support for both you and your mother.如有需要，尋求額外的支持：尋找專門幫助個(gè)人從創(chuàng)傷經(jīng)歷或事故中康復(fù)的支持團(tuán)體或咨詢服務(wù)。他們可以為您和母親提供有價(jià)值的指導(dǎo)和情感支持。
III 美文體驗(yàn)館
It was a chilly Friday night， and I had just returned from climbing one of the red rocks of Sedona. My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that my mother had been in a terrible car crash and had been taken to the intensive care unit (重癥監(jiān)護(hù)病房) of a nearby hospital.
When I got to the hospital, my father led me down a wide hallway with machines all around. A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling to my already turning stomach. As I turned into my mother's ward, the cadaverous (形容枯槁的) condition of her body shocked me. Her face had swollen, her eyes had huge dark bruise, and she had tubes down her throat and in her arms. Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother.
From that night on, my life completely changed. Up to that point, I'd had the luxury of just being a kid, having to deal with only the exaggerated melodramas of teenage life. As my mother struggled first to stay alive and then to relearn to walk, my sense of priorities changed sharply. My mother needed me. The trials and trouble of my daily life at school, which had seemed so important before, now appeared insignificant. My mother and I had faced death together, and life took on a new meaning for both of us.
After a week of treatment in intensive care，my mother's condition improved enough to be moved to a regular hospital ward. She was finally out of danger but，because her legs had been crushed, there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. I was just grateful that she was alive. Two months later, a sort of hospital suite was set up in our family room, and she was allowed to come home.
第一段：My mother's return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me.
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第二段：My mother's reliance on me changed our relationship too.
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主題語境 人與自我
文章出處 蘇州市2024高三上學(xué)期英語期初調(diào)研考試
詞數(shù) 正文英文詞數(shù) 364，續(xù)寫第一段首句 18 個(gè)單詞，續(xù)寫第二段首句 9 個(gè)單詞。
What 故事脈絡(luò) (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para. 1) My mother had been in the intensive care unit of nearby hospital due to a car crash.
Build-up (Para.2-5) What happened in the hospital
Climax (續(xù)寫第一段) ...but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me.
Resolution & Ending (續(xù)寫第二段) Our relationship changed for the better.
Why 故事主題 After facing death together, I and my mother understand a new meaning of our life.
How 寫作手法 第一人稱、記敘、描寫
人物分析 “我 ” My doctor
A strong smell of medicine brought a sick feeling My stomach turned... She kept looking at me as she pounded her hand against the bed, looking painful. I turned my face away from her, trying to hide the tears that were rolling down my face. That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother.
The cadaverous condition of my mother’s body shocked me. Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
My sense of priorities changed sharply. My mother needed me.
場景 in the hospital
語言風(fēng)格 平實(shí)質(zhì)樸
伏筆 Para 1: a sort of hospital suite set up in our family room這里的 hospital suite 說明作者家里的擺設(shè)發(fā)生了什么變化？ 更適合患者康復(fù)治療，但是會(huì)給家人帶來不便。
Para 2:續(xù)寫第二段的首句 changed our relationship說明了作者 和母親的關(guān)系會(huì)怎么樣？ 和以前相比，家人的關(guān)系更親近。同時(shí)，作者對(duì)生活和親情重要性的新認(rèn)識(shí)和理解。
謀篇布局 續(xù)寫第一段 Q1:How did the hospital suite function in my family room Q2: What were my responsibilities How was I accustomed to them
問題 素材 功能
Q1 To reach the goal of change, a person must show some discipline/patience and repeatedly take many small steps. 心理描寫表現(xiàn)作者內(nèi) 心活動(dòng) 動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語
However, I realized that to succeed in adjusting, I had to replace it with something else. So I thought about what to try. 心理描寫作者的心理 活動(dòng) However 情節(jié)發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn) 折
Q2 Preparing meals, assisting with bathing and dressing, and helping with mobility exercises or physical therapy were the things I thought of doing instead. 具體動(dòng)作描寫推進(jìn)情 節(jié)發(fā)展
It is necessary to be in control of what my mother eat. It作形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式作真正主語
謀篇布局 續(xù)寫第二段 Q3: How do I feel about my mother’s reliance？What kind of change did it bring Q4: What was my reaction and feeling
問題 素材 功能
Q3 It was a difficult adjustment, but I knew that my mother needed me more than ever. That experience changed me in ways I could have never imagined. 心理描寫作者的心理 活動(dòng)
You don’t have to change every thing at once.Slowly facilitate changes in my lifestyle by using a step-by-step process. 心理描寫作者的心理 活動(dòng)
Q4 I had learned how to assist he without her having to ask, such as getting dressed, preparing meals, and taking medication. 動(dòng)作鏈推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展， 結(jié)合表達(dá)情緒的形容 詞反應(yīng)人物情感
It taught me the importance of resilience, gratitude, and the power of love and support. 呼應(yīng)主旨
【素材積累】
Para 1
My father telephoned me as I walked through the arches to my dorm room and told me that...
（as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）
2. return from 從某地返回
Para 2
Gently holding her cold swollen hands, I said “hi”in a calm voice, controlling my urge to cry out.
（v.ing 作狀語）
urge v. 催促；竭力主張 n.強(qiáng)烈的欲望；沖動(dòng)
Para 3
That was when it struck me that I really might lose my mother. （ when引導(dǎo)表語從句； it 作形式主語，that引導(dǎo)主語從句）
turn away from 被迫離開；停止參與某事
Para 4
1. From that night on 從那晚開始
2. Up to that point 到那個(gè)時(shí)候?yàn)橹?br/>Para 5
1....there was doubt whether she would be able to walk again. （whether引導(dǎo)同位語從句）
2. out of danger 脫離危險(xiǎn)
【參考范文】
My mother's return home was a blessing for us all, but it meant some unaccustomed responsibilities for me. I would feed her, bathe her and help her to the bathroom. I struck me that I was pretty much playing the role of mother to my own mother. The difficult part for me was trying to be always upbeat，and to keep my mother's spirits up when she became frustrated with the pain and her inability to do simple things by herself. Looking after my mother wasn't much fun, but it felt good to be there when my mother really needed me.（84 words）
My mother's reliance on me changed our relationship. In the past, we had more than our share of the strains of mother-daughter relationships. The accident threw us into a relationship of interdependence. To get my mother back, I had to help regain her strength and ability to resume an independent life. She had to accept my help as well as the fact that I was no longer a child. Since then，we have become the closest friends，genuinely listening to one another and truly enjoying each other's company.（81 words）
IV 技能鍛造營
Metaphor(暗喻）
1. 定義
暗喻（metaphor）：也稱隱喻，是依據(jù)比喻和被比喻兩種不同事物的相似或相關(guān)關(guān)系而構(gòu)成的修辭格。無需借助比喻詞，直接將甲事物當(dāng)作乙事物來描寫。例如：
★However, there is no “magic pill” or “delete” button that will help you.
然而，能幫助你的“魔力丸”或刪除鍵并不存在。
2. 作用
這里的magic pill和delete button均是暗喻用法，意指“快速改變壞習(xí)慣的良策”。此處的暗喻運(yùn)用巧妙，讓“quick and effective way”的直白意義頓時(shí)形象生動(dòng)起來，給文字平添一份感染力。
3. 用法
★L(fēng)ife is a ship on the ocean meeting both sunny days and stormy days.
生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既會(huì)遇到晴天，也會(huì)遇到暴風(fēng)雨天。
★L(fēng)aughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.
笑是驅(qū)走人們臉上寒意的太陽。
★She is going through a roller coaster of emotions.
她正經(jīng)歷著情感的過山車。
★At once, the Eastern and Western Chang’an Roads became roaring oceans.
霎時(shí)間，東西長安街成了喧騰的大海。
由以上各例可知，暗喻沒有引導(dǎo)詞，這是明喻和暗喻在形式上的最大區(qū)別。換句話說，有為明喻，沒有為暗喻。如：He has a heart of stone. He has a heart like stone.很顯然，前句是暗喻，后句是明喻。暗喻時(shí)，比喻物和被比喻物之間的相似點(diǎn)較為含蓄，猛一看它們毫無關(guān)系，實(shí)際卻有著某種內(nèi)在聯(lián)系。
4. 實(shí)踐 英譯漢
(1) a bed of roses
(2) clean hands
(3) curtain-lecture
(4) mushroom fame/ millionaire
(5) He is a regular oyster.
（1）安樂窩
（2）兩袖清風(fēng)
（3）枕頭風(fēng)
（4） 一夜成名/暴發(fā)戶
（5） 他總是守口如瓶。

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