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人教版 選修2 Unit 5 First Aid讀后續寫作業設計
I 課文素材庫
微技能 語料 出處
動作描寫 1. Place burns under cool running water, especially within the first ten minutes 2. Remove any clothes using scissors if necessary, unless you see the fabric sticking to the burnt skin. 3. Cover the burnt with a loose clean cloth. Applying oil to the injured areas is a bad idea, as it will keep the heat in the wounds and may cause infection. 4. ChenWei,…, had his dinner interrupted when he heard someone screaming from another table. 5. He was now holding his throat with his face turning red, while his desperate friend were slapping him on the back. 1. Page 51 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 51 Para 1 Line 5 3. Page 51 Para 1 Line 7 4. Page 56 Para 1 Line 1 5. Page 56 Para 1 Line 4
場景描寫 1. Last night there was a big storm, bringing high winds and blowing roofs off houses. 2. Durant arrived on the night of 24 June and found a battle filled with 40,000 dead and wounded soldiers. 1. Page 90 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 1
外貌描寫 Not moving, the boy looked dead and his face was turning blue. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 6
心理描寫 1. Unable to see what was happening, Peter was quite worried about the boy. 2.Dunant was horrified by the scene and was filled with compassion for the wounded man. 1. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 26 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 2
II 語言訓練場
漢譯英
1. 她用桌布覆蓋了桌子。(cover…with…)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 把乳霜薄薄地抹在臉和脖子上。(apply … to…)
____________________________________________________________________________________________3. 昨天下午我請人補了牙。(have sth. done)
____________________________________________________________________________________________4. 他剛睡著電話就響了。(when)
____________________________________________________________________________________________5. 湯姆很擅長理科，而他的弟弟絕對是不可救藥。(while)
____________________________________________________________________________________________6. 那本書好像很有趣。(look)
____________________________________________________________________________________________7. 葉子變黃。(turn)
____________________________________________________________________________________________8. 當她醒來時，發現周圍一群陌生人。(find sth. done)
____________________________________________________________________________________________9. 看到他們的生活狀況時， 他很震驚。(be horrified )
____________________________________________________________________________________________10. 你的生活總是充滿挑戰。(be filled with )
III 美文體驗館
Lisa Sweeney is a 32-year-old mail carrier in Staten Island, New York. Four months ago, she noticed that something wasn't right at one of the homes on her route. It was her quick action that made all the difference.
One afternoon in August, an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor.
The next afternoon, her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. Though she and Marie hadn't had much conversation over the years, Lisa knew her habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine.
“I just had a feeling in my heart that Marie was inside. ” Lisa recalls. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door. There was no answer. She thought that this was very strange, so she knocked on a neighbor's door, but he'd been away on vacation and arrived home just a short time before so he didn't know anything. Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign.
注意：
1.續寫詞數應為150左右：
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
“I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself.
________________________________________________________________________________________
Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship.
________________________________________________________________________________________
主題語境 人與社會
文章出處 湖南省名校聯合體2025屆高三上學期開學摸底。
詞數 正文英文詞數249，續寫第一段首句12個單詞，第二段首句13個單詞。
What 故事脈絡 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1)
Build-up (Para.2)
Rising (Para.3)
Climax (Para.4)
Resolution (續寫第一段) “I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself. ……
Ending (續寫第二段) Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship. ……
Why 故事主題
How 寫作手法
人物分析
…her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone…
Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign.
場景
語言風格 平實質樸 細膩詳盡
伏筆/照應 Lisa, as Marie’s regular mail carrier and knew Marie’s habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine.
… an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone,…
謀篇布局 續寫第一段 Q1: How did Lisa get into Marie’s house What did Lisa see What would Lisa do Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation
謀篇布局 續寫第二段 Q3: How did Lisa and Marie develop the friendship Q4: How did they treat each other
【素材積累】
Para 1
1. notice v. 注意到
2. route n. 路線
3. It was her quick action that made all the difference. 強調句型
Para 2
1. …, an old woman named Mari e Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home.
named是過去分詞作后置定語；
who引導的非限定性定語從句。
2. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor. unconscious形容詞表示伴隨的狀態
Para 3
regular adj. 常規的，定期的
pass by 走過，經過
conversation n. 交談，談話
Para 4
1. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. 現在分詞作伴隨狀語
2. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door.
過去分詞做形容詞，表伴隨的狀態。
IV 技能鍛造營
Synaesthesia (通感）
1. 定義
Synaesthesia (通感）修辭法是以視、聽、觸、嗅、味等感覺直接描寫事物，把不同感官的感覺溝通起來，借聯想引起感覺轉移，“以感覺寫感覺”。
2. 作用
通感修辭法的巧妙運用，通過不同感官的交融，使得描述更加生動、具體，并豐富了讀者的感官體驗。
3. 用法
(1)“他的聲音如春風拂面，溫暖而柔和。”這句話將聽覺上的聲音與觸覺上的春風拂面相結合，形象地描繪了聲音的溫暖和柔和。
(2)“她的歌聲如清泉流淌，清新而自然。”這句話將聽覺上的歌聲與視覺上的清泉流淌相聯系，生動地表現了歌聲的清新和自然之美。
(3)“他的鋼琴演奏如火焰燃燒，熱烈而激情。”這句話將聽覺上的鋼琴演奏與視覺上的火焰燃燒以及情感上的熱烈和激情相結合，形象地傳達了鋼琴演奏的熱烈和激情四溢。
(4)“鳥兒落在樹上，傾污出百合花似的聲音。”這句話用視覺形容聽覺，由鳥落在樹上發出的聲音聯想到百合花。
(5)“品嘗Mozart的音樂。”這句話用嗅覺形容聽覺。
4. 實踐
英譯漢
(1) The warm colors of the painting seem to sing a soft melody.
(2) The bright lights on the stage danced to the rhythm of the music.
(3) The harsh sound of the alarm clock scratched at my skin.
(4) The smooth surface of the marble felt like a clear sky.
(5) As I entered her room, I was hit by the heavy perfume and noisy colors.
答案解析
I 課文素材庫
微技能 語料 出處
動作描寫 1. Place burns under cool running water, especially within the first ten minutes 2. Remove any clothes using scissors if necessary, unless you see the fabric sticking to the burnt skin. 3. Cover the burnt with a loose clean cloth. Applying oil to the injured areas is a bad idea, as it will keep the heat in the wounds and may cause infection. 4. ChenWei,…, had his dinner interrupted when he heard someone screaming from another table. 5. He was now holding his throat with his face turning red, while his desperate friend were slapping him on the back. 1. Page 51 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 51 Para 1 Line 5 3. Page 51 Para 1 Line 7 4. Page 56 Para 1 Line 1 5. Page 56 Para 1 Line 4
場景描寫 1. Last night there was a big storm, bringing high winds and blowing roofs off houses. 2. Durant arrived on the night of 24 June and found a battle filled with 40,000 dead and wounded soldiers. 1. Page 90 Para 1 Line 1 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 1
外貌描寫 Not moving, the boy looked dead and his face was turning blue. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 6
心理描寫 1. Unable to see what was happening, Peter was quite worried about the boy. 2.Dunant was horrified by the scene and was filled with compassion for the wounded man. 1. Page 90 Ex 3 Line 26 2. Page 94 Para 2 Line 2
II 語言訓練場
漢譯英
1. 她用桌布覆蓋了桌子。(cover…with…)
She cover the table with a cloth.
2. 把乳霜薄薄地抹在臉和脖子上。(apply … to…)
Apply the cream sparingly to your face and neck.
3. 昨天下午我請人補了牙。(have sth. done)
I had my teeth filled yesterday.
4. 他剛睡著電話就響了。(when)
He had just drifted off to sleep when the phone rang.
5. 湯姆很擅長理科，而他的弟弟絕對是不可救藥。(while)
While Tom’s very good at science, his brother is absolutely hopeless .
6. 那本書好像很有趣。(look)
That book looks interesting.
7. 葉子變黃。(turn)
The leaves were turning yellow.
8. 當她醒來時，發現周圍一群陌生人。(find sth. done)
When she woke up, she found herself surrounded by a group of strangers.
9. 看到他們的生活狀況時， 他很震驚。(be horrified )
He was horrified when he discovered the conditions in which they lived.
10. 你的生活總是充滿挑戰。(be filled with )
Your life will always filled with challenges.
III 美文體驗館
Lisa Sweeney is a 32-year-old mail carrier in Staten Island, New York. Four months ago, she noticed that something wasn't right at one of the homes on her route. It was her quick action that made all the difference.
One afternoon in August, an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor.
The next afternoon, her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. Though she and Marie hadn't had much conversation over the years, Lisa knew her habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine.
“I just had a feeling in my heart that Marie was inside. ” Lisa recalls. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door. There was no answer. She thought that this was very strange, so she knocked on a neighbor's door, but he'd been away on vacation and arrived home just a short time before so he didn't know anything. Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign.
注意：
1.續寫詞數應為150左右：
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
“I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself.
________________________________________________________________________________________
Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship.
________________________________________________________________________________________
主題語境 人與社會
文章出處 湖南省名校聯合體2025屆高三上學期開學摸底。
詞數 正文英文詞數249，續寫第一段首句12個單詞，第二段首句13個單詞。
What 故事脈絡 (Use one sentence to summarize the main idea of each paragraph) Opening (Para.1) As a mail carrier, Lisa noticed something unusual on her route and her quick action made all the difference.
Build-up (Para.2) An old and lonely woman fell down, lying unconscious on the floor .
Rising (Para.3) Lisa was surprised when she didn’t saw Marie as usual in the garden.
Climax (Para.4) Lisa tried to find Marie but there was no answer. When she saw the milkbottle on the doorstep, she realized it’s a warning sign.
Resolution (續寫第一段) “I must get in to see what's happened.” Lisa said to herself. ……
Ending (續寫第二段) Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship. ……
Why 故事主題 伸出援手，鄰里守望。
How 寫作手法 第三人稱、記敘、描寫
人物分析 Lisa Sweeney Marie Boyer
…her regular mail carrier, Lisa Sweeney, passed by and noticed something unusual. 說明Lisa的細心。 an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone… 年老獨居
Just then Lisa noticed that Marie's bottle of milk, which was delivered early in the morning, was still on the doorstep. It was a clear warning sign. Lisa通過一些細節進行合理推斷。
場景 老婦人的家里
語言風格 平實質樸 細膩詳盡
伏筆/照應 Lisa, as Marie’s regular mail carrier and knew Marie’s habits. She was surprised not to see Marie working in her garden, because she usually spent most afternoons there when the weather was fine. Lisa的身份是一名郵遞員，定期給Marie太太遞送，這個身份設定就使得她了解Marie太太的習慣合理化。為她后面發現Marie太太的異常做了鋪墊。
… an old woman named Marie Boyer, who lived alone,… Marie太太年老且獨居，所以會更容易發生意外而又無人發現。
謀篇布局 續寫第一段 Q1: How did Lisa get into Marie’s house What did Lisa see What would Lisa do Q2: What will happen at the end of the first paragraph of continuation
問題 素材 功能
Q1 So she walked round the house until she found an open window through which she managed to get into the house. 動作鏈推動情節發展，找到方法進入Marie的房子
There, at the foot of the stairs, she found Marie lying unconscious. 現在分詞作賓補，描繪了看到的情景
Realizing there was little she could do for Marie, she immediately called the hospital for help. 心理描寫為下一步的行動作了決定
Q2 It wasn't long before an ambulance arrived and Marie was taken to hospital without delay. immediately和without delay都說明了行動的迅速，為搶救贏得了時間
Later that day, to her great relief, Lisa learned that Marie was out of danger thanks to the timely rescue. to her relief表明Lisa當得知Marie轉危為安后的如釋重負
謀篇布局 續寫第二段 Q3: How did Lisa and Marie develop the friendship Q4: How did they treat each other
問題 素材 功能
Q3 Since that August day, Lisa and Marie have developed a very special bond. They treat each other as a family member. 由此，兩人展開了一段忘年交，像家人般的關系
Q4 Marie always asks Lisa in for a cup of tea whenever she sees her passing by and Lisa never fails to bring Marie things she needs. 用and來連接兩個分句說明了相互的付出
【素材積累】
Para 1
1. notice v. 注意到
2. route n. 路線
3. It was her quick action that made all the difference. 強調句型
Para 2
1. …, an old woman named Mari e Boyer, who lived alone, fell at the foot of the stairs in her home.
named是過去分詞作后置定語；
who引導的非限定性定語從句。
2. She was just lying unconscious(昏迷的) on the floor. unconscious形容詞表示伴隨的狀態
Para 3
regular adj. 常規的，定期的
pass by 走過，經過
conversation n. 交談，談話
Para 4
1. She went straight round to the back of the house, thinking that the old woman might be in the kitchen, but she didn't find anybody there. 現在分詞作伴隨狀語
2. Puzzled, Lisa returned to the front of the house and knocked hard on the door.
過去分詞做形容詞，表伴隨的狀態。
【參考范文】
“I must get in to see what's happened,” Lisa said to herself. So she walked round the house until she found an open window through which she managed to get into the house. There, at the foot of the stairs, she found Mari e lying unconscious. Realizing there was little she could do for Marie, she immediately called the hospital for help. It wasn't long before an ambulance arrived and Marie was taken to hospital without delay. Later that day, to her great relief, Lisa learned that Marie was out of danger thanks to the timely rescue. (85 words)
Lisa's quick action not only saved a life but also started a friendship. Since that August day, Lisa and Marie have developed a very special bond. They treat each other as a family member. Marie always asks Lisa in for a cup of tea whenever she sees her passing by and Lisa never fails to bring Marie things she needs. “She's given me a second life and I’ve got a daughter to love,” says Marie. For Lisa, the rescue has completely changed her life. It seems more beautiful and meaningful to her. (83words)
IV 技能鍛造營
Synaesthesia (通感）
1. 定義
Synaesthesia (通感）修辭法是以視、聽、觸、嗅、味等感覺直接描寫事物，把不同感官的感覺溝通起來，借聯想引起感覺轉移，“以感覺寫感覺”。
2. 作用
通感修辭法的巧妙運用，通過不同感官的交融，使得描述更加生動、具體，并豐富了
讀者的感官體驗
3. 用法
(1)“他的聲音如春風拂面，溫暖而柔和。”這句話將聽覺上的聲音與觸覺上的春風拂面相結合，形象地描繪了聲音的溫暖和柔和。
(2)“她的歌聲如清泉流淌，清新而自然。”這句話將聽覺上的歌聲與視覺上的清泉流淌相聯系，生動地表現了歌聲的清新和自然之美。
(3)“他的鋼琴演奏如火焰燃燒，熱烈而激情。”這句話將聽覺上的鋼琴演奏與視覺上的火焰燃燒以及情感上的熱烈和激情相結合，形象地傳達了鋼琴演奏的熱烈和激情四溢。
(4)“鳥兒落在樹上，傾污出百合花似的聲音。”這句話用視覺形容聽覺，由鳥落在樹上發出的聲音聯想到百合花。
(5)“品嘗Mozart的音樂。”這句話用嗅覺形容聽覺。
4. 實踐
英譯漢
(1) The warm colors of the painting seem to sing a soft melody.
(2) The bright lights on the stage danced to the rhythm of the musi
(3) The harsh sound of the alarm clock scratched at my skin.
(4) The smooth surface of the marble felt like a clear sky.
(5) As I entered her room, I was hit by the heavy perfume and noisy colors.
（1）這幅畫溫暖的色彩似乎在吟唱著輕柔的旋律。
（2）舞臺上明亮的燈光隨著音樂的節奏起舞。
（3）鬧鐘刺耳的聲音像在刮我的皮膚。
（4）大理石光滑的表面感覺就像晴朗的天空。
（5）我一走進她的房間，濃郁的香氣和刺眼的色彩就朝我襲來。

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