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廣東省佛山市禪城區2025屆高三上學期統一調研測試（一）英語試題
第二節(滿分25分)
47.閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
In a world where negativity often seems to dominate the headlines, it’s easy to overlook the small acts of kindness that can make a significant difference in someone’s day. I recently experienced this first hand during a particularly challenging week.
I had a hard day at work, my week didn’t go well and problems just kept popping up everywhere. Things broke or quit, unexpected bills came in and I was struggling to cope with all the stress. Then an unexpected run to the store popped up, when all I wanted to do was go home and well, I felt like I was at the boiling point.
I made the trip across town to the store, even though I only needed a few things, and found the parking lot packed. To add to it, the person next to where I was going to park seemed to think his car was entitled to TWO parking spots, which bothered me when it was a small vehicle and it parked on the middle line of two spaces, clearly taking them both. I finally parked and then realized I had left my purse, with my debit card (借記卡), checkbook, etc., at home that day. Thankfully, I had a small amount of cash, so I grabbed it and my coupon (優惠券) book and went inside, thinking that with the coupons, I would even have some cash left over. The store was really busy, but I just went and found the few things I needed and got in one of the few lanes open, and prepared to wait.
I waited and waited. Meanwhile, my impatience grew. After a stressful day, all I wanted to do was go home, but I was stuck in the checkout line. The line I joined seemed to crawl at a snail’s pace. My stress levels were rising. I was shifting restlessly while waiting in line when I spotted an old lady standing behind me. It seemed that she sensed my anxiety because she cast a kind smile. Awkwardly returning a smile, I kept waiting. After what seemed like an age, it was my turn and I got to the front.
注意：
(1)續寫詞數應為150左右；(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: However, things didn’t go as I had expected.
Paragraph 2: I was about to go back for more cash when I felt a pat on my shoulder.
第二節(滿分25分)
47.閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
In a world where negativity often seems to dominate the headlines(定從), it’s easy to overlook the small acts of kindness(非謂語動詞做主語) that can make a significant difference in someone’s day(定從). I recently experienced this first hand during a particularly challenging week.
I had a hard day at work, my week didn’t go well and problems just kept popping up everywhere. Things broke or quit, unexpected bills came in and I was struggling to cope with all the stress(a,b and c). Then an unexpected run to the store popped up, when all I wanted to do(定從) was go home and well(狀從), I felt like I was at the boiling point(賓從).
I made the trip across town to the store, even though I only needed a few things, and found the parking lot packed(讓步狀從). To add to it, the person next to where I was going to park(定從) seemed to think his car was entitled to TWO parking spots(賓從), which bothered me(定從) when it was a small vehicle and it parked on the middle line of two spaces(狀從), clearly taking them both(非謂語動詞做方式狀語). I finally parked and then realized I had left my purse, with my debit card (借記卡), checkbook, etc., at home that day(賓從). Thankfully, I had a small amount of cash, so I grabbed it and my coupon (優惠券) book and went inside, thinking that with the coupons, I would even have some cash left over(賓從). The store was really busy, but I just went and found the few things I needed(定從) and got in one of the few lanes open, and prepared to wait.
I waited and waited. Meanwhile, my impatience grew. After a stressful day, all I wanted to do(定從) was go home, but I was stuck in the checkout line. The line I joined(定從) seemed to crawl at a snail’s pace. My stress levels were rising. I was shifting restlessly while waiting in line(狀從) when I spotted an old lady standing behind me(狀從). It seemed that she sensed my anxiety(表從) because she cast a kind smile(狀從). Awkwardly returning a smile(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作), I kept waiting. After what seemed like an age, it was my turn and I got to the front.
注意：
(1)續寫詞數應為150左右；(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: However, things didn’t go as I had expected.
Paragraph 2: I was about to go back for more cash when I felt a pat on my shoulder.
1. 讀后續寫的分類分析
分析角度 內容 原文反應句
類型分析 本篇屬于“情感轉折型”的讀后續寫。 本文主要圍繞主人公經歷的一天，從壓力累積到情緒崩潰，再到偶然遇到一位善意的老人的微笑，情感發生了變化。
思路構思 續寫時需要聚焦主人公情感的轉折點，尤其是在遇到老人的微笑后心境的變化。 在接下來的段落里，需通過情感的遞進與外部事件（如老人的舉動）相結合，強化主人公的情感轉變與感悟。
布局與框架 1. 第一段：描述主人公的無助與壓力感。
2. 第二段：通過老人的微笑引發情感的改變，進而推進故事的發展。
承接原文事項 1. 保持原文的情感基調——壓力與無奈。
2. 強調突如其來的意外善意（老人微笑）。 需強調主人公的壓力情緒到遇到意外的情感轉變。
整體注意事項 1. 保持語境連貫，關注細節描寫；
2. 強調情感的轉折——由焦慮轉為溫暖；
3. 需要展現主人公的內心世界。 語言要簡單卻具有情感深度，展現人物的內心變化與外部事件的呼應。
巧妙設計內容 1. 借由老人的善意舉動，展現人與人之間的溫暖與關愛；
2. 最終通過主人公的內心獨白或感悟，圓滿故事。 老人微笑后，主人公回想自己生活中的壓力，并感受到人際關系中的關愛，拋開負面情緒，找回希望。
2. 故事山模式（Story Mountain）分析
思維導圖（Story Mountain）
引入： 主人公經歷了一個極其糟糕的日子，所有的負面情緒開始積累。
事件：工作上的不順，意外的停車問題，忘記帶錢包等。
沖突： 主人公在商店排隊結賬時焦慮和無助感加劇。
事件：排隊等待時間長，壓力不斷累積。
高潮： 老人微笑的善意觸動了主人公的內心，情感發生轉折。
事件：老人的微笑帶來了溫暖的情感轉折。
解決： 主人公從壓力中解脫，感受到了周圍的善意與關愛。
事件：主人公恢復冷靜，重新獲得希望。
3. 伏筆與沖突點分析
分析角度 內容 原文反應句
人物刻畫 主人公經歷了一天的挫折和情感低谷，形成了心態的變化。 “Things broke or quit, unexpected bills came in and I was struggling to cope with all the stress.”
情感層次 從焦慮和無助，到遇到意外的善意后，情感得到緩解并發生轉折。 “It seemed that she sensed my anxiety because she cast a kind smile.”
關鍵情節點 老人的微笑是觸發情感轉折的關鍵點。 “After what seemed like an age, it was my turn and I got to the front.”
情感轉折 從焦慮的情緒轉變為內心的溫暖和感激。 “Awkwardly returning a smile, I kept waiting.”
4. 動作、心理、環境描寫的英文例句推薦
動作描寫：
She grabbed her cash quickly and rushed inside.
She shifted restlessly while waiting in line.
Jade scanned the store, trying to find the shortest queue.
Her fingers trembled as she reached for the coupon book.
She clenched her fists, trying to calm her nerves.
She sighed heavily as the queue seemed endless.
She turned to look at the person in front of her in line, wondering if they were as frustrated.
She finally stepped forward to the counter, heart racing.
心理描寫：
Jade felt her heart sink with every passing second.
She thought, "Will I ever make it home in time "
The thought of more stress pushed her to the edge.
For a moment, she wondered if anyone would understand her frustration.
Her mind was racing, her patience running thin.
She closed her eyes briefly, hoping for some relief.
Jade felt a wave of helplessness wash over her.
But the smile from the elderly lady made her feel strangely at ease.
環境描寫：
The store was packed, every aisle filled with hurried customers.
The checkout line seemed to stretch forever, with only one register open.
The fluorescent lights above flickered intermittently.
The noise of carts clattering and people talking filled the space.
Outside, the sun was setting, casting a warm glow over the parking lot.
The air felt stuffy and warm, as the heat from so many people filled the room.
The cool breeze outside was a sharp contrast to the crowded store.
The shelves were lined with products, most of them on sale.
5. 高級替換詞及短語推薦
場景 替換詞 例句
焦慮 anxious, worried, stressed, uneasy, troubled She felt anxious as the minutes ticked by.
無助 helpless, powerless, defeated, overwhelmed Jade felt completely helpless when her patience was running out.
微笑 smile, grin, beam, flash a smile, show a smile The old lady flashed a warm smile that made Jade feel instantly better.
擁擠 crowded, packed, congested, jammed, bustling The store was packed with customers, making it hard to move freely.
壓力 stress, pressure, tension, strain, anxiety She couldn’t bear the tension anymore, feeling as though the pressure was going to burst her.
6. 高中語法現象分析
語法現象 搭配與語法點 例句
動詞短語 shift restlessly, grab quickly, sigh heavily, glance at "She shifted restlessly while waiting in line."
虛擬語氣 if + 主語 + had + 過去分詞 "If she had not received the smile, she would have left in frustration."
感嘆句 What a relief, How sweet, What a moment "What a relief it was when I felt her kindness."
從句 賓語從句：She felt that…
狀語從句：Although it was crowded, she…
定語從句：The store, which was crowded, was noisy. "Although it was crowded, Jade kept waiting."
Possible Answers
Version 1
Paragraph 1: However, things didn’t go as I had expected. The elderly lady’s smile had a profound impact on me. At that moment, I felt an overwhelming sense of calm wash over me, as though her gesture had broken through the wall of stress and frustration(狀從) I had built up(定從). It was as if the entire universe had paused for a brief second(表從), allowing me to breathe and reflect(非謂語動詞短語做結果狀語). I could no longer focus on the inconveniences I had faced earlier in the day(定從). Instead, I found myself thinking about the kindness of strangers and how such small, seemingly insignificant moments can alter our perspective on the world(賓從). The noise in the store faded into the background as I tried to grasp the full significance of the smile(狀從).
Paragraph 2: I was about to go back for more cash when I felt a pat on my shoulder. I turned around and found the same elderly lady, holding out a small, crumpled bill(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作) with a gentle smile(介詞短語做狀語). “You don’t need to worry about it,” she said softly. At first, I was too stunned to respond. I looked at her in disbelief, wondering why a stranger would offer help without hesitation(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作+賓從). Slowly, I realized that it wasn’t just the money, but the act of kindness itself that touched me deeply(賓從+強調句). My initial skepticism gave way to a feeling of immense gratitude. I thanked her with all my heart, realizing that in a world filled with challenges(非謂語動詞短語做后置定語), it was the kindness of others that could turn a tough day around(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作+賓從+強調句).
亮點語法與詞匯分析：
加分語法點：
虛擬語氣：If she had not smiled, I would have felt even more stressed.
情態動詞：She could not have known how much her smile meant to me.
倒裝句：Never had I felt so moved by such a simple gesture.
情緒描寫：
詞匯：calm, overwhelming sense, breathe, reflection, disbelief, immense gratitude.
替換選項：peaceful (calm), deep appreciation (immense gratitude).
動作描寫：
詞匯：pat on my shoulder, holding out, stunned to respond, offered help, gave way.
替換選項：extend, hand over, pause.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: However, things didn’t go as I had expected. The moment the old lady smiled at me(狀從), everything seemed to slow down. Her smile, so warm and genuine(adj做補語), cut through the chaos around me. In that fleeting second, I felt as if the pressure of the world had lifted from my shoulders(表從). I had been so consumed by my frustrations that I had forgotten how easy it was to overlook the kindness(賓從+賓從) that surrounds us(定從). I paused, staring at the elderly woman for a moment, feeling a wave of relief wash over me(現在分詞做伴隨動作). It was a gentle reminder that sometimes, all it takes(定從) is a small act of kindness(強調句) to brighten someone’s day and change the course of their emotions(目的狀語).
Paragraph 2: I was about to go back for more cash when I felt a pat on my shoulder. Turning around(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作), I saw the elderly lady standing there, her face radiant with kindness(獨立主格). She handed me the exact amount I needed(定從) and simply said, “I hope this helps(賓從).” I couldn’t help but feel a mix of surprise and appreciation. It was a humbling experience to receive such generosity from a stranger(todo 做后置定語). I thanked her profusely, feeling a deep sense of warmth fill my chest(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). As I left the store(狀從), I couldn’t stop thinking about the impact this small interaction had on me(定從). It made me realize that there is still good in the world, and that it’s often the little things that matter the most(定從).
亮點語法與詞匯分析：
加分語法點：
非謂語動詞：Her smile, so warm and genuine, cutting through the chaos.
定語從句：The elderly lady, who had a smile that could light up the room, stood beside me.
虛擬語氣：Had I known about her kindness earlier, I would have been less stressed.
情緒描寫：
詞匯：relief, surprise, humbling experience, warmth, deep sense.
替換選項：comfort (relief), overwhelming joy (warmth).
動作描寫：
詞匯：turned around, handed me, filled my chest, couldn’t stop thinking.
替換選項：passed, reached out, pondered.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: However, things didn’t go as I had expected. The old lady’s smile was like a breath of fresh air in the midst of my storm of frustration. I had been so absorbed in my own worries that I failed to notice the simple joys in life. Her smile was a reminder that no matter how difficult a day may seem, kindness can still find its way through. I felt a shift in my attitude as the smile dissolved my anger and anxiety(狀從). It was as if I had been given a gift, not in the form of material things, but in the form of compassion(表從). I smiled back, suddenly feeling lighter(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作), as though the world had become a little brighter(狀從).
Paragraph 2: I was about to go back for more cash when I felt a pat on my shoulder. I turned around to see the elderly lady standing behind me, holding out a few bills(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). “You don’t need to worry,” she said kindly. Her words were simple, yet they carried so much meaning. I looked at her, astonished at the kindness of a stranger(非謂語動詞做主語補語). Without thinking, I accepted the money, grateful for her generosity(非謂語動詞做主語補語). As I left the store(狀從), I couldn’t help but feel a renewed sense of hope. It was a reminder that, despite the struggles we face, there are always people who care and are willing to lend a helping hand(定從) when we need it most(狀從).
亮點語法與詞匯分析：
加分語法點：
定語從句：The smile, which was unexpectedly kind, melted my frustration away.
條件句：Had I known about the kindness, I would have been much less stressed.
狀語從句：Although I was initially shocked, I soon realized how much it meant.
情緒描寫：
詞匯：shift, dissolve, lighter, brighter, renewed sense of hope.
替換選項：change (shift), hopeful (renewed sense of hope).
動作描寫：
詞匯：pat on my shoulder, turned around, handed out, accepted.
替換選項：tapped, offered, took.
高級替換詞與短語推薦
場景 替換詞/短語 例句
焦慮 nervous, uneasy, on edge, agitated, distressed She was feeling extremely uneasy as the minutes dragged on.
無助 powerless, overwhelmed, helpless, at a loss, defeated Jade felt utterly overwhelmed by the long wait and her mounting frustration.
善意 kindness, compassion, generosity, goodwill, thoughtfulness His thoughtfulness truly made my day much easier.
感激 thankful, appreciative, grateful, moved, touched I was incredibly moved by the kindness of a stranger.
微笑 grin, beam, smile, flash a smile, soft smile She flashed a bright smile, making me feel at ease immediately.
語法亮點分析
定語從句：用來修飾名詞，增加細節信息。例如：
"The elderly lady, who had a smile that could light up the room, stood beside me."
虛擬語氣：用于假設與現實相反或可能性較低的情況。例如：
"Had I known about her kindness earlier, I would have been less stressed."
非謂語動詞：如動名詞和分詞，表達動作和狀態的延續。例如：
"Her smile, so warm and genuine, cutting through the chaos around me."

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