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Being helpful is a very good quality，but sometimes being overly enthusiastic can also cause trouble to others．
It was the night before the summer break，and it was raining cats and dogs，but I wasn’t bothered because Justin，Wendy，Crystal，Kevin and I were texting each other about our upcoming
trip to Niagara Falls．Everybody was so engaged in brainstorming ideas about what to bring along．
Suddenly，Justin came up with a brilliant idea．He suggested that we should assign roles to each one of us so that we could minimize everyone’s workload．I was assigned the babysitter’s role because I was the most careful person among us．
When the sun was right above our heads，we departed for our destination．On our way，I served as the babysitter．I collected hundreds of junk food wraps and guided us into every single rest station when needed．As Wendy and I were lining up for the washroom，I noticed how a little
girl always got pushed out of the line，so I let her stand in front of me．When we all got back to the
car，Wendy praised me as a kind and responsible member，which made me feel very proud of myself．I was happy．On the way，I saw Crystal holding something that looked like a sun hat．Justin asked Crystal what it was，but because I was too excited，I didn’t catch Crystal’s answer clearly．It seemed that she mentioned her mother．
When we arrived at our hotel，it was already six in the evening．Since no one was hungry，we decided to rest and get ready for next day’s adventure．However，I，as an exception，was too excited，thinking about spending the next few days．I couldn’t close my eyes．I decided to go to
Crystal’s room since she was playing some music there．Crystal was weaving（編織）the thing that
I saw in the car．As I was watching her weave，time passed by like an arrow，and Crystal unintentionally fell asleep before she finished her sun hat．
注意：1．續寫詞數應為150個左右；
2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Seeing Crystal fall quickly into her dream，I suddenly came up with an idea．__________
Instead of receiving Crystal’s appreciation，I was awakened by a shake the next morning．
________
文章大意
暑假前夕，主人公和賈斯汀、溫迪、克里斯托、凱文等小伙伴們在群里討論即將前往尼亞加拉大瀑布的旅行。賈斯汀提議分工以減輕大家的工作量，由于主人公最細心，被分配擔任 “保姆” 角色。旅行途中，主人公認真履行職責，收集垃圾、引導大家去休息站，還因照顧插隊的小女孩得到溫迪贊揚。途中，主人公看到克里斯托拿著類似太陽帽的東西，沒聽清她的解釋，似乎和她媽媽有關。晚上到達酒店，其他人因不餓決定休息，主人公卻興奮得睡不著，便去了正在播放音樂的克里斯托房間。克里斯托在編織太陽帽，編織時不知不覺睡著了。
故事山分析
目標：主人公和小伙伴們順利完成尼亞加拉大瀑布之旅，享受旅行的快樂。
阻礙：目前未出現明顯阻礙，但從 “過于熱心有時會給他人帶來麻煩” 這一背景來看，可能會有因主人公的行為引發的意外狀況。
努力：主人公認真履行 “保姆” 職責，照顧團隊成員。
結果：順利到達酒店，為第二天的冒險做準備。
意外：目前還未出現，后續續寫可能圍繞主人公的熱心行為展開，比如完成克里斯托未完成的編織可能引發意外。
轉彎：如果因為主人公的熱心行為導致問題，旅行的氛圍和發展方向可能會發生轉變。
結局：目前未知，需要續寫完成，可能是問題得到解決，旅行繼續愉快進行；也可能是問題影響了旅行，給大家帶來教訓。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
“過于熱心有時會給他人帶來麻煩”：這是整個故事發展的潛在背景，暗示主人公后續的行為可能會引發問題。在續寫中，主人公可能因為熱心完成克里斯托的編織，卻發現編織物有特殊意義或用途，自己的行為打亂了克里斯托的計劃，給她帶來麻煩。
“沒聽清克里斯托關于手中編織物的解釋，似乎和她媽媽有關”：為編織物的意義埋下伏筆。續寫時可能揭示編織物是克里斯托為媽媽準備的特殊禮物，主人公擅自完成編織破壞了禮物的原本意義，引發矛盾。
“主人公被分配擔任‘保姆’角色，且認真履行職責”：體現主人公的性格特點，在續寫中可能因過于負責的性格，在克里斯托睡著后，忍不住繼續完成編織，從而引發故事的轉折。
“主人公興奮得睡不著，去了克里斯托房間”：為主人公參與編織一事提供了契機。在續寫中，會成為故事發展的重要情節起點，引出后續因編織產生的一系列事件。
“克里斯托編織時睡著了”：這是故事的一個轉折點，讓主人公有機會單獨處理編織物，在續寫中，會成為矛盾產生的直接原因。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：“Seeing Crystal fall quickly into her dream，I suddenly came up with an idea．” 重點描寫主人公想到的主意，可能是幫克里斯托完成編織。詳細描述主人公編織時的心理活動，比如覺得自己能幫上大忙，想象克里斯托醒來后的驚喜等。同時，描述編織過程中的一些細節，如遇到的困難、如何克服等。
第二段：“Instead of receiving Crystal’s appreciation，I was awakened by a shake the next morning．” 著重描寫第二天早上克里斯托的反應，她可能因為主人公的行為而生氣，解釋編織物的特殊意義。然后描述主人公的內心感受，如后悔、愧疚等。最后，講述小伙伴們如何解決這個矛盾，對旅行產生了怎樣的影響。
情感線
一開始，主人公因被分配 “保姆” 角色且履行職責得到贊揚而感到自豪和開心，對旅行充滿期待，興奮得睡不著。在看到克里斯托睡著后，決定幫她完成編織時，內心充滿期待和成就感，想象著被夸贊。然而，第二天早上被克里斯托生氣地叫醒，得知自己好心辦壞事，內心充滿后悔和愧疚。最后在小伙伴們解決矛盾的過程中，情感逐漸平復，可能對熱心助人有了新的認識。
故事線
小伙伴們討論尼亞加拉大瀑布之旅并分工，主人公擔任 “保姆”。
旅行途中主人公履行職責，照顧團隊成員，得到贊揚。
主人公看到克里斯托編織太陽帽，沒聽清關于編織物的解釋。
到達酒店后，主人公興奮得睡不著，去了克里斯托房間，克里斯托編織時睡著。
主人公決定幫克里斯托完成編織。
第二天早上克里斯托生氣，矛盾產生，小伙伴們解決矛盾。
主旨升華句（5 句英文）
This experience taught us that while kindness and helpfulness are noble qualities, we should always respect others' intentions and boundaries, for even the most well - meaning actions can sometimes lead to misunderstandings.
Through this incident, we learned that true help is not just about taking action on our own initiative, but also about understanding the needs and feelings of those we aim to assist.
The story serves as a reminder that in our eagerness to be helpful, we must first communicate and clarify with others, as assumptions can often cause more harm than good.
This journey made us realize that every action has consequences, and when it comes to helping others, we need to be more thoughtful and less impulsive.
In the end, we understood that the key to harmonious relationships lies in not only our willingness to help but also our ability to listen, respect, and cooperate with others.
寫作示范
示范一
第一段：Seeing Crystal fall quickly into her dream，I suddenly came up with an idea．I thought I could surprise her by finishing the sun hat. I picked up the half - woven hat, carefully following the pattern. As I worked, I imagined Crystal's big smile when she saw the completed hat. However, I was not as skilled as Crystal, and I made several mistakes. But I was determined to finish it. After what seemed like ages, I finally managed to complete the hat, feeling proud of my "masterpiece".
第二段：Instead of receiving Crystal’s appreciation，I was awakened by a shake the next morning. Crystal looked furious. She told me that the hat was a special gift for her mother's birthday, and she had designed it in a unique way. My actions had ruined her plan. I was filled with regret and apologized sincerely. Justin and Wendy came to help. They suggested that we all work together to add some decorations to the hat to make it even more special. With everyone's efforts, the hat became a beautiful symbol of our friendship, and the incident brought us closer.
示范二
第一段：Seeing Crystal fall quickly into her dream，I suddenly came up with an idea．I decided to finish the hat for her, believing it would be a great help. I sat down and started to weave, my heart pounding with excitement. I focused all my attention on the task, trying to make it as perfect as possible. Despite the difficulties, I persevered. Finally, I put the last stitch, feeling a great sense of accomplishment. I placed the hat beside Crystal, imagining how happy she would be when she woke up.
第二段：Instead of receiving Crystal’s appreciation，I was awakened by a shake the next morning. Crystal was in tears. She explained that the hat was not just an ordinary one but a traditional handicraft passed down in her family. Each stitch had a special meaning, and my random actions had disrupted the pattern. I felt terrible, blaming myself for my thoughtlessness. Kevin stepped in and proposed that we visit a local handicraft store to learn more about the traditional weaving techniques. We spent the morning there, and with the help of the store owner, we managed to fix the hat, and Crystal forgave me.

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