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I burst through the back door. “Mum,” I said. “I’ve been nominated (提名) for the State Junior Honour Society.”
My mother gave my shoulders a squeeze. “I’m so proud of you.” she told me.
Mum and I sat together in the family room as I filled out the honour society application. I had to prove that that I had all the characteristics required in a candidate: scholarship, leadership, service, and citizenship. I wrote what I achieved in my study and my lasting efforts in raising money for the community. I was confident that I would make the school honour society. Based on my characteristics, my mum even said I was well qualified for a New York State Award.
The next day, I turned the paperwork into the advisor and didn’t think any more about it. Months went by, and I received a letter from the school about the honour society. As soon as the bus let me off that afternoon, I raced into the house.
“Mum,” I said, “I didn’t make the honour society.” She smiled, “Are you joking ” I felt tears in my eyes. “No, really, they didn’ t pick me,” I said and handed her the letter.
“Oh, honey, I’m sorry. I thought you were kidding,” my mother said. “There must be some mistake.” She grabbed the phone and called the honour society advisor. He told her that no mistake was made, but he couldn’t disclose the reason for my non-selection. Nearly all of my friends were chosen for the honour society except me. It was really hard for me.
Mum told me a story about a high school friend of hers. “He was intelligent and warm-hearted, but for some reason he wasn’t chosen for the State Honour Society. He was hurt and angry.” “Do you know what he does for a living now ” she asked. “He is a world-famous doctor, and he saves lives every day. You can make a difference too.”
I understood what my mum was trying to say. Not being a member of the honour society wasn’t going to ruin my good academic performance and my contribution to community.
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With her encouragement, I decided to keep doing what I always do and make a difference.
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One day, I received a letter from the New York State Award Committee.
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文章大意
“我” 被提名參加州少年榮譽協會，自信滿滿地填寫申請，認為自己具備所有要求的特質，媽媽也覺得 “我” 有資格獲得紐約州獎。數月后收到學校關于榮譽協會的通知，卻得知自己未被選中，媽媽打電話詢問也無果。媽媽給 “我” 講了她高中朋友未入選榮譽協會，卻成為著名醫生拯救生命的故事，“我” 因此明白未入選榮譽協會不會影響自己的學業成績和對社區的貢獻。
故事山分析
開端：“我” 被提名參加州少年榮譽協會，認真填寫申請，充滿期待。
發展：“我” 未被榮譽協會選中，媽媽詢問無果，給 “我” 講朋友的故事開導 “我”，“我” 有所感悟。
高潮：續寫部分將圍繞 “我” 如何繼續努力以及收到紐約州獎委員會信件后的情節展開，是故事的關鍵轉折點。
結局（待續寫）：要展現 “我” 在后續的成長和收獲，以及紐約州獎委員會信件帶來的影響，體現努力終有回報的主題。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
媽媽認為 “我” 有資格獲得紐約州獎：在續寫中，“我” 收到紐約州獎委員會的信件，可能與媽媽的預測相呼應，暗示 “我” 在其他方面得到認可。
“我” 的自信以及對自身特質的肯定：在后續努力過程中，“我” 會憑借自身的特質，如獎學金、領導力、服務和公民意識等，繼續在學習和社區活動中發光發熱，取得成績。
媽媽講述朋友未入選卻成功的故事：“我” 會以媽媽朋友為榜樣，不被挫折打倒，堅持努力，在自己的道路上取得成就，回應媽媽的鼓勵。
“我” 理解未入選不影響自身價值：在續寫中，“我” 會以積極的心態面對，繼續保持良好的學術表現和對社區的貢獻，用實際行動證明自己的價值。
“我” 決定繼續努力并做出改變：在后續情節中，“我” 會通過具體行動，如參加更多學術競賽、組織社區活動等，來體現自己的努力和改變，為收到紐約州獎委員會信件埋下伏筆。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：描述 “我” 在媽媽鼓勵下的具體行動，如更加努力學習，在學術上取得新成績；積極參與社區活動，組織公益項目，幫助更多人。展現 “我” 在堅持過程中的付出和收獲，以及面對困難時的堅持。
第二段：講述收到紐約州獎委員會信件的情景，信中的內容，如獲獎原因、對自己的肯定等。描述自己的心情，如驚喜、激動、自豪等，以及對未來的展望，強調努力終會得到回報，升華主題。
情感線
起初，“我” 因未入選榮譽協會而感到失落和沮喪，媽媽的故事和鼓勵讓 “我” 從消極情緒中走出來，重新振作，決定繼續努力。在努力的過程中，“我” 保持積極的心態，克服困難，不斷成長。當收到紐約州獎委員會信件時，“我” 的心情從期待轉為驚喜和自豪，深刻體會到努力的價值，對未來充滿信心，完成了從挫折到成功的情感轉變。
故事線（6 條）
“我” 被提名參加州少年榮譽協會，自信填寫申請。
“我” 未被榮譽協會選中，媽媽詢問無果，講朋友故事開導 “我”。
“我” 在媽媽鼓勵下，決定繼續努力，在學習和社區活動中積極行動。
“我” 在學習上取得新成績，在社區活動中組織公益項目，幫助他人。
“我” 收到紐約州獎委員會的信件。
“我” 得知獲獎原因，感到驚喜和自豪，對未來充滿信心。
主旨升華句
This experience taught me that setbacks are but stepping - stones to success, and as long as we persevere in our efforts, we will surely be recognized in the end.（這次經歷告訴我，挫折只是成功的墊腳石，只要我們堅持不懈地努力，最終一定會得到認可。）
Through this journey, I realized that true value lies not in the recognition of a particular society but in the continuous pursuit of self - improvement and contribution to others.（通過這段經歷，我意識到真正的價值不在于某個特定協會的認可，而在于不斷追求自我提升和對他人的貢獻。）
It dawned on me that being overlooked by one organization doesn't mean the end of our journey; instead, it can be the beginning of a more remarkable path filled with unexpected rewards.（我逐漸明白，被一個組織忽視并不意味著我們旅程的結束；相反，它可能是一條充滿意外收獲的更非凡道路的開始。）
This event served as a reminder that our efforts are always seen and rewarded in some way, and we should never give up on our dreams and the pursuit of excellence.（這件事提醒我們，我們的努力總會以某種方式被看到和回報，我們永遠不應放棄夢想和對卓越的追求。）
In the end, I understood that the real victory is not in being selected by a certain group but in having the courage to face failure and the determination to keep moving forward, which will lead us to true success.（最后，我明白了真正的勝利不在于被某個特定群體選中，而在于有勇氣面對失敗和有決心繼續前進，這將引領我們走向真正的成功。）
寫作示范一
With her encouragement, I decided to keep doing what I always do and make a difference. I threw myself into my studies, spending more time in the library, participating actively in various academic competitions. In the community, I organized a charity sale to raise funds for the local orphanage. It was tough at times, especially when facing difficulties in getting enough donations. But I remembered my mother's words and persevered. Slowly, my efforts paid off. I got excellent grades in the final exams and received praise from the school. The orphanage also expressed their gratitude for our help.
One day, I received a letter from the New York State Award Committee. My heart pounded with excitement as I opened it. The letter stated that I was being awarded for my outstanding academic achievements and remarkable contributions to the community. I couldn't believe my eyes. All my hard work had finally been recognized. I rushed to share the good news with my mother. We hugged each other tightly, both of us filled with pride and joy. This award was not just a recognition for me but also a testament to the power of perseverance.
寫作示范二
With her encouragement, I decided to keep doing what I always do and make a difference. I joined a study group to help my classmates improve their grades. After school, we would gather in the library, discussing difficult problems and sharing learning methods. At the same time, I volunteered to teach kids in a community center. I prepared lessons carefully, trying to make the classes interesting and engaging. Although there were many challenges, such as students' different learning paces, I never gave up.
One day, I received a letter from the New York State Award Committee. When I saw the envelope, I was both nervous and curious. As I unfolded the letter, I found that I was selected for the award because of my dedication to academic progress and community service. I was overjoyed. This award was a huge boost to my confidence. It made me realize that every little effort counts. I knew that no matter what challenges lay ahead, I would always stay true to myself and keep striving for excellence.
【答案】
With her encouragement, I decided to keep doing what I always do and make a difference. I continued volunteering at the local community centre, mentoring younger students, and even started a club at school dedicated to promoting small acts of kindness. I cherished every chance for me to fully immerse myself in my passion for community service and cheered for my personal growth. Through these experiences, I realized that true success isn’t determined by a title. It’s about the impact we have on others’ lives. In the midst of my ongoing journey, an unexpected opportunity presented itself.
One day, I received a letter from the New York State Award Committee. It informed me of being offered a special New York State Award in recognition of my good academic performance and continuous efforts in community service. Receiving the New York State Award was a defining moment for me. It was a reminder that my worth and achievements were not defined by a single society or organization. Seeing my smile, Mum hugged me, whispering, “Your hard work paid off.” At that moment, I truly feel the happiness of making positive impact on others not just for gaining an award.

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