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Life was peaceful in the town of Willow Creek.But one chilly autumn morning,a new neighbor moved in across the street.He was a college student.He had brought with him a beer-pong table,which was set on his front lawn.
The beer-pong table was within full view of my kitchen window.It was a tool for the noisy,late-night parties by college students.I knew that all too well from once living near a university.
Remembering the sleepless nights caused by the sound of bouncing balls and the noises,I felt a burst of anger bubbling up like a storm.So I walked right up to the student's house,and knocked on the door.I told him that it had to go.Instead of apologizing,he returned my anger in kind.“Who the hell are you ”he asked.“And what gives you the right to make such a ridiculous demand ”
His challenging gaze and aggressive tone added fuel to the flames of my anger.My sharp and cutting words hung in the air.I could feel the heat of my anger,and a red veil clouded my face.
The next day,I felt ashamed.Why didn't other women get angry like me Why couldn't I keep it altogether Why couldn't I find some useful way to release the aggression
I thought of the cookies I had made recently—big,peanut butter chocolate cookies.I had made them to apologize to a friend.Some of the dough was still in the freezer.I hadn't intended to save the cookie dough balls for future apologies.But it was handy to have them sitting there,waiting to make things right.I decided to bake the cookies and offer them to my neighbor as a peace gesture.As the cookies baked,the house was filled with a warm,inviting smell.I placed the cookies on a plate,took a deep breath,and walked across the street.
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The door opened,and I was greeted by a pair of curious eyes. We shared a smile,and I felt a weight lifted off my heart.
文章大意
寧?kù)o的柳樹(shù)溪鎮(zhèn)迎來(lái)新鄰居，一位大學(xué)生在自家前草坪放置了啤酒乒乓球桌，這讓住在街對(duì)面、曾深受大學(xué)附近噪音困擾的 “我” 回憶起那些被噪音干擾的不眠之夜，憤怒涌上心頭?！拔摇?上門(mén)要求他搬走桌子，他不僅沒(méi)道歉，還態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬，雙方發(fā)生激烈爭(zhēng)吵。第二天，“我” 感到羞愧，想起之前做的餅干，決定烤好送給鄰居作為和解的表示。“我” 帶著餅干來(lái)到鄰居家，故事在此處續(xù)寫(xiě)。
故事山分析
開(kāi)端：大學(xué)生新搬來(lái)，放置啤酒乒乓球桌，引發(fā) “我” 的不滿(mǎn)。
發(fā)展：“我” 上門(mén)理論，與大學(xué)生發(fā)生爭(zhēng)吵，雙方互不相讓。
高潮（待續(xù)寫(xiě)）：“我” 帶著餅干去道歉，大學(xué)生的反應(yīng)以及兩人后續(xù)的交流互動(dòng)，決定矛盾能否化解。
結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫(xiě)）：兩人化解矛盾，關(guān)系緩和，可能成為朋友，“我” 也從這次經(jīng)歷中獲得感悟。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)
“我” 曾受大學(xué)附近噪音困擾：在續(xù)寫(xiě)中回應(yīng)為 “我” 在與大學(xué)生交流時(shí)提及這段經(jīng)歷，讓大學(xué)生理解 “我” 憤怒的原因，從而更易接受道歉，達(dá)成和解。
大學(xué)生的強(qiáng)硬態(tài)度：續(xù)寫(xiě)中可體現(xiàn)他因之前的強(qiáng)硬而在面對(duì) “我” 的道歉時(shí)有些尷尬、不自在，通過(guò)他態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變，展現(xiàn)和解的過(guò)程。
“我” 的憤怒與羞愧：在續(xù)寫(xiě)中，“我” 的羞愧促使 “我” 主動(dòng)道歉，推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展，而之前的憤怒則成為和解后兩人交流時(shí)的話(huà)題，增進(jìn)彼此了解。
餅干的出現(xiàn)：是和解的關(guān)鍵道具，在續(xù)寫(xiě)中，大學(xué)生因餅干感受到 “我” 的誠(chéng)意，從而放下防備，與 “我” 友好交流。
“我” 決定送餅干和解：續(xù)寫(xiě)中圍繞送餅干后的場(chǎng)景展開(kāi)，如大學(xué)生的反應(yīng)、兩人的對(duì)話(huà)等，體現(xiàn)和解的過(guò)程和結(jié)果。
續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：著重描寫(xiě) “我” 送餅干時(shí)的緊張心情，大學(xué)生開(kāi)門(mén)后的驚訝表情和最初的防備態(tài)度。接著寫(xiě) “我” 真誠(chéng)道歉，大學(xué)生態(tài)度逐漸緩和，接受餅干，兩人開(kāi)始簡(jiǎn)單交流。
第二段：描述兩人進(jìn)一步深入交流，分享生活點(diǎn)滴，“我” 了解到大學(xué)生的情況，大學(xué)生也理解了 “我” 的訴求。最后以雙方和解，關(guān)系改善，甚至成為朋友作為結(jié)尾，升華主題。
情感線(xiàn)
起初，“我” 因噪音對(duì)大學(xué)生充滿(mǎn)憤怒，爭(zhēng)吵后又陷入羞愧。帶著餅干去道歉時(shí)，內(nèi)心緊張不安。大學(xué)生開(kāi)門(mén)時(shí)的防備讓 “我” 更忐忑，當(dāng)他接受餅干并道歉時(shí)，“我” 感到一絲欣慰。交流過(guò)程中，隨著彼此了解加深，“我” 的心情逐漸放松，最后兩人和解，“我” 收獲了輕松和喜悅，還多了一份友誼。
故事線(xiàn)
“我” 帶著餅干來(lái)到大學(xué)生家門(mén)口，敲門(mén)。
大學(xué)生開(kāi)門(mén)，露出驚訝和防備的表情。
“我” 道歉并送上餅干，大學(xué)生接受。
大學(xué)生邀請(qǐng) “我” 進(jìn)屋，兩人開(kāi)始聊天。
兩人分享生活經(jīng)歷，增進(jìn)彼此了解。
雙方和解，約定以后友好相處，可能成為朋友。
主旨升華句
This encounter taught me that a little kindness and understanding can go a long way in mending broken relationships and turning conflicts into friendships.（這次相遇讓我明白，一點(diǎn)善意和理解就能在修復(fù)破裂關(guān)系、將沖突轉(zhuǎn)化為友誼方面發(fā)揮巨大作用。）
Through this experience, I realized that rather than letting anger consume us, taking the initiative to reconcile can open the door to unexpected connections and a more harmonious community.（通過(guò)這次經(jīng)歷，我意識(shí)到與其被憤怒吞噬，主動(dòng)和解能為意想不到的聯(lián)系和更和諧的社區(qū)打開(kāi)大門(mén)。）
It wasn't just a plate of cookies that bridged the gap between us; it was the courage to admit mistakes and the willingness to listen that created a new beginning for our relationship.（不僅僅是一盤(pán)餅干彌合了我們之間的差距，更是承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤的勇氣和傾聽(tīng)的意愿為我們的關(guān)系創(chuàng)造了新的開(kāi)始。）
This story serves as a reminder that in every conflict lies an opportunity for growth and connection, and a simple act of goodwill can transform a tense situation into a beautiful friendship.（這個(gè)故事提醒我們，每一次沖突中都蘊(yùn)含著成長(zhǎng)和建立聯(lián)系的機(jī)會(huì)，一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的善意之舉就能將緊張局勢(shì)轉(zhuǎn)化為美好的友誼。）
As I left my neighbor's house that day, I carried with me the valuable lesson that compassion and communication are the keys to building a warm - hearted and friendly neighborhood.（那天當(dāng)我離開(kāi)鄰居家時(shí)，我學(xué)到了寶貴的一課：同情和溝通是構(gòu)建一個(gè)溫暖友好社區(qū)的關(guān)鍵。）
寫(xiě)作示范一
The door opened, and I was greeted by a pair of curious eyes. The college student's eyebrows shot up in surprise, and his body tensed instinctively. I swallowed hard, my hands trembling slightly as I held out the plate of cookies. "Hi, I... I came to say sorry for yesterday," I stammered. "I was way too harsh." He blinked several times, his eyes fixed on the cookies. After a long moment of silence, he reached out and took the plate. "Thanks," he said, his voice softening. "I was a jerk too."
We shared a smile, and I felt a weight lifted off my heart. He invited me in, and we sat on his couch, a bit awkward at first. But as we started talking, the ice gradually melted. He told me how stressed he was with his studies and how he used the beer - pong table to unwind. I shared my concerns about the noise and my past experiences. Before I knew it, we were laughing and chatting like old friends. When I left, we exchanged numbers, promising to hang out soon. It was incredible how a simple apology could turn a difficult situation around.
寫(xiě)作示范二
The door opened, and I was greeted by a pair of curious eyes. The college student looked at me warily, his expression a mix of confusion and suspicion. I forced a smile, trying to appear friendly. "I'm really sorry about the other day," I said, my voice barely above a whisper. "Here, I made these for you." He stared at the cookies, then at me, and his rigid posture relaxed a little. "Oh, thanks," he mumbled, taking the plate.
We shared a smile, and I felt a weight lifted off my heart. He gestured for me to come in, and we sat down in his living room. We talked about his life in college and my love for the neighborhood. I explained how much peace and quiet meant to me, and he promised to be more considerate. By the end of our conversation, all the tension was gone. As I walked home, I realized that sometimes, all it takes to resolve a conflict is a little courage and a lot of empathy.
參考答案
The door opened, and I was greeted by a pair of curious eyes. The college student looked surprised to see me, and a hint of defensiveness flashed across his face. I forced a smile and held out the plate of cookies. "I'm really sorry about yesterday," I said, my voice a bit shaky. "I was out of line. These cookies are for you." He stared at the cookies for a moment, then at me. Slowly, the tension in his shoulders eased, and he took the plate. "Thanks," he mumbled, a bit awkwardly. "I should have been more understanding too."
We shared a smile, and I felt a weight lifted off my heart. He invited me in, and we sat on his couch, chatting about our lives. He told me about his studies and how much he loved the town. I shared some stories about the neighborhood. As we talked, I realized he was just a young guy trying to have a good time. Before I left, he promised to keep the noise down, and I said I'd love to have him over for dinner sometime. It was amazing how a simple plate of cookies could turn a tense situation into a new friendship.

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