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It was a peaceful morning. Adam was on his usual jog at the local park, after which he had to ride his motorcycle home to drop his children - Amanda. 13, and Jared.8-to school. Owing to financial difficulties, he could not afford a car.
After his wife passed away six years ago, Adam was left alone to care for his children. Thankfully, his eldest daughter, Stacey, 22, would help with the breakfast preparation and get the kids ready every morning when he was out jogging.
Adam looked at his watch. He’d have to go home in thirty minutes. He finished another round of the park and was ready to leave when the sight of an elderly lady stopped him in his tracks.
She was struggling up the park stairs, and just as she neared the top, she lost her footing and fell back down, rolling awkwardly.
“Ma’ am!” Adam ran over to the woman quickly. “Are you OK ”
“I’m fine; it was just a little fall,” she replied, but Adam worried she wasn’t fine. He offered to call the ambulance, but she refused.
“Please let me take you to a nearby clinic on my motorcycle,” he said, offering his arm to her, and she agreed.
They began to chat on their way to the clinic, and the woman introduced herself as Alice. She said she had lost her husband, Frank, for a few years. Her husband was in a business that helped families move. After he passed away, his truck was parked in the garage.
Adam knew how it felt to lose a loved one and he opened up to Alice about his wife, too. As they reached the clinic, the doctor there told Alice that she was fine. Then Adam sent the woman home. Alice wanted to thank Adam so she asked for his address. “I just want to send you something for your kids, and thank you,” she said. Adam hesitantly gave her his address and hurried home to his children.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150個左右;
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
The next morning, Stacey’s voice awakened Adam.
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At first, Adam wanted to refuse Alice’s truck.
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文章大意
一個寧靜的早晨，亞當像往常一樣在公園慢跑，之后他要騎摩托車送 13 歲的阿曼達和 8 歲的賈里德上學，因經濟困難他買不起汽車。六年前妻子去世后，他獨自照顧孩子，22 歲的大女兒斯泰西會在他慢跑時幫忙準備早餐和照顧弟妹。這天慢跑結束時，亞當看到一位老婦人愛麗絲在公園樓梯摔倒，他幫忙帶她去診所，路上兩人聊天，亞當傾訴了自己失去妻子的痛苦。到診所檢查后愛麗絲并無大礙，亞當送她回家，愛麗絲要了亞當的地址，想感謝他并送些東西給孩子們。
故事山分析
開端：亞當獨自撫養孩子，生活拮據，每天慢跑后騎摩托車送孩子上學。
發展：亞當在公園看到愛麗絲摔倒，帶她去診所，兩人交流各自失去親人的經歷。
高潮：愛麗絲要了亞當的地址，預示著后續有事情發生。
結局（待續寫）：亞當收到愛麗絲的感謝，可能改變他的生活狀況，展現人與人之間的溫暖與善意。
五處伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
亞當經濟困難，買不起車：在續寫中，愛麗絲可能送他實用的交通工具，比如她丈夫留下的卡車，解決他的出行難題，讓他能更方便地照顧孩子和生活。
亞當獨自照顧孩子，生活不易：這一背景使他接受愛麗絲的幫助更合理，收到幫助后他的感激之情會更強烈，也會引發他對生活改變的感慨。
愛麗絲提到丈夫的卡車閑置在車庫：為后文送卡車給亞當埋下伏筆，續寫中卡車會成為改變亞當生活的關鍵物品，亞當起初可能因覺得貴重而拒絕，但最終在愛麗絲的堅持下接受。
愛麗絲要亞當的地址，想送東西感謝他：暗示會有具體的感謝行動，續寫中圍繞送來的物品展開故事，比如卡車，描述亞當看到卡車時的驚訝和感動。
亞當和愛麗絲都經歷過失去親人的痛苦：這種相似的經歷拉近了兩人的距離，在續寫中，亞當會因為這份共情更能理解愛麗絲的善意，也更愿意接受她的幫助。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：詳細描述斯泰西喚醒亞當后，告知他有一輛卡車停在門口，亞當看到卡車后的驚訝反應，他可能會詢問斯泰西情況，然后回憶起愛麗絲，猜測卡車的來源，同時描述孩子們看到卡車時的好奇和興奮。
第二段：著重描寫亞當起初拒絕愛麗絲卡車的心理活動，比如覺得太貴重、無功不受祿等，接著可以寫愛麗絲是如何勸說他接受的，通過對話展現愛麗絲的真誠和善良，最后亞當接受卡車，表達他對未來生活的期待和對愛麗絲的感激。
情感線
亞當一直因經濟困難獨自撫養孩子而承受生活壓力，心情壓抑。幫助愛麗絲時，他因同病相憐而真誠付出。當得知愛麗絲要地址感謝時，他可能有些期待但又不確定。看到卡車時，他先是震驚，隨后是猶豫拒絕時的糾結。在愛麗絲勸說下接受卡車，他的心情轉為激動和感激，對未來生活充滿希望，深刻感受到陌生人的善意帶來的溫暖和力量。
故事線
亞當獨自撫養孩子，經濟困難，每天慢跑后騎摩托車送孩子上學。
亞當在公園幫助摔倒的愛麗絲去診所，兩人交流失去親人的經歷。
愛麗絲要亞當的地址表示感謝。
第二天亞當被斯泰西告知門口有輛卡車，猜測是愛麗絲送來的。
亞當起初拒絕愛麗絲的卡車，后在勸說下接受。
亞當收獲幫助，對未來生活充滿希望，感受到人間溫暖。
主旨升華句
This unexpected encounter and the kind - hearted gift from Alice remind us that in the face of life's hardships, a simple act of kindness from a stranger can be a ray of light, illuminating our path and filling our hearts with hope.（這次意外的相遇以及愛麗絲善良的禮物提醒我們，在面對生活的艱難困苦時，來自陌生人的一個簡單善舉可以是一束光，照亮我們的道路，讓我們心中充滿希望。）
Through Adam's experience, we learn that even in the darkest times of loss and financial struggles, the bond of humanity formed through mutual understanding and help can bring about life - changing surprises and warm our souls.（通過亞當的經歷，我們了解到，即使在失去親人和經濟困難的最黑暗時刻，通過相互理解和幫助形成的人性紐帶可以帶來改變生活的驚喜，溫暖我們的心靈。）
The story of Adam and Alice is a beautiful testament to the power of kindness. It shows that a single act of generosity, like offering a much - needed truck, can not only solve practical problems but also restore faith in the goodness of people.（亞當和愛麗絲的故事是善良力量的美好見證。它表明，一個慷慨的舉動，比如贈送一輛急需的卡車，不僅可以解決實際問題，還能恢復對人性美好的信心。）
In the journey of life, we may all face difficulties, but as Adam and Alice's story shows, a helping hand extended by a stranger can be the turning point that transforms our lives and teaches us the true meaning of compassion and hope.（在人生的旅途中，我們都可能面臨困難，但正如亞當和愛麗絲的故事所示，陌生人伸出的援助之手可以成為改變我們生活的轉折點，教會我們同情和希望的真正含義。）
This heartwarming story serves as a reminder that kindness has no boundaries. It can bridge the gap between strangers, bring joy in the midst of hardship, and create a world where everyone is willing to lend a hand to those in need.（這個溫暖人心的故事提醒我們，善良沒有界限。它可以彌合陌生人之間的差距，在艱難困苦中帶來喜悅，并創造一個每個人都愿意向有需要的人伸出援手的世界。）
寫作示范一
The next morning, Stacey’s voice awakened Adam. “Dad, there’s a huge truck parked outside our house!” she exclaimed, her eyes wide with surprise. Adam rushed out, and there, in front of their modest home, was a well - maintained truck. Memories of his encounter with Alice flooded back. He realized that this must be her way of showing gratitude. The kids, Amanda and Jared, came running out, jumping up and down in excitement, asking countless questions about the truck. Adam was speechless, a mix of shock and disbelief on his face.
At first, Adam wanted to refuse Alice’s truck. He thought it was too generous a gift, and he felt he didn't deserve it. But when Alice visited later that day, she said, “Adam, you were there for me when I needed help. This truck has been sitting idle, and it can make a real difference in your life. Please accept it.” Her sincere words touched Adam deeply. After a moment of hesitation, he nodded, his eyes filled with gratitude. He knew that this gift would not only solve his transportation problem but also mark the beginning of a new chapter in his life.
寫作示范二
The next morning, Stacey’s voice awakened Adam. “Dad, you won't believe what's outside!” she shouted. Still half - asleep, Adam stumbled out of the house. His eyes widened in shock as he saw the large truck. He remembered his conversation with Alice and understood immediately. The kids were already exploring the truck, climbing in and out, their laughter filling the air. Adam stood there, a hand on his forehead, trying to process what was happening.
At first, Adam wanted to refuse Alice’s truck. He worried that it was too much, that he couldn't possibly accept such a valuable gift. But Alice was insistent. “I lost my Frank, and I know how tough life can be. This truck can give you a better life. It's not just a truck; it's a symbol of hope,” she said. Adam's heart melted at her words. He finally accepted, feeling a newfound sense of hope and gratitude. From that day on, the truck became a part of their lives, a constant reminder of the kindness of a stranger.
【答案】范文
The next morning, Stacey’s voice awakened Adam. “Dad! Quick! Something weird is happening outside!” Rubbing his eyes, Adam approached the bedroom window and spotted a moving truck parked near his driveway. When he stepped outside, he was surprised to see Alice beside the truck. “Alice, what is this ” he asked, approaching her. “A little gift from me to thank you for your kindness,” she said, patting the truck.
At first, Adam wanted to refuse Alice’s truck. But her gift could case his financial worries, so he accepted it. After she left, he and his children began to look through the truck. The children were so excited to have a truck since there was no means of transport except a second-hand motorcycle. They asked their dad to go for a drive. Adam agreed. Along the way, the family laughed to their hearts’ content. It was the first time that Adam had been so happy since her wife’s death. He felt grateful for Alice’s generosity.

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