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閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
Nearly thirty years ago I was a trainee engineer based in Liverpool. I was hundreds of miles from home, but I had a nice place to live in, wasn’t overworked, had a good bunch of friends and plenty of money in my pocket.
One Saturday morning I decided to walk into Liverpool city centre and buy myself something. I didn’t need anything. I was just going to spend some money! The walk was about four miles and took me through Toxteth, an area which two years later would erupt into rioting(暴亂，騷亂) , largely because of the poverty of the place.
I stopped in a store to buy myself some sweets for the walk. While I was making up my mind which one to choose, the door opened and in walked this “ragamuffin” (邋遢的人) . It looked like she might have been four years old at the most She was wearing a summer dress and sandals (涼鞋) even though it was a bitterly cold day, and she was not clean.
She walked up to the counter, reached up and placed a fifty pence coin on the glass. Then, the proudly announced that she had saved this up for her little brother’s birthday and she wanted to buy him a teddy bear and she wanted that one there. The woman behind the counter told the little girl the teddy bear cost more than 50 pence. The girl tried another one, and another one, and another one.
By this time I had been keeping an eye on this. I knew that none of the bears could be bought for 50 pence. I also knew that I could easily buy the best bear there with the money I was going to waste that day, but did I want to encourage a little girl to take money from strangers
注意：
1.續寫詞數應為150左右；
2.請在答題卡上的相應位置作答。
While I hesitated, the girl announced to the world, “Oh well, I’ll just give him my bear then.”
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“Excuse me,” I called out, holding the wrapped bear in my hands.
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文章大意
三十年前，身為實習工程師的 “我” 在利物浦工作，生活愜意。一個周六，“我” 打算進城隨意消費。途中經過兩年后因貧困爆發騷亂的托克斯泰斯地區，在一家商店，“我” 遇到一個最多四歲的邋遢小女孩。她在寒冷天氣穿著夏裝和涼鞋，拿著 50 便士為弟弟買生日禮物，滿心期待給弟弟買只泰迪熊。然而，她看中的每只熊價格都超過 50 便士，她不斷嘗試挑選。“我” 目睹這一切，雖有能力買下最好的熊，卻在猶豫是否要讓小女孩接受陌生人的幫助。
故事山分析
開端：“我” 在利物浦工作，生活不錯，周六準備進城花錢。
發展：“我” 在商店看到一個穿著單薄、不整潔的小女孩想用 50 便士給弟弟買生日禮物泰迪熊，但錢不夠。
高潮：“我” 內心糾結是否幫助小女孩，而小女孩表示要把自己的熊給弟弟。
結局（待續寫）：“我” 最終決定幫助小女孩，完成她的心愿，展現人與人之間的溫暖與善良。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
小女孩的穿著與寒冷天氣不符：續寫中可以體現 “我” 看到她的穿著，心生憐憫，更堅定幫助她的決心，如 “看著她在寒風中瑟瑟發抖的單薄身影，我不再猶豫，決定一定要幫她實現心愿” 。
小女孩說為弟弟生日存錢買熊：這在續寫中促使 “我” 采取行動，買下熊作為弟弟的生日禮物，如 “想到她對弟弟滿滿的愛，我不想讓她失望，于是迅速決定買下那只熊” 。
“我” 有足夠的錢買下最好的熊：在續寫中得以實現，“我” 用這筆錢幫小女孩買到了熊，如 “我毫不猶豫地掏出錢包，用準備隨意消費的錢買下了那只她心儀的熊” 。
“我” 的猶豫：續寫中通過內心掙扎后的決定來回應，如 “經過一番內心的掙扎，我意識到幫助她傳遞愛比什么都重要，于是不再猶豫” 。
托克斯泰斯地區的貧困背景：在續寫中可側面體現小女孩的不易，以及 “我” 幫助她的意義，如 “想到這個貧困地區孩子們的艱難生活，我覺得幫助她是我義不容辭的責任” 。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：著重描寫小女孩說要把自己的熊給弟弟后，“我” 內心更加激烈的思想斗爭，以及周圍人的反應，如商店里其他顧客的表情、議論等。
第二段：詳細描述 “我” 喊住小女孩后的舉動，比如 “我” 是如何把包裝好的熊遞給她，對她說了什么，小女孩的反應，以及 “我” 的感受，還可以適當提及之后 “我” 對這件事的思考。
情感線
起初，“我” 懷著輕松逛街消費的心情，看到小女孩時，產生了疑惑和好奇。當看到她為弟弟買禮物錢不夠時，內心開始糾結猶豫，既有幫助她的沖動，又擔心不合適。小女孩決定把自己的熊給弟弟時，“我” 深受觸動，內心的善良被激發，最終不再猶豫，堅定地幫助她，完成幫助后的 “我” 感到溫暖和滿足，對人性的美好有了更深體會。
故事線
“我” 在利物浦工作，準備進城隨意消費。
“我” 在商店遇到小女孩想買泰迪熊給弟弟當生日禮物。
小女孩錢不夠，不斷嘗試挑選價格合適的熊。
“我” 內心糾結是否幫助小女孩。
小女孩決定把自己的熊給弟弟，促使 “我” 做出決定。
“我” 買下熊送給小女孩，收獲溫暖與感動。
主旨升華句
In the simplest acts of kindness, we discover the true essence of humanity, transcending the boundaries of strangers and bringing warmth to the world.（在最質樸的善舉中，我們發現了人性的真諦，它跨越了陌生人之間的界限，為世界帶來溫暖。）
A small act of compassion can not only brighten a child's day but also sow the seeds of hope and love in the harsh soil of poverty.（一個小小的善舉，不僅能照亮一個孩子的一天，還能在貧困的貧瘠土壤中播下希望與愛的種子。）
Our hesitation in the face of others' needs is often overcome by the pure love and selflessness we witness, leading us to embrace the beauty of giving.（我們在面對他人需求時的猶豫，常常會被我們所目睹的純粹的愛與無私所戰勝，引領我們擁抱給予的美好。）
In a world filled with differences and hardships, the connection formed through a simple act of kindness can bridge the gaps and remind us of our shared humanity.（在一個充滿差異和艱難的世界里，通過一個簡單善舉建立起來的聯系，能夠彌合差距，讓我們銘記我們共有的人性。）
The encounter with the little girl taught me that true wealth lies not in the money we spend casually, but in the love and kindness we share with those in need.（與小女孩的相遇讓我明白，真正的財富不在于我們隨意揮霍的金錢，而在于我們與有需要的人分享的愛與善良。）
寫作示范一
While I hesitated, the girl announced to the world, “Oh well, I’ll just give him my bear then.” Her words hit me like a thunderbolt. I saw the disappointment in her eyes, but also the unwavering love for her little brother. The people around us were silent for a moment, and then some began to whisper sympathetically. I stood there, my heart pounding. I thought about my own carefree shopping plan and her earnest wish for her brother. Finally, I made up my mind.
“Excuse me,” I called out, holding the wrapped bear in my hands. “This is for your brother. It’s his birthday present from me.” The girl looked at me in surprise, her eyes wide open. “Really ” she asked in a trembling voice. I nodded and smiled. She took the bear, hugged it tightly, and then threw her arms around me. “Thank you so much!” she exclaimed. At that moment, I felt a warmth spreading through my body. I realized that this simple act of kindness had made my day far more meaningful than any shopping could have.
寫作示范二
While I hesitated, the girl announced to the world, “Oh well, I’ll just give him my bear then.” Her voice was filled with both disappointment and determination. The store clerk looked at her with pity, and a few customers shook their heads sadly. I felt a lump in my throat. I thought about how much I took for granted in my life, while this little girl was trying so hard to make her brother happy with her meager savings. I couldn't stand by any longer.
“Excuse me,” I called out, holding the wrapped bear in my hands. “I heard you wanted this for your brother. Here, it’s yours.” The girl stared at me, as if she couldn't believe her ears. Tears welled up in her eyes, and she bit her lip. “You are so kind,” she said softly. I patted her head and said, “You are a very loving sister. I'm sure your brother will love this bear.” Watching her skip out of the store with the bear in her arms, I felt a deep sense of satisfaction. It made me understand that the greatest joy in life comes from helping others.
參考答案
第一段續寫
While I hesitated, the girl announced to the world, “Oh well, I’ll just give him my bear then.” Her voice, though small, was filled with a kind of determination that tugged at my heartstrings. She carefully put the fifty - pence coin back into her pocket, and her little shoulders slumped slightly. The store seemed to grow quiet, and I could feel the eyes of others in the store, filled with a mix of pity and helplessness. At that moment, I thought about how much joy that teddy bear could bring to her little brother, and how disappointed he would be if he didn't get it. I also thought about the harsh life these kids in this poor area might be leading. Finally, I made up my mind.
第二段續寫
“Excuse me,” I called out, holding the wrapped bear in my hands. The girl turned around slowly, her eyes wide with surprise. “This is for your brother,” I said with a warm smile. “Consider it a birthday present from a friend.” She stared at me for a few seconds, as if trying to figure out if I was serious. Then, a huge smile spread across her face. “Thank you, thank you so much!” she exclaimed, jumping up and down. She took the bear and hugged it tightly, as if it was the most precious thing in the world. Watching her run out of the store happily, I felt a sense of contentment. I realized that this small act of kindness had made my day far more meaningful than any random shopping could have.

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