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An Angel on a Snowy Night
The wind was blowing hard as I was driving down the twists and turns of the country road. I was desperate to get home before dark, but there seemed no way. The forecast said there was going to be a heavy snow on the way. It was freezing cold outside. The wind was blowing against the windows, letting out buzzing noises. Hair standing on end, I stepped hard on the accelerator, longing to make it to my cozy home earlier.
The car was roaring along the rough road when I suddenly heard a big bang coming from behind. The car somehow slowed down, and I managed to pull it over to the side of the road. I was in a cold sweat from extreme terror, wondering what had just happened. Dragging myself out of the driver’s seat, I shivered with cold. Suddenly, a gust of cold wind cleared my head. Quickly I examined the car. Much to my surprise, no serious damage was done. It was just a flat tire, but the car couldn’t move forward an inch!
It was black dark outside. There was not a single soul around to turn to. A wave of fear instantly washed over me. Worse still, it began to snow at the very moment. Snowflakes were dancing in the air at the mercy of howling wind. How I wished someone could come to my rescue just in time! With nowhere to hide, I had to wait in the darkness, cold and helpless.
I waited and waited, but no car or truck passed by. Swallowed by complete darkness, I almost went mad. “What if no one comes What should I do ”, I mumbled. At this point, I was totally seized by anxiety and fear. My patience was running out when loud noises boomed out from the dark night. There came a Ford pickup（皮卡貨車）, with dazzling light cast over the white snow. I sprang to my feet, waving my arms crazily.
注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
The pickup finally stopped, and out stepped the driver.
The driver drew back and refused to take the money.
文章大意
在一個(gè)風(fēng)雪交加的夜晚，“我” 駕車行駛在鄉(xiāng)村蜿蜒的道路上，一心想在天黑前到家。然而，天氣預(yù)報(bào)顯示即將有大雪，車外寒風(fēng)凜冽，吹得車窗嗡嗡作響。行駛途中，車子突然發(fā)出巨響，“我” 驚恐地將車停在路邊，發(fā)現(xiàn)只是輪胎爆了，但在這荒郊野外，周圍空無一人，天也黑了，雪還在下，“我” 又冷又無助，只能焦急地等待救援。就在 “我” 幾乎絕望時(shí)，一輛福特皮卡出現(xiàn)了，“我” 瘋狂揮手求救。
故事山分析
開端：“我” 在風(fēng)雪交加的夜晚開車回家，途中車胎爆了。
發(fā)展：天色已晚，周圍無人，大雪紛飛，“我” 孤立無援，在恐懼與焦慮中等待救援。
高潮：皮卡出現(xiàn)，“我” 看到了希望。
結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：皮卡司機(jī)幫助 “我” 換輪胎，“我” 對(duì)他的幫助表示感謝并試圖給錢，司機(jī)拒絕，展現(xiàn)人與人之間的溫暖與善良。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
惡劣的天氣：為故事營(yíng)造緊張氛圍，在續(xù)寫中，司機(jī)在這樣的惡劣天氣下幫忙，更能體現(xiàn)他的善良。如 “在這冰天雪地中，他的援手顯得格外溫暖，讓我忘卻了寒冷” 。
“我” 極度渴望回家：在續(xù)寫中，司機(jī)的幫助讓 “我” 能夠繼續(xù)回家的旅程，回應(yīng)這一伏筆。如 “多虧了他的幫忙，我終于可以朝著溫暖的家繼續(xù)前行” 。
周圍無人可求助：與后續(xù)皮卡司機(jī)的出現(xiàn)形成對(duì)比，突出司機(jī)的重要性。如 “在這無人的荒野，他就像從天而降的救星” 。
“我” 的恐懼與焦慮：在續(xù)寫中，司機(jī)的幫助讓 “我” 的情緒得以平復(fù)，從恐懼轉(zhuǎn)為感激。如 “他的安慰和行動(dòng)，驅(qū)散了我心中的恐懼，取而代之的是滿滿的感激” 。
皮卡的出現(xiàn)：預(yù)示著 “我” 將得到幫助，續(xù)寫中圍繞司機(jī)如何幫助 “我” 展開。如 “皮卡的到來，帶來了希望的曙光，司機(jī)迅速下車開始幫我更換輪胎” 。
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：詳細(xì)描述皮卡司機(jī)下車后的反應(yīng)，如詢問情況、檢查輪胎、著手幫忙換輪胎的過程，以及他的動(dòng)作、表情和語(yǔ)言，同時(shí)描述 “我” 看到他幫忙時(shí)的心理變化，從緊張到安心。
第二段：重點(diǎn)描寫換好輪胎后，“我” 對(duì)司機(jī)表示感謝并拿出錢酬謝，司機(jī)拒絕的場(chǎng)景，可通過對(duì)話展現(xiàn)司機(jī)的善良和高尚品格，以及 “我” 的感動(dòng)，最后表達(dá)對(duì)這次經(jīng)歷的感悟。
情感線
起初，“我” 在風(fēng)雪中駕車回家，充滿急切與期待。車胎爆后，陷入極度恐懼和焦慮，在黑暗與寒冷中孤立無援，幾乎絕望。皮卡出現(xiàn)時(shí)，看到了希望，心中燃起一絲曙光。司機(jī)幫忙換輪胎時(shí)，從緊張不安逐漸轉(zhuǎn)為安心。當(dāng)司機(jī)拒絕收錢時(shí)，內(nèi)心滿是感動(dòng)與敬佩，深刻體會(huì)到人性的溫暖與善良。
故事線
“我” 在風(fēng)雪夜駕車回家，車胎爆了。
周圍無人，天色已晚，大雪紛飛，“我” 孤立無援。
“我” 在恐懼與焦慮中等待救援，幾乎絕望。
皮卡出現(xiàn)，“我” 瘋狂揮手求救。
司機(jī)下車幫忙換輪胎。
換好輪胎后，“我” 感謝并試圖給錢，司機(jī)拒絕，“我” 深受感動(dòng)。
主旨升華句
In the darkest and coldest moments of life, a simple act of kindness from a stranger can be like a warm fire, lighting up our way and melting the ice of despair.（在生命中最黑暗、最寒冷的時(shí)刻，來自陌生人的一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單善舉就像一團(tuán)溫暖的火焰，照亮我們的道路，融化絕望的堅(jiān)冰。）
This encounter on the snowy night taught me that humanity's kindness knows no bounds, and it has the power to transform our most desperate situations into moments of hope and gratitude.（這個(gè)雪夜的遭遇讓我明白，人性的善良沒有界限，它有力量將我們最絕望的處境轉(zhuǎn)化為充滿希望和感激的時(shí)刻。）
The driver's selfless help in the face of the harsh weather not only fixed my car but also mended my faith in the goodness of people, reminding me to always be ready to lend a hand.（司機(jī)在惡劣天氣下的無私幫助不僅修好了我的車，還修復(fù)了我對(duì)人性美好的信念，提醒我要隨時(shí)準(zhǔn)備伸出援手。）
Sometimes, the most unexpected heroes emerge in the most trying times, and their acts of kindness become the most precious memories that warm our hearts forever.（有時(shí)候，最意想不到的英雄會(huì)在最艱難的時(shí)刻出現(xiàn)，他們的善舉成為最珍貴的回憶，永遠(yuǎn)溫暖著我們的心。）
Through this experience, I learned that the true value of life lies not in the material gains but in the connections we build with others through kindness and the love that is shared in times of need.（通過這次經(jīng)歷，我明白了生命的真正價(jià)值不在于物質(zhì)收獲，而在于我們通過善良與他人建立的聯(lián)系，以及在需要時(shí)分享的愛。）
寫作示范一
The pickup finally stopped, and out stepped the driver. He was a tall, sturdy man with a friendly smile on his face. “What's wrong ” he asked, his voice warm and comforting. I quickly explained the situation, and without a word, he walked around the car, examining the flat tire. Then, he opened the back of his pickup and took out a jack and a spare tire. He got down on his knees in the snow and started to work. His hands were red from the cold, but he didn't seem to notice. As I watched him, my anxiety gradually faded away, replaced by a sense of relief.
The driver drew back and refused to take the money. “Helping others is what we should do,” he said with a gentle smile. “I'm just glad I could be of some help to you tonight.” His words touched my heart deeply. I thanked him again and watched as he got back into his pickup and drove away. In that moment, I realized that even in the darkest of times, there is always hope and kindness in the world. This experience would stay with me forever, reminding me to be kind to others.
寫作示范二
The pickup finally stopped, and out stepped the driver. A middle - aged man with a weather - beaten face, he looked around and immediately understood the situation. “Don't worry, I'll get you back on the road in no time,” he assured me. He then rolled up his sleeves and got to work. He expertly removed the flat tire and replaced it with the spare one. All the while, he kept talking to me, trying to calm my nerves. His calm demeanor and efficient actions made me feel much better.
The driver drew back and refused to take the money. “I don't want your money,” he said firmly. “If I were in your situation, I'd hope someone would do the same for me.” His selflessness left me speechless. I watched him drive off, his taillights disappearing into the snow - filled night. This encounter not only saved my night but also taught me a valuable lesson about the power of kindness. It made me realize that a small act of kindness can have a huge impact on someone's life.
【答案】
The pickup finally stopped, and out stepped the driver. “What’s up young man!” asked the driver. “I have a flat tire.” I responded. The driver then knelt on his knee and took a close look at the broken tire. “Nothing serious, I’ll help replace the tire.” Hearing his words, I breathed a sigh of relief. A surge of warmth soon flowed through my heart. The driver immediately pulled some tools out of the trunk and set to work. Just within minutes, the spare tire was installed in place. Deeply touched by the driver’s selfless help, I grabbed his arm, trying to cram some cash into his hand.
The driver drew back and refused to take the money. In no time, he stepped onto the pickup and soon disappeared into the dark night, leaving me greatly shocked. An accident turned out to be a blessing when a stranger approached me like an angel. Many years have passed, but the driver’s kind gesture still sticks in my head. It was his generous help that drove away cold, bringing me warmth on that snowy night. Even though I don’t know his name, his act of kindness makes a great difference to me, always inspiring me to reach out to those in need.

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