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I know he has arrived before I ever see him. Heads turn in his direction, and if he stops for just a minute, he draws a crowd. He walks through the halls in a way that shows he is truly confident.
His name is Augie. He is a six-year-old Goldendoodle with a strawberry-blond coat that is made for petting, and his manners are perfect. He is a trained therapy (治療) dog that visits patients in the hospital where I work as a nurse. I have seen Augie come through the hospital, stopping for anyone who wants to pet him, and I have seen him go into patients’ rooms. But I had never witnessed Augie providing the therapy that he was trained to give until I saw him with Mr. M.
Mr. M had been in ICU for many weeks and suffered from many medical complications. His wife rarely left his side. Family and former co-workers visited. Prior to his retirement, Mr. M had worked as a canine (犬的) police officer and developed strong connections with his four-legged partners. It was a natural transition when, upon retiring from the police force, he became a trainer for the next generation of fearless police dogs. Sadly, he fell ill when attending a training program for police dogs.
Although he was awake, and his beautiful green eyes were open, there was little indication that he was aware of his surroundings. Mrs. M was untroubled by the lack of response and kept talking to him while she exercised his arms, hoping he would make some effort to move them himself. I watched Mrs. M work with her husband’s hands, opening and closing them. She told him gently that he needed to move his hands so he would not lose the use of them, but he did not seem to be able to do it. He moved his eyes to look at her when she spoke to him, but he didn’t move his head toward her voice.
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Then Augie was brought to make a visit.
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Seeing that her husband was responding, Mrs. M started crying aloud!
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文章大意
“我” 是一名護士，在工作的醫院里，訓練有素的治療犬 Augie 很受歡迎。它經常在醫院穿梭，與想撫摸它的人互動，還會進入患者病房。Mr. M 在 ICU 住了很多周，有多種并發癥。他曾是警犬訓練員，生病時正在參加警犬培訓項目。雖然他醒著，但幾乎沒有意識，對周圍環境反應微弱。他的妻子 Mrs. M 不離不棄，一直陪伴并努力幫他做康復訓練，和他說話、活動他的手臂，可他反應不佳。
故事山分析
開端：“我” 在醫院工作，介紹治療犬 Augie 以及患者 Mr. M 的背景，他曾是警犬訓練員，如今病重。
發展：Mr. M 在 ICU，意識不清，Mrs. M 一直陪伴并幫他做康復訓練，但效果不佳。
高潮：Augie 被帶到病房，故事迎來轉機。
結局（待續寫）：Augie 的出現使 Mr. M 有了積極反應，Mrs. M 十分激動，眾人感受到動物治療的神奇力量和愛的溫暖。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
Mr. M 曾是警犬訓練員：續寫中 Augie 的出現能激發他的熟悉感和反應，比如他可能因為對犬類的特殊情感，在 Augie 靠近時做出不同以往的舉動，像手指微微動一下。
Mr. M 雖醒著卻意識不清，對周圍反應微弱：與后文 Augie 到來后他的積極反應形成對比，突出 Augie 治療的效果，如之前他幾乎不回應，Augie 來了后卻能跟著它的動作轉動眼睛。
Mrs. M 一直努力陪伴和幫助 Mr. M 做康復訓練：當看到 Mr. M 因 Augie 有反應時，Mrs. M 的激動情緒是合理的，也是對她之前付出的回應，她可能會喜極而泣，感謝 Augie 和周圍的人。
Augie 是訓練有素的治療犬：續寫中它會用專業的治療方式，如安靜地趴在 Mr. M 床邊，用頭蹭他的手，讓他感受到溫暖和安慰，從而產生積極反應。
Heads turn in his direction, and if he stops for just a minute, he draws a crowd：暗示了 Augie 的特殊魅力和影響力，在病房里也會展現，它能吸引大家的注意力，包括 Mr. M，讓他關注到這個特別的 “伙伴”。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：詳細描述 Augie 進入病房后的行為，比如它如何慢慢靠近 Mr. M，用怎樣的動作和姿態去接觸他，像輕嗅、溫柔地舔舐他的手；以及 Mr. M 最初的反應，是眼神有了變化，還是身體某個部位有了輕微動作。
第二段：著重刻畫 Mrs. M 看到丈夫有反應后的激動表現，如她的語言、動作、表情；再描述病房里其他人的反應，如護士、醫生的欣慰；最后可以升華主題，談談這次經歷對大家的意義。
情感線
Mrs. M 一直處于擔憂和期待中，努力幫丈夫康復卻收獲甚微，心情低落。Augie 到來時，她或許抱著一絲希望。看到丈夫對 Augie 有反應，她先是驚訝，然后轉為極度興奮，喜極而泣。“我” 和病房里其他人一開始是好奇，看到 Mr. M 的變化后，感到驚喜和欣慰，大家都被這份溫暖和希望所感染，深刻體會到愛與生命的力量。
故事線
“我” 在醫院工作，認識治療犬 Augie 和病重的 Mr. M。
Mr. M 曾是警犬訓練員，如今意識不清，Mrs. M 努力幫他康復。
Augie 被帶到 Mr. M 病房。
Augie 用行動與 Mr. M 互動，Mr. M 開始有反應。
Mrs. M 看到丈夫反應后激動不已。
大家感受到動物治療的神奇和愛的力量，故事得到升華。
主旨升華句
This heartwarming encounter between Augie and Mr. M proves that love, in all its forms, has the power to break through the barriers of illness and bring hope to the darkest of times.（Augie 和 Mr. M 之間這段溫暖人心的相遇證明，所有形式的愛都有力量突破疾病的障礙，為最黑暗的時刻帶來希望。）
In the world of medicine, where technology and science often take the spotlight, the simple and pure connection between a therapy dog and a patient reminds us of the irreplaceable power of compassion and the human - animal bond.（在醫學領域，科技常常備受矚目，而治療犬與患者之間這種簡單純粹的聯系，讓我們想起同情的力量以及人與動物之間的紐帶是無可替代的。）
The moment Mr. M responded to Augie was not just a sign of his physical improvement but also a testament to the profound impact that a loving presence can have on the human spirit, even in the face of great adversity.（Mr. M 對 Augie 做出反應的那一刻，不僅是他身體狀況改善的標志，也證明了即使面對巨大的困境，一個充滿愛的存在也能對人類精神產生深遠的影響。）
Through this experience, we are reminded that hope can come in unexpected forms, and sometimes, the most unlikely heroes, like Augie, can bring about miraculous changes in the lives of those in need.（通過這次經歷，我們被提醒，希望可以以意想不到的形式出現，有時，像 Augie 這樣最意想不到的 “英雄”，能給有需要的人的生活帶來奇跡般的改變。）
The story of Augie and Mr. M serves as a beautiful reminder that in the journey of life, every act of kindness, no matter how small, and every connection, no matter how unconventional, can light up the path to recovery and fill our hearts with warmth and hope.（Augie 和 Mr. M 的故事美好地提醒著我們，在人生的旅途中，每一個善意的舉動，無論多么微小，每一種聯系，無論多么不同尋常，都能照亮康復之路，讓我們的心中充滿溫暖和希望。）
寫作示范一
Then Augie was brought to make a visit. The moment Augie entered the room, his tail wagging gently, he seemed to sense Mr. M's condition. He walked quietly to the bedside, his eyes fixed on Mr. M. With a soft whine, Augie put his front paws on the bed and slowly nuzzled Mr. M's hand. At first, there was no response. But as Augie continued to stay by his side, Mr. M's fingers twitched slightly. Augie's ears perked up, and he licked Mr. M's hand gently, as if encouraging him.
Seeing that her husband was responding, Mrs. M started crying aloud! “Oh, my dear! Look, you're moving!” she exclaimed, her voice filled with a mix of joy and disbelief. She reached out to touch Mr. M's face, tears streaming down her cheeks. I stood there, my eyes filled with tears of happiness too. The other nurses and doctors in the room were also amazed. It was a moment of pure magic, a testament to the power of love and the special bond between humans and animals. From that day on, Augie's visits became a regular part of Mr. M's recovery journey, bringing new hope to us all.
寫作示范二
Then Augie was brought to make a visit. As soon as Augie stepped into the room, he trotted directly towards Mr. M's bed. He sat down beside it, looking up at Mr. M with his big, friendly eyes. Augie then laid his head on the edge of the bed, close to Mr. M's arm. After a while, Mr. M's eyes, which had been dull, seemed to brighten a little. He slowly turned his head towards Augie, and his lips moved slightly, as if trying to say something.
Seeing that her husband was responding, Mrs. M started crying aloud! She covered her mouth with her hands, her body shaking with emotion. “It's a miracle! Augie, you did it!” she sobbed. She knelt down beside the bed, hugging Mr. M gently. The atmosphere in the room was filled with warmth and hope. Everyone present was deeply touched by this heartwarming scene. It was clear that Augie's presence had made a huge difference. This experience taught us all that love and care, in any form, can work wonders, especially in the battle against illness.
【答案】One possible version:
Then Augie was brought to make a visit. He walked over to the bed, gently pushing Mr. M’s hand. At first, Mr. M showed no reaction. But then, something mysterious happened—Mr. M’s fingers moved slightly! Mrs. M’s eyes widened in disbelief. She stopped her movements and stared at her husband’s hand, expecting it to move again. Augie, seemingly sensing the change, stayed closer and made a soft noise, as if encouraging Mr. M to respond. Slowly, Mr. M’s hand began to move more purposefully and even managed to reach out his fingers to touch Augie’s fur.
Seeing that her husband was responding, Mrs. M started crying aloud! Her tears were a mixture of joy, relief, and disbelief. For weeks, she had watched helplessly as Mr. M lay in the ICU. But now, with Augie’s gentle presence, there was a ray of hope, a sign that her husband was still there, fighting to come back. In the following days, Augie’s visits became a regular occurrence. Each time he entered the room, Mr. M’s response grew stronger. In the end, Mr. M was well enough to be released from the hospital. Sometimes, the amazing things can happen when we open our hearts to the healing power of animals.

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