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A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Andy and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents’ eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the house was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Andy and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!”
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn’t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔強地), “I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once an intelligent explorer. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs… How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn’t get up. This made them worried. “We’d think out a way to cheer him up.” Andy said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Andy shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Andy’s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
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Berlin thought it was a good idea.
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Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
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文章大意
暑假將至，安迪和柏林滿心期待去看望祖父母。出發那天，一家人興高采烈前往，途中兄弟倆回憶與祖父母相處的歡樂時光。抵達后，看到祖母在等他們，見到孫子，祖父欣喜卻無法起身，祖母解釋他健康惡化，祖父卻固執表示自己可以。大人們聊天時，兄弟倆感到無聊，走進森林。這片森林承載著他們和祖父的許多美好回憶，祖父曾是智慧的探險家，能辨別鳥的出處。如今祖父不能起身，兄弟倆很擔憂，想辦法讓他開心。柏林提議抓鳥，因祖父愛鳥，安迪卻因祖父討厭關鳥而搖頭，最后安迪想到用小樹做拐杖的主意。
故事山分析
開端：暑假來臨，安迪和柏林隨家人去看望祖父母，到達后發現祖父健康狀況不佳，無法起身。
發展：大人們聊天時，兄弟倆走進森林，回憶起和祖父在森林的歡樂時光，因祖父不能起身而擔憂，開始想辦法讓祖父開心，提出抓鳥又被否定，最終想到做拐杖。
高潮：兄弟倆制作拐杖并將其送給祖父，祖父的反應以及家人的互動將是故事的高潮部分，充滿期待。
結局（待續寫）：祖父收到拐杖后的后續故事，可能是祖父的身體和精神狀態有所改變，或者一家人因此更加珍惜彼此，讓故事有一個溫暖的收尾。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
祖父健康惡化無法起身，卻固執表示自己可以：續寫中祖父收到拐杖后，可能會嘗試借助拐杖起身，回應他之前的倔強，也展現拐杖對他的幫助。
森林承載著和祖父的美好回憶，祖父曾是智慧探險家：在制作拐杖和送拐杖過程中，兄弟倆會回憶起這些回憶，讓情感更加深厚，也能體現森林元素與故事的緊密聯系。
祖父愛鳥，兄弟倆想抓鳥又因祖父討厭關鳥被否定：這一情節凸顯祖父對自由的重視，做拐杖也體現了對祖父喜好的尊重，續寫中祖父收到拐杖后會因為兄弟倆的用心而感動。
兄弟倆想辦法讓祖父開心：是整個故事的一個推動點，續寫中送拐杖就是他們實現讓祖父開心的關鍵行動，祖父的積極反饋能讓兄弟倆的努力得到回應。
祖母在門口迎接，大人們開心聊天：營造了溫馨的家庭氛圍，續寫中送拐杖時家人的互動會延續這種溫馨，展現家庭的溫暖與親情的力量。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：詳細描述兄弟倆制作拐杖的過程，比如如何挑選合適的小樹，怎樣砍伐、修整，制作過程中遇到的小困難以及如何克服，還可以描述他們的對話和期待祖父收到拐杖的心情。
第二段：著重描寫送拐杖時祖父的表情、動作、語言，他的驚喜和感動；家人的反應，如祖母的欣慰、父母的贊揚；以及后續祖父可能的行動，如嘗試使用拐杖，最后體現家庭的溫暖和親情的美好。
情感線
起初，兄弟倆去看望祖父母滿懷期待與興奮。看到祖父無法起身，他們的心情轉為擔憂。在想辦法讓祖父開心的過程中，從提議抓鳥被否定的失落，到想到做拐杖的興奮與期待。制作拐杖時，充滿認真與專注，期待祖父能喜歡。送拐杖時，緊張又期待，祖父的驚喜與感動讓他們感到無比欣慰，一家人的互動讓親情的溫暖彌漫，他們更加珍惜彼此。
故事線
暑假到，安迪和柏林隨家人去看望祖父母，發現祖父健康惡化無法起身。
大人們聊天時，兄弟倆走進森林，回憶和祖父的歡樂時光，因祖父不能起身而擔憂。
兄弟倆想辦法讓祖父開心，柏林提議抓鳥被安迪否定，安迪想到做拐杖。
兄弟倆開始制作拐杖，挑選小樹、砍伐、修整，克服制作過程中的困難。
安迪和柏林將拐杖送給祖父，祖父驚喜感動，家人反應溫馨。
祖父可能嘗試使用拐杖，一家人更加珍惜彼此，故事以溫暖的氛圍收尾。
主旨升華句
This simple yet heartfelt gift of the cane not only brought hope and joy to Grandpa but also demonstrated the power of love and thoughtfulness within a family, reminding us that small acts of kindness can have a profound impact.（這根簡單卻飽含深情的拐杖不僅給祖父帶來了希望和喜悅，也展示了家庭中愛與體貼的力量，提醒我們小小的善舉能產生深遠的影響。）
Through the process of making the cane for Grandpa, Andy and Berlin learned the true meaning of caring for others, and their family bond grew even stronger, highlighting the importance of family values in our lives.（通過為祖父制作拐杖的過程，安迪和柏林學到了關愛他人的真正含義，他們的家庭紐帶也更加牢固，凸顯了家庭價值觀在我們生活中的重要性。）
The gift of the cane symbolized the deep - rooted love and respect the grandsons had for Grandpa, and it became a catalyst for a new chapter of hope and togetherness in their family, showing that love can overcome any obstacle.（拐杖這份禮物象征著孫子們對祖父深深的愛和尊重，它成為了家庭中充滿希望與團聚新篇章的催化劑，表明愛可以戰勝任何困難。）
This touching moment of presenting the cane to Grandpa not only warmed his heart but also left an indelible mark on the brothers' hearts, teaching them the value of family, empathy, and the beauty of giving, which would stay with them throughout their lives.（給祖父送拐杖的這一感人時刻，不僅溫暖了祖父的心，也在兄弟倆心中留下了不可磨滅的印記，教會他們家庭、同理心的價值以及付出的美好，這些將伴隨他們一生。）
In the end, the cane became more than just a tool for Grandpa; it was a testament to the unbreakable bond of family and the power of love to heal and inspire, making their family's story a beautiful example of love and care.（最終，拐杖對祖父來說不僅僅是一個工具，它見證了家庭牢不可破的紐帶以及愛治愈和鼓舞人心的力量，使他們家庭的故事成為愛與關懷的美好范例。）
寫作示范一
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They immediately set out to find the perfect young tree. After a while of searching, they spotted a straight and sturdy one. With a small saw they found in the shed, they carefully cut it down. Then, they used their pocket knives to peel off the bark and smooth the surface. They worked with great care, chatting excitedly about how Grandpa would react when he saw the cane. “He'll be so happy!” Andy exclaimed, his eyes shining with anticipation. After what seemed like a long time, the cane was finally ready.
Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. His eyes widened in surprise and then filled with tears of joy. “Oh, my dear boys, this is the most wonderful gift I've ever received!” he said, his voice trembling with emotion. Grandma smiled with approval, and Mum and Dad praised the brothers for their thoughtfulness. Grandpa grasped the cane tightly and, with everyone's support, made an attempt to stand up. Slowly but surely, he managed to rise to his feet. A big smile spread across his face, and the brothers felt a sense of pride and happiness like never before. The family gathered around, sharing hugs and laughter, and the love in the room was palpable.
寫作示范二
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They rushed around the forest, their eyes scanning every tree. Finally, they found a young tree with just the right thickness and length. Berlin held the tree firmly while Andy started to saw it. It was tough work, and their hands soon ached, but they didn't give up. Once it was cut, they sat on the ground, patiently removing the branches and making the cane comfortable to hold. They even carved a small heart on it, representing their love for Grandpa. As the sun began to set, they finished their masterpiece and hurried back to the house.
Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. His face lit up with a huge smile, and he reached out to hug the boys. “You two are so clever and kind - hearted. This cane means the world to me,” he said. Mum took a photo of the heartwarming moment. With the cane in hand, Grandpa walked a few steps, albeit slowly. The whole family cheered for him. It was a moment of pure joy and love, and the brothers knew that their efforts had paid off. From that day on, the cane became a symbol of their love for Grandpa and a reminder of the special bond they shared as a family.
【答案】
Berlin thought it was a good idea. With the tools fetched from the backyard, they returned to the forest to search for an appropriate young tree for a cane. Hardly had they selected one when they got started with their BIG PROJECT. Andy, the elder brother, took on the job of cutting it down, while Berlin, who was younger and more creative, was responsible for decoration. Hard as it might seem to them, they never thought about quitting. After what seemed a long time, an elegant and tough cane appeared. Both of them were more than satisfied with their work and couldn’t wait to rush home.
Andy and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. The instant he saw it, he knew what it was all about. Deeply touched by the grandsons’ gift, he took it with great excitement and tapped it on the ground several times. Obviously, he attempted to stand up with it. With the encouragement of the two brothers, he struggled to get up, slowly walking towards the forest. A cheerful and joyful expression, which Andy and Berlin had expected of Grandpa, flashed on his face. It was at that moment that they literally felt all the efforts to make the cane were all worth it.

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