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Kevin has always adored Halloween. This year, as always, he’d collected everything he needed for his “Halloween masterpiece.” One evening, he took a stroll down the block, noticing how everyone had decorated their houses with glowing pumpkins and ghosts. He was practically glowing with excitement.
But as he walked, something that caught his eye dimmed his smile. One house stood dark and empty. No pumpkins. No cobwebs. Just a bare, lonely porch (門廊). It was Mrs. Kimbly’s house. He told me about it when he got home.
“Mom, Mrs. Kimbly’s house doesn’t have any decorations. I think she needs help.” I told him maybe she didn’t want to decorate this year, but Kevin was certain. “Halloween is supposed to be fun. She shouldn’t have to spend it feeling bad.”
That was my Kevin. His heart was as big as the world. After I said it was okay to check on her, he gathered his decorations, even his favorite carved pumpkin, and went to her house. He decorated her front porch and was super excited until he heard her yell behind him.
“What are you doing here ” she asked.
“I…I just wanted to decorate your house,” he stammered.
“I don’t need any decorations!” she shouted and removed the decorations. “Now go away!”
When Kevin returned home that night, he looked completely defeated. He told me how unhappy Mrs. Kimbly looked. “Maybe she’s really lonely, honey,” I said gently. “Not everyone feels happy during the holidays.”
On Halloween night, he dressed up as a vampire but looked less excited than usual. As we made our way down the street, he couldn’t stop glancing toward Mrs. Kimbly’s house. It was still dark and empty, and I knew he was worried the other kids would see it as a target for tricks.
“Mom, I’m going to stay there,” he said suddenly. “I don’t want anyone to mess with her house.” And that’s just what he did. He took his candy bag and sat down on her porch steps. Whenever kids came up expecting candy, he’d give out some of his own. His candies dwindled quickly, but he stayed put, determined to protect her home.
注意：
(1) 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
(2) 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A little while later, the door creaked open, and Mrs. Kimbly stepped out.
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Paragraph 2: “Thank you, Kevin,” she whispered.
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文章大意
凱文一直熱愛萬圣節(jié)，今年他像往常一樣準(zhǔn)備好一切要打造 “萬圣節(jié)杰作”。他看到街區(qū)大家都精心裝飾房屋，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)金布利夫人的房子漆黑空蕩，沒有任何裝飾。凱文回家后向媽媽表示想幫助金布利夫人裝飾房子，媽媽同意后，他帶著自己的裝飾品，包括最愛的雕刻南瓜去了她家。然而，金布利夫人卻沖他大喊，讓他離開并拆掉了裝飾，凱文十分沮喪。萬圣節(jié)當(dāng)晚，凱文扮成吸血鬼出門，卻一直擔(dān)心金布利夫人的房子被其他孩子惡作劇，于是決定留在她家門口守護(hù)，還把自己的糖果分給前來要糖的孩子。
故事山分析
開端：凱文熱愛萬圣節(jié)，看到街區(qū)的裝飾后發(fā)現(xiàn)金布利夫人的房子沒有裝飾，決定幫助她。
發(fā)展：凱文去給金布利夫人裝飾房子，卻遭到她的拒絕和驅(qū)趕，凱文心情低落。
高潮：萬圣節(jié)當(dāng)晚，凱文守護(hù)在金布利夫人的房子前，防止房子被破壞，此時金布利夫人的反應(yīng)以及事情如何發(fā)展成為故事高潮。
結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：金布利夫人與凱文之間的互動有新的變化，可能會化解之前的矛盾，兩人關(guān)系變得融洽，讓故事有一個溫暖的結(jié)局。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
凱文熱愛萬圣節(jié)并精心準(zhǔn)備：在后續(xù)情節(jié)中，凱文對萬圣節(jié)的熱情會影響他守護(hù)金布利夫人房子的行為，也可能在與金布利夫人的交流中體現(xiàn)，比如向她介紹萬圣節(jié)的樂趣。
金布利夫人拒絕凱文的裝飾并趕走他：續(xù)寫中，金布利夫人會對自己之前的行為有所解釋或道歉，與凱文的關(guān)系發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變。
媽媽說金布利夫人可能很孤獨(dú)：這為金布利夫人的行為和后續(xù)兩人的和解埋下伏筆，金布利夫人可能因?yàn)楣陋?dú)才拒絕裝飾，而凱文的守護(hù)讓她感受到溫暖，從而打開心扉。
凱文擔(dān)心金布利夫人的房子被惡作劇，決定守護(hù)：這是故事的關(guān)鍵情節(jié)，金布利夫人看到凱文的守護(hù)后，會被他的善良打動，做出積極的回應(yīng)。
凱文把自己的糖果分給要糖的孩子：體現(xiàn)了凱文的善良，金布利夫人可能會因?yàn)檫@一行為對凱文有新的認(rèn)識，改變對他的態(tài)度。
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：著重描寫金布利夫人開門后的場景，她看到凱文后的表情、動作和反應(yīng)，如驚訝、疑惑；凱文看到她后的表現(xiàn)，是緊張還是坦然；兩人之間的對話，金布利夫人詢問凱文為什么在這里，凱文真誠地表達(dá)自己的想法。
第二段：圍繞金布利夫人感謝凱文展開，描述她感謝時的神態(tài)、語氣；她可能會解釋自己之前的行為，比如說明自己孤獨(dú)的處境，以及凱文的行為如何打動了她；最后兩人可能會一起做些什么，如簡單裝飾房子，或者一起分享剩下的糖果，讓故事有一個溫馨的收尾。
情感線
起初，凱文對萬圣節(jié)充滿期待，看到金布利夫人房子的狀況后，滿心熱忱想要幫忙。被金布利夫人拒絕驅(qū)趕后，他感到沮喪和失落。在萬圣節(jié)當(dāng)晚守護(hù)房子時，他的心情是擔(dān)憂和堅定的。當(dāng)金布利夫人開門出現(xiàn)，他會緊張又期待。聽到金布利夫人的感謝，他會感到欣慰和開心，兩人關(guān)系的轉(zhuǎn)變讓他體會到善良的力量，也讓他更加珍惜這份人與人之間的溫暖。
故事線
凱文熱愛萬圣節(jié)，準(zhǔn)備打造 “萬圣節(jié)杰作”，發(fā)現(xiàn)金布利夫人的房子沒有裝飾，決定幫忙。
凱文去給金布利夫人裝飾房子，卻被拒絕和驅(qū)趕，心情低落。
萬圣節(jié)當(dāng)晚，凱文扮成吸血鬼出門，一直擔(dān)心金布利夫人的房子被惡作劇。
凱文決定留在金布利夫人的房子前守護(hù)，還把自己的糖果分給要糖的孩子。
金布利夫人開門出現(xiàn)，與凱文交流，了解他守護(hù)的原因。
金布利夫人感謝凱文，解釋自己之前的行為，兩人關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)變，一起度過一個特別的萬圣節(jié)。
主旨升華句
Through Kevin's act of kindness, we see that a simple gesture of care can break down the walls of loneliness and transform an unhappy situation into a heartwarming moment of connection.（通過凱文的善舉，我們看到一個簡單的關(guān)懷舉動可以打破孤獨(dú)的壁壘，將不愉快的局面轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)闇嘏诵牡倪B接時刻。）
This story teaches us that even when faced with rejection, perseverance in doing good can lead to unexpected rewards, as Kevin's determination to protect Mrs. Kimbly's house ultimately melted her heart.（這個故事告訴我們，即使面臨拒絕，堅持行善也能帶來意想不到的回報，就像凱文守護(hù)金布利夫人房子的決心最終融化了她的心。）
Kevin's selfless act on Halloween night not only protected Mrs. Kimbly's house but also became a bridge that linked two hearts, reminding us of the power of kindness to bring people together.（凱文在萬圣節(jié)當(dāng)晚的無私行為不僅保護(hù)了金布利夫人的房子，還成為連接兩顆心的橋梁，提醒我們善良將人們凝聚在一起的力量。）
In the end, the encounter between Kevin and Mrs. Kimbly shows that understanding and empathy can overcome misunderstandings, and that a little love can go a long way in brightening someone's life.（最后，凱文和金布利夫人的相遇表明理解和同理心可以克服誤解，一點(diǎn)愛就能在照亮他人生活的道路上走得很遠(yuǎn)。）
This heartwarming tale serves as a reminder that the true spirit of the holidays lies not in elaborate decorations or treats, but in the kindness and compassion we show to others, just as Kevin did for Mrs. Kimbly.（這個溫馨的故事提醒我們，節(jié)日的真正精神不在于精心的裝飾或美食，而在于我們向他人展示的善良和同情，就像凱文對金布利夫人所做的那樣。）
寫作示范一
A little while later, the door creaked open, and Mrs. Kimbly stepped out. She stared at Kevin, her eyes wide with surprise. “What are you still doing here, boy ” she asked, her voice a bit softer this time. Kevin stood up, a bit nervous but determined. “I didn't want anyone to play tricks on your house, Mrs. Kimbly. Halloween should be fun for everyone.” Mrs. Kimbly was silent for a moment, looking at the few candies left in Kevin's bag.
“Thank you, Kevin,” she whispered. Her eyes were glistening, and she seemed to be holding back tears. “I've been feeling so alone these days. I didn't mean to be rude to you before. Your kindness really touched me.” Then, she went back inside and brought out some old decorations. “Let's decorate the house together, shall we ” she suggested with a faint smile. Kevin's face lit up, and together they worked to make the porch come alive. As the night went on, their laughter filled the air, making this Halloween a truly special one for both of them.
寫作示范二
A little while later, the door creaked open, and Mrs. Kimbly stepped out. She looked at Kevin sitting on the steps, his face a mixture of determination and kindness. “You've been here all this time ” she asked, her tone filled with disbelief. Kevin nodded, his eyes meeting hers. “Yes, ma'am. I just wanted to make sure your house was okay.” Mrs. Kimbly let out a sigh and sat down beside him.
“Thank you, Kevin,” she whispered. “I lost my husband last year, and I just couldn't bring myself to celebrate Halloween. Your thoughtfulness made me realize I'm not alone.” She then pulled out a box of cookies from inside. “I made these earlier. Would you like some ” Kevin grinned and took one. They sat there, sharing cookies and stories. Before long, other neighbors joined them, and the once - dark porch was filled with light and laughter, turning a lonely Halloween into a night of community and warmth.
【答案】 A little while later, the door creaked open, and Mrs. Kimbly stepped out. “Kevin, what are you doing here ” she asked, surprised. Kevin gazed up at her, then down at his almost empty candy bag. “I just didn’t want anyone to mess with your house, Mrs. Kimbly.” he said quietly. Mrs. Kimbly’s face softened. She sat down beside us and took a deep breath. Then she told her story, and Kevin finally knew why she had spent so many years alone. No kids, no grandkids. It didn’t seem worth celebrating anymore. “But you don’t have to be alone,” Kevin smiled. “We are here.” She gave him a small, sad smile, her eyes glistening.
“Thank you, Kevin,” she whispered. “And I’m sorry for removing all the decorations. I shouldn’t have thrown the pumpkin away.” Kevin’s smile was as warm as ever. “It’s okay, Mrs. Kimbly. I have another one at home. I’ll bring it over, and we can carve it together.” Mrs. Kimbly chuckled, and that was a sound I’d never heard from her before. At that point, Kimbly felt emotional thinking what a kind boy Kevin had grown into. He had brought Halloween back to Mrs. Kimbly’s heart through his little acts of kindness.

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