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Every year, our swim team runs the Snack Bar at the pool ground to raise funds for covering the costs of swim competitions and equipment. However, during our first summer meeting last month, Coach Abby informed us that the Snack Bar would be closed for repairs until August.
Upon hearing the news, all the team members were worried that without a Snack Bar, we wouldn't have funds, which meant, our swim team might have to be dismissed.
Supposing the worst, everyone was out of spirit. “Take it easy! I'll figure it out. For now, boys, jump into the pool and get swimming!” said Coach Abby, gently comforting us. But none of us were swimming our best, and even though Coach Abby was smiling as usual, it was evident that she was concerned about the situation.
During the break, I proposed exploring alternative approaches for holding a fundraising event. My teammates erupted into a lively conversation. D. J. suggested a karaoke sing-along, while Tamara offered to bring starfish cookies for sale. Manny brought up the idea of games and prizes, while I thought we could run a drink stand.
After a heated discussion, it was decided that each of us would take turns to host the event throughout the week. Coach Abby heartily approved of our plan. My drink stand was scheduled for the last day of the event.
I was so thrilled about the upcoming event that I began my preparations a day ahead. When I was making the drinks, I noticed a very dark cloud outside the kitchen window. “Uh-oh! That's not a rain cloud, is it ” I asked my mom, feeling a bit anxious. “Rain would be a disaster! It could ruin everything.”
“You know what they say,” she answered. “Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.”
Then came the big day. Coach Abby helped me set up the drink stand and the teammates called out loudly to get everyone together at the pool ground. I hid a big box under the table and nobody knew what was inside. Everything was going smoothly as we wished.
注意：
1.續寫詞數應為150左右；
2.請按如下格式在相應位置作答。
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement.
文章大意
每年，“我們” 的游泳隊都會在泳池邊經營小吃攤，為游泳比賽和設備籌集資金。但上個月，教練艾比告知大家小吃攤因維修將關閉至八月，這讓隊員們擔心游泳隊會因資金不足而解散。隊員們討論后決定輪流舉辦籌款活動，“我” 負責最后一天的飲料攤。活動前一天準備時，“我” 看到烏云，擔心下雨會破壞活動。活動當天，一切順利進行，教練艾比幫忙布置攤位，隊友們也積極宣傳。
故事山分析
開端：游泳隊的小吃攤因維修關閉，面臨資金短缺，隊員們擔心隊伍解散。
發展：隊員們討論并決定輪流舉辦籌款活動，“我” 負責最后一天的飲料攤，活動前 “我” 看到烏云擔心下雨。
高潮：活動當天順利進行，但烏云聚集，面臨下雨的危機。
結局（待續寫）：解決下雨帶來的問題，成功完成籌款，體現團隊的智慧和凝聚力，游泳隊得以繼續發展。
五處伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
小吃攤關閉，游泳隊面臨資金困境：續寫中會通過大家舉辦的籌款活動來解決資金問題，體現隊員們的努力和團隊精神，比如成功籌到足夠資金，讓游泳隊能繼續參加比賽和購置設備。
“我” 看到烏云擔心下雨：與續寫第一段中烏云聚集相呼應，引發下雨的危機，后續圍繞如何應對下雨展開，如轉移活動場地或采取防雨措施。
隊員們討論并各自提出籌款活動建議：在續寫中，大家的建議都得到實施，且在應對危機時發揮作用，如利用曼尼提出的游戲和獎品，在室內繼續進行活動吸引大家參與。
“我” 藏了一個大箱子，沒人知道里面是什么：在應對下雨危機時，箱子里的東西發揮關鍵作用，可能是雨具、備用的娛樂道具等，幫助大家解決困難。
教練艾比鼓勵大家并支持活動計劃：在危機時刻，教練艾比會繼續發揮領導作用，安撫隊員情緒，帶領大家解決問題，如在下雨時組織大家轉移場地，維持活動秩序。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：詳細描述烏云聚集后下雨的情景，大家的反應，如隊員們的焦急、顧客的慌亂；“我” 如何利用藏著的箱子里的東西應對危機，可能是拿出雨具分發給大家，或者是一些室內活動道具，轉移活動到室內。
第二段：著重描寫教練艾比宣布的內容，可能是成功籌到資金，或者是活動圓滿結束，大家的反應，如歡呼雀躍、相互擁抱；最后升華主題，強調團隊合作和面對困難不放棄的精神。
情感線
起初，隊員們因小吃攤關閉擔心游泳隊解散，情緒低落。討論出籌款活動計劃后，大家充滿期待。“我” 準備飲料攤時看到烏云，開始焦慮。活動當天順利時大家興奮，烏云聚集時又轉為緊張和擔憂。下雨危機時，大家焦急不安。最后教練宣布好消息，大家的情緒從低谷瞬間轉為激動和喜悅，深刻感受到團隊合作克服困難的力量。
故事線
游泳隊小吃攤關閉，面臨資金困境，可能解散。
隊員們討論并決定輪流舉辦籌款活動，“我” 負責飲料攤。
“我” 準備時看到烏云，擔心下雨。
活動當天順利進行，但烏云聚集，開始下雨。
“我” 利用藏著的箱子里的東西應對危機。
教練艾比宣布好消息，活動成功，體現團隊精神。
主旨升華句
This experience taught us that when faced with challenges, unity and creativity within a team can turn the most difficult situations around, leading to unexpected success.（這次經歷告訴我們，當面臨挑戰時，團隊的團結和創造力可以扭轉最困難的局面，帶來意想不到的成功。）
Through the process of dealing with the rain - threat and the fundraising difficulties, we learned the true meaning of perseverance and cooperation, which will surely benefit us in all aspects of life.（通過應對下雨威脅和籌款困難的過程，我們學到了堅持和合作的真正含義，這無疑將在生活的各個方面使我們受益。）
Our journey to save the swim team from disbanding not only secured our future in swimming but also strengthened the bond among us, proving that together, we can overcome any obstacle.（我們拯救游泳隊免于解散的歷程，不僅確保了我們在游泳方面的未來，還加強了我們之間的聯系，證明了只要團結一心，我們就能克服任何障礙。）
In the face of the potential cancellation of the swim team due to lack of funds and the unexpected rain, our unwavering efforts and teamwork showed that hope always exists as long as we stand together.（面對游泳隊因資金短缺可能取消以及意外降雨，我們堅定不移的努力和團隊合作表明，只要我們團結一致，希望就永遠存在。）
This story of our swim team's fundraising adventure is a vivid illustration of how a group of people with a common goal, when confronted with difficulties, can work hand in hand to create a bright future, full of hope and achievements.（我們游泳隊這次籌款經歷生動地說明了，一群有著共同目標的人，在面對困難時，能夠攜手合作，創造一個充滿希望和成就的光明未來。）
寫作示范一
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather. Before long, raindrops began to patter down. The customers at the pool ground were in a panic, and my teammates looked at me anxiously. I quickly opened the big box under the table. To everyone's surprise, it was filled with colorful umbrellas and raincoats. We handed them out to the customers, and with Coach Abby's help, we managed to move the drink stand and some of the game facilities indoors. The event continued, and people were still enjoying the drinks, snacks, and games.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement. “Guys, we've reached our fundraising goal!” she shouted. Everyone cheered and hugged each other tightly. The rain couldn't dampen our spirits. We realized that with unity and quick thinking, we could overcome any obstacle. This experience not only saved our swim team but also made our bond as a team much stronger. We knew that no matter what challenges lay ahead, we could face them together with courage and determination.
寫作示范二
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather. Soon, a heavy downpour hit. The pool ground turned into a wet mess, and the lively atmosphere was on the verge of collapse. But I didn't panic. I opened the box, which was filled with board games and some indoor decorations. We quickly set up an indoor activity area. My teammates called on the customers to come inside. Although the original plan was disrupted, the new indoor event attracted even more people with its cozy and novel atmosphere.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement. “Thanks to everyone's efforts, we've raised enough money for this season's competitions and equipment!” The whole team erupted into wild cheers. We were overjoyed that our hard work paid off. This rainy - day experience taught us the importance of flexibility and cooperation. It was a memorable moment that would always remind us of the power of a united team in the face of adversity.
參考范文
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather. Dark clouds loomed overhead, and a gust of wind blew, making the situation look more and more dire. The customers at the pool ground looked around nervously, and my teammates' smiles faded away. Just as the first heavy raindrops splashed down, I opened the mysterious box. Inside were large plastic sheets and some rope. With the help of my teammates, we quickly set up a big makeshift tent over the drink stand. Some of the other team members used the remaining plastic sheets to cover the game areas. The rain was pouring, but our event was still going on under the protection of the tent.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement. “Hey, everyone! Counting all the money we've raised today and in the past few days, we've got enough funds for the swim team this year!” The moment we heard the news, all the worries and fatigue were washed away by joy. We jumped up and down, screaming and hugging each other. This challenging experience taught us that no matter how tough the situation is, as long as we work together and don't give up, we can achieve our goals. From then on, our swim team became even more united and confident, ready to face any future challenges.

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