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假設你是李華，剛從上海旅游回來。請給你的英國朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享此次經歷，內容包括：
1.旅行經歷；
2.你的感受。
注意：
1.寫作詞數應為80左右；
2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Chris, Yours sincerely, Li Hua
寫作提綱
第一段：開頭先問候 Chris，引出剛結束上海之旅，迫不及待分享。
第二段：詳細描述旅行經歷，如參觀東方明珠、外灘、豫園等景點。
第三段：表達旅行感受，闡述上海之旅帶來的收獲，期待 Chris 回信。
語言積累
I was deeply impressed by... 我對…… 印象深刻。
offer a panoramic view of 提供…… 的全景
be fascinated by 被…… 迷住
blend of A and B A 和 B 的融合
broaden one's horizons 開闊某人的視野
cultural immersion 文化沉浸
can't wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
iconic building 標志性建筑
historical architecture 歷史建筑
experience the charm of 體驗…… 的魅力
佳句積累
Shanghai, a city that never sleeps, seamlessly weaves together the threads of the past and the present, creating a tapestry of culture and innovation that is both captivating and inspiring.（上海，一座不夜城，將過去與現在的脈絡無縫交織，織就出一幅既迷人又鼓舞人心的文化與創新畫卷。）
The moment I stepped onto the Bund, the symphony of historical architecture and contemporary skyscrapers serenaded my senses, painting a vivid picture of Shanghai's glorious past and its soaring future.（當我踏上外灘的那一刻，歷史建筑與現代摩天大樓的交響樂奏響在我的感官中，生動地描繪出上海輝煌的過去和蓬勃的未來。）
Wandering through the ancient alleys of Yu Garden, I was transported back in time, surrounded by the delicate beauty of traditional Chinese architecture and the gentle whispers of centuries - old stories.（漫步在豫園的古巷中，我仿佛穿越時空，被中國傳統建筑的精致之美和古老故事的輕聲細語所環繞。）
Shanghai Disneyland, a wonderland of joy and magic, not only offered me thrilling rides and spectacular shows but also kindled the childlike wonder within me, making my trip an unforgettable adventure.（上海迪士尼樂園，一個充滿歡樂與魔法的仙境，不僅為我提供了刺激的游樂設施和精彩的表演，還點燃了我內心的童真，讓我的旅程成為一次難忘的冒險。）
The maglev train, a marvel of modern engineering, whisked me through the cityscape at lightning speed, giving me a taste of Shanghai's cutting - edge technology and its unwavering pursuit of progress.（磁懸浮列車，現代工程的奇跡，以閃電般的速度帶我穿梭在城市景觀中，讓我領略到上海的尖端技術和對進步的不懈追求 。）
寫作示范一
Dear Chris,
How's everything going I'm writing to share my recent trip to Shanghai with you.
Upon arriving in Shanghai, I first went to the Oriental Pearl Tower. Standing at the top, I was stunned by the magnificent cityscape. The bustling streets and the glittering lights made the city look like a wonderland. Then I walked along Nanjing Road, where I indulged in shopping and tasted various local snacks. The Yu Garden was another highlight. The delicate rockeries and the clear ponds created a peaceful and elegant atmosphere.
This trip to Shanghai was truly unforgettable. It made me realize the vitality and diversity of this metropolis. I'm eager to hear about your travels too.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
寫作示范二
Dear Chris,
Hope everything is fine with you. I'm excited to tell you about my wonderful journey in Shanghai.
During my time there, I visited the Bund in the evening. The contrast between the old - style buildings and the modern skyscrapers on the opposite side of the Huangpu River was really striking. I also took a ride on the maglev train, which was an extremely thrilling experience. Besides, I spent a whole day at the Shanghai Disneyland, enjoying the exciting rides and the lovely shows.
This trip not only brought me a lot of fun but also let me see the dynamic development of Shanghai. I sincerely hope you can visit this amazing city someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作示范三
Dear Chris,
I haven't heard from you for a while. I just got back from Shanghai and want to share my wonderful time there with you.
I started my trip by exploring the Shanghai Museum, where I was able to admire a large collection of precious cultural relics. Then I headed to the Jin Mao Tower. The observation deck on the top gave me a bird's - eye view of the entire city. In addition, I took a stroll in the Xintiandi area, which combined old - fashioned Shikumen houses with modern bars and restaurants.
This trip to Shanghai was a remarkable experience. It deepened my affection for this vibrant city. Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
參考答案
Dear Chris,
How is everything going I am writing to share with you my recent travelling experience of visiting Shanghai, a city that truly touched my heart.
I started my journey at the Bund, appreciating the breathtaking views of the modem skyline, with its towering skyscrapers reflected in the Huangpu River. Afterwards, I wandered along Nanjing Road, doing some souvenir shopping and enjoying the delicious local snacks.
The vitality of this modem city has left a deep impression on me. Warmly welcome you to this charming city.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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