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山東省煙臺(tái)市2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期期末學(xué)業(yè)水平考試英語試題
第二節(jié)（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her. It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments with her high school classmates. Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel. She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes, Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave. “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye, she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital, could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say, “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small. It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family. Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth.
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day when her father went for his camera because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony.
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief, having tried turning it on several times and failed. “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.

Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
第二節(jié)（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
“Unbelievable,” Jade screamed while examining her camera(狀從的省略形式，非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作) that, seconds before, had been accidentally dropped into the seawater by her(定從). It was her father’s favourite. She had brought it to her class beach barbecue to record memorable moments(非謂語動(dòng)詞做目的狀語) with her high school classmates(介詞短語做狀語). Jade held the camera close to her chest before drying it with a towel(介短狀語). She pressed the power button several times. No response.
Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes(獨(dú)立主格), Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave(adj短語做補(bǔ)語). “Jade, where are you going ” Her puzzled classmates called behind her, but she ignored them. Without saying goodbye(介短狀語), she ran away from the barbecue. She wanted to take the camera to the repairman immediately. Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman for all things digital, could only shake his head, give her a resigned look and say, “It’s beyond repair.”
The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father(介短定語) on his fortieth birthday. Since then, it had been his companion for all events, big and small(adj做補(bǔ)語). It had been instrumental in capturing all the significant milestones in their family(介詞短語做主語，it形式主語). Numerous advanced digital cameras had come onto the market but his father had no intention of replacing the treasure. But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it! Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again. Thinking of this(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作), Jade put back the disabled camera quietly in her father’s drawer in the hope that her father wouldn’t find out the truth(同位從).
Jade remained disturbed for a few days. Then came the day (倒裝句)when her father went for his camera(定從) because Jade’s younger sister would be graduating from kindergarten and he was preparing for the ceremony(狀從).
“What’s wrong with my camera It was in good condition last Saturday. Maybe it’s too old to work,” Jade’s father said in disbelief(介短狀語，情緒描寫), having tried turning it on several times and failed(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). “Take it easy, dear. Perhaps it’s high time to change for an advanced one,” Jade’s mother comforted him smilingly. “But I can’t part with this big treasure.” Her father responded.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage.

The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk.
1. 按高考英語讀后續(xù)寫要求分析
分析角度 內(nèi)容 原文反應(yīng)句
人物刻畫 Jade的內(nèi)心掙扎，父親對(duì)相機(jī)的情感，母親的安慰 "Jade held the camera close to her chest" “Her father would get cross with her and probably never trust her with his belongings again."
情感層次 從失落、焦慮到?jīng)Q定面對(duì)，最終的勇氣釋放 "Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes" "Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave."
關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點(diǎn) 相機(jī)損壞，父親和母親的反應(yīng)，Jade的內(nèi)心掙扎 "Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave." "The camera was a gift from Jade’s mother to her father."
語言特色 表達(dá)緊張和沖突的詞匯，如“resigned look”，“beyond repair” "It’s beyond repair." "Jade remained disturbed for a few days."
關(guān)鍵詞分析 “camera”, “repairman”, “beyond repair”, “treasure” "It was beyond repair." "It had been his companion for all events, big and small."
心理描寫 Jade的內(nèi)疚和不安，父親的失望 "Tears of sadness welling up in her eyes" "Thinking of this, Jade put back the disabled camera quietly."
動(dòng)作描寫 Jade跑向修理店，修理師的反應(yīng)，父親的嘗試修理相機(jī) "Jade ran away from the barbecue." "Jade gathered her belongings."
環(huán)境描寫 海灘聚會(huì)和修理店 "Her puzzled classmates called behind her." "Uncle Lee, the trusty repairman."
隱含主題 責(zé)任感與勇氣面對(duì)錯(cuò)誤，家庭關(guān)系中的信任 "But this time she had secretly taken it out and ruined it!"
情感轉(zhuǎn)折 Jade決定面對(duì)父親，父親卻反應(yīng)意外，最后母親的安慰 "Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage."
空間轉(zhuǎn)換 從海灘到修理店，再到家中 "Jade gathered her belongings, determined to leave." "The next day, when Jade came home..."
時(shí)間過渡 幾天的內(nèi)心掙扎，最后一次決定 "Jade remained disturbed for a few days."
2. 續(xù)寫思路與布局
續(xù)寫構(gòu)思
思路: 續(xù)寫應(yīng)關(guān)注Jade決定面對(duì)父親的情感轉(zhuǎn)折。她的內(nèi)疚與父親的失望形成強(qiáng)烈對(duì)比。故事的轉(zhuǎn)折在于Jade最終獲得了勇氣，嘗試向父親坦白。在處理內(nèi)心沖突時(shí)，父親的反應(yīng)也應(yīng)該有一定的意外感。
布局:
第一段: 通過Jade的內(nèi)心變化來描寫她如何下定決心面對(duì)父親，嘗試彌補(bǔ)自己的錯(cuò)誤。
第二段: 展示父親的反應(yīng)與母親的寬容，最終父親可能選擇理解和寬容，這為Jade帶來一份寬慰。
續(xù)寫要注意承接原文的事項(xiàng)
承接原文情感: 續(xù)寫需要從Jade內(nèi)心的矛盾和不安開始，最終找到勇氣面對(duì)父親的失望。
動(dòng)作的合理性: Jade的行為應(yīng)符合她的情感變化，首先是內(nèi)心的掙扎，接著是她的決定與父親的反應(yīng)。
巧妙設(shè)計(jì)續(xù)寫內(nèi)容
情感遞進(jìn): Jade的情感從內(nèi)疚轉(zhuǎn)為勇氣，再到父親的意外反應(yīng)，逐步推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展。
沖突和解決: 在沖突中，Jade的內(nèi)疚和父親的失望構(gòu)成了故事的主要沖突點(diǎn)，解決沖突的方式是父親的理解與母親的寬慰。
3. Story Mountain 思維導(dǎo)圖
續(xù)寫時(shí)的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)：
原文沖突: Jade的相機(jī)損壞，內(nèi)心的不安，父親的失望。
情感轉(zhuǎn)折: Jade決定面對(duì)父親，最終解開誤會(huì)。
解決方案: 父親對(duì)相機(jī)的情感雖受影響，但他依舊選擇原諒Jade，家庭關(guān)系并未破裂。
4. 情緒、動(dòng)作、環(huán)境描寫英文例句
情緒描寫 動(dòng)作描寫 環(huán)境描寫
She felt her heart racing with guilt. Jade gathered her belongings hastily. The waves crashed against the shore.
A sense of fear crept over her. Her hands trembled as she reached for the camera. The warm sun made the beach seem inviting.
She was overwhelmed by a feeling of dread. Jade wiped the camera with a towel nervously. The bustling sound of the beach made her feel more alone.
Tears of frustration welled up in her eyes. She turned and ran away from the barbecue. The salty air filled the beach as she left.
Her heart sank at the thought of disappointing her father. She carefully handed the camera to Uncle Lee. The repair shop was quiet, with only the sound of a fan whirring.
常見單詞的高級(jí)替換詞：
原詞 替換詞 場景總結(jié)
sadness despair, sorrow, grief, dismay 強(qiáng)調(diào)情緒的深度與強(qiáng)烈
guilt remorse, regret 內(nèi)心的沖突和責(zé)任感
courage bravery, resolve 面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)與困境時(shí)的決心
repair fix, mend, restore 與物品修復(fù)相關(guān)的情境
5. 高中語法現(xiàn)象分析
常見搭配與語法現(xiàn)象
虛擬語氣
例句: "If I had known, I would have told him."
搭配: If + 過去完成時(shí), 主語 + would have + 過去分詞
過去完成時(shí)
例句: "The camera had been his companion for all events."
搭配: had + 過去分詞 用于描述過去某一時(shí)間之前的狀態(tài)
情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的否定
例句: "It couldn’t be fixed."
搭配: couldn’t + 動(dòng)詞原形 表示無法發(fā)生的可能性
生詞短語分析:
詞語 詞性 近義詞 反義詞 例句
guilt 名詞 remorse, shame innocence "Jade felt deep guilt about ruining the camera."
repair 動(dòng)詞 fix, mend break "Uncle Lee couldn’t repair the camera."
resigned 形容詞 accepting, defeated hopeful "He gave her a resigned look."
Possible Answers:
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Hearing this(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作), Jade gathered up her courage. She had been carrying the weight of her mistake for days, and the guilt weighed heavily on her heart.(情緒描寫) Yet, she knew that confronting her father (非謂語動(dòng)詞短語做主語)was the only way to alleviate her own burden(非謂語動(dòng)詞短語做后置定語)(賓從). With trembling hands(介短狀語描寫神態(tài)), she picked up the broken camera and walked into the living room, where her father was sitting(定從). She hesitated for a moment before speaking(情緒；動(dòng)作描寫). "Dad, I need to tell you something important," she said softly, trying to steady her voice(非謂語動(dòng)詞短語做伴隨動(dòng)作). The look of confusion on his face only made her feel worse, but she continued, "I was the one who broke your camera(定從)." Her heart pounded as she waited for his response(狀從), unsure of what to expect(adj做補(bǔ)語及賓從).
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. Her heart sank(心情描寫) as she realized her father had replaced the camera(賓從). However, instead of anger, he smiled warmly and said, "I know it was an accident(賓從), Jade. I can see how much this has been bothering you(賓從)." He placed the phone gently in her hands, and for the first time in days, Jade felt a wave of relief wash over her. Her father’s forgiveness was more than she had hoped for(比較), and it was clear that their relationship had grown stronger(主從，it形式主語) because of this incident. The burden of guilt that had once consumed her(定從) was now replaced with a sense of peace.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. She had spent the entire weekend avoiding her father, fearing the worst possible outcome(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). The guilt she felt for breaking his beloved camera(定從) had haunted her every moment. As she stood in front of him(狀從), she could feel her palms sweating, but she knew she could no longer keep running from the truth(賓從). "Dad, there's something I need to confess(賓從)," she began, her voice barely above a whisper.(獨(dú)立主格) She then explained how she had accidentally dropped the camera into the seawater(賓從), feeling her heart race as the words left her mouth(狀從). Her father’s expression remained unchanged, which made her even more anxious.
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. It was not the camera she had feared losing(定從), but she could still feel the sting of her actions. Her father stood by her side, his smile reassuring. "I know it was an accident, Jade, but don't worry," he said, his voice filled with understanding(定獨(dú)立主格). "This camera meant a lot to me, but family is always more important." Jade’s heart filled with gratitude as she looked at the new phone(狀從). She realized that her father’s forgiveness was a gift she would never take for granted(定從), and from that day forward, she promised herself she would be more careful with his belongings(定從).
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. The weight of guilt had been too much for her to bear over the past few days. She knew that she had made a mistake(賓從), and now it was time to face the consequences(todo做真正主語). She picked up the broken camera and walked into the living room, where her father was sitting(定從). He looked up at her with a frown(介短狀語) as she approached(狀從). "Dad, I need to tell you something," she said, her voice shaking with uncertainty(獨(dú)立主格). The moment she confessed to breaking the camera(the moment鏈接的狀從), her father’s eyes softened. "I’m sorry, Dad. I didn’t mean to hurt you," she added, hoping he would understand(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作+賓從).
Paragraph 2: The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. She felt a sense of relief, but also a twinge of guilt. Her father had forgiven her, but the weight of her mistake still lingered. "I know you didn’t mean to break the camera, Jade(賓從)," he said kindly. "It’s okay. What matters(主從) is that you’re learning from this mistake(賓從)." Jade smiled as she picked up the phone(狀從). She was deeply touched by her father’s words and realized that his love and understanding meant more to her than any object ever could(賓從).
語法加分點(diǎn)分析
虛擬語氣
例句: "I would have told him if I had known."
搭配: If + 過去完成時(shí), 主語 + would have + 過去分詞
分析: 用來表達(dá)后悔與未實(shí)現(xiàn)的虛擬情況。
過去完成時(shí)
例句: "The camera had been his companion for all events."
搭配: had + 過去分詞 用來描述過去某一時(shí)間之前的狀態(tài)。
情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的否定
例句: "It couldn’t be fixed."
搭配: couldn’t + 動(dòng)詞原形 表示無法發(fā)生的可能性。
高級(jí)替換詞與亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語
原詞 替換詞 聯(lián)想詞 例句
guilt remorse, shame regret, self-blame "Her guilt was overwhelming, but she knew she had to face it."
courage bravery, resolve determination "With a brave heart, Jade approached her father."
forgiveness understanding, pardon mercy, compassion "Her father’s forgiveness was all she needed to heal."
sorrow sadness, grief heartache "Her heart was full of sorrow when she confessed."
peace calm, serenity relief, contentment "The peace she felt after her confession was like a burden lifted."
高中語法與詞匯亮點(diǎn)
條件句
例句: "If I had known, I would have been more careful."
搭配: If + 過去完成時(shí), 主語 + would have + 過去分詞
分析: 在后悔情境中常用的句型。
復(fù)合句
例句: "Jade, feeling guilty, decided to face her father, knowing it was the only way to heal."
搭配: 主句 + 現(xiàn)在分詞/過去分詞 用于表現(xiàn)原因或背景。
情態(tài)動(dòng)詞
例句: "She might have been more careful."
搭配: 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞 + have + 過去分詞 表達(dá)推測與虛擬情境。
官方第二節(jié)（滿分25分）（One possible version）
Hearing this, Jade gathered up her courage. Full of apology and regret(adj短語做原因狀語), Jade gave an account of the whole story. “Sorry, dad, it’s all my fault. I know the camera means a lot to you(地道表達(dá)). I hope to buy a new one for you with all my pocket money.” Turning back to fetch her money(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作), she was stopped by her mother. “Honey, it’s just a camera. Your honesty matters most to us,” Her mother said smilingly, hugging her tightly(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作). Relieved(adj做主語補(bǔ)語), Jade responded with gratitude, “Thank you, Mom. Never will I make such a mistake(倒裝句加強(qiáng)語氣).”
The next day, when Jade came home, she saw a new smartphone on her desk. On it was a note(倒裝句 加強(qiáng)語氣) saying(非謂語動(dòng)詞做后置定語), “Jade, you’ve grown up. We’re proud of your integrity. This phone with a great built-in camera(介短定語) is for you. You can use it to capture memorable moments. Love, Dad & Mum.” Jade picked up the smartphone, tears of happiness streaming down her cheeks(獨(dú)立主格). She realized her parents’ love and forgiveness were more precious than any possession(賓從). She promised to herself that she would be more responsible and considerate(賓從), cherishing(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作) the trust her parents had in her(定從).

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