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第二節(滿分25分)
閱讀下面材料, 根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段, 使之構成一篇完整的短文。
It was the third week of December, but 1 couldn't even consider Christmas, because this year I didn't know how to celebrate it. A month ago, our doctor informed that my two-year-old son suffered from celiac disease (麩質過敏癥). Any exposure to flour, milk, soy, or corn (even a single bite) would cause the little boy to be in a miserable situation for the next week.
Having a child of food sensitivities, I felt awkward buying stuffs not causing allergic (過敏的) reactions for the Christmas cookies. But it wasn't the lack of cookies, parties or stuffing themselves that bothered me- -it was the lack of tradition, which, as a child, I looked forward to. What could 1 give to my children What was Christmas going to look like for our family
I bought lots of stuffs including almond milk (牛奶替代品), allergic-free chocolate chips, potatoes and so on. By the time I got back to my car after shopping, it had started snowing. First heavy snow of the season. These magical holiday bits and pieces felt like they would just float by us this year, maybe forever. I cried my way home.
My three and-a-half-year old daughter was shouting when I walked in the door. “Mama, look at the snow. It's snowing outside and everywhere!” Her excitement spilled over until we had her and her brother dressed warmly and ready to play in snow on the ground. My husband took them out while I made dinner.
Watching them playing with rosy cheeks and runny noses through the kitchen window, I suddenly remembered my creative mum who had recently made mashed (搗碎的) potatoes with almond milk, and I remembered they tasted normal.
注意:
(1)續寫的詞數應為150個左右;
(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1：And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me.
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ”
第二節(滿分25分)
閱讀下面材料, 根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段, 使之構成一篇完整的短文。
It was the third week of December, but I couldn't even consider Christmas, because this year I didn't know how to celebrate it(賓從). A month ago, our doctor informed that my two-year-old son suffered from celiac disease (麩質過敏癥)(賓從). Any exposure to flour, milk, soy, or corn (even a single bite) would cause the little boy to be in a miserable situation for the next week(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).
Having a child of food sensitivities(非謂語動詞做原因狀語), I felt awkward buying stuffs not causing allergic (過敏的) reactions for the Christmas cookies(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). But it wasn't the lack of cookies, parties or stuffing themselves that bothered me(定從)- -it was the lack of tradition, which, as a child, I looked forward to(定從). What could I give to my children What was Christmas going to look like for our family
I bought lots of stuffs including almond milk (牛奶替代品), allergic-free chocolate chips, potatoes and so on. By the time I got back to my car after shopping, it had started snowing. First heavy snow of the season. These magical holiday bits and pieces felt like they would just float by us this year, maybe forever(賓從). I cried my way home.
My three and-a-half-year old daughter was shouting when I walked in the door(狀從). “Mama, look at the snow. It's snowing outside and everywhere!” Her excitement spilled over until we had her and her brother dressed warmly and ready to play in snow on the ground(狀從). My husband took them out while I made dinner(狀從).
Watching them playing with rosy cheeks and runny noses through the kitchen window, I suddenly remembered my creative mum who had recently made mashed (搗碎的) potatoes with almond milk(定從), and I remembered they tasted normal(賓從).
注意:
(1)續寫的詞數應為150個左右;
(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1：And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me.
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ”
1. 讀后續寫分析
分析角度 內容 原文反應句
人物刻畫 文章主要描述母親的內心掙扎與自我覺察。她關注兒子健康和家庭傳統之間的平衡。 "I cried my way home." (反映母親內心的掙扎與無奈)
情感層次 從焦慮到靈感迸發，情感逐漸發生轉變，最后帶來希望。 "I suddenly remembered my creative mum..." (靈感的覺醒)
關鍵情節點 母親發現解決問題的創意瞬間，家庭成員的支持成為轉折。 "And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me." (靈感的誕生)
語言特色 使用簡潔明了的句式反映母親的情感波動。 "It was the lack of tradition... that bothered me." (情感轉折)
關鍵詞分析 “lack of tradition”代表著失落，“inspiration”代表著新的希望。 "What could I give to my children " (對失落的表達)
心理描寫 母親從擔憂到找到解決方法的心理過程。 "I cried my way home." (悲傷與無力)
動作描寫 描述母親、丈夫與孩子的互動。 "My husband took them out while I made dinner." (家庭互動)
環境描寫 雪景的描寫營造了節日氛圍，暗示問題和解決方案的轉折。 "First heavy snow of the season." (環境的變化與情感呼應)
隱含主題 如何在困境中保持家庭的傳統與愛，尋找替代方案。 "What could I give to my children " (困境中的愛與關懷)
情感轉折 從母親的無助到靈感的產生，再到家庭支持的力量，情感經歷明顯的轉折。 "I suddenly remembered..." (轉折后的希望)
空間轉換 從商場到家，再到廚房的轉移，展現母親情感的變化。 "I made dinner." (從外界到家的轉變)
時間過渡 從圣誕節的擔憂到最終實現創意的時間推移。 "By the time I got back to my car..." (時間推移與情感變化)
2. 故事山模式 (Story Mountain)
思維導圖
開端：
圣誕節前的焦慮：母親擔心無法為孩子創造傳統的節日。
體現家庭中的困境：兒子的食物過敏帶來壓力。
關鍵情節：母親購物時的憂慮。
上升行動：
雪景的描寫：象征著節日氣氛，但又增加了不確定性。
女兒的興奮和丈夫的支持成為母親靈感的催化劑。
轉折點：靈感的迸發：母親想到用杏仁奶和土豆做創意料理，重新激發了節日的希望。
高潮：母親通過創意食譜帶來了新的解決方案，家庭團聚在一起享受節日。
結尾：家庭團結，情感的轉折從無望到充滿希望和滿足。
3. 續寫構思與布局
續寫思路 內容概述 承接原文的事項
續寫的構思 續寫應突出母親從困境中找到靈感的瞬間，繼而實施創意，并最終為家庭帶來節日的溫暖與傳統感。通過溫暖的家庭氛圍展現母親的努力與愛的傳遞。 從“inspiration”開始，明確解決方案的實施過程。
布局 1. 第一段：母親靈感的突然涌現，描述她如何利用創意為家人準備食物，如何克服困難。
2. 第二段：丈夫和孩子的反應，以及家庭溫暖氛圍的展現。 保持母親的情感細膩描寫和家庭成員間的互動，確保與原文的情感一致。
提煉框架 - 解決問題的創意來源和過程
- 家庭成員之間的支持與互動
- 溫暖的家庭氛圍，情感的升華 運用環境描寫增強節日氛圍，展示母親和家人的情感交流。
實施方法 描述母親如何通過自己的智慧解決問題，展現家庭成員如何彼此支持，同時強調節日的意義與家庭的團結。 強調母親的決心與孩子們的積極反應，保持對細節的關注，增加情感的層次感。
承接事項 - 持續展現母親的內心掙扎與希望的變化
- 延續“雪景”帶來的節日氛圍
- 反映家庭成員的互動和支持 保持母親的情感流轉與家庭的溫暖氛圍，確保情節的邏輯與感情的發展一致。
4. Possible Answers:
Paragraph 1: And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me. I rushed to the kitchen and began to gather the ingredients. Almond milk, potatoes, and the allergen-free chocolate chips were the key to the solution. I began to experiment with the familiar recipes I had grown up with(定從), adjusting them to fit our new needs(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). The process was slow but rewarding, and by the time dinner was ready, I felt a sense of accomplishment. I had made something familiar, something that would bring back the warmth of tradition(定從) despite the changes we had to make(定從). The house was filled with the smell of my creations(環境描寫), and for the first time in weeks, I felt a sense of peace.
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” He asked, a smile spreading across his face(獨立主格). I handed him a cup, watching(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) as he took the first sip(狀從). “It’s perfect,” he said, and I could see the joy in his eyes. Our children joined us, and we all gathered around the table, enjoying the warmth and comfort of the moment(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). It wasn’t the Christmas we had originally planned(定從), but it was our Christmas, filled with love, creativity, and new traditions(非謂語動詞做后置定語). And in that moment, I realized that Christmas wasn’t about perfection; it was about making memories together(賓從 遞進句式).
5. 推薦的情境下動作、心理、環境描寫
情境 動作描寫 心理描寫 環境描寫
動作描寫 1. "I rushed to the kitchen..."
2. "I handed him a cup..." 1. "I felt a sense of peace..."
2. "My hands trembled as I worked..." 1. "The house was filled with the smell of my creations..."
2. "The snow outside gently fell, adding to the holiday charm..."
心理描寫 1. "I had no idea what I was doing, but I kept going."
2. "I felt the weight of the decision..." 1. "I was filled with doubt but also hope."
2. "It was the first time I truly felt at ease." 1. "The warmth of the fire comforted me."
2. "The smell of snow mixed with the scent of home-cooked meals."
環境描寫 1. "The kitchen was bright, with every corner filled with festive supplies."
2. "The snow outside created a soft, magical atmosphere." 1. "The cold winter air contrasted sharply with the warmth of the kitchen."
2. "The night sky was clear, adding to the peaceful atmosphere." 1. "The kitchen light made everything feel cozy and inviting."
2. "Outside, the snowflakes floated in the soft moonlight."
6. 高級詞匯替換（續）
單詞/短語 替換詞 例句
feeling sensation, emotion, sentiment, perception, mood 1. He was overwhelmed by the emotion of the moment.
2. She was in a different mood after the news.
create form, produce, generate, construct, build 1. The artist produced a masterpiece.
2. He constructed a beautiful model of the building.
change alter, transform, modify, shift, evolve 1. The situation shifted dramatically overnight.
2. They decided to alter their plans.
important crucial, essential, significant, vital, paramount 1. It is crucial that we leave now.
2. This decision is vital for our future.
bright radiant, shining, glowing, brilliant, dazzling 1. The radiant sun made everything seem golden.
2. Her dazzling smile lit up the room.
7. 高考語法現象分析（續）
語法現象 搭配現象 生詞短語 詞性 近義詞 反義詞 例句
定語從句 用于描述人物或事物的特征 make sense 動詞短語 comprehend, understand confuse, misunderstand "The explanation that she gave made sense."
被動語態 強調動作的接受者而非執行者 be filled with 動詞短語 be packed with, be full of be empty, be void "The room was filled with the smell of cookies."
虛擬條件句 表示與過去事實相反的假設 take action 動詞短語 act, react ignore, delay "If I had known earlier, I would have taken action."
短語動詞 表示動作的完成、進行或狀態變更 pick up 動詞短語 gather, collect drop, discard "She picked up her child and hugged him tightly."
現在完成時 表示動作與現在相關，強調結果 have to 動詞短語 must, need to not necessary "I have to finish this before tomorrow."
8. 續寫語料積累—動作、心理、環境描寫推薦英文例句
動作描寫
He rushed to the kitchen, eager to help with dinner preparations.
She moved quickly, her hands shaking as she set the table.
The children ran outside, their laughter echoing in the cold air.
My heart raced as I tried to remember all the ingredients.
She reached for the pot, her fingers brushing the warm surface.
He stood by the window, gazing at the snow falling softly outside.
I paced back and forth, unsure of what to do next.
They huddled together on the couch, sharing the warmth of the fire.
心理描寫
A sense of calm washed over me as I realized it wasn’t as hard as I thought.
Doubt crept into my mind, but I pushed it aside, determined to make it work.
My heart sank when I thought about how different this Christmas would be.
The excitement bubbled inside me as I saw my family enjoying the festive food.
I felt a surge of gratitude for my family’s support.
The uncertainty lingered, but I refused to let it control me.
As I watched my children, I realized that Christmas was about love, not perfection.
I couldn't help but smile as I saw my husband's surprised reaction.
環境描寫
The soft glow of the fireplace made the room feel cozy and inviting.
The air was crisp, with a hint of winter’s chill settling in.
Snowflakes drifted down from the sky, covering the ground in a blanket of white.
The room smelled of cinnamon and freshly baked treats, a comforting scent.
The kitchen was warm, with pots and pans scattered across the counters.
The windows were fogged up from the heat inside, contrasting with the cold outside.
Outside, the world seemed to slow down as the snow fell softly to the ground.
The kitchen was bustling with activity, the sound of chopping and stirring filling the air.
9. 總結：高考續寫語料積累
場景 高級詞匯替換詞 句型與搭配
動作描寫 Rush, move quickly, run, reach, stand, pace, pick up, huddle 1. I rushed to the kitchen.
2. He moved quickly, excited to help.
3. The children ran outside, laughing in the snow.
心理描寫 Calm, doubt, excitement, gratitude, uncertainty, smile 1. A sense of calm washed over me.
2. Doubt crept in, but I pushed it aside.
環境描寫 Glow, crisp, drift, blanket, bustle, fog, contrast, settle 1. The soft glow of the fireplace made everything cozy.
2. The air was crisp, filled with the scent of winter.
10. 高考語法現象與詞匯升級
語法現象 例句 高級搭配 生詞短語與詞匯
倒裝句 "Had I known earlier, I would have acted differently." "Not only...but also," "Seldom have I seen..." make it through (成功度過), bring up (提及)
虛擬語氣 "If I were you, I would have made a different choice." "If I had known," "If it had not been for..." get along with (相處), go along with (支持)
過去完成時 "She had already left when I arrived." "By the time...had," "Before I knew it..." figure out (弄清楚), pass through (經過)
動詞短語 "They picked up the pieces and moved on." "She looked after her family." run into (偶遇), make up for (彌補)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me. I realized that despite the challenges of my son’s condition, we could still celebrate Christmas in a meaningful way(賓從). I immediately began to think about all the things we could do(定從) to create a joyful and inclusive atmosphere(非謂語動詞做目的狀語). Instead of focusing on what we couldn’t have(賓從), I decided to embrace the spirit of the holiday by making dishes that everyone could enjoy(定從), regardless of their allergies(介詞短語及對原文的銜接). I prepared some delicious almond milk hot chocolate and gluten-free cookies. It was a simple gesture, but it felt like a breakthrough(遞進句式). For the first time, I truly felt the warmth of the holiday season.
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” he asked, his voice full of surprise(獨立主格). The children were equally excited, their faces lighting up(獨立主格) as they tasted the treats(狀從). I smiled, watching their joy spread across the room(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作 環境描寫). It wasn’t the typical Christmas celebration, but it was ours(遞進句式). As we gathered around the table(狀從), the snow continued to fall gently outside(環境描寫), and for a moment, I realized that Christmas wasn’t about perfection. It was about love, family, and the simple joys of togetherness(遞進句式).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me. I remembered the way my mother used to create magic during the holidays(定從), despite the limited resources(介短狀語). She would make ordinary moments feel extraordinary. So, I decided to embrace her creativity. I used almond milk to make hot chocolate and filled the house with the sweet aroma of freshly baked gluten-free cookies(對原文的銜接). It wasn’t just about the food; it was about creating an atmosphere(遞進句式) where the children could still experience the wonder of Christmas(定從). The season wasn’t lost; it had just taken on a different form(遞進句式).
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” he exclaimed, seeing the joy in the children’s eyes(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). As we sat around the table(狀從), the kids eagerly devoured their cookies, laughing and chatting excitedly(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). For the first time in weeks, I felt a sense of peace(情緒描寫). Christmas had arrived, not in the way I had expected(定從), but in a way(遞進句式) that was even more meaningful(定從). It wasn’t about the traditions I had known(定從); it was about creating new ones that would last a lifetime(定從)(遞進句式).
Version 3
Paragraph 1: And that's when a sudden inspiration came to me. I suddenly realized that I didn’t need to replicate the Christmases of my childhood to create something special(賓從). Instead, I could create new traditions that fit our current situation(定從). I began making dishes that were both safe for my son and still festive(定從). I prepared almond milk hot chocolate and gluten-free cookies(對原文的銜接), which were simple yet meaningful(定從). As I watched my children eagerly waiting to try these new treats(狀從), I felt a sense of accomplishment(情緒描寫). This Christmas might not have been the same as before, but it was filled with love and creativity(遞進句式).
Paragraph 2: My husband was amazed at it. “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” he said, smiling at the unexpected surprise(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). The kids were thrilled(情緒描寫), and we spent the evening savoring the treats together, laughing and playing games(動作串). It was a different kind of Christmas, one that focused more on the spirit of the holiday than on perfection(定從). The snow continued to fall outside(環境描寫), but inside, our home was filled with warmth(對比寫法). For the first time in weeks, I felt like we were exactly where we were meant to be(賓從).
語法加分點分析與搭配
加分點 句子例子 搭配與近義詞替換
現在完成時 "I have made almond milk hot chocolate." have created, have prepared
虛擬語氣 "If we had done this earlier, we would have enjoyed the treats sooner." If I had known (假設過去)
非謂語動詞 "To create a festive atmosphere, I made cookies." To prepare, To bring about
定語從句 "The cookies that we baked were gluten-free." which, that (非限制性)
反義詞 "It wasn't about perfection, but about love." instead of, not only... but also
情緒與動作描寫亮點詞匯
類型 亮點詞匯/短語 例句
情緒描寫 amazed, thrilled, excitement, warmth, peace "He was amazed at it."
"For the first time, I felt a sense of peace."
動作描寫 rushed, created, prepared, sat down, tasted "I rushed to the kitchen."
"We all sat down around the table."
環境描寫 glow, snow, warmth, magical, festive "The snow continued to fall gently."
"The warmth of the room filled my heart."
讀后續寫語料積累
高級替換選項與例句
詞匯/短語 替換詞 例句
delicious tasty, scrumptious, flavorful "The cookies were scrumptious, and everyone enjoyed them."
amazed astonished, surprised, stunned "He was astonished by how well everything turned out."
celebrate enjoy, commemorate, observe "We could still celebrate the holiday with our own traditions."
官方One possible version:
And that’s when a sudden inspiration came to me. Why not try to make the same for my family Perhaps I could also make some hot chocolate using alternatives(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) not causing allergic reactions for them to drink(非謂語動詞做后置定語)(對原文的對應). Actions speak louder than words! Firstly I made the mashed potatoes with almond milk(對原文的對應) as my beloved mum did(狀從). Perfect! Then I poured almond milk in a pan and slowly melted chocolate chips into it. The result was better than expected: They dissolved like butter. “Ha!” I yelled. My first victory. Wild with joy(adj做狀語), I raised my chocolate spoon and cried out, “Hot chocolate! Who wants hot chocolate ”
My husband was amased at it, “You made hot chocolate Can we have any ” Yes, dear. It's safe." He laughed and started pouring while I began pulling off coats and hats for children(狀從). My husband enjoyed every mouthful of the hot chocolate and gave me the thumbs up. That's when I realized my daughter and son were running merrily in the dining room(表從), stopping(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) to take a bite of what I had cooked(賓從). My husband and our little children were drinking hot chocolate together in a toast to the first heavy snow and the approaching Christmas(介短方式狀語). There it was. I had thought it was completely impossible(賓從), but here, I was witnessing our first holiday tradition, everyone participating in his or her own way(獨立主格). And it was beautiful.

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