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We were all sitting around enjoying another beautiful day of sunshine and warm weather when my brother, Tim, was struck with an idea. “Why don’t we go for a boat ride this afternoon on Lake Bitabee ” This idea met with general approval from Arlene, his wife, and me. But Dad wanted to spend the afternoon fishing.
After lunch, Arlene and I got into Tim's car and Tim put the boat on the trailer (拖車) and drove off. Dad followed behind in the other car, having decided to fish on Lake Victoria - which lay a few hundred yards from Lake Bitabee.
When we arrived there, Tim, a more-than-capable driver, sent Arlene and I to down the hill to the water's edge in order to guide him as he backed the boat trailer down the incline (斜坡) and around the small bend. “Tell me when the water is halfway up the back tires, ” he told us.
Then the back of the boat trailer edged itself around the bend, and Arlene and I began waving to Tim, pointing him a little to the right to get him lined up properly. Slowly, little by little, Tim backed down the incline to the relatively flat surface next to the water. We watched as the trailer entered the water, frightening fish and bullfrogs away. Deeper and deeper into the swamp (水洼) went the trailer, until - as Tim said - the water was halfway up the back tires. I shouted out for Tim to stop the car.
My brother threw the car into park and jumped out of the driver's seat, eager to launch the boat into the water. Then I saw that the car was in the deep water, clearly stuck in the mud (淤泥) . Then he got back into the car and started the engine. It stuck fast, the tires whirling (旋轉) helplessly around in the muddy water. Shutting off the engine, Tim got out of the vehicle, looking anxious and helpless.
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1. 續寫詞數應為150個左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
“I'll get Dad,” I tried to comfort him.
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Seeing the car still stuck in the water, Dad went up the hill to his car and drove to a nearby farmhouse.
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文章大意
在一個陽光明媚、天氣溫暖的日子，弟弟蒂姆提議下午去比塔比湖劃船，這一想法得到阿琳和 “我” 的贊同，父親則想去釣魚。午飯后，蒂姆帶著阿琳和 “我” 前往湖邊，父親開車前往幾百碼外的維多利亞湖釣魚。到達湖邊后，蒂姆讓阿琳和 “我” 在水邊指引他倒車，將船拖車順著斜坡和彎道放下。當拖車進入水中，水到了后輪胎一半時，“我” 喊蒂姆停車。蒂姆急于將船下水，跳下車后發現車陷入深水泥濘中，重新發動汽車也無濟于事，輪胎在泥水中無助旋轉，他感到焦慮和無助。
故事山分析
開端：蒂姆提議去劃船，眾人響應，父親選擇去釣魚，大家分別前往不同湖泊。
發展：到達湖邊，蒂姆倒車放船拖車，阿琳和 “我” 負責指引，車進入水中。
高潮：車陷入泥沼，蒂姆嘗試發動汽車但失敗，陷入焦慮和無助，這是故事的緊張時刻。
結局（待續寫）：通過 “我” 找父親幫忙，以及父親后續的行動，解決車被困問題，構成故事結局。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
1.父親去附近的維多利亞湖釣魚：在續寫中，“我” 可以快速找到父親求助，父親能及時趕到現場解決問題。
2.蒂姆是個很有能力的司機：與車陷入泥沼形成對比，后續可能會通過蒂姆和父親的共同努力，發揮各自優勢解決困境，展現能力的另一種體現。
3.蒂姆急于將船下水：導致他沒注意到車的危險狀況，續寫中他可能會為自己的急躁而自責，也會更積極地參與解決問題。
4.車陷入泥沼，輪胎在泥水中無助旋轉：預示著解決問題的難度較大，需要借助外部力量，如父親找來的工具或他人幫助。
5.阿琳和 “我” 在水邊指引：在后續解決問題過程中，阿琳和 “我” 可能會繼續協助，比如幫忙觀察周圍情況，提供一些想法。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：“我” 去尋找父親，描述 “我” 快速跑到維多利亞湖找到父親的過程，以及向父親說明情況時的焦急。父親得知情況后的反應，如立刻放下手中的釣魚工具，和 “我” 一起趕回被困地點。
第二段：父親前往附近農舍，描述父親在農舍借到工具或尋求到幫助的經過，如借到拖車繩或找到有經驗的農夫幫忙。大家一起努力，最終將車從泥沼中拉出來，蒂姆和眾人的心情變化，從焦慮轉為喜悅，結尾可以適當總結這次經歷的收獲。
情感線
起初，大家對劃船充滿期待，心情愉悅。車陷入泥沼后，蒂姆從急切變得焦慮無助，阿琳和 “我” 也跟著緊張。“我” 去找父親時，內心焦急，希望盡快得到幫助。父親得知情況后，迅速行動，展現出冷靜和擔當。在解決問題過程中，大家齊心協力，當車被拉出泥沼時，所有人的焦慮轉為喜悅，通過這次經歷，大家更加團結，也體會到面對困難時相互支持的重要性。
故事線
蒂姆提議劃船，大家響應，父親去釣魚。
到達湖邊，蒂姆倒車放船拖車，阿琳和 “我” 指引。
車陷入泥沼，蒂姆嘗試發動失敗。
“我” 去找父親求助，父親趕來。
父親去農舍借工具或尋求幫助。
大家一起努力將車拉出泥沼，問題解決。
主旨升華句
This experience taught us that in the face of difficulties, the support and unity of family are the most powerful weapons, enabling us to overcome any obstacle.（這次經歷讓我們明白，面對困難時，家人的支持和團結是最強大的武器，能讓我們克服任何障礙。）
Through the process of rescuing the stuck car, we realized that even the most capable people may encounter setbacks, and it is the joint efforts of everyone that can turn the situation around.（通過解救被困車輛的過程，我們意識到即使是最有能力的人也可能遭遇挫折，正是大家的共同努力才能扭轉局面。）
This incident served as a reminder that when unexpected situations occur, remaining calm and taking prompt action, with the help of family, can lead to a successful solution.（這次事件提醒我們，當意外情況發生時，保持冷靜并迅速行動，在家人的幫助下，就能成功解決問題。）
Our journey from the excitement of boating to the anxiety of a stuck car and finally to the joy of resolution showed us that life is full of ups and downs, and it is how we face challenges that defines our growth.（我們從劃船的興奮到車被困的焦慮，再到問題解決的喜悅，這一過程表明生活充滿起伏，而我們面對挑戰的方式決定了我們的成長。）
The successful rescue of the car not only solved a practical problem but also deepened the bond among family members, proving that together, we can overcome any difficulties that come our way.（成功解救車輛不僅解決了實際問題，還加深了家庭成員之間的感情，證明我們齊心協力就能克服任何困難。）
寫作示范一
“I'll get Dad,” I tried to comfort him. Without hesitation, I sprinted up the hill towards Lake Victoria where Dad was fishing. My heart was pounding with anxiety, and I was gasping for breath when I finally reached him. “Dad, Tim's car is stuck in the mud!” I exclaimed breathlessly. Dad immediately put down his fishing rod and rushed back with me.
Seeing the car still stuck in the water, Dad went up the hill to his car and drove to a nearby farmhouse. He explained the situation to the farmer, who was kind - hearted and willing to help. The farmer lent Dad a powerful tow rope. With the rope tied to the car, Dad and Tim worked together to pull the stuck car. Arlene and I cheered them on. After several attempts, the car finally came out of the mud. Everyone was filled with joy, and we learned the importance of family support in difficult times.
寫作示范二
“I'll get Dad,” I tried to comfort him. I ran as fast as I could, ignoring the pain in my legs. When I found Dad, his face turned serious as soon as he heard what happened. We hurried back to the lakeside.
Seeing the car still stuck in the water, Dad went up the hill to his car and drove to a nearby farmhouse. There, he met an old man who had lived by the lake for years. The old man knew the area well and offered to help. He brought some wooden planks and a winch. They placed the planks under the tires and used the winch to pull the car. With the combined efforts of everyone, the car gradually moved out of the mud. Tim's worried expression turned into a big smile. We were all relieved, and this experience made our family closer.
【答案】
“I’ll get Dad,” I tried to comfort him. Tim nodded, his face pale with worry. I quickly ran up the hill, my heart pounding. When I reached Dad, who was just setting up his fishing gear near Lake Victoria, I explained the situation breathlessly. Dad’s face darkened with concern, but he didn’t waste a moment. Grabbing his tools, he followed me back to the stuck car, his stride determined.
Seeing the car still stuck in the water, Dad went up the hill to his car and drove to a nearby farmhouse. He returned shortly with a sturdy rope and a friendly farmer who agreed to help. Together, they tied the rope to the front of Tim’s car. With the farmer’s truck pulling and Dad guiding, they managed to free the car from the muddy grip of the swamp. Tim sighed with relief as the car finally lurched onto solid ground. We all learned a valuable lesson about the unpredictability of nature and the importance of being prepared.

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