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“Number 7, Jenny Walker, takes the lead,” cried the announcer. “Just one more hurdle (欄) and — Jenny Walker from Mount Lawley High School takes first place in the girls’ 100-meter hurdles!” The crowd went wild as Jenny’s teammates whooped, “Good for you, Sweet Spikes (釘鞋)!” Sweet Spikes was Jenny’s nickname.
“County championship, here we come!” shouted Jenny, patting her neon-green track spikes. They were almost worn out, but she didn’t care. They were her lucky shoes and she loved them. “Next Saturday, we’re taking home the gold,” Jenny whispered to her spikes.
“Don’t forget, Sweet Spikes,” chirped Marisol, one of her teammates. “My birthday party is next Friday at Lakeside Park.” “Beep. Party recorded in calendar,” joked Jenny in her best robot voice.
Next weekend couldn’t come soon enough. Jenny brimmed with excitement all week long. At track practice, she leaped over those hurdles faster than ever before. She wore her spikes all day, and everything in her path was a hurdle: flowerpots in her front yard, sidewalk cracks, and even her little dog!
The day of Marisol’s party, Jenny put on her favorite blue shorts, a track T-shirt from her dad, and of course, her lucky spikes. “Perfect.” She smiled at herself in the mirror. In Lakeside Park, music and the smell of grilled food filled the air. But Jenny stopped by the track first, planning to do a couple of sprints (沖刺). “Sweet Spikes!” Two of her teammates rushed over, breathless and barefoot. “You have to try the slide!” Jenny’s eyes glanced across the party area. “Slide What sli—”
Suddenly, she saw it. The BIGGEST inflatable slide (充氣滑梯) she’d ever seen. Without thinking twice, Jenny kicked off her spikes and charged toward it. She conquered the slide again and again and again, until it was finally time to go home. As she unwillingly made her way back to the track where she’ d left her spikes, panic set in.
Jenny picked up the pace, her heart pounding louder the closer she got. When she got to the place, her heart stopped, “My lucky spikes are gone!” Jenny’s teammates helped her search the park. No luck. “Farewell, gold,” Jenny murmured.
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The next day, Jenny stood at the track of the county championship, still sad about her lost spikes.
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“Just one more hurdle and — Number 52, Jenny Walker, takes the gold!”
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文章大意
文章講述了來自勞利山高中的Jenny在女子100米跨欄比賽中奪冠，她的釘鞋是她的幸運鞋，被隊友們稱為“甜心釘鞋”。下周有縣錦標賽，Jenny滿心期待。同時，隊友Marisol邀請她參加下周五在湖邊公園舉辦的生日派對。Jenny整個星期都興奮不已，訓練時跨越欄架的速度更快，甚至把生活中的各種事物都當作欄架練習。派對當天，Jenny穿著喜愛的服裝和幸運釘鞋前往，到公園后先去了跑道，準備沖刺練習。這時，她看到了巨大的充氣滑梯，不假思索地踢掉釘鞋去玩滑梯。玩盡興后，她回到放釘鞋的地方，卻發現釘鞋不見了，隊友們幫忙尋找也一無所獲，Jenny覺得與金牌無緣了。
故事山分析
開端：Jenny 在比賽中奪冠，期待縣錦標賽，她的釘鞋是幸運鞋，隊友邀請她參加生日派對。
發展：Jenny 為比賽積極準備，訓練表現出色，對派對也很期待。派對當天，她看到充氣滑梯，踢掉釘鞋去玩。
高潮：Jenny 發現釘鞋丟失，隊友幫忙尋找無果，這是故事的高潮，充滿緊張和失落。
結局（待續寫）：Jenny 在縣錦標賽的表現，是否能克服沒有幸運釘鞋的心理障礙奪冠，以及她對幸運釘鞋的新認知，構成故事結局。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
釘鞋是 Jenny 的幸運鞋，她非常喜愛并依賴它：續寫中，她在比賽前會因丟失釘鞋而焦慮，但在比賽過程中逐漸明白實力才是關鍵，不再過度依賴幸運釘鞋。
Jenny 在訓練時表現出色，跨越欄架速度比以往更快：暗示她具備奪冠實力，續寫中她會憑借自身實力在比賽中取得好成績。
Jenny 把生活中的事物當作欄架練習，體現她對跨欄的熱愛和專注：在比賽中，這份熱愛和專注會幫助她克服困難，專注于比賽。
Jenny 在派對上看到充氣滑梯，沖動地踢掉釘鞋去玩：這是釘鞋丟失的原因，續寫中她會為自己的沖動行為反思，也會從這次經歷中成長。
Jenny 認為丟失釘鞋就與金牌無緣，表現出她對釘鞋的迷信：在比賽后，她會改變這種想法，認識到自身努力和實力的重要性。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：描寫 Jenny 站在縣錦標賽跑道上的心理狀態，如失落、焦慮、不自信。可以描述她看到其他選手穿著嶄新釘鞋時的對比，以及回憶起幸運釘鞋時的難過。接著，她可能會在隊友的鼓勵下，慢慢調整心態，決定依靠自己的實力比賽。
第二段：著重描寫 Jenny 比賽的過程，她如何跨越一個個欄架，克服心理障礙。當她沖過終點線獲得金牌時，她的反應，如激動、喜悅、難以置信。最后，她對這次經歷的感悟，不再迷信幸運釘鞋，而是相信自己的努力和實力。
情感線
起初，Jenny 丟失釘鞋后極度失落，認為與金牌無緣，在縣錦標賽跑道上充滿焦慮和不自信。看到其他選手釘鞋時，她更加難過。在隊友鼓勵下，她慢慢振作，決定靠實力比賽。比賽中，她專注跨越欄架，克服心理障礙。沖過終點獲得金牌時，她激動喜悅，從依賴幸運釘鞋到相信自己實力，完成了心態的轉變，收獲成長。
故事線
Jenny 在比賽中奪冠，期待縣錦標賽，釘鞋是幸運鞋。
隊友邀請 Jenny 參加生日派對，她期待派對和比賽。
派對當天，Jenny 看到充氣滑梯，踢掉釘鞋去玩，釘鞋丟失。
Jenny 站在縣錦標賽跑道上，因丟失釘鞋而失落，在隊友鼓勵下振作。
Jenny 在比賽中克服心理障礙，跨越欄架，獲得金牌。
Jenny 對這次經歷有所感悟，不再迷信幸運釘鞋，相信自身實力。
主旨升華句
This experience taught Jenny that true success lies not in lucky charms but in one's own hard work and unwavering determination, reminding us all that we have the power within ourselves to achieve great things.（這次經歷讓 Jenny 明白，真正的成功不在于幸運符，而在于自己的努力和堅定的決心，提醒我們所有人，我們自身擁有實現偉大成就的力量。）
Through the loss of her lucky spikes and the subsequent victory, Jenny learned that self - confidence and perseverance are the real keys to achieving our goals, regardless of external factors.（通過丟失幸運釘鞋和隨后的勝利，Jenny 認識到自信和毅力是實現目標的真正關鍵，無論外部因素如何。）
Jenny's journey from relying on lucky spikes to trusting her own abilities shows that setbacks can be stepping stones to self - discovery and growth, enabling us to break free from superstitions and embrace our true potential.（Jenny 從依賴幸運釘鞋到相信自己能力的歷程表明，挫折可以成為自我發現和成長的墊腳石，使我們能夠擺脫迷信，發揮自己的真正潛力。）
The story of Jenny and her lost spikes serves as a powerful reminder that our greatest assets are not material objects but the skills, determination, and resilience we cultivate through our experiences.（Jenny 和她丟失釘鞋的故事有力地提醒我們，我們最寶貴的財富不是物質，而是我們在經歷中培養的技能、決心和韌性。）
In the end, Jenny's victory in the county championship without her lucky spikes proved that the strength of the human spirit and the power of self - belief are far more important than any lucky charm, inspiring us to have faith in ourselves and our capabilities.（最后，Jenny 在沒有幸運釘鞋的情況下在縣錦標賽中獲勝，證明了人類精神的力量和自我信念的力量遠比任何幸運符重要得多，激勵我們相信自己和自己的能力。）
寫作示范一
Paragraph 1: The next day, Jenny stood at the track of the county championship, still sad about her lost spikes. She watched as other runners adjusted their shiny new shoes, a pang of envy hitting her. Memories of her lucky spikes flooded her mind. “I can't do this without them,” she murmured to herself. But then, her best friend came up and put a hand on her shoulder. “Jenny, you're an amazing runner. You don't need those shoes to win. Your speed and skill are what matter.” Jenny took a deep breath, nodded, and stepped onto the starting line, determination replacing her doubt.
Paragraph 2: “Just one more hurdle and — Number 52, Jenny Walker, takes the gold!” The announcer's voice boomed. Jenny crossed the finish line, her heart pounding. She couldn't believe it. She'd done it! She'd won without her lucky spikes. Her teammates rushed towards her, cheering and hugging her. As she looked down at her plain running shoes, she realized something. It wasn't the spikes that made her a winner. It was her hard work, her passion, and her never - give - up attitude. From that day on, she knew that true luck came from within.
寫作示范二
Paragraph 1: The next day, Jenny stood at the track of the county championship, still sad about her lost spikes. Her hands trembled slightly as she tied the laces of her replacement shoes. She felt like a part of her was missing. The starting gun sounded, and as the other runners shot forward, Jenny hesitated for a split second. But then, she remembered all the hours of training, all the times she'd leaped over hurdles with ease. She gritted her teeth and sprinted forward, her mind focused on the finish line. With each hurdle she cleared, her confidence grew.
Paragraph 2: “Just one more hurdle and — Number 52, Jenny Walker, takes the gold!” Jenny crossed the finish line in a blur. She collapsed onto the grass, tears streaming down her face. This wasn't just a victory over the other runners; it was a victory over her own fears and superstitions. Her teammates surrounded her, showering her with praise. “I did it!” she cried. “I really did it!” From that moment on, Jenny no longer needed a pair of lucky spikes to feel like a champion. She knew that the real power to succeed was within herself.
One possible version:
The next day, Jenny stood at the track of the county championship, still sad about her lost spikes. Devastated as she was, she knew she had to compete. As she stepped onto the starting line, Jenny took a deep breath and focused on the race ahead. She could feel the energy and excitement of the crowd around her, with her teammates cheering for her, which gave her a renewed sense of determination. The gunshot sounded through the stadium as the race began, and Jenny’s heart pounded with each stride. She pushed herself harder than ever before, jumping over hurdle after hurdle with precision and speed.
“Just one more hurdle and — Number 52, Jenny Walker, takes the gold!” The announcer’s voice echoed through the stadium as Jenny crossed the finish line first. The crowd erupted in cheers and applause, and Jenny’s teammates rushed to embrace her, celebrating her incredible victory. “I did it without my lucky spikes!” Jenny exclaimed, tears of joy streaming down her face. “That’s right, girl!” said Marisol, “You proved you are the real deal!” Jenny realized that it wasn’t the shoes that made her fast and strong, but her own determination and hard work. From that day on, she continued to break records and achieve greatness, proving that true success comes from within.

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