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It was the Easter holidays, and school was closed for two weeks. For me, the Easter holidays were so boring that it was impossible to find something fun to do. My mom had suggested that I do some studies since the promotion test was coming up. However, I didn’t follow my mother’s suggestion. Instead, I went outside to seek out my friends to play with. When I had successfully contacted some of my friends, none of them seemed to be much in a playful mood, but one friend Jimmy agreed to play with me. He suggested we go down to the river and just relax there. The river was not far from my home, and we arrived there quickly.
Just relaxing on the river bank with nothing but some waste logs, it wasn’t fun for us at first. Clearly what was on our minds was to jump into the river and just take a swim in the clear cool water. So we took off our clothes down to our underwear and walked into the shallow part of the water. The water was truly cool and refreshing and we were starting to have fun then, playing and laughing, as we splashed the cool water onto each other’s faces.
Then we started to chase each other around on the river bank and then we ran straight into the river. We were having so much fun that we didn’t notice danger was around the corner. Before Jimmy could know it, and before he could do anything to keep his balance, he lost his footing on a tree branch, which was in the shallow part of the water, and slipped, bringing his whole entire body into the deep water. He tried to resurface from the water but found it extremely hard to keep his head above the water.
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I was scared to see him struggling in the water but I knew I must rescue him.
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After a while, Jimmy recovered from panic and thanked my mom and the neighbors.
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文章大意
復活節學校放假兩周，“我”覺得假期無聊，不聽媽媽讓學習的建議，去找朋友玩。多數朋友沒心情，只有Jimmy同意，他提議去河邊放松。河邊起初無趣，后來我們在淺水區游泳玩耍。之后在河岸追逐再沖進河里時，Jimmy沒注意水中樹枝，滑倒跌入深水區，難以浮出水面。
故事山分析
開端：復活節假期 “我” 找朋友玩，和 Jimmy 來到河邊，起初覺得無聊，后來在淺水區游泳嬉戲。
發展：兩人在河岸追逐后沖進河里，玩耍時未注意危險，Jimmy 因踩到樹枝滑倒跌入深水區，陷入危險。
高潮：Jimmy 在深水區掙扎，生命受到威脅，“我” 面臨是否救援以及如何救援的抉擇，這是故事的緊張時刻。
結局（待續寫）：通過 “我” 的救援行動以及后續 Jimmy 恢復后的情節，展現事件的解決和人物的成長，構成故事結局。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
河水離 “我” 家不遠：暗示救援可能相對便捷，在續寫中，“我” 或許能快速獲得外界幫助，如跑回家呼喊大人。
起初覺得在河邊無聊，后來才開始玩耍：體現孩子們對危險的忽視，在續寫中，會因之前的放松警惕而凸顯此刻危險的嚴重性，也可能促使 “我” 反思自己的行為。
在淺水區玩耍很開心：與 Jimmy 跌入深水區形成鮮明對比，在續寫中，“我” 可能會憑借在淺水區積累的對水的熟悉感，嘗試救援 Jimmy。
沒注意危險就在身邊：為 Jimmy 的遇險埋下伏筆，在續寫中，會圍繞 “我” 如何應對這突如其來的危險展開，比如 “我” 會采取什么緊急措施。
Jimmy 在深水區難以浮出水面：直接引出 “我” 的救援行動，在續寫中，將詳細描述 “我” 的救援過程，以及救援成功后的情況。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：著重描寫 “我” 看到 Jimmy 掙扎時的心理活動，雖害怕但堅定要救他的決心。然后詳細描述 “我” 的救援行動，如迅速游向他，可能會回憶起學過的救援知識，嘗試抓住他并將他帶向岸邊，過程中遇到的困難，如 Jimmy 因驚慌掙扎導致救援難度增加。
第二段：描繪 Jimmy 恢復后的場景，他向媽媽和鄰居表達感謝，大家對此次事件的反應，如媽媽的后怕和對 “我” 的叮囑，鄰居的稱贊。最后闡述從這次經歷中 “我” 和 Jimmy 得到的教訓，如以后玩耍要注意安全，增強安全意識。
情感線
起初，“我” 和 Jimmy 在河邊玩耍，心情輕松愉快，盡情享受假期的歡樂。當 Jimmy 突然跌入深水區掙扎時，“我” 瞬間被恐懼籠罩，但責任感讓 “我” 鼓起勇氣去救援，內心充滿緊張與擔憂。在救援過程中，隨著困難出現，“我” 愈發焦慮。成功救援后，“我” 感到如釋重負。Jimmy 恢復后，大家的關心讓 “我” 感受到溫暖，同時也因這次經歷而更加懂得生命的珍貴和安全的重要性，內心多了一份成熟與警惕。
故事線
復活節假期 “我” 找朋友玩，和 Jimmy 來到河邊，起初無聊，后在淺水區玩耍。
兩人在河岸追逐沖進河里，Jimmy 踩到樹枝滑倒跌入深水區。
Jimmy 在深水區掙扎，難以浮出水面。
“我” 雖害怕但決定救 Jimmy，采取救援行動。
“我” 成功救起 Jimmy，將他帶到岸邊。
Jimmy 恢復后感謝大家，“我” 和他從中吸取教訓。
主旨升華句
This incident taught us that in the face of danger, courage and presence of mind can make a life - saving difference, and we should always stay alert to potential risks.（這次事件教會我們，在危險面前，勇氣和鎮定能起到救命的作用，我們應時刻對潛在風險保持警惕。）
Through this experience, we not only learned the importance of safety but also realized the power of friendship and the responsibility we have for each other.（通過這次經歷，我們不僅懂得了安全的重要性，還意識到了友誼的力量以及我們對彼此的責任。）
The accident by the river served as a wake - up call, reminding us that carelessness can lead to unexpected consequences and that we must always prioritize safety in our daily lives.（河邊的事故敲響了警鐘，提醒我們粗心大意會導致意想不到的后果，在日常生活中我們必須始終將安全放在首位。）
In the end, what could have been a tragic event turned into a valuable lesson, teaching us to cherish life, be cautious, and always be ready to lend a hand to those in need.（最終，原本可能是一場悲劇的事件變成了寶貴的一課，教會我們珍惜生命、保持謹慎，隨時準備向有需要的人伸出援手。）
Our experience at the river emphasized that even in the midst of fun and relaxation, we should never let our guard down, as safety is the foundation of every enjoyable moment.（我們在河邊的經歷強調，即使在歡樂和放松的時候，我們也絕不能放松警惕，因為安全是每一個愉快時刻的基礎。）
寫作示范一
I was scared to see him struggling in the water but I knew I must rescue him. My heart was pounding wildly, and my hands were shaking. However, without hesitation, I took a deep breath and swam towards him as fast as I could. When I reached him, he was flailing his arms desperately. I tried to hold him tightly, but his panic made it difficult. I remembered the rescue skills I had learned and managed to get him in a stable position. With all my strength, I dragged him towards the shore. It was an exhausting battle, but finally, we made it.
After a while, Jimmy recovered from panic and thanked my mom and the neighbors. My mom hugged me tightly, her eyes filled with tears of relief. Jimmy was still a bit shaken, but he managed to say thank you to everyone who had helped. The neighbors praised my bravery. Jimmy and I both realized how dangerous it was to play without paying attention to safety. From that day on, we always made sure to be careful whenever we went out to play.
寫作示范二
I was scared to see him struggling in the water but I knew I must rescue him. Fear gripped me, but I knew I couldn't let my friend down. I quickly swam towards Jimmy, yelling at him to stay calm. As I got closer, I saw the fear in his eyes. I grabbed his arm firmly and told him to stop struggling. Using the current of the river to my advantage, I slowly pulled him towards the shallower area. It was a long and difficult process, but finally, we reached the bank safely.
After a while, Jimmy recovered from panic and thanked my mom and the neighbors. My mom was so proud of me, and Jimmy's gratitude made me feel warm inside. The neighbors told us stories about similar accidents and emphasized the importance of safety. Jimmy and I listened attentively, vowing never to be so careless again. This experience taught us a valuable lesson that we would always remember.
【答案】
I was scared to see him struggling in the water but I knew I must rescue him. I took a deep breath to keep calm. Looking around, I found a waste log, I threw it to him immediately and asked him to hold it and not to give up. At the same time I yelled for help, hoping someone could come to our rescue. Luckily, my mom heard my cries, rushed out of the house and raced towards us. She jumped into the water and reached out her hands to pull him. Several neighbors also quickly joined the rescue. They managed to get Jimmy out of the water. Finally, Jimmy was saved, pale and shivering.
After a while, Jimmy recovered from panic and thanked my mom and the neighbors. We hugged each other in tears. I thought my mom would scold me. But she just held us in her arms tightly. She warned us it was dangerous to swim in the river. Both of us felt ashamed and promised never to do that again. This was really a special Easter, one I would never forget. For Jimmy, he had a narrow escape from drowning. For me, I felt the kindness of my neighbors.

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