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Once or twice a little leaf was heard to cry and sigh, as leaves often do when a gentle wind is blowing. And the branch asked,“What is the matter,little leaf "
"The wind,” said the leaf, “just told me that one day it would pull me off, and throw me on the ground and die. "
The little leaf told the branch, and the branch told the tree. When the tree heard it,it sent word back to the little leaf.
"Do not be afraid, little leaf,”" it said, “Hold on tight, and you shall not go off until you are ready."
So the leaf stopped sighing, and went on singing and dancing in the wind. It grew all the spring and summer.In autumn the leaf grew very beautiful.
One day, the leaf noticed a strange thing: the branch had lost all its colors. So it asked,“Oh,branch! Why are you in dark clothes while I have dressed up in beautiful clothes "
"Because your work is now over and you are getting ready for the coming holiday. But I must put on my working clothes for the next year,” said the branch, “for my work is not yet done.”
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The bright and cold days finally arrived._____________________________________
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文章大意
一片小樹葉在微風(fēng)拂動(dòng)時(shí)時(shí)常哭泣嘆息，因?yàn)轱L(fēng)告知它終有一天會(huì)被吹落，扔在地上死去。小樹葉將此事告知樹枝，樹枝又傳達(dá)給大樹，大樹安慰小樹葉只要緊緊抓住，等做好準(zhǔn)備才會(huì)掉落。于是小樹葉不再嘆息，在春夏時(shí)節(jié)快樂生長，秋天時(shí)變得十分美麗。一天，小樹葉發(fā)現(xiàn)樹枝失去了顏色，樹枝解釋是因?yàn)樾淙~的工作已完成，準(zhǔn)備迎接假期，而自己要為來年的工作穿上工作服，工作尚未完成。
故事山分析
開端：小樹葉因風(fēng)告知它會(huì)被吹落而擔(dān)憂哭泣，向樹枝傾訴。
發(fā)展：樹枝將此事告知大樹，大樹安慰小樹葉，小樹葉不再嘆息，快樂生長，秋天變得美麗。
高潮：小樹葉發(fā)現(xiàn)樹枝顏色變化，與樹枝對話，了解到彼此不同狀態(tài)的原因。
結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：續(xù)寫部分將圍繞小樹葉在寒冷天氣到來后的經(jīng)歷，以及它最終飄落的感悟，展現(xiàn)故事結(jié)局。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
風(fēng)告知小樹葉會(huì)被吹落：在續(xù)寫中，當(dāng)寒冷天氣到來，風(fēng)會(huì)再次出現(xiàn)，真正將小樹葉吹落，小樹葉會(huì)經(jīng)歷從害怕到坦然面對的過程。
大樹安慰小樹葉等準(zhǔn)備好才會(huì)掉落：續(xù)寫時(shí)，小樹葉在飄落前會(huì)思考自己是否已準(zhǔn)備好，最終明白自己已完成生長使命，坦然接受飄落。
小樹葉春夏生長，秋天變美麗：暗示小樹葉經(jīng)歷了完整的生命階段，在續(xù)寫中，飄落是它生命的下一個(gè)階段，它會(huì)帶著之前的成長記憶飄落。
樹枝說小樹葉工作完成準(zhǔn)備迎接假期，自己工作未完成：續(xù)寫里，小樹葉飄落象征著它進(jìn)入 “假期”，而樹枝繼續(xù)為來年工作做準(zhǔn)備，兩者命運(yùn)不同，小樹葉會(huì)在飄落時(shí)感慨生命的不同階段。
小樹葉在風(fēng)中唱歌跳舞快樂生長：與飄落時(shí)的心境形成對比，續(xù)寫中，小樹葉飄落時(shí)會(huì)回憶起曾經(jīng)的快樂，更能體會(huì)生命的完整。
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：描寫明亮而寒冷的日子到來后的景象，如周圍環(huán)境的變化，風(fēng)的凜冽。小樹葉在這樣的環(huán)境下的感受，可能會(huì)害怕、不舍，但也會(huì)想起大樹的安慰，內(nèi)心產(chǎn)生矛盾和掙扎。
第二段：描述小樹葉突然想飄落的原因，可能是看到周圍樹葉飄落，或者是對新旅程的期待。著重描寫它飄落時(shí)的心情和感悟，如對生命的理解，對過去時(shí)光的懷念，以及對未來的憧憬。
情感線
起初，小樹葉因風(fēng)的話而恐懼擔(dān)憂，在大樹安慰下變得快樂，安心生長。當(dāng)寒冷日子來臨，它又陷入害怕與不舍，內(nèi)心充滿矛盾。看到周圍變化后，突然想飄落，此時(shí)它的情感從糾結(jié)轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)樘谷唬h落時(shí)，它回憶過去的快樂，感慨生命的歷程，對未來雖未知但充滿期待，完成了從恐懼到接受、從迷茫到感悟的情感轉(zhuǎn)變。
故事線
小樹葉因風(fēng)的話擔(dān)憂，向樹枝傾訴。
樹枝告知大樹，大樹安慰小樹葉，小樹葉快樂生長。
小樹葉秋天變美麗，發(fā)現(xiàn)樹枝顏色變化并對話。
寒冷日子到來，小樹葉感受環(huán)境變化，內(nèi)心矛盾。
小樹葉看到周圍樹葉飄落或出于對新旅程的期待，想飄落。
小樹葉飄落，回憶過去，感悟生命，對未來充滿期待。
主旨升華句
Through its journey from growth to falling, the little leaf learned that every stage of life has its own meaning and beauty, and we should embrace the changes with an open heart.（通過從生長到飄落的歷程，小樹葉明白生命的每個(gè)階段都有其獨(dú)特意義和美麗，我們應(yīng)敞開心扉擁抱變化。）
The little leaf's experience teaches us that the end of one phase is not the end of everything but the beginning of a new chapter, filled with new possibilities and lessons.（小樹葉的經(jīng)歷告訴我們，一個(gè)階段的結(jié)束并非一切的終結(jié)，而是新篇章的開始，充滿新的可能和啟示。）
Just as the little leaf let go and fell, we too should have the courage to release the past and move forward, knowing that life is a continuous cycle of growth and transformation.（正如小樹葉放手飄落，我們也應(yīng)有勇氣放下過去，勇往直前，明白生命是一個(gè)不斷成長和轉(zhuǎn)變的循環(huán)。）
The story of the little leaf serves as a reminder that even in the face of the unknown, we can find peace and purpose by accepting the natural flow of life.（小樹葉的故事提醒我們，即使面對未知，通過接受生命的自然流轉(zhuǎn)，我們也能找到安寧和目標(biāo)。）
From its happy growth in the wind to its peaceful fall, the little leaf's life shows that every moment, whether of joy or change, contributes to the richness of our existence.（從小樹葉在風(fēng)中快樂生長到平靜飄落，它的生命表明，每一個(gè)時(shí)刻，無論是喜悅還是變化，都為我們的存在增添了豐富內(nèi)涵。）
寫作示范一
The bright and cold days finally arrived. The wind blew harder, and the world around the little leaf seemed to turn pale. The little leaf trembled, feeling a mix of fear and reluctance. It remembered the wind's warning and the tree's comfort. It clung tightly to the branch, not sure if it was ready to face the unknown. But as it watched other leaves flutter down one by one, a strange feeling welled up inside it.
Suddenly, the little leaf really wanted to go, too. It realized that it had experienced a wonderful life, growing from a tender bud to a beautiful leaf. Now, it was time for a new journey. Letting go of the branch, it danced in the wind, feeling free. As it floated down, it thought of the spring days when it first sprouted, the summer when it swayed in the breeze, and the beautiful autumn it had just passed. It knew that though its time on the tree was over, a new chapter was about to begin.
寫作示范二
The bright and cold days finally arrived. Frost covered the ground, and the air was crisp. The little leaf shivered in the strong wind. It looked around at the withered landscape and felt a sense of loneliness. It wondered if it was really time to leave the branch that had been its home for so long. Memories of its carefree days in the sun flooded its mind, making it even more hesitant.
Suddenly, the little leaf really wanted to go, too. It saw a group of leaves flying together, like a flock of colorful butterflies. A sense of adventure filled its heart. It let go of the branch and joined the dance of the leaves. As it fell, it understood that life was like a cycle. Just as it had come from a tiny bud, it would now return to the earth, to give new life in the future. It landed softly on the ground, looking forward to what the next season would bring.
One possible version:
The bright and cold days finally arrived.The leaf saw all the leaves around growing very beautiful.Some of them were yellow.Some of them were brown and many leaves even had different colors.One by one,these leaves are getting ready to fly away.They danced in the wind with great joy.
Suddenly, the little leaf really wanted to go,too.Just then a gentle wind came, and the leaf let go without thinking. The wind took it up and turned it over and over. At last, it fell gently down on the ground, among hundreds of leaves.It felt really happy to join its friends and kept dreaming about the upcoming holidays and parties.It also couldn't help thinking about the next spring, summer and autumn.

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