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假定你是李華，你認為外教Roy在授課過程中PPT使用不恰當，影響了教學效果。請給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：
1．說明具體問題；
2．提出建議。
注意：
1．詞數80左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
2．不得透露學校、姓名等個人信息。
Dear Roy,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
寫作提綱
第一段：禮貌地開場，表明寫信目的是反饋PPT使用問題。先表達對外教Roy教學的認可，再委婉引出主題，提及PPT使用存在影響教學效果的情況，引起對方注意。
第二段：詳細說明具體問題，如PPT文字過多，學生難以在短時間內讀取關鍵信息；顏色搭配不合理，造成視覺疲勞；內容與授課重點不一致，偏離教學核心。針對每個問題，結合實際課堂情況舉例說明。然后提出具體建議，如精簡文字，突出重點；選擇對比度高、舒適的顏色；確保PPT內容緊密圍繞教學重點展開，添加必要的圖表、案例輔助理解。
第三段：以積極的態度結尾，表達對改進后教學效果的期待，強調希望通過交流使教學更高效，促進師生共同進步，同時感謝外教的付出。
語言積累 --短語
be beneficial to 對…… 有益
draw one's attention to 引起某人對…… 的注意
be supposed to 應該
in addition 此外
as a result 結果
focus on 專注于
make adjustments 做出調整
contribute to 有助于
take... into consideration 考慮到……
look forward to 期待
佳句
I am writing to draw your attention to an issue regarding the use of PPT in your classes, which I believe might have affected the teaching effect to some extent.（我寫信是想引起您對課堂上 PPT 使用問題的注意，我認為這在一定程度上可能影響了教學效果。）
There is an excessive amount of text on each slide, making it difficult for us to catch the key points within a short time.（每張幻燈片上的文字過多，這讓我們很難在短時間內抓住重點。）
The color combination of the PPT is not visually friendly, resulting in students' fatigue during the class.（PPT 的顏色搭配在視覺上不友好，導致學生在課堂上感到疲勞。）
It would be beneficial if you could simplify the text and highlight the main ideas, and also add some vivid charts or real - life examples to make the content more understandable.（如果您能精簡文字、突出主要觀點，并且添加一些生動的圖表或實際生活案例使內容更易懂，那將非常有益。）
I sincerely look forward to seeing the positive changes in your future classes, which I believe will surely contribute to our better learning.（我真誠期待在您未來的課堂上看到積極的變化，我相信這一定會有助于我們更好地學習。）
寫作示范一
Dear Roy,
I'm Li Hua, one of your students. First, I really appreciate your engaging classes that have broadened our horizons. However, I'd like to share some thoughts on the PPTs you use.
In recent classes, I noticed that the PPTs have too much text. For example, in the last lecture on literature, each slide was filled with long paragraphs, and we were busy reading instead of listening to your explanations. Also, the color of the text against the background is not clear, making it hard for us to read. Besides, some content seems not closely related to the key points.
To improve this, I suggest reducing the text and using bullet points to highlight important information. You could choose a more contrastive color combination. Moreover, please ensure that every part of the PPT is relevant to the teaching focus.
I'm looking forward to better - designed PPTs that will make your classes even more wonderful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
寫作示范二
Dear Roy,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to give some feedback on the PPTs in your classes. I've always enjoyed your teaching style, but the PPT situation needs some attention.
The main problem is that the PPTs are too wordy. In the grammar class last week, we spent a lot of time reading the slides rather than interacting with you. The color scheme is also a bit off. The light - colored text on a light - colored background is not easy to see. Additionally, some examples on the PPTs are not well - chosen and don't effectively illustrate the points.
I think it would be great if you could simplify the text and use more images or diagrams. For the color, pick a clear combination like black text on a white background. Also, make sure the examples are closely related to the teaching content.
I'm sure these changes will make your classes more effective.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
寫作示范三
Dear Roy,
I'm Li Hua, writing to talk about the PPTs in your classes. Your classes are always full of enthusiasm, but I feel the PPTs could be improved.
The current PPTs have a lot of text that is not well - organized. In the vocabulary class, we were confused by the jumbled words on the slides. The color contrast is too low, so it's hard to distinguish the text. What's more, some PPT content is not in line with the teaching goals.
My suggestions are as follows: streamline the text, use more concise expressions. Select colors that are easy on the eyes. And always keep the PPT content focused on the teaching objectives.
I'm eager to see the positive changes. Thank you for your hard work!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
參考答案
Dear Roy,
I am Li Hua, one of your students. I truly enjoy your classes, which are always full of enthusiasm and knowledge. However, I have noticed some issues regarding the use of PPTs in your teaching, and I hope my feedback can be helpful.
The main problem is that the PPTs are overly text - heavy. For instance, in the last lecture about history, each slide was packed with long sentences, making it difficult for us to absorb the key information while listening to your explanation. As a result, we often fell behind and missed some important points. Moreover, the color combination of the text and the background is not ideal. The colors are too similar, causing eye strain and making it hard for us to read the content clearly. In addition, some of the PPT content seems to deviate from the main teaching points, which confuses us during the learning process.
To address these problems, I suggest simplifying the text on the PPTs. You could use bullet points or short phrases to highlight the key ideas, allowing us to better follow your teaching rhythm. Regarding the color, it would be great if you could choose a more contrastive color scheme, like black text on a white background, to enhance readability. Also, please ensure that all the content on the PPTs is closely related to the teaching focus, and add some relevant pictures or graphs to make the lessons more vivid and engaging.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of some use to you. I'm looking forward to seeing the improvements in your future classes, which I believe will surely contribute to our better learning experience. Thank you very much for your hard work!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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