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Climbing six floors to get home every day is tiring, but it’s also fun. Especially around dinner time, the whole building is filled with the smell of different foods. I particularly love the unique smell of a sauce (醬) from apartment 501．While others might think it’s just a strong, stinky (臭的) smell, it’s very attractive to me.
This smell reminds me of when I first moved to the small town and rented a room of an old woman. Her meals were simple: rice sauce soup, and pickles (咸菜). Sauce soup was the main dish. At first, I didn’t like it, but slowly, I began to love the taste. On cold winter nights, coming home against the wind, I could always smell the sauce soup she was cooking in the kitchen. It was a kind of happiness that was hard to describe.
After I got married, I tried to make the sauce myself, but it never tasted the same, and my family didn’t like it. So, I gave up. The sauce smell from apartment 501 made me think of the old woman, and I started to pay more attention to the lady who lived there. She was in her thirties, with kind eyes. We would nod to each other when we met. One snowy day, we talked about how to store cabbage during winter. I mentioned that my family liked pork and cabbage dumplings, which she had never tried. I immediately gave her a plate of freshly cooked dumplings. She said thanks to me, with a smile.
I began to hope she would give me a bowl of her sauce soup. One day, she knocked on my door with a plate of steamed potato dumplings filled with spicy cabbage. They were delicious, but I felt a bit disappointed. We exchanged food a few more times, but I never got to taste her sauce soup.
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One winter night, I heard arguing from apartment 501.
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A few weeks later, the lady knocked on my door again.
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文章大意
作者每天爬六層樓回家，尤其喜歡 501 室獨(dú)特的醬香味，這香味讓作者想起初到小鎮(zhèn)時(shí)借住的老婦人，老婦人常做醬湯，作者起初不喜歡，后來漸漸愛上，結(jié)婚后自己做卻總是沒有那個(gè)味道。作者因此關(guān)注 501 室的女士，二人會(huì)互相點(diǎn)頭致意，還交流過冬儲(chǔ)存白菜的方法，作者送女士豬肉白菜餃子，女士回贈(zèng)加了辣白菜的土豆蒸餃，作者多次與女士交換食物，卻始終沒嘗到她做的醬湯。
故事山分析
開端：作者每天爬樓回家，鐘情 501 室的醬香味，回憶借住老婦人處愛上醬湯的經(jīng)歷。
發(fā)展：作者結(jié)婚后做不出原來味道的醬湯，關(guān)注 501 室女士，二人交流并交換食物。
高潮：作者多次與女士交換食物，卻沒嘗到女士做的醬湯。
結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：圍繞女士與醬湯展開，解決作者嘗不到醬湯的懸念，展現(xiàn)鄰里間情感的進(jìn)一步發(fā)展。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
501 室的醬香味：在續(xù)寫中，醬香味可能成為鄰里關(guān)系進(jìn)一步發(fā)展的契機(jī)，比如女士因?yàn)槟承┰蛳蜃髡呓忉屷u湯的特別之處，或者終于邀請(qǐng)作者品嘗。
作者對(duì)醬湯的喜愛：續(xù)寫中，作者會(huì)繼續(xù)展現(xiàn)對(duì)醬湯的執(zhí)著，可能在聽到 501 室爭(zhēng)吵后，出于關(guān)心和對(duì)醬湯的好奇而進(jìn)一步了解情況。
作者與 501 室女士的交流：前面的交流為后續(xù)的互動(dòng)做鋪墊，續(xù)寫中可能會(huì)有更深入的交流，如女士向作者傾訴生活煩惱等。
作者和女士互相送食物：這一情節(jié)預(yù)示著鄰里關(guān)系的升溫，在續(xù)寫中，可能會(huì)因?yàn)樗褪澄锒饷芑蛘咴鲞M(jìn)感情。
作者沒嘗到醬湯：這是一個(gè)懸念，在續(xù)寫中必然會(huì)得到解決，可能是女士主動(dòng)送上醬湯，也可能是在特殊情況下作者終于品嘗到。
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：聽到 501 室爭(zhēng)吵后，作者的反應(yīng)，如擔(dān)心、好奇，是否去詢問情況，女士的狀態(tài)以及是否提及醬湯相關(guān)內(nèi)容。
第二段：女士再次敲門，可能帶來的東西，比如醬湯，或者解釋之前爭(zhēng)吵的原因，以及對(duì)兩人關(guān)系的影響，體現(xiàn)鄰里間的溫暖和理解。
情感線
起初，作者對(duì) 501 室的醬香味充滿喜愛和懷念，對(duì)女士懷著期待，渴望品嘗她做的醬湯。聽到爭(zhēng)吵時(shí)，作者滿心擔(dān)憂，急切想了解情況。女士再次敲門時(shí)，作者的心情從焦慮轉(zhuǎn)為期待，若女士帶來醬湯，作者會(huì)收獲滿足與感動(dòng)，兩人的鄰里情也會(huì)從平淡的交流上升為深厚的理解與關(guān)懷，整個(gè)情感線在波折中升溫。
故事線
501 室的爭(zhēng)吵原因及后續(xù)發(fā)展。
作者對(duì)爭(zhēng)吵的反應(yīng)和行動(dòng)。
女士的內(nèi)心變化及對(duì)作者的態(tài)度。
醬湯在故事中的最終呈現(xiàn)。
作者與女士關(guān)系的進(jìn)一步發(fā)展。
整個(gè)事件對(duì)鄰里生活氛圍的影響。
主旨升華句
In the simple exchanges between neighbors, we can find the true meaning of community and the warmth that binds us together.
The story of the sauce soup and the interactions between neighbors shows that small gestures of kindness can build a bridge of understanding and love.
Through the ups and downs of this neighborhood story, we realize that every connection, no matter how trivial, has the potential to bring light and warmth to our lives.
This tale of a shared building and the people in it serves as a reminder that the beauty of life often lies in the unexpected bonds we form with those around us.
In the world of neighbors, the pursuit of a simple taste leads to a profound understanding of human connection and the power of kindness.
寫作示范一
One winter night, I heard arguing from apartment 501. Concerned, I knocked on the door. The lady opened it, looking upset. She told me that she and her husband had a quarrel over making sauce soup. Her husband thought it was too much trouble, but she had been making it for years, just like her mother did. I listened quietly, understanding her feelings. Before I left, I said, "I know how much it means to you."
A few weeks later, the lady knocked on my door again. This time, she held a bowl of steaming sauce soup. With a big smile, she said, "I made this for you. Thank you for listening to me that day." I was overjoyed. As I took the first sip, the familiar taste filled my mouth. It was not just a bowl of soup, but a symbol of our deepening friendship and the warmth of the neighborhood.
寫作示范二
One winter night, I heard arguing from apartment 501. Curiosity got the better of me, and I decided to check it out. When I knocked on the door, the lady seemed embarrassed. She explained that she was trying to make a special batch of sauce for a family gathering, but things weren't going well. I offered to help, and we spent the next hour in her kitchen, chatting and stirring the sauce together.
A few weeks later, the lady knocked on my door again. In her hands was a plate of dumplings filled with the sauce we made together. She said, "These are made with the sauce we made. It tastes different, but it's special." We shared the dumplings, laughing and talking. The simple act of sharing food and helping each other had turned our acquaintance into a real friendship, making our building feel more like a home.
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范文
One winter night, I heard arguing from apartment 501. I quickly went over to help. Inside her home, I saw sauce blocks wrapped in brown paper on the shelf and realized I might soon taste the new sauce. I accidentally said, “Such good sauce.” The lady stopped crying and looked at me, and her husband seemed surprised too. I changed the subject and praised their cute child, and the lady’s gentle look returned. Two days later, the lady brought me a bowl of sauce, promising to give me more when the new sauce was ready.
A few weeks later, the lady knocked on my door again. She gave me a larger pot of freshly made sauce and a large bowl of sauce soup. She smiled and said, “I remembered how much you liked the sauce and the soup, so I made extra.” Her kindness touched me deeply. We stood in the doorway, chatting about our favorite recipes and family traditions. As I sat down to enjoy the soup that evening, I thought about the connections we made through food and how they brought us closer together. It felt like a new friendship was starting.

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