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Tom Young was on his way home from a hard day’s work at a construction site, carrying his worn-out hammer which had accompanied him through thick and thin. With each step, his mind was filled with worry as he racked his brain to find money for his seriously ill son, Andrew, who was in great need of heart surgery.
Tom had run out of choices and time. Desperation was beginning to set in, but he refused to let his son suffer helplessly. As he walked, the weight of his troubles pressed heavily on his shoulders. So desperate was he that he even heard a hum in his ears. The next moment the hum was entirely covered by a loud sound.
He turned in shock, and what he saw took his breath away. An expensive luxury car was wrapped around a big tree on the other side of the street, with its front twisted and flames starting to spring up from the car.
Without a second thought, he ran to the flaming car. He noticed that although the young lady in the driver’s seat did not seem to have been severely injured - apparently because of the open airbag - she was unconscious. Tom saw that the flames began to grow increasingly intense. He realized that he had to get the girl out of the car immediately because there was a high risk of the vehicle exploding at any time.
He grabbed the handle and pulled it, but the door was bent and did not open. He used all his strength and tried again, but in vain. It was a sports car, so it had only two doors, and the other one was blocked by the tree. He decided that he had to break the glass to take her out as quickly as possible. He struck it forcefully with his fist but realized that there was no way he could break the thick glass with bare hands, and the flames were getting bigger.
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Time was running out, and his mind raced madly.
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The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news.
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文章大意
Tom 在建筑工地上辛苦工作一天后回家，滿腦子都是為重病兒子湊錢做心臟手術的事。途中，他看到一輛豪車撞到樹上起火，車里的年輕女士雖未受重傷，但昏迷不醒。車門因變形打不開，車窗玻璃又太厚，他徒手無法打破，火勢卻越來越大，情況十分危急。
故事山分析
開端：Tom 結束一天工作回家，滿心憂慮為兒子湊手術費，這是他面臨的困境，也是故事的背景。
發展：Tom 看到車禍，決定救人，嘗試打開車門和打破車窗玻璃，卻都遭遇阻礙，火勢加劇，救援陷入僵局。
高潮：時間緊迫，Tom 急需找到解決辦法救出女孩，這是故事的緊張點，也是續寫的關鍵起始點。
結局（待續寫）：通過 Tom 成功救出女孩以及女孩得知 Tom 困境后的回應，展現善良與感恩的主題，構成故事結局。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應
Tom 為兒子湊手術費的困境：為后文女孩得知他的困難并提供幫助埋下伏筆，在續寫中，女孩會因感恩 Tom 的救命之恩，利用自己的資源幫助他解決經濟難題。
豪車撞到樹上起火：引出 Tom 的救援行動，在續寫中，救援成功后，這起事故會成為女孩了解 Tom 的契機，通過新聞報道等方式得知他的困境。
車門變形打不開，車窗玻璃厚：設置救援困難，在續寫中，Tom 會想出辦法克服這些困難，成功救出女孩，凸顯他的勇敢和智慧。
女孩昏迷：讓 Tom 的救援行動更加緊迫，在續寫中，女孩蘇醒后會對 Tom 充滿感激，進而關注他的生活狀況。
火勢越來越大：增加救援的緊張感，在續寫中，Tom 會在火勢威脅下成功完成救援，體現他的果斷和勇敢，也為女孩的感恩埋下伏筆。
續寫要點（兩段）
第一段：著重描寫 Tom 在危急時刻的心理活動，他焦急萬分，拼命思考解決辦法。最終，他想到用自己的錘子打破車窗玻璃，詳細描述他用錘子砸玻璃的過程，如他緊握錘子，用盡全身力氣，一下又一下地砸向玻璃，玻璃終于出現裂痕，直至破碎，他成功將女孩救出。
第二段：描述女孩從當地新聞得知 Tom 的困境后的反應，她深受感動，決定幫助 Tom。可以寫她聯系自己的家人或朋友，籌集資金，或者利用自己的社會關系為 Tom 提供幫助。最后，Tom 得到了幫助，兒子順利進行手術，他對女孩充滿感激，兩人的故事成為一段佳話。
情感線
起初，Tom 因兒子的病情陷入極度焦慮和絕望，為湊錢而苦惱。看到車禍時，他的擔憂轉化為救人的急切。救援過程中，他緊張又堅定，一心只想救出女孩。成功救出女孩后，他的心情稍緩。當女孩得知他的困境并提供幫助時，Tom 從絕望中看到希望，心中滿是感激。女孩則從被救的感恩，轉變為主動幫助恩人的熱心，兩人的情感在善良與感恩中交織升華。
故事線
Tom 工作一天后回家，為兒子的心臟手術費發愁。
Tom 看到豪車撞樹起火，決定救人。
Tom 嘗試打開車門和打破車窗玻璃，都未成功，火勢加劇。
Tom 用錘子打破車窗玻璃，成功救出女孩。
女孩從當地新聞得知 Tom 的困境。
女孩幫助 Tom，Tom 的兒子順利進行手術。
主旨升華句
This story shows that in the face of difficulties, our kindness and courage can not only save others but also bring unexpected rewards, and that the bond of gratitude can bridge the gaps between people.（這個故事表明，在困難面前，我們的善良和勇氣不僅能拯救他人，還能帶來意想不到的回報，感恩的紐帶可以彌合人與人之間的差距。）
Through Tom's act of selfless rescue and the girl's return of kindness, we learn that the power of compassion has no limits, and that a simple act of kindness can start a beautiful cycle of giving and receiving.（通過 Tom 的無私救援和女孩的感恩回報，我們了解到，同情的力量是無限的，一個簡單的善舉可以開啟一個美好的給予與接受的循環。）
The encounter between Tom and the girl proves that even in the most desperate situations, hope can emerge from the most unexpected places, and that the kindness in our hearts can be a guiding light for others.（Tom 和女孩的相遇證明，即使在最絕望的情況下，希望也能從最意想不到的地方出現，我們心中的善良可以成為他人的指路明燈。）
This heartwarming story reminds us that helping others is not only about offering a hand in times of need but also about creating a community where love and kindness are passed on from one person to another.（這個溫馨的故事提醒我們，幫助他人不僅是在需要時伸出援手，更是營造一個愛與善良在人與人之間傳遞的社區。）
The journey of Tom and the girl from a life - threatening accident to a heart - warming act of mutual help demonstrates that the true value of life lies in our ability to care for others and make a positive impact on their lives.（Tom 和女孩從一場危及生命的事故到一次暖心的互助行為的歷程表明，生命的真正價值在于我們關心他人并對他們的生活產生積極影響的能力。）
寫作示范一
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. Suddenly, he remembered the hammer in his hand. Without hesitation, he raised it high and struck the glass with all his might. The first blow made a small crack, and with a few more powerful strikes, the glass finally shattered. He quickly reached inside, unbuckled the girl's seatbelt, and carried her to a safe distance. Just as they got away, the car exploded into a ball of fire.
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. She immediately called her wealthy father and told him the whole story. Her father was deeply moved by Tom's heroic act. They decided to cover all the medical expenses for Tom's son. When Tom received the news, he was filled with gratitude and relief. His son's life was saved, all thanks to his own kindness and the girl's generosity.
寫作示范二
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. He looked around frantically for something to break the glass. Then he spotted a large rock nearby. He rushed to pick it up and ran back to the car. With a loud shout, he smashed the rock against the glass. After several attempts, the glass finally gave way. He pulled the unconscious girl out of the car just as the flames engulfed the entire vehicle.
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. She used her social media influence to start a fundraising campaign for Tom. Thousands of people were touched by Tom's story and donated money. In a short time, enough money was raised for Andrew's surgery. Tom was overwhelmed with joy and gratitude. He couldn't believe that his act of kindness had brought such a wonderful outcome.
【答案】One possible version:
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. In a moment of clarity, Tom remembered the worn-out hammer in his hand. It had been a reliable companion through countless days of labor, and now it was his only hope. With a determined swing, he smashed the hammer against the window, shattering the glass with a loud crash. Carefully, he reached into the vehicle, avoiding the jagged edges, and unbuckled the unconscious young lady. With all his strength, he pulled her out, dragging her a safe distance from the car just as the flames roared fiercely, engulfing the vehicle in a fiery blaze. Soon, Tom’s heroic deed went viral.
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. She learned about his struggle to find money for his son’s heart surgery and felt a deep sense of empathy for his situation. Remembering how he had risked his life to save her, she decided to take action. With her family’s connections and resources, she organized a fundraising campaign to help cover the medical expenses for Andrew’s surgery. As word spread about Tom’s story, the community rallied together, contributing whatever they could. Grateful for the support, Tom felt a renewed sense of hope. The girl, now a friend, visited him in the hospital, bringing not just financial help but also encouragement. Their bond grew stronger, united by the challenges they faced and the lives they had touched.

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